Happy 2nd IF ANNIVERSARY to DADA:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃all IF CIDIANS😃



on 27 AUGUST 2010 a VERSATILE person had joined the IF
she is a great talented stroy writer, vm maker, siggie maker, poem writer 😃 n BAK BAK maker😉😆

aaj hamari natkhat, khati meethi🤪 dada ki 2nd if anniversary hai👏




oh meri cuite sweetiee dada😆
2 years ho gye tume tumare bhai aur brhe bhai ka dimag kharab krte hue😉
aur sath sath hm sbko entertain krte hue😛







SALGIRAH BHUT BHUT MUBARK HO TUME😊







rab kre hm sbka tumse sath yun hi bna rhe😃
tumari stories sbko hasati, rulati aur bikhre hue dilon ko skun deti rhi😃
VMs sbko entertain krte rhe aur pyare pyare moments yaad dilate rhe😃
siggies aur poems sbke dilon ko soothe krte rhe😃





😃special wishes for u😃












😃GIFTS for u😃
sambhal ke rkhna bhut pyar se dia hai🤗








now Time for SPCL gift😉
lekin jb bhar jaye to mujhe vapis gift kr dena😉😛😆






n in last bt least for u😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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BHAVANA DII




I first noticed GD during the time she was quite active on the GD thread 😛 aka General discussions. A lively person and very active is what i first felt like when I started reading the posts.
It's been a good journey .. which i hope gets better with time 😊 .. she's been a really sweet person, always there to cheer you up when you're sad. The way she calls Daya as 'bhai' and Abhijeet as 'bade bhai' .. I find it astonishing at the same time nice 😊 .. not many of us have this courage 😆 .. she's an enthusiast. The best thing I like about her nature is that she doesn't give up .. and also the way she actively participates in all contests. Whenever there's a contest held I've got an assurance of one entrance .. which is GD's 😊 .. a budding story writer who's done a commendable job this time at Adi sir's b'day contest. I had once tagged her miss 'sorry' for all her PM's used to start with Sorry di 😆 but she's overcome this habit now 😊 .. I must say GD always it's been having you on IF .. and hope this journey continues for a really long time 😊 .. congrats and all the best !!




CANDY aka PARO



hey Dada.. Congo on completing 2 years on IF..😃😃 I still remember when i first went through "Members story thread",and found a story "jumble planning" by Gadhadada.. i belt bit weird by reading the name of auther😆.. but then started reading the story..and found it awesome...⭐️.. and bas..i became ur Fan..😳😳 then i read each n every story of urs... Then..one day i found ur story in "Member's only post"..uff..kitna gussa aaya tha mujhe😡😡 Then i regestered to IF..N became a silent reader of ur chats n stories😳.. and finally the day came when i said "Hi" to u.. Uff kitna darr lag rha tha..n when u welcomed me..i was on the 9th cloud😃😃 n then we became friends.. those funny chats with you used to boost me up.. because of you i got so many good friends.. you are a stress buster for me.. many times u made my day..🤗🤗 Ur stories n vms are the best for me.. you are a great friend n gurdian.. Thanks for being with me Dada .. I wish you complete many many many many more years at IF.. Love you sooo much my Cutie pie..🤗🤗 Keep Rocking n keep smiling.. -Candy/Paro/Yum yum[;p]




SHREELA
aka KD




Our first meeting was on IF, on 18th Dec 2010. she posted a story, "Friendship Mark", her first story actually. I read it and posted a comment, criticizing the story, without knowing that soon this person will become one of my favorite writers, and one of my best friends also.😊

Truly speaking, her first story did not impress me much. The story is based on Daya- Abhi friendship, but I could not find our known Daya sir or Abhijeet sir of CID, or it's better to say Insp. Daya and Sr. Insp. Abhijeet. We all know about their friendship, they love each other and can do anything for each other. But it's rare to see them showing their emotion. The relationship we used to see in last 13 years, to describe in one word, I would use the word "anta-salila", if I have to write in Bengali, which means it can't be seen, only can be felt. So at that time, their behavior in the story appeared to me childish! But still, I found creativity and originality in her writing. And also, there was something, by which I was touched and attracted.😳

Anyways, her first story got a good respond. Many people liked it, and after that she started to come often with her new creations, story, vm, poems. Her other creations are also good, specially vm s are very touching, but I always wait for her stories.😊 Her stories were improving day by day. In her earlier stories, investigation was less, the main plot was about Duo's relation, problems in their life and it's all about them. But slowly investigation part also became a major part of her stories. Her "Game Over" series attracted everyone in the forum. Now I also understood her. Her Daya and Abhijeet (bhai and bare bhai, as she says) are her own creation actually. The pencil-sketch was taken from B.P Singh's CID, but the colors applied by herself.😃

At this stage, we came quite close to each other. As my comments for her stories were changing from "good one" to "nice work", "how sweet" to "amazing", " great job", " awesome as always", we started talking more often, and not only about CID but other topics also. Then she opened her own "GD Production House"😊 and appointed me as her official lawyer!😉Just kidding!😊 But here I found some other good friends, Amandeep, Shruti, Sonali di and others. It's a nice experience to be with her.😃

At the earlier stage, she faced a lot of criticism. Sometimes it was very hurting for her, I know! But she overcame everything, and now a lot of people are fond of her writing. this is an example And our GD did it! Love u GD!🤗



INNOCENTFAXI






DADA is a gud girl...funny and intelligent tooo

and the top most quality of her she is too spontaneous...



