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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

😭how much i hate this to say but 6 time i tried but still i am not able to post a pic.😭



It's okay Dv, don't stress over it 😛😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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HOnestly looking at the title I had no idea that this will be awaiting ahead. you are master in that coming with most subtle title of the chapters which can literally turn senses upside down. I thought i requested it day before yesterday and now so fast but then after reading A/N it was established fact that we are here for a big treat ahead and boy o boy what was it.

it had the most enchanting effect really.my whole request wasn't misplaced at all it was way beyond that you are really the best no one can beat it seriously. no movie no book can ever come close to this.

I am kind of short of words just adjust it will take time for me.

Nidz where are you urgent requirement please have to do dissection
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Epic wild story I've ever read...great, greater, greatest or beyond that...it'll keep me dazed for the next couple of days...i need some time to recover from it😃...all hail LM didu😆...i think this OS is a part of UNTOLD STORIES...anyways be safe & stay healthy didu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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HI LM
How are you? Don't ask about me well I haven't recovered yet.😕

You know when I placed this request I had an idea that only you can write it but after reading it I am dead sure that no one other can you can write this.

This was wildest they could ever go I guess E.L James can safely include this in her series or I guess its better than those also. and no I am not at all exaggerating 😎

Well you can imagine this by this fact that even EH was telling that this request wasn't misplaced at all👍🏼 now tell is it not one of the best compliment

This was by no means looked like their 30 birthday celebration they are getting wilder no wonder people say these age group people are dangerous they have experience and lots of terrain to explore and these two completely stand for that.

And I guess the opening line would be most suitable for the end🤪even for the readers also🤣🤣
There is something very fascinating about their bucket list they go for the most unexpected adventures in its after effects its like it is jinxed😲 it should be like bucket list and after effects journey.

Its good that humans don't have gills because you never know among the blues and calmness they can do anything these people are not safe to be trusted to leave at such places and specially when water can stick ranveer's bangs on his forehead well then no one can stop ishani no even tsunami.🤓🤣

she got the best birthday celebration but her needs can never be satisfied the more she gets the greedier she gets🤪😳 and that is there whole throughout even in the end also poor guy is telling you had enough but no the tales of greedy ishani mauka mile aur wo jane de never it is going to happen. thank god they went for dive and were already tired warna to

she shouldn't compare the painting with the kind of birthday gifts now because at that time they were two simple innocent kids and now they are nowhere close and now they are more interested in the process of making innocent and not innocent anymore.

you know the aura you set with the honey lemon and white orchids its kind of dizzying in itself ☺️☺️
poor guy have to work so hard just to maintain it one look at her and the boy is gobsmacked and she again makes him her slave.😆

nice choice for the song fast saying the situation anf finished early so they both can get back to work no wonder dhikra is called perfectionist.😉😉

she don't have to remember anything its not needed after all after reading these sessions people tend to have amnesia forget about remembering anything😆😆

and then comes the blindfold well final nail to the coffin of perfection 😳 can it be anymore devious in approach😲😲

they never shied away from friendly experience*coughs*coughs* really justto get it clear she would always be taking lead and he won't have anything to do its like one look from her and he will come running.🤪
this was his another painting but the painter himself got painted with her nails.☺️
and after that it was the most passionate, wild and desire spilling work I had ever read it was best marvellous magical all the adjective combined together. each and every action each and every sentence was a perfection in itself.

usually you write something like this from an inspiration but I am assuming this is your imagination and that's what make it even more special. what an excellent choice of descriptive words and everything it never got awkward.

you are truly a magician and I am seriously telling you the abbreviation LM stands more for LADY MAGICIAN.

you are the most remarkable exceptional writer dear you deserve a standing ovation from the highest point you are marvellous.
never I have ever seen writers so accommodating to simple request(okay I know I pestered for it😆😆) but it was totally worth every dissection of emotion I and nidz did that day on marking as my own thread. surprisingly she they were marking here each other more.

was the sentence it was the best they ever had both the birthday and the interlude meaning combined in it😆😆
and any kind of adjective would be less to sum up this experience for her👏👏👏

outstanding LM
thank you thank you thank you so much both for fulfilling my request and for the dedication it was not only worth but was with interest amount as well

I will come up with more review once I am able to find right words. in this chapter words failed to come up because it is so marvellous and I cannot even reach to ice water this time.

thank you so much
Lots of love
DV
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hy LM
This was wonderful, really so passionate too
A mind blowing interlude.
That's her best birthday ever. So sweet.
Keep smiling and take care 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So LM.. Kya tha yeh.. 😆 First u have to justify ur title.. kitna shareef sa naam tha, I can't even think ke aisa kuch niklega..😆 But this.. ☺️ Last time also in marking u as my own u did the same thing, vaha naam naughty tha but babies were full shareef and complete vice versa here.. 😉

