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Chapter 29

Pain from the loved ones

He could not remember the last time when he was so nervous, maybe on her birthday when he was going to confess that he was madly in love with her. He knew they had to talk, because he was sure that that she knew something was wrong as much as he was certain that the earth was round.

He cursed his father, his hate for the man only getting bigger. They had enough of their problems, now his father had to show up. He sighed, why could not there life for once be without problems.

He knew how much pain Ishani was going through because of her sister's illness, and her worries will get bigger when he will tell her about his father. He had been there for both sisters, been a shoulder they could cry on. He had been best friend for both of them, letting them scream at him to get there frustration out and hugging them when they needed his care and love. What he was about to tell Ishani would only make her concern and worries more. But it would not be right if he did not tell her, after all Harshad uncles had once told him that the key to a successful relationship was communication.

He opened the door with the key that her father had given to him several years ago when Harshad had to go undercover for a mission and had asked him to stay with Ishani. Ranveer had given his words to Harshad that he would look after her. Ranveer saw no one in the living room, except one of the servant. Ranveer went to him and asked about Ishani, and was told that Ishani was in her room. He thanked the servant and went towards her room.

He stooped outside her room and thought again whether he should tell her or not. She has full right to know it he reminded himself. He opened the door slowly, making sure that he did not make any sound.
She was standing by the mirror in the room and was very nervous to meet him. She had never been nervous to meet him; since she was always comfortable with Ranveer and had known Ranveer from they were kids. She was really happy and thankful that her lifepartner was also her bestfriend that made things allot easier. She smiled and knew that Ranveer would understand her concern, because he would have confronted me if he was in my shoes.

He hugged her from behind and she saw there's reflection in the mirror, she had to admit that they looked very good together. But more importantly they were connected to each other with heart and soul , they always had been since children. They both shared a bond which was unbreakable, because there love for each other was immortal.

"Hey, beautiful "he whispered in her ears and she blushed by his word. Only Ranveer could do this , make her feel loved and wanted no matter how many worries were in there life. She could not help smile from ear to ear, she had missed him terribly in those days. Although they had been together throughout treatment to Disha, but they had not have time to spend some quality time together where they could only bee a normal couple.

But what had hurt her deeply was when he had stayed away from her the past days and how he had avoided having contact with her. The smile disappeared from her face.

He saw a tear fall in corners of her eyes, and Ranveer got tensed by seeing her tears. He turned her around gently so they could stand face to face. He wiped the tear and could clearly see that Ishani was upset and he knew she was upset regarding him. He felt like a bas***d, he knew how emotional Ishani got when it comes to her loved ones.

"I always say that I will not bring tears to your eyes, but I do not know why I can not keep that word" Ranveer said, feeling annoyed with himself.

One statement from Ranveer and Ishani could feel the depth of his love for her. Ishani leaned her forehead against his forehead, both of there's heart beating faster due to there closeness. Both smiled, feeling happy and content, and Ishani 's worry flying to Ranveer and Ranveer 's worries flying to Ishani.

" I'm not afraid of tears and do not care how many of them falls from my eyes , all that matters for me is that I have you to wipe them and that you care enough for asking me the reason for me having them " Ishani answered completely honest.

"Always and forever "Ranveer promised and wondered how Ishani always did this.

"How do you do that?" Ranveer asked her completely enchanted.

"Do what?" Ishani asked Ranveer in a singing voice, her eyes still closed.

"Get me to fall for you, all over again "Ranveer said and kissed her eyes, Ishani shivered by the contact.

She hugged Ranveer, resting her head on his chest listening to his heart. Ranveer had always teased her for her height by calling her chortu, but at the moment she was thankful for her height.

"You know I am happy that I am short, because short people can hear the other person's heartbeat when they hug them. It gets more special when the heartbeats are calling my name "Ishani said sweetly, and Ranveer smiled from ear to ear.

"Coming back to your question, what can I do after all I am amazing you are bound to fall for me all over again "Ishani said and heard Ranveer laugh in response . She got out of the hug and saw the sparkle in his eyes, which had been missing for a while now. She admired him watching he laugh, she blushed realizing how handsome her Ranveer was.

