Originally posted by: dvprt418.py
HI LM
How are you? Don't ask about me well I haven't recovered yet.😕
You know when I placed this request I had an idea that only you can write it but after reading it I am dead sure that no one other can you can write this.
This was wildest they could ever go I guess E.L James can safely include this in her series or I guess its better than those also. and no I am not at all exaggerating 😎
Well you can imagine this by this fact that even EH was telling that this request wasn't misplaced at all👍🏼 now tell is it not one of the best compliment
This was by no means looked like their 30 birthday celebration they are getting wilder no wonder people say these age group people are dangerous they have experience and lots of terrain to explore and these two completely stand for that.
And I guess the opening line would be most suitable for the end🤪even for the readers also🤣🤣
There is something very fascinating about their bucket list they go for the most unexpected adventures in its after effects its like it is jinxed😲 it should be like bucket list and after effects journey.
Its good that humans don't have gills because you never know among the blues and calmness they can do anything these people are not safe to be trusted to leave at such places and specially when water can stick ranveer's bangs on his forehead well then no one can stop ishani no even tsunami.🤓🤣
she got the best birthday celebration but her needs can never be satisfied the more she gets the greedier she gets🤪😳 and that is there whole throughout even in the end also poor guy is telling you had enough but no the tales of greedy ishani mauka mile aur wo jane de never it is going to happen. thank god they went for dive and were already tired warna to
she shouldn't compare the painting with the kind of birthday gifts now because at that time they were two simple innocent kids and now they are nowhere close and now they are more interested in the process of making innocent and not innocent anymore.
you know the aura you set with the honey lemon and white orchids its kind of dizzying in itself ☺️☺️
poor guy have to work so hard just to maintain it one look at her and the boy is gobsmacked and she again makes him her slave.😆
nice choice for the song fast saying the situation anf finished early so they both can get back to work no wonder dhikra is called perfectionist.😉😉
she don't have to remember anything its not needed after all after reading these sessions people tend to have amnesia forget about remembering anything😆😆
and then comes the blindfold well final nail to the coffin of perfection 😳 can it be anymore devious in approach😲😲
they never shied away from friendly experience*coughs*coughs* really justto get it clear she would always be taking lead and he won't have anything to do its like one look from her and he will come running.🤪
this was his another painting but the painter himself got painted with her nails.☺️
and after that it was the most passionate, wild and desire spilling work I had ever read it was best marvellous magical all the adjective combined together. each and every action each and every sentence was a perfection in itself.
usually you write something like this from an inspiration but I am assuming this is your imagination and that's what make it even more special. what an excellent choice of descriptive words and everything it never got awkward.
you are truly a magician and I am seriously telling you the abbreviation LM stands more for LADY MAGICIAN.
you are the most remarkable exceptional writer dear you deserve a standing ovation from the highest point you are marvellous.
never I have ever seen writers so accommodating to simple request(okay I know I pestered for it😆😆) but it was totally worth every dissection of emotion I and nidz did that day on marking as my own thread. surprisingly she they were marking here each other more.
was the sentence it was the best they ever had both the birthday and the interlude meaning combined in it😆😆
and any kind of adjective would be less to sum up this experience for her👏👏👏
outstanding LM
thank you thank you thank you so much both for fulfilling my request and for the dedication it was not only worth but was with interest amount as well
I will come up with more review once I am able to find right words. in this chapter words failed to come up because it is so marvellous and I cannot even reach to ice water this time.
thank you so much
Lots of love
DV
Hi there, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm alright and I hope that you've recovered now. ⭐️⭐️ And honestly, how much ever I thank you for your response in this post, it's going to be less. ☺️☺️ And haila, seedha comparison to E. L. James and her shades of grey! 🤣🤣
But jokes apart, I'm going to definitely take that as a huge compliment that I could live up to your expectations with the request, and that I could still maintain that daira of tameez. And when I told Elvish to give this a read, I was so nervous about what she was going to say, but her review actually reduced me into a relieved pool of jelly. 😳😳
Coming to the review now, hehe, the older they get, the wilder they get. 😉😉 And they have so many wasted years ka kasar to complete as well, so babies are bound to get a little... out of control time and again. ☢️☢️ And the first line definitely would make for a brilliant question to ask at the end for everyone, that's true. 🤪🤪
Moving on, I'm not entirely surprised that you caught on the bucket-list thing because you're always the expert on analyses. 😆😆 When writing the OS, I also realized that whenever these people tick off items from their bucket list, they tend to get into celebrations that are totally uncalled for. 😎😎
As to those two and their hormones and Ishani having no control over herself when Ranveer is concerned, you can't really blame the girl now, can you? And Ishani was always greedy like that when it came to Ranveer in US. 😛😛 Bachpan se hi she wanted all his attention, and now also its the same, but just in different ways. 😈😈
But yes, she definitely had the best birthday celebration she could have asked for, and in fact got manifold as well. 🥳🥳 And yes, the dive definitely was a saviour in a way because I doubt whether fire or ice would have even been left with these two. 😳😳
Coming to her comparing the painting with the gifts she got, your statement was 🤣🤣. Every time I read it, I still ROFL at it. 🤪🤪 But I'm actually so thrilled that you loved the aura of the lemon and honey and the orchids thing so much. ☺️☺️ As to Ranveer, doesn't he always fall for her every time he looks at her? 😃😃
And yeah, the song was just to set the mood for what he had in mind for her next. 😉😉 As to our perfectionist, oh yeah, he's definitely a perfectionist for a reason, undermined though his skills are. As to remembering things with the session, when I think about it, your point actually makes legit sense. 👍🏼👍🏼
And then comes the blindfold. 😉😉 Hehe, that was actually quite fun to write, if I must be honest with you. 😛😛 Coming to friendly experiments, neither of them shy away from them, but the lead I see more in Ranveer's favour than Ishani. 😈😈 He's not going to let her have all the fun on her own always now. 😆😆 But yes, Ishani definitely made a painting on his with her nails, that's true. 🤓🤓
The reason why this is so special to me is because like you said, this is the first time I've written something completely from my end and I couldn't have been more humbled that it turned out to be better than what I expected it to be. ❤️❤️
Honestly speaking, this OS had another reason also - this OS is like a kind of apology as well to you because I haven't got much time to talk to you off late and I've been a lame friend as well. And for everything you've told me for this OS, I really don't have words to tell you how touched I am. 🤗🤗
Coming to the title, hehe, you make a fair point here. 😛😛 As to the question, it was pertaining to the interlude only. 🤣🤣
Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️
Loads of love,
LM
