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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey there girl you don't know how much I waited for this update just like RV waiting for flame of hope.
Just give me some time I am still dazed what all the things happened in this.
Girl what has gotten into you as if interludes and epistle are written by two different people epistle writer knows love pain but this interludes one knows loathing coldness scars pain all at a new level. Very rarely i was so dumbstruck with writings as I am feeling now with reading this whole ff seriously tremendous job dear exceptionally beautiful.
Ok enough I ll start now.
Dreams are back again with most brutality and finally she saw him and now the dreaded fear in her heart will reach all the new level and uncanny resemblance with the situation making it lot more fearful for her.

But the most amazing of all were ranveer's dream he saw his entire life in that he being phoniex always protecting her untill one day he died and font know anything he was dying many deaths due her separation and now he is back again protecting something he don't know and that big powerful snake having that poisonous bunny as his air to kill him( reminded me of ichadhari nag. bad reference I know sorry for that) but he nonetheless kill that deceiving snake and he just cannot remember where he has seen those dreadful eyes. And this time ishani died same scenario in his lap wiping his tears. Is it like future warning them of something both of their dreams are connected at some point and it started when they are near each other or when their dead self is betraying themselves to reveal upon themselves to the other one. I liked that line when he doubted that he had left love.

Back to conference room but this time they just cannot stop toggling at the other either noticing how they have change or just each other's features. Honestly I had a wicked smile when I read shanella a long lost memory back and I just knew that room will be on fire now since madam cannot hide away her discomfort when someone looks at rv let it be her own sister. So his instincts have warned him and right now he is planning a net to trap this rabbit just like his dreams and those eyes seriously here eyes are very dangerous the one of chirag and shanella also involved in this game that's gonna be awesome. It's reminded of the dreams they are surrounded by so many snakes.

Finally it stuck to her that she was that other women in that room honestly this was unexpected I mean five years ago and she is here again it ahem ahem she is not going to let her take away ranveer her sole property. I wonder how much fun does all in conference room would be having and puneet and rishi would be bewildered how come someone can overcome their parekh ma'am. And poor puneet seriously all their employees are unnecessarily getting caught in between this bruised ego people. Seriously can't she keep quite and speak later but no ranveer is her so no delays. Then all the employees had revenge upon her and RV would have become like Robinhood giving them relief both to their eyes as well mentally. I laughed so much in that whole scenario of their tashan my cheeks started paining.

And RV has gone seriously dangerous he can even beat chirag in the game of manipulation so much flirt where is my girl she also have some hidden desires like seriously what a move alone time but I thought atleast she should witness it will be fun and their I read the next line she giving poisonous look. What was she more angry about he flirting her or he throwing hwr our of his own office seriously this rv is dangerous no one can dare to cross his path wrong way. And began the blame game seriously RV is pushing her to the limits making her as wounded as possible and it's his way of breaking her slowly. He did notice that people stare at her say what may ranveer can never die it's just he is badly bruised and is confined in thickest of iron walls but he does make appearance every now and then at her presence and this so called fight of them clearly showed his sight.

He is pestering her to the best to break her that facade something he knows that isn't right it's just his mind not allowing him to think what his heart feel. He is asking her everything he wants to know about her but she is still letting him k ow what she wants it's like he catches hold of ishani I but miss parekh takes her away. Then rage and one thing she cannot take is he not loving her she would die and her Instincts say otherwise and he may lie but his emotions betrayed them.finally they sccumbing to it it's like that godown scene though he wanted to prove otherwise but eventually gave in to her proximity. Seriously that whole description of how their emotions changing in every fleet of seconds was something that blew my mind. It's like ranveer and ishani fighting together with RV and miss parekh to let them together and set them free. And how cold they became at the end was too good. She can break his wall anytime she wants just that she herself is too much occupied now to set everything straight.