He laughed to his heart content. This reminded him of all the years they spent as friends. He stopped laughing, just Ishani could make him laugh no matter how intimate or serious the situation might be. As if some magic had happened, Ranveer and Ishani was no longer nervous of the conversation as both had faith that no matter what they would handle in together.

Both sat down on the bed and looked at there hands which were interlocked. Both were waiting for the other one to say something.

After a while Ranveer asked a question that had been in his mind for a while. "Do you think it is right to love someone who has caused you pain?" Ranveer asked, really interested to hear her opinion on it.
She was surprised by his question, but she could see that he genuinely was wondering about her opinion.

"It 's a very difficult question. I think it depends on the situation. After all, it is human's nature to hurt each other just as much as it is our nature to care about each other and love each other "Ishani answered thoughtful. She started pondering on her relationship with her father and as well her relationship with Ranveer.

"Take me and my father as an example. When my mother died, I needed him and my sister more than ever. But he sent my sister to the United States and he himself got busy with his work to forget his grief. It hurt me quite deeply, but I gradually realized thanks to you that his intention was never to hurt me. I forgave him, because of his intention and also because I newer stopped loving him. "Ishani answered completely honest.

Ishani studied his face, which was staring at there hands. She could see that there was a lot on his mind.

"Even you have hurt me "Ishani said, she got his attention now . He was looking in her eyes, pain , worry and love clear in his eyes.

"It pained me when I found about Disha 's illness and that you have hided it from me. But I could not hold a grudge against you when I knew that you intention was clean and you would never think of hurting me ever "Ishani said, she could still see the pain in Ranveer 's eyes.

She gave a kiss on his cheek to reassure him that she was fine. Ranveer smiled at her , wondering how lucky he was

"Ranveer, what is going on ? " She finally asked him

"My father is back "Ranveer said emotionless, and saw Ishani was completely stunned her eyes wide- open.

AN : Chapter 29 is done :D This is really unreal for me , can not believe it . I can't thank you guys enough for your gyuys love and support. I want you guys to know that from bottom of my heart that I am thankful for everything .

PS : Sorry for any typos and please let me know what you think :)

Love MM



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Edited by MM123456 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my MM, this was simply stunning! ❤️ You really have such a beautiful way of writing an IshVeer scene that it really takes you to a bliss world. ☺️ Really brilliant job on the chapter MM. 🤗🤗
You have used a very transparent beauty with the way you have written out their conversation. It felt as though they might actually be saying this. ⭐️⭐️ The honestly and love that reflects within every word of your chapter is really astounding. 👏👏
Great chapter MM and can't wait for the next update now! 😃😃
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MM, this was beautiful. Loved IshVeer and their conversation. These two remind me of pre-leap IshVeer who were best buddies and always there for each other whenever needed. That innocence of their love and friendship is so clearly visible here. The show and its spoilers are causing a headache for me if I pay attention to them but your story is wonderful. Do update soon.
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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Oh my MM, this was simply stunning! ❤️You really have such a beautiful way of writing an IshVeer scene that it really takes you to a bliss world. ☺️Really brilliant job on the chapter MM. 🤗🤗



You have used a very transparent beauty with the way you have written out their conversation. It felt as though they might actually be saying this. ⭐️⭐️The honestly and love that reflects within every word of your chapter is really astounding. 👏👏





Great chapter MM and can't wait for the next update now! 😃😃





So sorry for the late reply 😭

Thank you so much LM 🤗 I am really happy that you liked it 😳 I was really worried with there conversation , so I am glad that I did an okey job , and that the conversation looked realistic 😃

I am forever grateful for your support 😳 I will try to update ASAP 🤗
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Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

MM, this was beautiful. Loved IshVeer and their conversation. These two remind me of pre-leap IshVeer who were best buddies and always there for each other whenever needed. That innocence of their love and friendship is so clearly visible here. The show and its spoilers are causing a headache for me if I pay attention to them but your story is wonderful. Do update soon.