MINI



About My Cute Saheli Didi
=~~Gadhadada~~=
Didi since day 1 on IF ive been following your stories and posts.Ive always enjoyed them to the core.
You have always been a light hearted person here and chatting with you can lift anybody's mood up(koi shaq?)
Ive always been a bit jealous that my mom has chatted with you more than me on IF🤣.The only thing i dont like is that i hardly ever get to chat with you nowadays.Hope you find time:)
Congrattzz on Completing 2nd year on India Forums!!
Luv U Didi!



MAX


DADA ke sath mera experience acha raha he..
DADA bohot ache he unse baat karke bohot acha lagta he..
agar me sad hota hu or meri DADA se baat ho jati he to mera mood bilkul theek ho jata he😃..
DADA ki jitni tarif ki jaye wo kam he...she is very nice person n i like her very much.




DAYA_ANGEL aka SAKSHI



Dada first of all I want to wish u urs 2nd aniversary on IF.. 😊
We are so lucky to have a buddy like u.. 😊..
U r the first person on IF to whom I talked.. Agar apka saath nai milta to me kabhi aage friends hi nhi bana paati...
Actually I was a very reserved person never joined such a site n never talked to unknown persons.. But dn after u became so known to me.. We used to debate a lot, remembered naa??? 😆 how can u forget???
Then I used to wait for ur green light so that I can again debate with u... Then we have such a relation I used to share my views n problems with u with an assurance to get it solved.. U just help me like a sis n a frnd..😊
so dada kabhi humein chod kr mat jaana..😊 thanku for all the things n all the best for ur future...




NEEME DII



Hi GD..First of all many many Congress🤗...So, abt experience. it was really gud.. First i found a Very Emotional Person in u..who always Use Cries smily and Dishearted after receiving negative response..and bcz of that u Left forum many times..I read Ur Stories which was emotional types..on that time i thought first time that this GD is not a boy😆..No Boy Can write Emotional Story like this other than he is not a writter in media Industry..After much time u revealed that u are actully a girl.. Second i found a Very nice Person in u..who respect others alot.Specially the senior members..And Respect ki INTAHA😆..that u calls me Dii..When our age is same or maximum 1 year Difference..I guess😉.Wel on that time i was Not interacted with u much..After ur joing daya FC..we interected much only.Bt from the start I really like the way u respect all of us..and Always u think that we are MAHAN types and all and U r Not..Thats Not true GD..u r actully more than Us in all ways..U r Great writter , VM maker etc..And most of us Just readers.😉😆😆.But Ur attitude i love itt..

Only one thing was Very irritating for me..ur always saying Sorry to everyone and use of that cry smiles😡..Thats y i says U many times that do not use that smily..BT GD Is GD😆😆..that Smily is Her "PEHCHAN" 😆😆.. Anyways after the time I found A big change in u.. That Very much Emotional GD is BRAVE now..And Yah the change in ur writting too.. I love ur stories bcz its mostly related to Duo and their Frendship..a Speciall magic in ur stories bcz of that specific touch all the time👍🏼. But i want to tell u that Whenever u wrote a Complete Invetigation story..I found a Real hard work in that..Very hardwork..Other than Plot..Investigation style..and specilly medicines ..its Side effects, its Possitive as well as Negative uses.. Too gud GD.. that type of detaile i found in ur story only.But i like ur emotional types stories more 😳😳😳.Ur funky stories always Brings smiles on my face😃..And u r gud in poems writing too.. And Abt VM's on duo..Hyee... though i never watched ur all of Vm's..but that is not in ur case only..Most of my frends have same complain with me that I never watched Their Vm's.. Its Just bcz of Time and some times due to low net speed.. i can read Story on cell phone but watching VM on Cell is quite expensive.. But u never Complained me abt that even.. And U always respect my ideas..and Whenever i says to u that write somethng on ths..u never says No for that..and U write onn it beautifully...Aww ..thank you so much GD for that..🤗

I always encourge u to write somthng..and Now its Bit irritated for u😉😆..But again no compain From ur side.. U are actully a Nice girl with Gold Heart...Who always makes us happy with ur Work.. Thank You for all the stuff.. Keep Writing and Make more and more VM's.. GUD LUCK for that.. :)))