Ok, so finally her list completed, they dived in reef.. 👏 Now all checked in both's list but it definitely doesn't mean end and see they've already started with new fantasies.. that one line of him in restaurant, jo kaam us din adhoora reh gaya tha coz of chirkut, aaj finally done..

start se hi ekdum greedy type tha, matlab room tak jate jate dono full on charged, aur uske baad to kehne hi kya😆, even I was thinking that why room has a higher temperature, but fir pata chala ke ice ka maza to garmi me hi ata hai.. what a fantabulous gift for her.. now she'll even forget the reef experience, sirf yahi yaad rehne vala hai..🤣 & what does this mean that blindfold is first for her, means all other times it was in reverse mode 🤓.. and this aura that you created with honey and lemon 😳, I mean padhne me hi it's so enticing, full fantasy type combination, so Ishu baby ko to pagal hona hi hai na.. ☺️☺️


And my favorite line is this "It was his soul that made him a different sight to witness entirely during moments like these; his soul that danced naked through the realms of love in his chocolate eyes." so so deep, expressing his ocean of love for her..

What surprised me here is his skills 😲😲, how can he do so much.. se hamne real me to hamesha yahi vala ranveer dekha hai na..



(OMG, look at his face 🤣)

so tumhara vala believe karna thoda mushkil hai n how he learnt so much is another matter to look on.. 😳

But he ia so so sacrificing, all fun for her only 😆 vo to Ishani called him otherwise he was satisfied with her happiness nd the way he asked 'are you sure'.. 🤣🤣 shayad jhatka laga baby ko ke what she asked and see, ladki ke kehne ke baad bhi he was so much conscious 🤪🤪

And one thing, ranveer should wear some protection for his hairs, varna dhire dhire Ishani sare baal gayab kar degi 🤣 🤣, coz his only mission is to make her happy and ab aisi happiness me kya ho jaye no one can guarantee na 😈 😈.. & tattoo on him is another matter but like we all know anything for her.. 🤪

This was an entirety different work LM and I have to say, u r getting batter n batter with this stuff as well..⭐️⭐️ this one is so modest.. the words & ur way of writing was brilliant, it never got awkward at any moment..👍🏼👍🏼 sab kuch kitni tameez ke sath ho gaya.. 🤣 🤣 kitna naughty gift kitni tameez vali language mein u wrote.. brillint... 👏👏


LM.. keep surprizing us like this.. we all love to read ur works.. we all want another fanfic from u but if not that do keep writing this small surprises... 🤗 🤗


Edited by NidsJ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dvprt418.py




Its good that humans don't have gills because you never know among the blues and calmness they can do anything these people are not safe to be trusted to leave at such places and specially when water can stick ranveer's bangs on his forehead well then no one can stop ishani no even tsunami.🤓🤣

DV, even I was thinking that, ke kahi bachche pani me hi na shuru ho jaye.. jaldi bahar nikalo inhe.. and this description of Ranveer is..


she got the best birthday celebration but her needs can never be satisfied the more she gets the greedier she gets🤪😳 and that is there whole throughout even in the end also poor guy is telling you had enough but no the tales of greedy ishani mauka mile aur wo jane de never it is going to happen. thank god they went for dive and were already tired warna to

she shouldn't compare the painting with the kind of birthday gifts now because at that time they were two simple innocent kids and now they are nowhere close and now they are more interested in the process of making innocent and not innocent anymore.

🤣 🤣 awesome..


they never shied away from friendly experience*coughs*coughs* really justto get it clear she would always be taking lead and he won't have anything to do its like one look from her and he will come running.🤪
this was his another painting but the painter himself got painted with her nails.☺️

LOL..🤪🤪🤪


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Posted: 8 years ago
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& what does this mean that blindfold is first for her, means all other times it was in reverse mode 🤓..

ranveer ko blindfold ki jarurat nahi aise hi bechara ankhe band kar leta hai. And for ishani she can see right through those blindfolds also she has this special desire wali aankhe isliye Will she ever leave a chance to see her sexy property ye to apna dhikra hai jo sharma jata hai.😳😳

and this aura that you created with honey and lemon 😳, I mean padhne me hi it's so enticing, full fantasy type combination, so Ishu baby ko to pagal hona hi hai na.. ☺️☺️

see i wasn't wrong since start this aura creates a lot of trouble for us also😕😆😆



What surprised me here is his skills 😲😲, how can he do so much.. se hamne real me to hamesha yahi vala ranveer dekha hai na..


exactly my thoughts I mean when did he? when did he? when did he? all these antics by him and then our girl go all crazy for him.

how he learnt so much is another matter to look on.. 😳

he was always good in research aur ishani k bare me he always knew everything. sunny and his fantasy filled life.