Thank you so much EH 🤗 I am really happy that you liked it 😳 I missed the pre -leap IshVeer , so I wrote them like that 😉 Yes , nowdays the spoilers are causing me a headache , the only thing thing that helping me is reading your guys stories like yours ,LM etc.

I will try to update ASAP 🤗

PS : sorry for the late reply
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Hey dear...really...what a start...⭐️⭐️..just loved it...😃.& the symbolism u used for #IshVeer love story is really so beautiful...that sun & moon thing⭐️...it was a nice comparison..had never thought like that...u r really so creative...⭐️👏👏. & that lovely conversation between ishveer...awww..😃😳

Ohh...i was thinking to write my opinion on each chapter individually,but sorry dear😲...due to shortage of time I could not do this right now given that I have my practical exams starting from the day after tomorrow & there are so many chapters...i hope u won't mind😉😆😆...I know that we r the "no sorry no thank u " type friends😉...but u know I am trying to be modest like u...😆😆ha ha...so I will give you my overall review on the ff until chapter 28...😃..as I have not read chapter 29 yet...

Hmm..i'm glad to see the growth u have shown in each successive chapter...👏 & i appreciate u for the amount of toil u r putting in for this ff despite ur school studies...⭐️👏 & it is indeed visible in the chapters...⭐️😃 from the writing style to the content , in every aspect u have shown a lot of growth & each chapter becomes lovelier than the previous one.😳..i liked the positivity in this story unlike the show...it gives a beautiful feeling & shows the value of relationships...the two love each other 😳..it is really so beautiful how u used songs for the description of the scene & it was indeed a filmy style...😳😳 even I liked their confession..that was so cute...😳😳.& then the problems in their lives & their approach of solving it...It's indeed a delight to read the ff...😳😃⭐️ & to be honest..it is much more beautiful than I expected...😳😳 keep it up dear...i really loved it & I'm too excited for the next updates...do pm me dear..thank u for such a lovely story...😳

& i'm pretty sure u must have completed chapter 30 already considering ur speed...hey i must add that...U give the most speedy ff updates i have ever seen..props to u on that..how come u do this yaar...& i must appreciate ur imaginative power for that...keep it up...👏 & love u .🤗🤗.

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Originally posted by: _priyaa_


Hey dear...really...what a start...⭐️⭐️..just loved it...😃.& the
symbolism u used for #IshVeer love story is really so beautiful...that sun &
moon thing⭐️...it was a nice comparison..had never thought like that...u r really so
creative...⭐️👏👏. & that lovely conversation between ishveer...awww..😃😳


Ohh...i was thinking to write my opinion on each chapter
individually,but sorry dear😲...due to shortage of time I could not do this right
now given that I have my practical exams starting from the day after tomorrow &
there are so many chapters...i hope u won't mind😉😆😆...I know that we r the "no sorry
no thank u " type friends😉...but u know I am trying to be modest like u...😆😆ha ha...so I
will give you my overall review on the ff until chapter 28...😃..as I have not read
chapter 29 yet...



Hmm..i'm glad to see the growth u have shown in each
successive chapter...👏 & i appreciate u for the amount of toil u r putting in for this ff despite ur school studies...⭐️👏 & it is indeed visible in the chapters...⭐️😃 from the writing style to the content , in every aspect u have shown a lot of growth & each chapter becomes lovelier than the previous one.😳..i liked the positivity in this story unlike the show...it gives a beautiful feeling & shows the value of relationships...the two love each other
😳..it is really so beautiful how u used songs for the description of the scene
& it was indeed a filmy style...😳😳 even I liked their confession..that was so
cute...😳😳.& then the problems in their lives & their approach of solving it...It's
indeed a delight to read the ff...😳😃⭐️ & to be honest..it is much more beautiful than
I expected...😳😳 keep it up dear...i really loved it & I'm too excited for the
next updates...do pm me dear..thank u for such a lovely story...😳

& i'm pretty sure u must have completed chapter 30 already considering ur speed...hey i must add that...U give the most speedy ff updates i have ever seen..props to u on that..how come u do this yaar...& i must appreciate ur imaginative power for that...keep it up...👏 & love u .🤗🤗.