Neeme



HI_FRIENDS aka ANU



DADa i know her becoz of aman😊...DADA while i talk with her frst time in fct i thought she is a boy😉..later i ly i knew DaDa is a girl😳...Good n caring girl😳...Dada thnks for being my friend...😊




MONIKA DII





GD dear... 🤗on the second IF anniversary... it was daya sir's b'day celebration "Jab We Met" you took part in the Jingle Contest. you are a very versatile, sensible and caring person. be like that only ok... 😳






Edited by AmanDeep24 - 12 years ago
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SHRUTI





I don't believe in recalling dates, I remember moments. It has been a great familiarity with Dada since the moment I read her story, "Reflection". I was quite fresh in the forum at that time and didn't confirm whether someone liked or quoted my post when I posted something in a thread. I replied to Dada's story and something attracted me to her thread once again. I saw her reply to me and posted again, this time I typed she deserves those claps and appreciation. I didn't know she's a female as her username and posts weren't of that type. After that, I started interacting with her and Shivani(Aman). Her posts were quite unique and always brought a smile on my face. I became quite comfortable with Dada and she's the reason I got so many lovely friends and FCT. Then the sudden disappearance of her due to something unfortunate affected my presence at FCT. I can proudly say I have a friend who cares a lot for me even though we are distant and haven't met ever. I don't like to cooperate with anyone in real life and assumed the same would be online but she changed it all. Words are less to describe her and I can never forget how she used to make me smile at the most unsympathetic moments of my life. I shared my problems regarding studies and life with her and she understood it well as she too went through similar situation in the past. I'm too bad at making funny posts so won't be able to type something related even now. I must admit Dada will be the one I'll always remember. She's someone whose presence makes a difference in my life. Being so distant, she did a lot to me. Alas I can never do anything like that! If God listens to me, I wish he keeps her happy always, because some people need to smile as their smile can make others do so.

Once she typed,"Tumhara har ek lafz mujhe ek aisi duniya mein le jata hai jahan sirf main hun aur mere bahut sare aansoo". I was stunned after reading this line and understood everything. We are attached with fun, smile, laughter as well as pain. Her feedbacks to my poems touched me and she was one among the people whom I wanted to post feedbacks soon.

She's a great writer in case of stories as well as poems. I always enjoy reading her stories and the funny and emotional scenes are the best part of her creations.

Also, I'm her right hand, an employee of GD Production house. She gave me names like, Baccha, sharp, shine, gudda etc. I call her Dada, Maalik Dada and Don Dada :D

Thank you Dada for making me smile and laugh when it was actually needed, you're divine. May God bless you!




PURNIMA DII




First things first... congratulations GD on completing 2 years 👏👏 ...or shall i say 2 years of glory 😆😆😆 ..


Toh is ache mauke par aapke liye do shabd bhi keh dete hai 😆😆😆 i don't think for me personally its has been 2 years of knowing u 😆😆 coz u joined FC a little late 😆😆😆...anyways it doesn't matter from how long i have known u...its been wonderful knowing u...from the time u had joined FC its being running at a constant speed...infact u had joined at right time coz at that time i was almost planning to stop the FC 😆😆😆

Wishing in many more years...u are to stay along with ur bhai...
all the best 👍🏼 continue sharing ur wonderful VMs, stories, caps ... 👏

keep them coming..& yes we want PARTY!!! 😆😆😆




ROOPAL aka ROOPZ







i first met her when i was a silent user...i was reading through cid forum and came across one of her stories...to be honest i was confused with her username but i loved the story very much and there i had a little bit of convo with her regarding the story only...then i became friend with maggi di and with her joined the FCT...there my convo started with her...at the very beginning i was bit shy talking to her as she is senior to me and also a well known face...but dheere dheere everything seem settled...pata hi nahi chala when she changed to DADA from GD...when my hesistancy vanished and when she came so close to my heart...she is now my best friend on IF...she is not only my friend but also a elder sister to me and also a source of motivation and inspiration...she is always there for me...she encourage me , console me , make me smile and i respect her as much as i consider her my ideal...dada have played a great role in transforming me...thanks to her m a chatterbox now😆 and can express myself better...i feel very lucky to have her as a friend...
at the end have a message for dada:
thanks for being my friend dada...my experience with u is the most wonderful experience till yet...wish u a very happy anniversary and wish u all the happiness and success...keep smiling...love u...
at the end:
"Phoolon ka taaron ka sabka kehna hai
Ek hazaron mein meri dada hai"



MAGGI aka MAGZ




i will start frm wen i acquinted with dada...iit was my 2nd innings on IF and there was thread of vivek leaving CID...we all were sad at that time bt i now think that was my most luckiest experience...i met two grt ossam frndz who were Dada n Roopz... Dada was like my first REAL n actual FRND...she's like i cannot explain in words...i n roopz call her as our Godfather on IF...😆
Uske baad to bus... we all had a huge frnd circle, the FCT... Nowdays thori gadbad timings me chal rhi hai thats why Miss n love her a lottt...
N ofcourse...we all knw how much creative Dada is..her vm's and my fav.. her Stories.. Thankz a lot
for being my frnd...Love u




PRADY (BH)



MSG FOR DADA



Hey BH

Its Ur second IF anniversary...



