Ishveer SS:Adventure to seek love and explore truth -Special up Pg 14 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
my love.

dis is d first tym i am reading your write-ups. i never knew dt u are so brilliant in that.


lovely. plz continue. will be waiting. its on d current track.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
This is beautiful Jenni.
You are very good. ...

Just loved it 😛

Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Hey Jenny.. nice chapter dear.. I loved it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Amazing chapter Jenni 👏👏 The story is getting interesting now can't wait 4 the next chapter plz update soon 😳😳 After reading ur SS I'm really excited to see Ranveer in actual episode
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Hi Guys ,I was so busy with all my exams ,projects and all other possible work that people in this world are ready to drag me into😆😆😆
Hence I am so late with my update ,okk fine so where are we ??

We stopped at the point where Ranveer and Ishaani eyed each other in Nirbhay's awless place ,
now what will happen our hero entry is a main thing fine what will he do ?Let see in this chapter

CHAPTER 2 : HE FOUND A BOWL OF HAPPINESS.
Ranveer was so mesmerized ,his eyes was so slimy because his wife made him to reciprocate that feeling of him ,her look ,her eyes was his tool of attraction which none could offer him so precise in this life for him.
Suddenly,there was a gesture someone was forcefully attempting it to divert his passion for her eyes,It was the main servant who was the chief among the cooks ,who was seated beside the pool in a bench that was lying at the backside of his face, he never wanted to break the intense eyelock which gave him soothing pleasure ,his heart urged to mobilize his stand in that particular place but this time ,the servant came closure to him and gave a tight knock which squeezed his nerves and he laughed for a moment and replied that whether he did some head massage ,the servant was left bizzare while he flew away like an eagle with a motive of catching his prey.

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Nirbhay's was found littering the place with chocolate wrappers and Ishaani ferociously roared like a lion and asked him to threw them in a thrash can but he refused and caught hold of her arm and pulled her towards the wall and waved his right hand to pat her cheeks with a tight slap but his hand lost their friction and it wasn't able to move ,someone is applying the inertia to halt his action ,it was Ranveer .

He was perfectly grasping his hand in his and pulling him against him and providing a defense for his Ishaani , "Saab ,your legs are perfectly diminished " , uttered Ranveer .

Nirbhay had no option , he couldn't perceive what he was task proofing he claimed that he couldn't understand the language and asked him whether he was a teacher in disguise appointed to teach him English .
Ishaani bounced with a pile of laughter ,her chirpy smile gave him a "BOWL OF HAPPINESS" ,Nirbhay was fuming like an angry cloud and Ranveer replied,
" Please ! Sir ,u look like an arctic pole but don't erupt like a beaming volcano ,we can 't pacify your intensity " .
Nirbhay 's brain left him with an attack and he left the place ,Ishaani was rolling in tears due to her spontaneous laughing exercise ,Ranveer's calm and a composing face that exhibited his caring nature which was born to nurture her appeared with a flash of a slight smile that was peeping out of his lips those corner lips really wanted to hold her near to his chest and cry his heart out to her and express to her ,How much he loves her ! ! and he manage to hide his tears that came out of his retina because he knows that his wipe can make her weep .
" Ranveer why did you say that to him " , asked Ishaani .
"Ishaani , he was stamping your leg and see how your blood flows like water ,that 's why ,I told him that his legs are diminished because they are creating huge fuss to someone's belonging " smirked Ranveer .
" But tell me onething Ishaani you still love my behaviour , I am quite amazed " squatted Ranveer before her with a lampoon .
She deliberately retreated it in her heart but her voice presented a satirical tone , " That is none of your business to question myself be aware that , I am not your better half anymore .
And she left the place , he purposely made security control by going behind her , he noticed something which gave his peaceful morning , her rain was making her drench ,it wasn't a drizzle by it was a hurricane 's effect which overflowed like a stream and his smile filled the valley around his sober land and it made him wake up and gave him determination she is his aim ,her love is his breath .
As she was crying , she recollected Naina's mother asking her to wear a Gujarati style saree for a party , she rushed into her room , Ranveer ran behind her , she by mistake left the latches unlocked and went inside her restroom to refresh , he ran through the wall beneath the place where the T.V was placed and hid behind the cot .
She came out by tying a saree and went near the mirror and was shocked to see her saree tying experience which has never reached it's maturity ,immediately she left no stones unturned to remember her Ranveer who was always there for her she said to herself that he was a specialist in draping saree especially around her because he was her possession then why she felt she had the guts to make him a husband of someone else , " He belongs one and only to Ishaani " uttered Ishaani .
Ranveer who was hiding behind the cot was yet already bursting in laughter seeing her passion for draping a saree while he heard her articulating these words he shouted and made her feel his presence by placing his hand on her waist and asked whom she wants to make her belonging .Ishaani without even a pinch of mercy replied that it was Nirbhay which made him throw her onto the cot and his static position collapsed due to her pallu which wasn't tied perfectly and he played dynamics onto his feet and fell on her .
Both of them were not even an inch distanced and their eyes were locked but he broke the intense eyelock lifted her forcingly made her feet fit the ground and he weaved his craftsmanship by draping the saree around her ,his eyes rotated like the wings of fan admiring the beauty of his love but Ishaani gave hits on his forehead and knocks on his cheeks not to involve in any mischief which is a integral part of her pure personality but she didn't do anything which made his heart heavy he missed her sanskari behaviour and imagined that the reason for this is she has lost her happiness .
But the actual reason for this she was tempting herself she was making herself reinforce the fact that she is never ready to hate her husband's intense stare because he looks more handsome only when his intense stares cover her like a blanket which is the pure joy she had received from God ,thanking him for bestowing a lovely husband ,who always loves her presence .