Hey dear 😉 You are really the sweetest 🤗 I was smiling from ear to ear while reading your review 😃 😳 And don't apologize dear, concentrate on your studies 😃

I am really happy that you liked the story and the way I have wrote it 😳 😃 I am so glad that you liked the conversation and the symbolism 😉 The best thing I can hear is that I have grown , so thank you so much Priya 🤗

About the songs I have used , I think it is because I myself is a very filmy person 😆 I am so tired of the negative persons in the show , so I will try to have almost every charackter in this story as positive 😉

You give me more compliments than I desserve

I will ofcourse pm you when I will update the next chapter ❤️ I hace sadly not written the 30th chapter yet , but will try my best to write it tomorrow 😊 I am really thankful for your kind words and love Priya 🤗 Love you to 🤗
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Originally posted by: MM123456



Hey dear 😉 You are really the sweetest 🤗 I was smiling from ear to ear while reading your review 😃 😳 And don't apologize dear, concentrate on your studies 😃

I am really happy that you liked the story and the way I have wrote it 😳 😃 I am so glad that you liked the conversation and the symbolism 😉 The best thing I can hear is that I have grown , so thank you so much Priya 🤗

About the songs I have used , I think it is because I myself is a very filmy person 😆 I am so tired of the negative persons in the show , so I will try to have almost every charackter in this story as positive 😉

You give me more compliments than I desserve

I will ofcourse pm you when I will update the next chapter ❤️ I hace sadly not written the 30th chapter yet , but will try my best to write it tomorrow 😊 I am really thankful for your kind words and love Priya 🤗 Love you to 🤗



ha ha..😆😆.ab tum log mujhe itna upar utha rahe ho ki mujh se ye pyaar aur sambhala nahi jaa raha hai...😳😳😳 feeling ecstatic..😃..& u truly deserve all this & even much more than this...😳😳😆😆 love u 3,4,5,6...😳😳🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: _priyaa_



ha ha..😆😆.ab tum log mujhe itna upar utha rahe ho ki mujh se ye pyaar aur sambhala nahi jaa raha hai...😳😳😳 feeling ecstatic..😃..& u truly deserve all this & even much more than this...😆 love u 3,4,5,6...🤗



I have no words for you 😳 I can just say that I love you very much ❤️ Like Ranveer says : Always and forever 😳🤗
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Chapter 30 : The soothing smell of her hair

Ishani looked at him, unsure if she heard right. She waited for him to say something more, but Ranveer remained silent. Those eyes that always reflected warmth and kindness, was black as coal. She had read somewhere that the soul of a person is reflected in there eyes, but she was certain that Ranveer 's eyes in that moment was not a reflection of a soul, but the pain that his heart and soul was going through.

If Ranveer was reacting like this, she wondered how Aunty was.

"Ranveer, wo aunty? " Ishani asked worried , and if Ranveer was alone that meant Amba was alone. Ishani did not want her to be alone, and Ranveer could have asked her to come over to his house they could talk there. This way Amba would not have to be alone.

She nudged Ranveer gently, so he would understand that she was asking him something. Ranveer looked at her surprised, like he was surprised to see here. Ishani looked at him affectionately and asked in a warm voice, " Ranveer , is everything all right ?"

Ranveer gave her a sad smile and said: "When have our life ever been well? My father is back, my mom wants to hear what he has to say and Disha is fighting cancer. To be honest, apart from our relationship everything is a big black trench you could fall in and newer find you way back again "Ranveer answered bluntly.

Before he added: "Don't worry about ma, Shikhar is staying the night in our house . He is looking after ma; I think both ma and I need to be apart right now to think. She needs to find out about what is her first priority, to be a mother to her son or a dutiful wife to her husband " Ranveer said , the last part with contempt in his voice.

Ranveer stood up and was about walk out, when he was stopped by hearing Ishani's voice.