For U

Now some words
Hum virtually Mile Humne bate ki kayi khushiya kayi gum humne sath me share kiye... Hume pata hai ki real life me hum kabhi nahi mil sakte per yeh virtual rishata fir bhi bohot jada special hai...
iss pure sal me bohot kuch hua bohot kuch badla... kabhi jhagada kiya toh kabhi ek dusare ko manaya... kabhi care ki toh kabhi hasi majak...
issi tarah aane wala saal bhi humari friendship ko or bhadhaye yahi DUA hai
Or haan aap ke creations bhi aaise hi badhate rahai... aap ko naye naye ideas aate rahai or aap hume entertain karte rahai...


HAPPY ANNIVERSARY DADA





DEEP

bhut kuch hai kehne ko lekin mujhe apni feelings words main express krni nhi ati
if pr meri ist n best frnd hai dada😃
dada aur mera RISHTA ekdm mere SIGNATURE jaisa hai😃
hamara ye rishta shuru hua dada ke stories se
main if pr aise hi roaming krti rehti thi without any id😛😆
tb ek new story writer GADHADADA ki stories ana shuru ho gyi😃
uski stories main kuch tha jo sbko apni aur kheechta😃
mujhe hmesha wait rehta stories ka..ek kask hoti pdhne ki😳
tbi is writer ne 3-4 stories baad MEMBER ONLY post krna shuru kr dia😈
marti kya na krti mujhe apna ID SHIVANI bnana pdha😉😆
meri buddy list ki ist frnd thi dada😃 😃n ist pm mila dada se😃
dada mere liye sirf dost nhi ek vishwash hai jisse main apna har dukh sukh share kr skti hu
mujhe kbhi feel hi nhi hua we r in virtual relation😳
hmesha yhi feel hota dada reality main mere sath hai😃
sbse jyada jhagda v mera dada se hi hota hai🤢
n galti jyadatar meri hoti hai😭
dada ka mere liye caring hona mujhe usse aur jyada attach kr deta hai
bhut se up downs aye meri life main
ek time aisa v aya jb if ke almost sbi dost mujhse rooth gye🤢😭
lekin dada ne kbhi mera sath nhi chora
agar 2 din na aau to uska msg aa jata ..kha ho deep sb khariyat hai na😃
bs uska ek pm mujhe happy kr deta 😳😃
main apne sari takleef bhul jati ye v ki mere dost mujhse naraz hai
dada hmesha kehti hai mujhse kuch mat socho deep bs apni health ka socho😊
kbi lagta hai vo ek angel hai jise rab ne sbki life main khushiya bhrne ke liye bheja hai😃
hm dono ne bhut sari khushiya, ansu, dard share kie hai😊
dada ki stories, vms poems sbka wait rehta hai😃

meri ek wish hai jise dada hmesha silly kehti hai😛😆
chlo dada ji aaj fir kehte hai😳
kbi na kbi to tumse milne jrur aungi😃
intzaar krna😊😳🤗
luv u dada n bhut bhut shukria meri life main ane ke liye
tum mere liye anmol ho🤗
rab se yhi mangte hai
tumse mera sath puri jindgi bna rhe🤗🤗

🤗
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VEVAH




😛gadhadada😛
😃a True n Loyal Friend 😃
😳a behtreen Humsheera numa Dost 😳
👏beymisaal o nayaab Musannifa 👏
😉bht he khaas Musheeer of mine 😉
HAPPY 2nd Anniversary

my best Companion whom i can say anything😛 even everything 😉
SHE iz a Perfect Friend i ever met, az i think tht might be GOD HAS Created HER
in a very Special Moment 😳 thtz why She iz so Special n Dear to all 😳
i can say she iz a MASTER PIECE sended frm Sky 😉
Wo hasti jis ki Funn-e-Kaarkardagi ka hr koi
FAREEEFTAA hojata hay 😍
saal-e-doyum k mukammal honey per

🥳👏bht bht Mubarakbaad 👏🥳

how lucky i am tht my ever FIRST POST on INDIA FORUM
@ Friendz Chat Thread
wz Fortunately Replied by HER 😉


bazahir DADA ki sangatti may mane sirf ek he saaal guzara hay
per yu lagta hay k goya barso ki qurbatt ho
wo hay he aise k hr koi oska Garweeda hojata hay😍
khush kalaam, umdaah mizaj ore mohabbat kerni wali
behtreen Shakhseyutt
she iz a Perfect Friend folded in a wonderful nature

