Originally posted by: dvprt418.py
Hey there girl you don't know how much I waited for this update just like RV waiting for flame of hope.
Just give me some time I am still dazed what all the things happened in this.
Girl what has gotten into you as if interludes and epistle are written by two different people epistle writer knows love pain but this interludes one knows loathing coldness scars pain all at a new level. Very rarely i was so dumbstruck with writings as I am feeling now with reading this whole ff seriously tremendous job dear exceptionally beautiful.
Ok enough I ll start now.
Dreams are back again with most brutality and finally she saw him and now the dreaded fear in her heart will reach all the new level and uncanny resemblance with the situation making it lot more fearful for her.
But the most amazing of all were ranveer's dream he saw his entire life in that he being phoniex always protecting her untill one day he died and font know anything he was dying many deaths due her separation and now he is back again protecting something he don't know and that big powerful snake having that poisonous bunny as his air to kill him( reminded me of ichadhari nag. bad reference I know sorry for that) but he nonetheless kill that deceiving snake and he just cannot remember where he has seen those dreadful eyes. And this time ishani died same scenario in his lap wiping his tears. Is it like future warning them of something both of their dreams are connected at some point and it started when they are near each other or when their dead self is betraying themselves to reveal upon themselves to the other one. I liked that line when he doubted that he had left love.
Back to conference room but this time they just cannot stop toggling at the other either noticing how they have change or just each other's features. Honestly I had a wicked smile when I read shanella a long lost memory back and I just knew that room will be on fire now since madam cannot hide away her discomfort when someone looks at rv let it be her own sister. So his instincts have warned him and right now he is planning a net to trap this rabbit just like his dreams and those eyes seriously here eyes are very dangerous the one of chirag and shanella also involved in this game that's gonna be awesome. It's reminded of the dreams they are surrounded by so many snakes.
Finally it stuck to her that she was that other women in that room honestly this was unexpected I mean five years ago and she is here again it ahem ahem she is not going to let her take away ranveer her sole property. I wonder how much fun does all in conference room would be having and puneet and rishi would be bewildered how come someone can overcome their parekh ma'am. And poor puneet seriously all their employees are unnecessarily getting caught in between this bruised ego people. Seriously can't she keep quite and speak later but no ranveer is her so no delays. Then all the employees had revenge upon her and RV would have become like Robinhood giving them relief both to their eyes as well mentally. I laughed so much in that whole scenario of their tashan my cheeks started paining.
And RV has gone seriously dangerous he can even beat chirag in the game of manipulation so much flirt where is my girl she also have some hidden desires like seriously what a move alone time but I thought atleast she should witness it will be fun and their I read the next line she giving poisonous look. What was she more angry about he flirting her or he throwing hwr our of his own office seriously this rv is dangerous no one can dare to cross his path wrong way. And began the blame game seriously RV is pushing her to the limits making her as wounded as possible and it's his way of breaking her slowly. He did notice that people stare at her say what may ranveer can never die it's just he is badly bruised and is confined in thickest of iron walls but he does make appearance every now and then at her presence and this so called fight of them clearly showed his sight.
He is pestering her to the best to break her that facade something he knows that isn't right it's just his mind not allowing him to think what his heart feel. He is asking her everything he wants to know about her but she is still letting him k ow what she wants it's like he catches hold of ishani I but miss parekh takes her away. Then rage and one thing she cannot take is he not loving her she would die and her Instincts say otherwise and he may lie but his emotions betrayed them.finally they sccumbing to it it's like that godown scene though he wanted to prove otherwise but eventually gave in to her proximity. Seriously that whole description of how their emotions changing in every fleet of seconds was something that blew my mind. It's like ranveer and ishani fighting together with RV and miss parekh to let them together and set them free. And how cold they became at the end was too good. She can break his wall anytime she wants just that she herself is too much occupied now to set everything straight.
Both are trying best but sparks are you d to fly with so much heat around. Thankgod cabin was sound proof otherwise office staff would have been wondering now is it a deal or more than that. He has got sufficient clues that things are not same and it's relief that he still trust her morals now the game begin of suave RV and I just can't wait to know what happens when piyush tells him everything. You know what I am dying to read what happens when ranveer finds out what happened to her ishani ita like the deadliest of pain will erupt in his heart because in a way somewhere he is also responsible for this.
Ishani and her fascination with the scars actually it will be lovely when ranveer comes to kno about it let her Inflict as much pain as she want. But honestly it have became her addiction now and it will be difficult for her even more because now her heart will keep betraying her more often.
What's with the puzzle they are not able to find out about their dreams and I fell there are few more people in this trap in which they are pulled into its like everyone is planning something she want to finish chirag he is on his own purpose but they are all surrounded by masked people ita getting hell lot thrilling.
Now please dont tell me you are starting with epistle atleast 6 interludes should be there it will be totally a cliffhanger that too deadliest. And dear the way you said about those diaries as contagious I am just thinking what is going to come ahead. And those quotes while they were kissing was same from the painting he gifted to her and is their life going on like their dreams. Ishveer dress up so devilishly hot. No wonder people glare
Sorry every time I think I ll review a short one but don't know how I end up blabbering so much. I ll surely try next time.
But it's your fault you write so beautifully that I cannot stop admirng. Seriously LM this interludes had made you a writer of different level altogthr and I am so glad to read your work. Amazing job seriously. Didn't used emojis because that will make it too much longer . I again was trying to do wolf whistling with this update
Thnx for pm
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