#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 20

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Mein soch rahi thi ki HP would come to Sydney...and he'll catch up with both Zaveri and Wanveel...

Hi LM!!!!
Hope you are doing good... 😊
Ahem ahem ... Whom he is talking about?
Honestly they might not be this much jealous when the other one is with someone else, how much we are. 😉 It's like we cannot retake the thought of them getting so much affected with someone else's presence 😆
O that NC nostalgia with that line. 😛
O God in first meet itself it seems like she passed potion or executed any charm he was never this ecstatic with ishani it was everything pain love anger but with her I guess only one thing and that's liveliness about everything 😕
Ranveer mesmerised with someone this much is difficult to take 😆
But dhikra deserves it after all madame is too busy to notice others in her life. 😉
These two idiots keep on making clear that they ate each other's universe and instantly justify their rant. 😆
He likes physical exertion it's like it gives him new energy dude seriously so much cycling he ll win cross country race 😆 😆
Finally he got the job of messenger boy well enough for his survival honestly 😳
You know the shows ritika really had a good looks that's why she always created a sense of insecurity with her over friendliness 😆
Well home is where heart is and here Banda already liking his sasural so much 😕
He goes on advising well the situation were similar to reliance fiasco I guess and well what's wrong with him he keeps on looking at her what's so much in her aura honestly 😲
Indians do not leave a chance to have a share of Indian food whenever they go outside seriously there is something about culinary arts of our.
Mr perfect met another all-rounder good in decorations good in cooking and lively well all characters of of beautiful bride 🤢 🤣 well she can be his sister from previous birth you see many qualities match any way and amba was more of her mother in show I seriously feel like that 😆
Finchverr are the only one who give a relief in this book and nothing else honestly 🤗
Finch and ranveer have became rather best buddies and finch is someone who genuinely cares for him I seriously love this character so much 😳
Vodka shots honestly this girl drives him insane to do crazy things always 🤪 with so many shots did he managed to survive idiot he is thank God she didn't give a rant about how her birthday was made up by chirag otherwise what would have happened with him
And finch was right let it go but I guess this three monthsof estrangement worked against his because in her loneliness she started clinging to the only ray of hope she got and chirag was doing his job perfectly.
Can't finch get angry with him this time to reconcile with ishani I honestlyhe is the only guy with so much rage
😉
But whts with Monica girls always drive them crazy.
He changed his place that's good
But with all the rant about his positivity oogling because of ritika it's difficult to analyse that part can't take him ranting so much about someone else I just cannot keep jealousy aside but have to admit that difference between ishani and ranveer's entry is he never let that place occupied by someone and she didn't knew when she replaced that place with chirag though I don't blame her because she also never let that occupied with someone else chirag just changed the face of it. I think o have gone stupid with claiming and then justifyingmy own claims
You know after reading this chapter I realised as yto why he got married to her with all the life gone from him he was already dying and if in one meeting he is so bamboozled with her presence she was the only one to keep him alive and let him fulfillhis mota babuji last wish to become something. 😊 Dint have any anger on her she reallyseems nice as per your descriptions first time I have genuinely liked her for her nature honestly that's because of your writing
You know I wanted to tell you long back that this whole ff of yours is seriously very special it has occupieda different place. When I first joined this forum for your ff NC I used to love it for all the love it hadnd all the healing but this book is something different its a total journey and it also helps in Learning a lot about life hard work and relations. I can never compare NC and US but both have equal place I can certainly say that if NC have this place because of ishveer and their love this has special place because of your mesmerising writing. Don't think your NC effort is not getting acknowledge but still this book is certainly very much showing your skills you have added a whole new level to ishveer's love story.

Sorry this was very lame doesn't make sense to even me also it popped up out of nowhere but I wanted to tell you this thank you dear for this it certainly uplifts my mood many times just like NC and I couldn't thank you enoughfor always making me happy with your updates coinciding with my bad mood I just get happy after reading them.
Thnx for pm

PS with chishani in next i can't say waiting for next
🤣

Well well.. This is called double torture.. Chishani was already making me mad and now you started Ritveer.. I know your Ritika is sweet and harmless but still just the name makes me squirm... Kya kare.. Purane ghav.. Bharte nahi.. ;))

Why did we ever tell you to write this extra book and invite trouble.. Like aa bail mujhe maar..

I am seriously so pissed after reading this chapter.. Ranveer even got tea and pakoda from her plus she is a good cook and will take him for site seeing.. Like why why..

I am seriously thinking of boycotting your next chapters.. I know.. You know I won't.. So.. No point.. ;)

On more serious note, yeah aside from the heart burn you have set the tone pretty nicely for Ritveer and Zaveri too seems hunan now..

Finch reminds so much of Martin and the vodka shots make me want to go back to NC again!!

Keep updating soon!! I want that Epistle 100 already.. :) :)

Hey you said ranveer is also on revenge?
Her revenge is for chiragbut what about his?
Mystery girl.