😳SWEET DADA😳
my meherbaan Guru Guider
a Sada Bahaar Writter
mere hr needed waqt may meri madadgaar
Umeed kerti hu k Aapka Shafqutt bhara saath
yuhi Humaarey saath Humesha rahega
or Aap yuhi apne Qalam se Hum sb ko Mehzooz krti rahien
🤗i'm Lucky to hv a Companion lyk U
🤗
🤗 Be My Friend for Ever 🤗





GABRIELLA aka YASHI



congratz dada on completing 2 years on IF😛

"Your friendship is special
Like the flowers that bloom,
Or when a butterfly emerges
From within its cocoon...
You remind me of that butterfly,
Loving and free,
Bright and colorful,

For the world to see...
We will share sunshine and rainbows;
Sometimes, the rain and the snow;
We'll stand together through it,
While the cold winds blow...
When the time is right,

Our friendship will take flight
On the wings of a butterfly ..."

dada u r my sweetest friend 🤗😳 aur kya bolu apke baare me jitna b bolu kam h 😆😃

keep smiling😃😃

aur dher saari jaadu ki jhappi apke liye

🤗

🤗

😆😆😆





KHOTA_SIKKA_SRI



GD, pehli baar jab hum mile toh main nayi nayi aayi thi CID forum pe aur tumne mujhe aapne Daya bhai ke FC ke baare main bataya. Tab main dung reh gayi ke tum Daya sir ko aapna bhai bulate ho. Phir dheere dheere tumhare saath reh kar mujhe bhi aadat ho gayi. Ab main unhe dono bhai aur sir bulati hoon. Aur isli aaj I can wish you for your 2-year anniversary on IF. May you complete many more years!!!!






DREAMY_DEEPZZZ


Hey Dada 😊


What can I say for you 😉
You are a cowboy for me an entirely different in my world
where /i had thought girls can never have have that COOL attitude...
But you have proved me wrong dear 😛

I like your that attitude very much... 😊
Always there stubborn on what you say...
Its very nice to see you gatecrash on FCT 😆

To your Account 😆 😛


See who have come to meet you 😳
Wow khud bhaiy aayeh hain😉😛

Lastly sirf itna kehna chaahti hoon !!! 😛 :


on entering into 3rd year on IF 😃

May you celebrate more and more years here 👍🏼
Meri dher saari badhaayiyan Dada 😊
Love you and keep entertaining us with creations of CID on IF 😛😊


Lots of Love,
DreamyDeepz
😊






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🥳Time for CELEBRATION🥳

😃lets enjoy the party😃




ist of all self service for plates 😛




😃VEG ITEMS😃




















😃NON VEG ITEMS😃
















😃ICE CREAMS😃











😃WATER n SOFT DRINKS😃







Edited by AmanDeep24 - 13 years ago
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now Time for MASTI


😉lets rock n roll the floor😉





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Edited by AmanDeep24 - 13 years ago
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spcl THANX to CANDY😃
thanx candy bacha for giving me ideas n helping me😃






gift for u😃
hope u like it🤗





ab kuch meetha ho jaye😉






ye sirf tumare lie hai😛
no sharing wid dada😉😆




@ALLL😃



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A little Fun For U DADA Hope u like it

RAZZ KIDNAPPED BACHI KA

(Socha thoda FW style naam dedu)

Its early morning…. Rainy season is on but today's morning is sunny……. Sea shore is full of joggers….. Daya and Abhijeet get down from Daya's bike……. Both are in Track pant and T shirt…… they started with Jogging after some warm up…..

Daya is humming some old music and Abhijeet giving him company in between…… suddenly Abhijeet remember something and he ask

Abhijeet with some serious expression: Daya yaar woh file kaha hai…… hume ACP sir ko deni joh hai……..

Daya irritated tone: Mere drawer me hai…. or boss iss CID Snr Inspector ko sath lane ki kya jarurat thi…… isse gharpe ya bureau me nahi chod ke nahi aa sakte the kya….. yaha mere dost banke aayeho toh thik hai warna……

Abhijeet laughs on Daya's complain and become serious on last word: warna kya AAIN…

Daya gives a firm look to Abhijeet…..

Abhijeet in teasing tone: Haan Bolo……. warna kya………AAIN

Daya with smile on his face: warna mere dost ko mai kidnapped karke leke jaunga…………..

Abhijeet (mock): Accchhhaaa…… Ek Cid officer ko kidnapped karna itana assan thodi hai………

Daya instantly: haan bilkul asan nahi hai per ek Dost ko toh hai……

Both share a laughter and speedup their jogging…………. While running they reach a patch of beach where nobody comes…….. The place is so beautiful……….. Abhijeet all of sudden stops and Sat on cold sand…….

Daya amazed in his action and move towards him……..

Daya: arre boss yeh kya hum toh jogging karne aaye the or tum baith gaye……… Chalo utho……

Daya move his hand forward…. Abhijeet grab it and instead of getting up…….. Abhijeet pulls Daya and Daya is also on sand in no time……….

Both stretch their body and relax them self…………..