Both are trying best but sparks are you d to fly with so much heat around. Thankgod cabin was sound proof otherwise office staff would have been wondering now is it a deal or more than that. He has got sufficient clues that things are not same and it's relief that he still trust her morals now the game begin of suave RV and I just can't wait to know what happens when piyush tells him everything. You know what I am dying to read what happens when ranveer finds out what happened to her ishani ita like the deadliest of pain will erupt in his heart because in a way somewhere he is also responsible for this.

Ishani and her fascination with the scars actually it will be lovely when ranveer comes to kno about it let her Inflict as much pain as she want. But honestly it have became her addiction now and it will be difficult for her even more because now her heart will keep betraying her more often.

What's with the puzzle they are not able to find out about their dreams and I fell there are few more people in this trap in which they are pulled into its like everyone is planning something she want to finish chirag he is on his own purpose but they are all surrounded by masked people ita getting hell lot thrilling.

Now please dont tell me you are starting with epistle atleast 6 interludes should be there it will be totally a cliffhanger that too deadliest. And dear the way you said about those diaries as contagious I am just thinking what is going to come ahead. And those quotes while they were kissing was same from the painting he gifted to her and is their life going on like their dreams. Ishveer dress up so devilishly hot. No wonder people glare

Sorry every time I think I ll review a short one but don't know how I end up blabbering so much. I ll surely try next time.
But it's your fault you write so beautifully that I cannot stop admirng. Seriously LM this interludes had made you a writer of different level altogthr and I am so glad to read your work. Amazing job seriously. Didn't used emojis because that will make it too much longer . I again was trying to do wolf whistling with this update
Thnx for pm
Update soin




Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so ecstatic that you liked it so much! ⭐️⭐️ And gee, is there a single time when you don't make me blush with your reviews? ☺️☺️



Coming to the review, oh yes, the dreams are back, and more deadlier than ever. 😉😉 And well, take 500 brownie points for analyzing the dream because that was spot-on. 👏👏 Oh yeah, back to the conference room, our Ishaani madam's heart is on fire. 😈😈 And well, the rabbit and it's master... it's all going to be too much fun. 😛😛



Oh yeah, past connections are brought into play and the poor employees are stuck in between their ego tussles. 🤓🤓 Well not poor employees since they did manage to have their revenge upon Ishaani for being such a difficult woman with them. 🥱🥱 But Ishaani doesn't care because she doesn't like anyone eyeing her Ranveer like that. 😎😎 It made me laugh so much too imagining their expressions especially when he threw her out of the cabin. 🤣🤣



Oh yeah, she had to witness it because that was what pushed her to the edge. 😕😕 And she was pissed off about both things. 🤪🤪 But oh yes, RV is as dangerous as he can get, even beating Chirag at it if his brains worked the other way around. 😲😲 And he'd just pushing Ishaani to her limit so that he can break her first... but like you said, no matter what he may say, the Ranveer in him is still alive, but he's just overpowered by the iron wall RV has confined him to.



This is absolutely smashing, the way you said it about RV trying to catch Ishaani, but Miss Parekh taking her away. very, very impressive analysing. Take another 50 points for this. 👍🏼👍🏼 And oh yeah, try as he might, the Ranveer in him knows that something is wrong and is desperate to know what it is. 😊😊 And no matter what he denies, he succumbed to their proximity eventually. 😳😳



Hehe yeah, that moment was a kind of AU for the godown scene like Poplu mentioned. 😃😃 This was more of my take on how I wanted this moment to be both in this FF and in the show as well. And this chapter was by far THE most complex and difficult chapter to pen down in terms of emotions, and this kiss was no exception. 🤔🤔 But I'm just relieved that you liked their moment.



