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Afrah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Oh c'mon! Even I had the similar fear. But I wrote. Try it...You can.😳😳

Will surely try my level best dear Av 🤗 tnx for d encouragement ❤️❤️

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Afrah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Zenab78
Its beautiful ...wow pls continue 😊 😳

Tnx,will update soon 😊

Edited by AnYa_ArMan - 9 years ago

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Afrah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: VC288
Hi afrah!!

It was wonderful!! 😃

You're fearing for nothing yrr!! Everyone have that fear in their mind and that's natural but you write soo beautiful and we all want to read more from you!! 😳

You are my companion!! Inspired by MM!! I'm too, inspired by her! She's such a sweetie 😳😳

Do write dear!! Awesome it was ,absolutely!! Shaveer!!❤️ loving it. PlZz!! Make it ff na!!

Loads of love
Vaishali

Tnx a ton vaishali 😳...yes I also love the name Shaveer its really beautiful as it has both ranveer and ishanis part in it.

Yes MM is such a wonderful writer...her imaginations takes us out of this world 😉😛...

So u also write ff n os haan?? Wud love to read from u too😃😊

Will update soon keep waiting dear...😛

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life_is_fun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Beautiful Os dear...👏

IshVeer are expecting their second child and Shaveer is naughty...😛.

dnt know when this good day will come in our show... 😆

So wonderful and a happiness giving ... a light hearted OS..

Keep writing dear...

Loved reading it...😛

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aastha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

hey sweetie🤗
This was beautiful❤️❤️
I love the name shaveer 😳😳
and ishu expecting next baby.. wow😳
please make it a ff n update soon😳
loads of love
AASTHA🤗

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naxathira

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: AnYa_ArMan

Hi jo 😛, tnx a lot reading ua reply gave me a boost to my confidence to continue further,will update soon and my name is Afrah nt arfah😉

Indeed MM is a lovly writer...my imaginations startd from her writing..visualizing her OS... This OS came in mind so decided to put it down in words...🤗❤️hugs n lov u too

Oh dear so sry AFRAH...i calld u arfah..keep up the positive spirit n continue writing..m more a music luver than a buk lover...but i luvd ur os ...hugs.

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Afrah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: naxathira
Oh dear so sry AFRAH...i calld u arfah..keep up the positive spirit n continue writing..m more a music luver than a buk lover...but i luvd ur os ...hugs.

I dont accept sorry from friends jo... Me too love music rather than books... But I love ishveer seeing evry1s craze cudn't stop myself from writing...🤣... Love and hugs...😳

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Afrah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Hey guys here is my 2nd part...hope u all will like it..sorry if any mistakes...so here it goes...

Part 2

Ishani leaves for kitchen...

Ranveer goes to shaveer picks him up take him to dinning table,

Ranveer: come on..come now have ur milk.

Shaveer:"no papa i don't like it" says with a cute pouty face

Ranveer: so then if u won't drink milk how will u grow up become strong like superman,if u won't be strong how will u takecare of our new baby? Tou chalo jaldi finish ur milk.

Shaveer: yay..!yes I will be big bro I have to become stronger and drinks his milk.

In the kitchen,"Goodmorning Maa" Ishaani wishes to Amba who is busy preparing breakfast,

Ishani: 'kya ban rahe hai? Parathe?'.

Amba: Haa ishaani wo bhi tumhare pasand ke

Ishani: 'Wow' I will help u with it maa.

Amba: Nahi koi zarurat nahi hai, go and sit on the dining table,Is halat mai kuch kaam krne ki zarurat nahi hai,sirf araam karo bas,Mala hai na meri madat karne ke liye.

On dining table Father and son are waiting anxiously for the breakfast.Ishaani kaha hai nashta?? Shouts ranveer towards the kitchen. Yes bringing patidev replys ishaani. Amba and ishaani comes with the plates of hot piping parathas and dhoklas.

Evryone is having breakfast.

Shaveer hasn't even thouched his paratha, On seeing this:

ishaani: come here baby, mai khilati hu,

Shaveer: nai mumma shaveer ko nahi khana and climbs on the dining table.

Ishani: are u comming or not?? U have really become fussy with eating now 'ye nahi khana,wo nahi khana,doodh nahi peena' what will I do with this kid.

Amba: Ishani beta tum araam se khau, mai khilati hu na usko

Amba: shaveer dikhra yha aao,I will tell u a story...

Ishani: Thanks maa.

Ranveer is eating in a hurry, ishani: ranveer ye kaise kha rhe ho? araam se khao naa..