Both are silent……… enjoying sound of waves with closed eyes………….. A small sound disturbs them………… Both in shock open there eyes……… and look at each other in confusion…………..

Abhijeet: Daya tumne kuch suna…….

Daya: haan boss bohot ajeeb awaj thi……per haan kahi suni hue thi…..

Abhijeet amazed: suni hue hai…….. hmmm haan yeh kisi choti motor ki awaj hai…. yaad hai woh Ekta Kapoor wala case ussme aaise hi ek chote macchar ka istamal hua tha…..

Daya: Haan Bilkul Thik kaha boss wahi hai…..

Both look here and there………. Suddenly they hear that voice again……. Daya move his hand in the direction of voice and clutch something in his palm…… He opens his palm slowly Abhijeet is ready with his hands around Daya's palm so that thing does not fly away…………..

Daya hold that thing properly…. It's a small mosquito……. They took that thing at Abhijeet's house….. Where they are examining it with magnifying glass……..

Daya: Boss Yeh toh koi chota camera lagta hai……

Abhijeet (concentrating from magnifying glass) : haan or yaha kuch naam embossed hai…… Jara dekho toh……..

Daya (took that thing more closer): do letters hai naam ke pehela hai G (he is trying hard to read second one as its too small) kuch round jaisa hai….

Abhijeet (Abhijeet took it from his hand and look closely): haan or dusara hai D haan D hi hai…………….

DAYA: GD MACCHAR……. Hmmm aaj kal toh Maccharo ke naam bhi stylist hone lage hai…………..

Abhijeet smile…

Daya (in mischievous tone): boss mai isse computer se connect karne ki koshish karta hue tab tak tum (Daya wink at him)

Abhijeet interrupt him: haan sahab mai kuch khane ko lata hue or Chai bhi………….

Daya (smiles) (in orderly tone): Jara Jaldi lana……..

Abhijeet (irritating tone) Daya ke bache………

Daya sleeps from there and move towards Abhijeet's room to take laptop…..

Abhijeet move in to kitchen and Daya gets busy with Laptop…………..

After a while DUO seating at Dining table with Laptop and some food stuff on table….

A video is playing on laptop……… a small girl about a age of 5 to 6 years are tied in a room…… She is holding a remote in one hand…… and operating it……. But the same time she is screaming for the help…..

Daya: isse dekhake lagat hai ki yeh Remot is Macchar ka hai………. or yeh ladki iss video ke jariye madat mangana chahti hai………

Abhijeet: haan Daya per Khidki ke bahar ya kisi or chij ka koi pata hi nahi chal raha hai…………………..

Daya: Boss pehel hume issaki range pata karni hogi fir hi pata chalega ki hum jaha the waha se yeh ladaki kitani duri per hai………..

Abhijeet: haan chalo Salunke sir ke paas leke chalte hai isse………..

Daya playing that Video again……… Where Abhijeet started moving to his room to gets ready…….. Daya clutch Abhijeet's hand and make him seat again…….. and show something to him in that Video…….. both are shocked…………..

Abhijeet (in determining tone): Daya aaisa ho hi nahi sakta…….

Daya (in confused tome): per boss yeh video………. (he stop for a while and then took his decision) Hume abhi iss bareme kisi ko nahi batate hai…… pehele hum confirm karte hai then lets see……

Abhijeet (Totally agree with his friends decision): haan sahi kaha…. Per issaki range kaise pata karenge……….. (thinks and started again) ek kam karte hai wahi chalte hai jaha yeh hume mila tha……… Aass pass puchtach karte hai……. kuch na kuch toh pata lag hi jayega……..

DUO reach at same place in qualis………… they get down and look surround………….. one side its sea………. And other side a row of bungalows………….. they decided to apart and search each bungalows………..

Abhijeet pointed a direction to Daya iss taraf and other direction he choose for himself…… Daya make a hand movement which means phone call…….

Abhijeet: thik hai per sambhalke akele mat bhid jana…..

Daya node as yes and smile……….Both headed towards their direction…………. Searching each and every bungalow….. Suddenly Daya stops at a bungalows back side gate……….. he made a call to Abhijeet and Abhijeet comes in running………

Abhijeet: Haan Daya… kuch milla kya…..

Daya (show some thing on floor): yeh dekho boss taje tires ke marks……. Bohot fresh hai jaise 5-10 minutes pehele yaha koi gadi nikali hai……….

he pointed to bungalows get……….. Abhijeet in deep thinking scratch near to lips…….

Abhijeet: per bungalow toh aaisa lag raha hai ki bohot dino se band hai toh ye tyer marks kaha se aye..

Daya (he load his gun) : yeh toh under chal ke hi pata chalega………….

Abhijeet (check his gun): Haan chalo…. Per iss gate ki halat dekh ke lagta hai ki bina aawaj ke toh khulne se raha……… agar koi under hai toh woh chokana ho jayega………….. or fir shayad uss bachi ki jaan ko bhi khatara ho sakta hai………….