But he ia so so sacrificing, all fun for her only 😆 vo to Ishani called him otherwise he was satisfied with her happiness nd the way he asked 'are you sure'.. 🤣🤣

he always had that selfcontrol mode on it was the ishani menka who always distracts him 😆😆 that's a different matter and may be he was asking what you eat iti capacity stamina late kaha se ho.😆😆

And one thing, ranveer should wear some protection for his hairs, varna dhire dhire Ishani sare baal gayab kar degi

🤣 🤣,

LM.. keep surprizing us like this.. we all love to read ur works.. we all want another fanfic from u but if not that do keep writing this small surprises... 🤗 🤗

this is so true another fanfic or till then some small surprises like this kuch to ho please😭😭😭

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Posted: 8 years ago
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ranveer ko blindfold ki jarurat nahi aise hi bechara ankhe band kar leta hai. And for ishani she can see right through those blindfolds also she has this special desire wali aankhe isliye Will she ever leave a chance to see her sexy property ye to apna dhikra hai jo sharma jata hai.😳😳

Are haan.. how can we forget this.. Ranveer ki to aankhe vaise hi nahi khulti kabhi.. Ishani ke hisse ki sharm bhi isi ke andar hai.. 🤣 🤣 so why will she need to use blindfolds on him..

see i wasn't wrong since start this aura creates a lot of trouble for us also😕😆😆

oh.. U also felt the same.. Nice.. See, we all r same greedy souls when it comes to him..

exactly my thoughts I mean when did he? when did he? when did he? all these antics by him and then our girl go all crazy for him.

he was always good in research aur ishani k bare me he always knew everything. sunny and his fantasy filled life.

sahi mein.. u know ye LM hi hai jiska ranveer itna daring ho sakta hai, but see u can never know, he was a sunny leone fan and one can definitely learn a lot from her.. 😉 😉 although looking at real him, I always wondered ke kya seekha isne itne saalo mein..

he always had that selfcontrol mode on it was the ishani menka who always distracts him 😆 😆 that's a different matter and may be he was asking what you eat iti capacity stamina late kaha se ho.😆😆

DV don't talk about his self control.. Coz he is world record holder in that case.. kitni ladkiyon ne line maari ranveer pe par bande na kabhi kisi ko dekha tak nahi.. even ishu menka failed in that matter.. distract kia but vaha bhi she never got successful.. 😆 😆
& this question.. 🤣 🤣 sachchi.. bade crazy answers aa rahe hai mind mein.. 🤪 🤪


this is so true another fanfic or till then some small surprises like this kuch to ho please😭😭😭

How much I miss her fanfics.. but I don't think it's possible now.. 😔 😔
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Are haan.. how can we forget this.. Ranveer ki to aankhe vaise hi nahi khulti kabhi.. Ishani ke hisse ki sharm bhi isi ke andar hai.. 🤣 🤣 so why will she need to use blindfolds on him..

uska akele ka pyar uski akele ki sharam undono k liye kafi hai. 😳😳 the epic ranveer's one sided love and sharam saga.

oh.. U also felt the same.. Nice.. See, we all r same greedy souls when it comes to him..

obviously I said this from the start whenever she described his essence in the form of honey and lemon thick dark and everything thode time to khud ko hosh me lane me chale jata hai.

sahi mein.. u know ye LM hi hai jiska ranveer itna daring ho sakta hai, but see u can never know, he was a sunny leone fan and one can definitely learn a lot from her.. 😉 😉
LM ka ranveer is every bit desirable no wonder ishani is always around her and keeping everyone away from him.

although looking at real him, I always wondered ke kya seekha isne itne saalo mein..

usne itne salo me jo bhi sikha hai wo jab implement karta hai to ishani bechari gets speechless.


DV don't talk about his self control.. Coz he is world record holder in that case.. kitni ladkiyon ne line maari ranveer pe par bande na kabhi kisi ko dekha tak nahi.. even ishu menka failed in that matter.. distract kia but vaha bhi she never got successful.. 😆 😆

his life was really filled with them even warden also but ye to sabka baap nikla no means no he was always like this dekhiye behenji dur rahiye. poor shanilla, disha aur sabne ishani se galiya khayi alag.

& this question.. 🤣 🤣 sachchi.. bade crazy answers aa rahe hai mind mein.. 🤪 🤪

😆😆 he was like jane de maate par nahi idhar aa abhi tu😉


How much I miss her fanfics.. but I don't think it's possible😭 now.. 😔 😔
i know but hope that's what we are holding on to.😭😭 it makes me so sad that now there isn't any.

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