Oh yeah, the office would have been set on fire otherwise with the passion these two were spitting out. 😉😉 And it being sound-proof was an even bigger blessing. 😆😆 But oh yes, Ranveer has pieced enough to know that all is not what it seems and he's caught hold of Piyush now to tell him the truth. 😳😳 Hehe, the thought of Interlude 19 is only making me smile more. Poor Ranveer... 🤡🤡



As to Ranveer coming to know about Ishaani's addiction, yeah that's going to be another heart-warmer for me. 😈😈 Coming to the dream, I'll get into the snakes part with a little more detail in Interlude 19 again. 😛😛 As to the epistles, well sorry darling, but they do start from the next update. 😭😭 But I hope that these 20 epistles will be a different experience again, so just trust me on this. 😊😊



Poor Ishaani is bound to find them suffocating when she reads about how stupid she was to fall for Chirag's trap and all those sugar-coated words that she must have written for him in what she "supposed" was love, but in reality was all an illusion. 😒😒 Also, take another 50 points for guessing the quotes. 👍🏼👍🏼 Yes, they were two quotes from the painting he gifted her. 😃😃



Ah, as to whether how much of their dreams turn into reality, you'll have to wait a little more for that. 😵😵 And hehe, they do dress rather hot now, don't they? ☺️☺️ Thank you so much once again for such a stunning review and I'll try to update the next chapter soon enough! ❤️❤️



Loads of love,
LM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer



LM🤗🤗🤗

First of all miss universe congo with the 4th thread🤗🤗 well desserved❤️

Loved this chapter , gosh loved this meeting and the way you wrote " It was Mr.Vaghela and Mrs.Parekh meeting each other not ishani and Ranveer" and the whole chapter was beautiful written😳😳 I was reading every line I was hooked or something and with big eyes 😆😆 that to during lunch break on work🤪🤪 Tumhari writing ka jadoo

Also can I say that I loved Flinch and Ranveer 's convo, man that was sho awesome❤️ Uff cant wait to see what happens next , also Miss universe you are on fire with the updates😆👏

Thank you sho much for this pyara sa gift🤗 You know I remember last year you also dedicated a chapter from NC for my BD😳😳 I am so grateful to have u 🤗 Also LM how dare u call this a small gift , when you dedicate a chapter for me it is one of the biggest gifts I get🤗❤️❤️

Love you loads❤️❤️





Thank you so much, cherie! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️



Hayee, bas tumhein chapter pasand aaya, that's the most important thing for me. And yes, I love writing the Finch and Ranveer conversations because they're too much fun to explore in terms of the dynamics between them. 😉😉 Hehe, I'm on fire with them now, but the college work load is beginning to catch up with me now.



Ab bas bhi karo, don't make me blush. ☺️☺️ As long as you loved it and it brought a smile upon your face, that's all that I want, really. ❤️❤️



Loads of love,
LM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Res😳

Unres on page 1 LM , also shorry for the short review😕




No problem, sweetie, that's alright. 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Frick. Frick. Frick. You updated!

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Oh my, I seriously couldn't get my excitement under control on seeing a PM from you. And I am sorry if my thoughts come out unconnected to the previous one. I am on a word high. 😆

First of, tell me that another three interludes will follow before you start with the epistles! Please, please. That "walk through night" engine sort of tells me that you finished the interludes and are starting with the epistles. God, no! Please! I want the next interlude. *Wails*

And this. "The moth needed the flame of hope now." What a splendid reference to my username. 🤣 🤣 I had the time of my life laughing. 🤪

New revelations and schemes broiling in a cauldron. Ah, the snake in Ranveer's dream is Chirag, now, no? And as I have said before, it's Chiru baba in Ishaani's dream! I am right, again! Celebrations. (Celebration is a pun here) 😆

Why isn't she letting out that she is divorced? What's the big deal there? Piyush Sanghvi, you better, better tell RV the truth! I long to what Ranveer feels when he gets to know it all. 😈

Addicted to her metallic friend, isn't she? Addictions are bad and too much of anything is loathing poison. Oh, Ishaani needs to read this review.

Love,
P.