"Where are you going?"

"To sleep in the guest room" Ranveer explained.

Ishani shook his head and said "why?"

"Ishani, I told you right now that mom and I need space. So it was either to stay her or in a hotel, and since I am already here there is no reason for me to shift to a hotel "Ranveer said.

"Arrey budhu , I already know that . But why are you going to the guest room?" Ishani asked
"It is either the bed in the guest room or the sofa in the living room. I prefer sleeping on a bed right now. "Ranveer answered and saw that Ishani shock her head again, he could not stop himself to roll his eyes. His girlfriend was really a dramaqueen sometimes.

"Idiot, my room has a very comfortable bed. No reason to sleep anywhere." Ishani answered with a smile on her face.

"Ishani, I appreciate your concern, but I am not throwing you out of your own room. You will sleep here, and I will sleep in the guest rom" Ranveer explained.

"Who said that I was going anywhere? " Ishani asked, she knew what Ranveer was going to answer so before he could say something she explained to him:

"Ranveer, do you remember what you said to me on day we confessed our feelings? " Ishani asked sweetly.

"Of course, but I said allot of things, which one are you referring to?" Ranveer asked confuse, not knowing what his girlfriend was trying to point out .

" When you said that you will always be my bestfriend first and then everything else, so Ranveer we can share the bed without felling awkward and being comfortable with each other. We slept in the same bed, the day after the confession when I was worried about you. Nothing happened then, nothing would happen now. "Ishani said gently.

Ranveer nooded and Ishani smiled at him.


The fates have always conspired against him, Ranveer was certain on that. Ranveer could not sleep, he counted every minute that passed silently in his head, and he felt like the night would newer end.

Conflicting thoughts and emotions were bothering him, chasing away any hope of relaxation and sending him to his past which he has tried to escape from his whole life. Ranveer turns around in the bed, looking at Ishani so that the ache in his chest would disapper.

Ishani is as wide awake as he is. How can she sleep, when she sees the struggle he has having with his heart and mind? When he finally turns around, so that they are facing eachother. She wants him to share what is on his mind, but she knows that he was not ready and she could not push him. Because she knew if she pushed him to hard, he would only distance himself from her

She laid her head on his chest, they both needed that intimacy. Ranveer sighed and closed his eyes, taking in her smell letting her fragrance soothing the ache deep inside of him .
He whispers her name silently and Ishani gets goosebumps by hearing the way her name slips out of his mouth.
"Ranveer "
"Hmm "
"I love you "she said and was expecting him to say it back to her .
"Why? "he asked , really wondering how this women could love a broken man like him.

"Ranveer , love does not need a reason. It just happens, and I have fallen in the most amazing person ever, and I will always and forever love him . "

Ranveer brings her more closely to him if it is possible and whispers in her ears that make her feel all tingly.

" I don't know what you see in me , but I promise that I will spend all my lifetime trying to not let down the love and fait you have in me " Ranveer promised .Ishani smiled in his embrace , while he nuzzled her hair.

Ishani closes her eyes, hoping that there closeness could sooth him as it soothed her.

"Ishani, I can't explain it " Ranveer finally admitts.

"You don't have to "she answered truthfully , because she realized in that moment that his past did not matter for her. If he did not want to open about it that was okey she would be there if he was ever ready about that. All she knew that they were together in this.

"I cant let him take more people away from me. " Ranveer admitted.

"He wont, because you have something he does not ."

"What is that? "

"Our unconditional love for you "

"Leikin maa ..."

"she will come around " Ishani said silently , mentally making a note to talk with aunty

"What if she does not ?'' Ranveer asked honestly

" We will figure something out " she whispered

" We always do. " both said in union , and finally they get the sleep the both desserved afte a hell of a day.



AN : Sorry for the late update 😭 But I have been busy with schoolwork 😕 Sorry for any typos. This chapter did not turn out like I wanted it to be, but I tried my best. Sorry for letting anyone done .

Please let me know what you think ?

Love MM
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Edited by MM123456 - 10 years ago

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