ISHVEER FF : Always and Forever ( chapter 64 on page 147) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _priyaa_

Nice one...do continue...😃



Thank you Priyaa 😊 I am glad you liked it 😊 Sorry for late reply 🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for the late reply MM. 😛 This was really interesting. 😃 Apart from some grammatical errors here and there, you have done a very good job in translating this story from Norwegian. 👏👏 Kudos to you and I'm waiting to read more. You should definitely continue this. ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one, indeed.. So in your OS, she loves him too even when he has not confessed, that is really interesting.. !

Don't worry about your grammatical errors etc, you can read other's posts here and improve on that.. but the main emotion is coming out lovely.. 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Sorry for the late reply MM. 😛This was really interesting. 😃Apart fromsome grammatical errors here and there, you have done a very good job in translating this story from Norwegian. 👏👏Kudos to you and I'm waiting to read more. You should definitely continue this. ⭐️⭐️



Thank you LM :) I am glad you are liking the story, yes I have an idea of how to continue it , let see what happens :) You see when I first wrote this in norwegian , the story was a short story but sicee you have given me soo much support I will really try to write more :) Again sorry for the grammatical erros, I will work more with grammar and try to improve. It was a really a challenge to translate the story , but hope the result was okey ? Thank you for everything LM :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: matsh

Nice one, indeed.. So in your OS, she loves him too even when he has not confessed, that is really interesting.. !

Don't worry about your grammatical errors etc, you can read other's posts here and improve on that.. but the main emotion is coming out lovely.. 👍🏼



Thank you matsh :) I am glad that you like it 😊 Yes , in my story Ishani loves Ranveer as well . I was thinking about continue to write more , and maybe explore more of Ranveer's terrible past? Let me know what you think of that? Yes , I will definitly try to improve with the grammar 😊 My main goal was that you will feal some emotion while reading this , so I am glad that I have succeded with that at least :) ⭐️ 😳
Edited by MM123456 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dear its ineresting please continue it.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tnzila

dear its ineresting please continue it.👏



Thank you tnzila :) I will try my best :)
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Chapter two : A problem arise

Amba loved her son dearly, but there relationship was never easy and somehow that was her fault. Life had given them a lot of pain, and the one who had to suffer the most was her son. But he would never let anyone see his scars, always wearing a mask and during the years he had made a huge wall in front of his heart. Amba was not blind, she had seen the change in her son when Ishani and her father entered his life and she also new that Ranveer had changed there life as well to a more happier one.

Ishani and her father had given her son something she was never able to provide with :infinitive love. Even if Amba was forever grateful to the Pareks , she was never able to forgive herself for the pain she caused in her son's life. She hoped that life could give her a second chance so she could rectify her mistakes , not because she was worthy of a second chance , rather her son deserved more that what life had given them.

Harsad approached Ranveer's mother and asked if they could talk together . After talking and discussing they came to a conclusion which they both hoped was the best for there children . Baa, prayed to God, to look after both of her children.

Ishani and Ranveer which were lost in each other 's eyes , did not notice Harshad approaching them. Harshad notice how they were lost in each other 's eyes , and could not stop himself from smiling , but he knew he had to gain there attention . Harsad coughed to get there attention , and he notice how both of them tried to look at anywhere other than each other and both were blushing like a teenagercouple, that thought almost made Harshad laugh. Composing himself, he said : " Ranveer beta, can we talk alone ?" Ranveer gathering some courage too look at Harshad answered : "Of couse Uncle Harshad"Both left Ishani , walking towards the library. While Ranveer 's mother went to tell Ishani about the problem.

" Leikin, Uncle I understand what you are saying . But I don't understand how both of us can leave Ishani 's engagement party . She will atleast need one of us to bee there ?" asked Ranveer who felt everything was a huge chaos . " Beta , I am not happy about this either , but I don't see another way. Duty calls, and we both are needed to bee there. Because I really need your help to solve this case , and I know this case is important to you as much as it is for me . Regarding Ishani , your mother will be there with her and are explaining everything to her right now. Ranveer who was feeling guilty for leaving Ishani on her most important day , but he also knew that the girl needed him and he could never let Uncle down. Once had Uncle saved him, together they could save this girl as well. Ranveer and Harshad left the party immediately and went to the police station.

"Leikin, aunty I can't get engaged without Papa and Ranveer. I understand why papa is needed in the police station after all he is a officer , but why is it important that Ranveer is there ? Before Amba could answer , Ishani said : " Look I am going to the police station as well" " But , beta how can you go , this is your engagement party and what will Rahul and his parents think? aswered Amba worried. " Aunty , you please handle this , I am getting a bad feeling of this and my heart tells me that Ranveer needs me more than ever. Then how can I not bee there ? " Ishani did not wait to hear Amba 's reply, because she ran towards the door and left Amba teary eyed knowing how lucky her son was to have someone loving as Ishani in his life.




Sorry for any typos. Let me know what you guys think :)
Edited by MM123456 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was a really good chapter dear! ⭐️⭐️ You are certainly improving day by day. 😃 Now I'm really interested to know why Ranveer and Harshad are supposed to go to the police station and how Ishaani is going to stand by Ranveer. 😳
DO continue this ASAP, I wanna read more. 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You write very well dear. Don't worry too much about the grammar. You have excellent ideas. Glad I got a chance to read them.

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