Remains Of A Shadow- Ishveer OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

It's always great to have your reviews, LM. They're encouraging as well as beautiful. :) ❤️❤️
I so wanted to write something for the new track and hoped this concept would do in either of the cases i.e. his SPD or duplicate taking over his real self.

Thanks so much. ❤️❤️ 😃

Oh, kiss.☺️ Had to write one. You and MM have me want to write a kiss for them. In Soulmates it isn't coming soon, so... 😆

Damn, I've been waiting for a kiss in Soulmates for so long! 😆😆 Every time it feels like they will kiss but there are too many emotions in between them to let them go to that level yet. They are still quite far from it. 😛😛 But I have very high hopes that the day you write the kiss in Soulmates, it will be more than worth the wait.

Originally posted by: Petrichorlove

Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes. Thank you for this, Elivish. I wanted to write something similar on this track too, but I can't do justice to it the way you did, I'm sure. It was haunting and despairing and yet so very hopeful! Loved it to bits.

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Yes, and you've written this very smartly as well. And I love the way you have spoken about his emotions with the mention of how cold and alone his soul is just like a person drenched in the rains alone, and how the pain of his heart bleeds its way through his loneliness. It's things like these that increase the beauty of what you write and you are exceptionally gifted in this. ⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

So sweet of you. All those things kind of define a person's mood-- or say their inner self is so close to nature (Yep, kind of quantum physics works here) that one cannot separate oneself from universe or nature and the world itself participates in their life's tumults. so it always comes along whenever I write. Shrugs!

Originally posted by: RTPMS

Wowww...what a tremendous OS... kept me on the edge till the end...

Keep Writing👍🏼

Magnificent os...u have written so beautifully...& the way you have portrayed Ranveer's feelings,fears,desperateness, superb yaar...& it was so good to represent his fears in his nightmares..it's quite understandable..the Loved it..It was a bit gloomy but very powerful enough to pierce into the reader's heart straight away ...& I must say very nicely presented in terms of words too...😳😳🤗

But yeah...I have a doubt... Why did Ranveer asked Ishani "who are u" even after realizing her presence or I guess he had seen her ...😕

Originally posted by: _priyaa_

Magnificent os...u have written so beautifully...& the way
you have portrayed Ranveer's feelings,fears,desperateness, superb yaar...& it was so good to
represent his fears in his nightmares..it's quite understandable..the
Loved it..It was a bit gloomy but very powerful enough to pierce into the
reader's heart straight away ...& I must say very nicely presented in terms
of words too...😳😳🤗

But yeah...I have a doubt... Why did Ranveer asked Ishani "who
are u" even after realizing her presence or I guess he had seen her ...😕

Originally posted by: .chandni.

simply outstanding