Abhijeet and Daya share a meaning full look and smiles at each other…. They went other side of bungalow and judge compound wall only by eyes and then gives node to each other………….. the wall of bungalow is little bit heighted for Abhijeet but Daya can climb it due his height……

Daya bend a bit and Abhijeet move back and create good place to run……..he run and then with the help of Daya's back climb on that wall………… After helping Abhijeet Daya move back take good run and climb on wall……. Now both are in lawn……….. They silently moving around bungalow and peeping from windows…….

Daya comes close to Abhijeet and whisper: yaha toh kuch dikhayi nahi de raha hai…….. nahi koi halchal hai….. under chal ke dekhe………

Abhijeet: hmmm thik hai per darwaja meri style se khulega…..

Daya gives a small sink and smile…. They move towards door Abhijeet opens it with pen knife…….

They enter in to house and search…… in the basement they found that room which they already scene in a video…. Also found rope…………………….

Daya (watching ar rope keenly): yaha toh koi bhi nahi hai…. shayad woh log yaha se chale gaye hai or iss bachi ko bhi sath leke gaye honge…..

Abhijeet: haan ho sakta hai…. woh tire ke nishan dekhe the na bahar…. ussime gaye honge….. chalo aaspass puchte hai….

They came out and found an empty street………

Daya: yeh sadak toh puri khali hai koi bhi nahi hai….. puchenge kisase……..

Mean while their eyes caught a figure near to gate of opposite bungalow……. they went there and found a watchman……..

Watchman: kon hai aap log or kisase milna hai aap ko…..

Daya: dekho hum C….. (Abhijeet cuffed and Daya understand) Chandrasen ji se milne aayehai…….

WM: yeh Sahab kon hai yaha toh nahi rehete…..

Abhijeet: arre woh samne wala bungalow hai na waha rehete hai……..

WM: arre nahi sahab woh toh Yash sahab ka ghar hai…… woh ship pe kam karte hai na toh 6 mahine waha rehete hai or 6 mahine gharpe……..Abhi or ek mahina baki hai unke yaha aane me……….

Daya (smirks): Arre toh hum ha keh rahai hai ki Yeh Chandrasenji ka ghar hai…. woh toh yaha thode din rehene aane wale the……. Aaj hi shift hone wale the……….. acha koi aaya tha yaha aaj……..

WM(thinking): nahi maine dekha toh nahi per haan jab mai round lagane gaya tha tab ek gadi ki awaj suni thi…. maine bhag ke aake dekha toh yaha se ek blue I10 gadi ja rahi thi….

Abhijeet (looks at Daya with some hopes): acha number dekh tumne usaka……….

WM: nahi sahab per aap log number ka kya karenge.. kahi aap police wale toh nahi ho na…..

Abhijeet bit his taung on wrong question

Daya (handle the situation): arre nahi number pata chalta toh hume asani hoti yeh dekhane ke liye ki woh gadi Chandrasen ji ki hai ya nahi…. Chalo koi bat nahi anyways thanks for the help……

DUO move from there…….. While moving towards qualis

Abhijeet: Ab toh humare paas yeh ek hi rasta hai woh Nili I10 gadi dhundani hogi…………

Daya: or ek chij hai boss (Abhijeet saw Daya in questioning) Woh letter yad hai I mean uss Macchar ka naam GD macchar………….

They return to Abhijeet's House

Daya: Boss yeh GD macchar ki kudali nikate hai Shayad kuch pata chal jaye………..

Abhijeet holding GD macchar in his hand: Haan Daya sahi kaha…. Waise he bada pyaara kue…..

Daya: haan woh toh hai….

both laughs…….

Abhijeet giving details of Blue I10 to RTO department on phone…….. While Daya searching on internet about GD macchar…..

Abhijeet end with call and join Daya: Daya kuch pata chala.

Daya: nahi yaaar ab tak toh kuch bhi pata nahi chal paya hai……….

Abhijeet toh iss motor ke bareme search karona kuchna kuch toh jarur pata chal jayega…..

Daya in irritation handover laptop to Abhijeet: lo khud hi dhundlo…..

Abhijeet giving back it to Daya: arre Ghusa kue ho rahai ho yaar….. mai toh bas suggest kar raha tha….

Daya (in childish complaining tone): ek toh kuch pata nahi chal raha hai or yeh tumhara gyaan……

Abhijeet (touches his ears): ab bolo kya pata chala hai………….

Daya smiles: haan pata chala hai thoda….. humare pass joh pehele aaise cases aaye the unnme or iss wali motor me difference hai…..

Abhijeet: Acha…. Woh kaise

Daya: yeh Japani technology bani hue ek advance motor hai… aaise bohot kam motors ek japani company ne india me export kiye the……

Abhijeet excited: kam matalb kitani……

Daya: Bas 5 hajar ke aaspass……..