Hy dr...
Your chap is rather interesting...
Actually i love this rithika so much... In my pov... Inshow itself rithika is sweet and beautiful and she will make everyone around happy with her charm... Only situations change her... Rather she is so good... She was so niz in the start of her character in show than ishani...
Ur rithika is rather different and gud... Now ranveer feels positive and gets positive energy and hope from rithika... That's sweet... 😃
If he didn't have ishani as universe this boy would have fall for her...
Waiting for more and more next... 😆
Keep smiling dr... 😳

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi LM!!!!
Hope you are doing good... 😊
Ahem ahem ... Whom he is talking about?
Honestly they might not be this much jealous when the other one is with someone else, how much we are. 😉 It's like we cannot retake the thought of them getting so much affected with someone else's presence 😆
O that NC nostalgia with that line. 😛
O God in first meet itself it seems like she passed potion or executed any charm he was never this ecstatic with ishani it was everything pain love anger but with her I guess only one thing and that's liveliness about everything 😕
Ranveer mesmerised with someone this much is difficult to take 😆
But dhikra deserves it after all madame is too busy to notice others in her life. 😉
These two idiots keep on making clear that they ate each other's universe and instantly justify their rant. 😆
He likes physical exertion it's like it gives him new energy dude seriously so much cycling he ll win cross country race 😆 😆
Finally he got the job of messenger boy well enough for his survival honestly 😳
You know the shows ritika really had a good looks that's why she always created a sense of insecurity with her over friendliness 😆
Well home is where heart is and here Banda already liking his sasural so much 😕
He goes on advising well the situation were similar to reliance fiasco I guess and well what's wrong with him he keeps on looking at her what's so much in her aura honestly 😲
Indians do not leave a chance to have a share of Indian food whenever they go outside seriously there is something about culinary arts of our.
Mr perfect met another all-rounder good in decorations good in cooking and lively well all characters of of beautiful bride 🤢 🤣 well she can be his sister from previous birth you see many qualities match any way and amba was more of her mother in show I seriously feel like that 😆
Finchverr are the only one who give a relief in this book and nothing else honestly 🤗
Finch and ranveer have became rather best buddies and finch is someone who genuinely cares for him I seriously love this character so much 😳
Vodka shots honestly this girl drives him insane to do crazy things always 🤪 with so many shots did he managed to survive idiot he is thank God she didn't give a rant about how her birthday was made up by chirag otherwise what would have happened with him
And finch was right let it go but I guess this three monthsof estrangement worked against his because in her loneliness she started clinging to the only ray of hope she got and chirag was doing his job perfectly.
Can't finch get angry with him this time to reconcile with ishani I honestlyhe is the only guy with so much rage
😉
But whts with Monica girls always drive them crazy.
He changed his place that's good
But with all the rant about his positivity oogling because of ritika it's difficult to analyse that part can't take him ranting so much about someone else I just cannot keep jealousy aside but have to admit that difference between ishani and ranveer's entry is he never let that place occupied by someone and she didn't knew when she replaced that place with chirag though I don't blame her because she also never let that occupied with someone else chirag just changed the face of it. I think o have gone stupid with claiming and then justifyingmy own claims
You know after reading this chapter I realised as yto why he got married to her with all the life gone from him he was already dying and if in one meeting he is so bamboozled with her presence she was the only one to keep him alive and let him fulfillhis mota babuji last wish to become something. 😊 Dint have any anger on her she reallyseems nice as per your descriptions first time I have genuinely liked her for her nature honestly that's because of your writing
You know I wanted to tell you long back that this whole ff of yours is seriously very special it has occupieda different place. When I first joined this forum for your ff NC I used to love it for all the love it hadnd all the healing but this book is something different its a total journey and it also helps in Learning a lot about life hard work and relations. I can never compare NC and US but both have equal place I can certainly say that if NC have this place because of ishveer and their love this has special place because of your mesmerising writing. Don't think your NC effort is not getting acknowledge but still this book is certainly very much showing your skills you have added a whole new level to ishveer's love story.

Sorry this was very lame doesn't make sense to even me also it popped up out of nowhere but I wanted to tell you this thank you dear for this it certainly uplifts my mood many times just like NC and I couldn't thank you enoughfor always making me happy with your updates coinciding with my bad mood I just get happy after reading them.
Thnx for pm

PS with chishani in next i can't say waiting for next
🤣

Originally posted by: matsh

Well well.. This is called double torture.. Chishani was already making me mad and now you started Ritveer.. I know your Ritika is sweet and harmless but still just the name makes me squirm... Kya kare.. Purane ghav.. Bharte nahi.. ;))

Why did we ever tell you to write this extra book and invite trouble.. Like aa bail mujhe maar..

I am seriously so pissed after reading this chapter.. Ranveer even got tea and pakoda from her plus she is a good cook and will take him for site seeing.. Like why why..

I am seriously thinking of boycotting your next chapters.. I know.. You know I won't.. So.. No point.. ;)

On more serious note, yeah aside from the heart burn you have set the tone pretty nicely for Ritveer and Zaveri too seems hunan now..

Finch reminds so much of Martin and the vodka shots make me want to go back to NC again!!

Keep updating soon!! I want that Epistle 100 already.. :) :)

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey you said ranveer is also on revenge?
Her revenge is for chiragbut what about his?
Mystery girl.

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy dr...
Your chap is rather interesting...
Actually i love this rithika so much... In my pov... Inshow itself rithika is sweet and beautiful and she will make everyone around happy with her charm... Only situations change her... Rather she is so good... She was so niz in the start of her character in show than ishani...
Ur rithika is rather different and gud... Now ranveer feels positive and gets positive energy and hope from rithika... That's sweet... 😃
If he didn't have ishani as universe this boy would have fall for her...
Waiting for more and more next... 😆
Keep smiling dr... 😳

Dv, I've un-reserved my response. 😛