The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~ - Page 103

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow debbz....................
great update!!!
love u for it.............
mayoo holding nupur to bus uff uff!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

YAYYIE! 🥳The terrific-trio's back with a bangggg!

As soon as i read that nups was taking mayank home, i couldn't contain my excitement and did a lil sneakie peekie by scrolling down to see if mom was really going to be there.😛 hehe.
uh ohI almost forgot to say hi! Its your update's fault though, it got me all jumpy. 😆
Anyway, how have you been deb? How's everything going? Great, i hope. Missed ya. You have NO idea how i've been able to control my urges, during past couple of weeks, to sit on the net. Thank God exams are over now! phew.

So who was i talking about? yes! mummyji or kaun? The scene where nups and mom stand on either side of mayank ready to pick him up was sw-eeet! Poor mayank. haha.😆 He can never get his way when these two are around😆 I hope in future updates we get to see a mom-nups scene. That'd be real naiice. Can we?😳

Hmm... so you saved the best for last, eh? The concluding scene was to die for! 👏I couldn't help but shed a tear at the beauty of the moment😳😳 Nups is so cute and Mayank...he's just too good to be true. Its superb how you've captured the true essence of each character. Hats off. You're sucha gifted writer Deb.
I really hope you write a book someday. I'lll be the 1st in line to purchase it. 😃

Acha before i forget... i haveta mention how much im loving Radz and Adi's track. See some sparks flying between the two. Cant wait to see their story take shape...They're the next big thing on the block! haha. Lovin' them all the more with every update. Good going.👍🏼

Ok ji... im signing off with this BIG hug🤗 and👏👏👏 You deserve all the applause in the world for writing so beautifully. Hope you keep on writing forever and ever and ever.....
Love ya loads! 😃😊😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
arey wah! it was splendid........I loved the sajanji prt as usual......though as u kno me mayur ki utni badi fan nahi thi......mind u thi kyunki ab hoon after this part......u kno ur soooooooooo gud at writing oops I mean thinking...........lol........waise I just simply loved it......and btw since ur close to me u can call adu thts what they call me in cls (even the boys know)........I've to go know but will write a bigger comment tomorrow.........bye take care loads and loads of love Adya (Adu)
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh wow debby
movie yes would love it
do i play any part in the next update?
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Posted: 16 years ago
@arpita..Thanks a million millions Arpita!! That was such a sweet comment.. Lol ab kya karein, Mayur ka jadoo hai hi aisa.. I am sure u'll manage though.. it becomes a part of life..haha Thanks for liking the last scene..!!
I am in college..aww thanks dear.. will think abt it. ;) I will PM u wen I update...(and sorry abt the late reply.. wo kal reply kar rahi thi phir kuch kaam aa gaya toh baaki ke chut gaye..lol) 🤗

@Senny.. thanks soooo much Senny! Esp for saying that I have managed to keep Mayur intact.. that was the best part of ur comment.. thanks for making me smile! *hugs*

@Reshma.. welcome to IF & thanks a ton..!!

@Sanah.. chalo shukar hai mithi dawai hai, main darr gayi thi.. hehhe 😆

@pakirani, legends, vidisha, shafoo, maria.. thank you thank you guys! It really means a lot to me. 🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
@pallo... aa gale lag ja Pallojee!! That was such a sugar coated adorable comment! I am so glad my update made you smile, yippee! Whts that airtel ad? Apno se dur nahi hai sumthin? You made me feel like that.. lol
I am thrilled u liked the end.. to confess a secret longing, I wanted you to comment on that part.. thanks for making my day!! Love you! 🤗

@Raee.. Its go good to hear from u Raee and u never fail to enthrall me.. thank u soo very much for liking the update..you are a sweetheart! 🤗

@Maddy.. thanks so much Maddy, really happy you liked the part!

@Tania.. hey, thanks a bunch for liking it.. it means a great deal to me..!!

@Monu.. thank u hai jee.. glad u liked it.. keep reading!!

@Kiran.. Aww thanks a lot!! Yes, actually I got engaged in lots of things and was planning to write a big update next week or sumthin but den sum frends suggested I update sooner so this part was shorter than usual.. next part will be bigger for sure. Thanks a lot once again..!!

@Adu.. nice pet name! Hey I am so glad I cud make a Mayur fan out of you.. haha.. thanks so much dearie.. love you!

@Pragya.. yeah, u r going 4 movie date wid Adi rmbr? But dere's a twist.


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Posted: 16 years ago
@ayesha.. Hey finally u r back!! Missed you lots! Glad ur exams are over..
Oh you bet, Mum-Mayu-Nups trio is super rocking and I am sooo glad u thought I cud do justice to it.. yippee!! Actually, Mum-Nups are going to have a convo next update..mere muh ki baat cheen li aapne! ;)
I cant tell u how happy I am tht every1 liked the last scene.. esp sum1 like you who has been such a supportive reader! Aww.. if I do write a book, I will send u complimentary copies, den dont throw tomatoes and things at me.. lol 😆
Radz-Adi ache lage? Thank u thank u! Thank u esp coz woh mere characters hai.. hehe
Love you lots and lots Ayesha.. keep rocking!! 🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
twist
haila
main toh mar jaaoungi
well i am sure its related to radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
@pragya
Wait and watch! 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Debo....mast update yaar..!! every tym a nic update.....lyk mayank ko buri bimaari ho gayi....d same way tujhe itne ache updates likhne ki bimaari ho gayi hai😆 keep goin..!!

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