PS. Sorry for the language.
PS II. I just loved the May 9th, 2015 AU.
PS III. Thanks for the precious suggestion, I will surely try to get my hands on all of those books. 😃




Thank you so much, love! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And hehe, language is excused. 🤣🤣 I didn't know that you were waiting for this chapter so eagerly! 😃😃



Coming to the review, first thing's first. Sorry babe, but the epistles do start from the next update. 😭😭 The final two interludes will be after Book 5 now. 😛😛 This is a sabr ka intehaan not just for you guys, but for myself as well so please do bear with me. 😊😊



Moving ahead, well when I wrote that line, I was all 'Hold it, something doesn't seem right...' and then I went all 'Oh shit! This is ridiculous!', but I decided to keep it anyway since I liked the phrasing of the sentence. 😆😆 As to revelations, well, you got it right (in a way) once again so take a 100 points for that. 😉😉



Oh darling, that's the thing now - it's not that easy to just tell him the truth after everything she put him through for that supposed love or after all the damages that their relationship suffered after that night. But don't worry, the cat will come out of the bag soon enough. As to Piyush giving out the show, well pull your horses there because there's a little twisty over there. 😈😈



But as to RV's reaction, oh, I can't wait to get to that. 😃😃 And coming to our beloved darling's addiction, oh yeah the loathing poison will earn her a slap soon if she doesn't stop over here. 😳😳 And I think Ranveer might be the one reading your review afterall. 😎😎



Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️



Loads of love,
LM



Ps. I. Don't worry about that, it's cool. 😆😆
Ps. II. Oh yeah, that scene is amongst one of my favourites hands down. 😉😉
Ps. III. Anytime! ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Tintish

Just loved the interlude. It is just splendid.Can't wait for the next interlude...😊





Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And the next update will start with the epistles again but I'll try my best to update as soon as I can. 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: matsh

Oh my dear Dikri.. Thank you sooo much for the lovely birthday gift :)))
Last year also you gave a beautiful chapter and this year too!! Am I getting spoiled or what !! :))

*Feels very very important and grins from ear to ear *

And now coming to last interlude.. First of all the moment I saw the heading I scrolled down to look for the kiss!!! And boy I wasn't disappointed!! ;)) Poor RV has no idea of her repressed feelings now does he :0 Made the big mistake of making the tigress jealous AND throwing her out of her own office , how could he !! :0
It's nice to see mad and angry Ishani for once who can simply burn in jealousy.. I am sure you had fun writing her too..
But for the records, I hate the scalpel stuff she does and you better put an end to it soon..
RV is hopefully getting the whole dope from piyush soon.. And then he will be unstoppable..
Seriously the way you have shaped RV and Ranveer is dangerously alluring.. He couldn't get hotter.. No wonder Shaneilla fell in trap easily..

Of course the another highlight is the way you write the dreams.. I think you can safely get PhD now in dreams analysis.. :)) It was so touching and painful at the same time to read them!! Btw I don't like the vibes I get from the dreams.. You make this FF have a sadist end and by God I will stop taking to you!! :X
I know we have to bear the chishani chapters now but anything for the love of reading a good read :3

Update soon!!







Thank you so much, mommy! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And hehe, I like to pamper you like this... maska maarofying for the sadism (runs away before receiving flying chappal). 🤣🤣



Jokes apart, oh yeah you know me so well. 😉😉 Didn't I tell you that I was just getting started with my 'sanskaars' in US? 😆😆 And oh yeah, RV clearly underestimated her and rubbed her the wrong way becasue what it resulted in was just an explosion of passion. ☺️☺️ Oh yeah, had this not been such an emotionally taxing chapter to pen, I'd have had a little more fun with that, but I loved making Ishaani burn like that. Kaleje ko thandhak. 👍🏼👍🏼



