Ishveer SS:Adventure to seek love and explore truth -Special up Pg 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi my dear friendsšŸ¤—
How are u all?
Hope u people are doing well😃😃
I have written a lot OS ,SS and FF's in many forums and even in contest too but ,I have never opened my thoughts to scribble my mind thereby to paint a portrait on my lovely couple,so here,I am with a new SS,This particular SS will deal with the ideas of love alone and it will be based on the new track that is Ranveer 's disguise track ,my own imagination , how do, I think about it ,let me see ,If I could do a better job ,Fine then here is the prologue ,read the prologue ,If u people like it then alone ,I will continue my story otherwise ,I won't hope u guys like it .

PROLOGUE
Ranveer Vaghela who breathes, thinks ,dreams , eats, sleeps and lives in this world only with his Ishani 's memories , wasn't able to win the hectic battle of making his Ishani to reciprocate her feelings , he could even hear the deepest voice of her inner heart that always spoke only truth not anything more than that too him , her heart's voice was like cotton ,it was so tender ,so fragile , she never knew to even hate others but as of now , it seemed really the oxymoron cause something or someone had reinforced her to behave in that way ,which he hated the most and her heart was no more a cotton but a stone which could be juxtaposed with a balanced diet , yup balanced diet comprises of several items mixed together likewise her heart now is a mixture of sorrow,pain , agony and full of lies that sprangles out from her mouth due to the outcome of her situation as well as due to the love she had for him made her a stoopy girl but her raindrop fashioned tears never became stoopy, she couldn't voice out even when he was just grinning at her and begging her to confess her heart out to him but she was made to act like a doll . As a result of her heart's impurification his determination to find out the truth that is being made as a monument , if left for centuries actually had not been away from his eyes ,his vision ,his retina could possibly transfer informations to his mind that a hidden secret as Agatha writes in her novels and Holmes explores in his mission was behind the screen , he urged to turn that out into limelight but how did he guess that her eyes ya , that was the note to play his piano of love and he disguises as a boy of Haryana to meet his love ,win his love explore the truth behind his love's story and to admire his lady love.Hence will the cat be out of the bag and will the symbol of true love that is Ishveer's true love win ,let's see.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Didi!

So this was short and sweet and also based on the current track. Would love to know more <3 Update the first part soon <3
Edited by Bloomfield - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue the story its really nice to see a new concept on the current track .waiting for your update .
Accutlly forgave me if i came up with late review ,lots of review to be catch up
Continue and waiting for your next update .
Lots of love
Saumik
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for ur comments my dr ChottišŸ¤—
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jenny...
Do continue ur SS😊 I ll be waiting for ur updates😊😊 Ur prologue has made me curious and I would love it definitelyšŸ¤—
Edited by ShaktiLuvsRadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Jenni!!
This is a very nice idea!! 😃 šŸ‘

You write too!! 😲 looks like we have got new writers and poets here! At least new for us! 😃

Do continue it further! Looking forward to how this will take shape.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice one jenny.loved itšŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plzz do continue...would love to read upon d current track...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CutiepiešŸ¤—šŸ¤—
Me shoo in love your writing You just are shoo magical with words I loved this part a lot when he desribed her heart šŸ‘šŸ‘ā­ļø Very well writen, yaar how do you write so well? me falling in love with your write , if i am not alreadyšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
DO PLEASE CONTINUE SOON😳😳 I want to read more, also please pm me 😳😳 Very short , sweet and well written start 😳😳 Also I am verry happy you started to write on IshVeer as well😳😳
Very good job sweetie, keep writing & shining like this😳😳
Yours MMā¤ļøā¤ļø
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Very nice story. I loved it. please continue it.

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