Her ears and her teeth was getting dim ,she couldn't bite of her feelings to him she couldn't hear his lovely words which she thought , was the biggest curse of her life but Ranveer draped the saree and firmly inserted the fleets on to her tummy , it gave her a soothing moment ,she instead of biting her own lips ,bit his ...
He was profound, he was freezed he was grinning ,he was rattled , he was squeezed ,he was delicate ,he was lively ,he was refreshing ever possible expressions and emotions anticipated his body when her kiss reached his lips , it was like a life giving holy water for a soul which was about to step onto it's grave ,he wanted a Car pe diem of his life ,he never wished that the clock could move further , her lips was still like the sandwich which enclosed within his ,he prayed that he never wanted to get out of this lovely lock .
But his brain, kindled him ,that why did she kiss him and he immediately pushed her against the wall and caught hold of her and opened his mouth while she kicked on his right leg and said ,
" I am so sorry ,I thought you was Nirbhay that's why ,I kissed you ,see this beer bottle ,I love this more ,I drank it and I missed my conscious " .
"I lost not only my conscious but my love , my friendship my man ,Ranveer ! ! " cried Ishaani as she moved away from his presence
" You missed everything in your life ,Ishaani but , I know it ,you loved my presence and this kiss is for me because my love which ,I have within me will never cheat me and will direct me in a diversified path ,it will land me in my lover's hands who loves me unconditionally " while he was saying this he found a piece of cloth near the dressing table he picked it up and was terrified...
WHat ???? did he find there let's see it in the next chapter ,until then byeee😃😃

Edited by CarpedeimRose - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Hey sweetiepie🤗🤗

I loved this chapter I am beyond happy you finally updated
I loved the saree scene , love how Ranveer is being patient yet determined to find the truth Sweetie , I must say you are really good with words😳😳

Update the next soon, cant wait to read more😳😳

With love
MM
Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful

Hi jenny! Wonderful chapter
Read this ss i just loved it.
I'm excited to know what happend nxt..
plz contin...

Thank u so much for liking it 😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Butifuleyes

Hi CR love the story and also the handsome dp.

ohh thanks a lot dear for liking them😃😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Hii CR😊
CR u r a wonderful writer. your 2 updates i loved it.👏
i like ur update it was lovely.
and i wait for ranveer "what"😆😆😆
thnx for ss dear.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Do you know something? I find the lines poetic! This was awesome Jenni! I loved the way he called her baby doll :D :D

Update the next one soon <3

Hi chotti 😃
Oh ! Really u felt it poetic ,I luv it dear
THanks a lot for liking it 😃😃

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