Oh yeah, you know what she's going to get for her scalpel addiction from Ranveer. 😎😎 My hands are itching already... 🤪🤪 As to him getting the dope from Piyush, I'm not going to say anything more but he'll be getting the dope for sure. 😛😛 Oh yeah, writing about him like this makes me go all 'hawt, hawt, hawt!' in my head too. Poor Shanella, she doesn't even have a clue about who she's trying to mess with... 😆😆



Hehe, I'm glad that you enjoy reading about the dreams. 😃😃 And hehe, I know that you have zero faith in me when it comes to sadism, but well, try trusting me a little more. 😈😈 And I hope that Book 5 will be an interesting read in its own way. 😊😊



Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next part soon! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py


I read it dear. Please do take care of your health and no need to hurry you can take your own time to review.




Don't worry, sweetie, I'm recovering now. 😳😳 And I don't like leaving reviews unattended to so I'm a little fussy with them like that. 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: robal

I must have read this chapter 3 times, I loved it and loved it. It's so beautifully written, it had everything I wished for, it was just amazing. Can't wait for the next chapters. Hats off to you for writing this FF, you are so good at it. Thanks so much.





Thank you so much, swwetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked this chapter so much! ⭐️⭐️ And seriously, this is nothing short of an honour for me that you think so. 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

"I don't know how to end this," I confess, a tear leaving my eye. She wipes away the stray tear with her thumb before her fingers interlock within my hair, the sky cast with the most powerful sunset that I'd ever since up until that moment.

I felt my breath get hitched as our faces inched closer, my eyes shutting as I felt her lips tease against mine. The next moment, I'd claimed them into the slowest, most passionate lock, not knowing how else to express how much she meant to me. My arms found its way around her waist as she held on to me tighter, our lips savouring each others in an emotion that I could finally let go of. Love. Both of us refused to let go as the scent of roses and vanillas got more and more pronounced, making my heart experience something it had never experienced before. It was the passionate joy of loving.

We finally separated after what felt like several sunlit eternities, Love smiling at me and leaving one, last peck upon my cheek before pulling me into an embrace.

"Farewell from my world of absurdities," she whispered into my ears and we separated.



Just the opposite of how their diaries started. Indeed the end of a glorious era. 💔




Ah, take 200 points for noticing this. 😭😭 Ranveer's dreams began with the dialogues being both of their opening sentences in their respective diaries. 😛😛 So the last section of his last dream was actually the reverse of the first section of his first dream... 😳😳 Sigh, the end of a glorious era... 💔💔
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi LM
I just re read this ff and realised that you have maintained many similarities between this and soap some scenes which were very touchy wheather of pain or happiness only one most important resemblance is remaining of karwa chauth night and that's what you are hinting in dreams.
Your intentions don't look good to me what are you up to exactly??
I told elvish that the live for the sadism here in forum can even give ranveer's love a run for money. Not exactly same but meaning was same.




Oh my, you completed reading 98 chapters so quickly? 😲😲 Wow, you are truly amazing, Dv. ⭐️⭐️ And coming to the point you raised, like I've mentioned this before too, US is a sort of alternate timeline of the show where 80% of it remains canon to the show so yes some scenes and events are picked up from the show itself as a sort of symbolism that some things do not change in spite of it being an alternate timeline. 😛😛



Now, coming to your KC point, you are seriously outstanding, and I'm awestruck. 😲😲 I'm certain that nobody read through the dreams like you did because the hint was as subtle as it could be and yet you caught on to it. 👍🏼👍🏼 Honestly, I think you can replace Riya now and be one of the most extraordinary analysts that I've come across in terms of a reader.



Coming to my intentions, well, like I was telling matsh, have a little more faith in me than that. 🤣🤣 Oh yes, we love sadism too much in this forum, but like I've been saying from the start of US, the ending is going to be quite an experiment so I just hope that it all works out well in the end. ⭐️⭐️



Ps. What gave the "probable" KC angle away? I want to know whether you caught on to the exact hint or no first. 😆😆

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