Ranveer: Nahi ishaani I dont want to late for the meeting.

Ishani:Meeting? Par aaj tou Sunday hai.

Ranveer hurries to the hall with Ishaani, mera blazer tou upar rehgaya ranveer says,

Ishaani: w8 let me go and bring from the room upstairs.

Ranveer: Nai ishani zyada upar niche mat chada karo that too in this state, Mala will go and bring.

Ishaani: Ranveer u r going?? U told u will spend the whole day with me says Ishaani with a frowned face.

Cupping her face he says: 'No baby foreign clients hai so jana padega',

Will try to come back as soon as possible ok.

Meanwhile Mala comes with the blazer.

Ishaani helps ranveer with the blazer.They head to the door hugging sideways, Ranveer jaldi aana,I will miss u, by way someone is looking really hot in this black jeans and tshirt with white blazer says ishani in a romantic tone.

Someone haan...isi someone pe tou saari office ki ladkiya marti hai he says to which she replys marti hongi but ye someone tou sirf mera hai.Ofcourse, my love I am all yours now I am getting late shall I leave my love asks RV, Ok bye ranveer. RV leaves for the car, he comes back a gives a quick peck on ishanis cheek and says keep missing me,love u... Love u too ranveer now go and he leaves.

Shaveer comes to Ishaani and see his papa left, he starts to cry,

ishani bends down to her son.

Ishaani: 'Kyu roo raha hai mera baccha',papa will be back soon,dont cry u are mumma's cutie pie na she says caressing shaveers hair.

Shaveer:But papa said he will play with me today.

Ishani: Papa will be back soon then u can play my baby...

Holding Shaveer's hands ishaani says come mumma will give u chocolate,did u have your paratha shaveer? Asks ishani while going back to kitchen.. Yesh mamma dadi ne khilaya aur story bhi sunaayi...

In the kitchen Amba and Ishaani are busy preparing for lunch. Shaveer at the back of them slowly climbs up a stool grabs a dabba from the counter thinking chocolates might be in it but it turns out to be aata(flour), seeing it he smiles mischievously and starts playing with it, throws the flour here and there,playing like sand,soon he covers up himself all white head to toe, he drops the container by mistakley, which makes a thud noise to which Amba and ishaani turns back to this noise,they are shocked to see the whole kitchen is in a mess,

They see the kitchen with their mouth open, unbelievable what they have seen, with the guilty culprit (Shaveer) still standing and playing in the mess even after they expressed their shock.

'Hey bhagwaan'! Screams Ishaani holding hands on her head.

But the innocent gulity smile on Shaveer's face makes them laugh out loud.Ishaani captures this moment in her mobile with selfies and pics.

Amba: iski harkatein bilkul mere ranveer jaisi hai...ranveer bhi jab bahot chota tha tou aisi hi shaitaani karta tha.

Ishani: Tabhi sochu ye ladka aisa kyu hai..

Amba: Tu bhi kuch kum nahi thi ishaani haan, mere ranveer ko hi dosh mat de says while laughing.

Shaveer laughs too...

Sup how was it guys?.. Waiting for ua all reviews :D

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Hi my dear Afrah🤗

How was u r day?

Hope u had a wonderful day😉

Wow !What an amazing update really dear,loved it so much👏👏

Wow I am in love with Shaveer ,cute little boy ,I really really want that character to appear onscreen,a cute little boy of our Ishveer,he is so awesome ,wow it was so cute and conversations with Amba in the kitchen and all and that chocolate scene was just amazing my dear😃😃

Update soon ,I want to know what is going to happen next😛

Edited by CarpedeimRose - 9 years ago

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Afrah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose
Hi my dear Afrah🤗
How was u r day?
Hope u had a wonderful day😉
Wow !What an amazing update really dear,loved it so much👏👏
Wow I am in love with Shaveer ,cute little boy ,I really really want that character to appear onscreen,a cute little boy of our Ishveer,he is so awesome ,wow it was so cute and conversations with Amba in the kitchen and all and that chocolate scene was just amazing my dear😃😃
Update soon ,I want to know what is going to happen next😛

Hey sweetheart,

I got this part ready in d morning itself but cudn't post it due to posts limit...soo i don't noe myself how i passed the whole day.. how eagerly i was waiting to share with u all..🤣

I am glad that u like my Os and ofcozz Shaveer😊

Baby On screen?? Consummation hi nahi hua abhi tak do saal hone ko aarhe hai show ke😭😭

Edited by AnYa_ArMan - 9 years ago