Abhijeet disappointed and bang on table: Dam matlab yeh rasta bhi band

Daya: haan boss aagar hum japany co se iss pure export consignment ki details mange toh shayad kuch pata chale

Abhijeet: haan per ussake liye ACP sir ke permission ki jarurat hai…….. or ussake liye unhe yeh sab batana…. Or ussake bad kya hoga tum achi tarah se jante ho…..

Daya: hmmm…. Ab kya kare boss….

Abhijeet gets a call from RTO that there are 500 blue I10 in the city……. Abhijeet also called Head quarters but there are no stilling complaints recorded for Blue I10 car…..

Daya: Boss ab 500 cars ke bareme pata kaise lagaya jaye………..

Abhijeet in thinking: Daya jara woh Data base kholo joh abhi RTO ne tumhare mail ID pe send kiya hai…..

Daya opens the Data base……….. when going through all DATA both jointly highlight 1 car owner name and address……

Abhijeet: yeh Address toh

Daya: haan per naam kisi or ka hai iss pe…… chalo chalke dekhate hai………….

Abhijeet and Daya outside a house…. Read the name plate….. Inspector Vivek CID Mumbai………

Daya(in non easy situation): boss muse yeh thik nahi lag raha hai……….

Abhijeet (also feeling something odd in it): muse bhi per woh photographs woh I10 car……

Daya (thinks and): hmmm chalo thik hai ussi se puch lete hai………..

DUO rang the bell….. Vivek opens the door and see Abhijeet and Daya at his door steps

Vivek: arre sir app dono yaha what a pleasant surprise…..

Daya (twist his lip): Vivek hum jis liye yaha aaye hai woh sunoge toh shayad yeh bat utani pleasant na rahai…….

Abhijeet and Daya share a look and then stair at Vivek………

Vivek in confusion ask them to come inside………..

They reach at leaving room and saw a small girl seating there and got shocked…..

Abhijeet and Daya again exchange a shocking glace….. Daya takes out his mobile and open the girls pic which they saw in video recorded by GD macchar……. The girl is same…… Vivek stairing them in confusion….

Daya (instantly): yeh ladki yaha kya kar rahi hai….

Vivek: Sir yeh mere behen ki beti hai……JIYA……. Jabhi muse kam se thoda waqt milta ha mai isse yaha aapne ghar leke aata hue….. bohot shaitan hai yeh…..

Abhijeet (wants to clear this confusion as soon as possible): Vivek thodi der pehele tum kaha the….

Vivek: sir woh hum log mere dost Yash ke bungalow me gaye the………

Daya (commented in no time): per yash toh ghar pe hai hi nahi ek mahine bad lotne wala hai

Vivek (shocked and ask): haan sir per aap ko kaise pata chala

Abhijeet: woh sab hum tumhe bad me batate hai pehele hume yeh batao ki kya yeh JIYA waha per kidnapped hue thi………

Vivek (surprised): nahi sir aaisa kuch bhi nahi hua tha….. infact aaj mai jab bureau se jaldi nikala toh maine shocha Jiya ke sath thoda waqt Bitau…. Bas issi liye maine isse pick kiya or yeh Yash 6 mahine yaha nahi reheta toh issaka ghar band reheta hai or uppar se woh bangalow bhi itani sumsan jagah pe hai toh mai waha regular intervals me visite karta hue taki kisi gang ka woh adda na ban jaye… hum waha gaye or waha se sidha ghar pe aaye…..

Daya (in confusion): toh phir woh Video

Vivek: konsa Video sir

Daya show him same Video recorded by GD macchar…..

Vivek burst in to laughter…. DUO watched him in anger so he stop to explain them: Arre sir yeh Jiya bhi na ussane khud ko hi band liya or chilla rahi thi…… or ussaki recording kar rahi thi… mai ussake chillane ki aawaj sunke waha pe bhag ke gaya or shayad mere jhatake se usaka woh GD macchar kahi barar chala gaya……. or hume pata bhi nahi chala ki woh kaha gaya…… woh itana chota hai ki dikhayi hi nahi deta…. Humne kafi der remote se usse wapas lane ki kohsish ki per aaya hi nahi toh mai Jiya ko leke ghar aa gaya…..

Abhijeet: or woh Blue I10 woh kiski thi…..

Vivek: sir aap ko yeh bhi pata hai…… arre sir woh car mere behen ki hai…….

Daya: per registration address yaha ka hai……… or woh kisi Siddharth ke naam pe hai……

Vivek: haan sir woh car mere behen ke pati matlab Siddharth ne meri behen ko gift ki thi tab unka Mumbai me koi permanent address nahi that oh communication ke liye mera address diya tha…... Sir ab toh batayi ye bat kya hai……

Abhijeet and Daya burst into laughter…………. Daya told him the story till they watch that video and Abhijeet added

Abhijeet: Daya jab video wapas play kar raha tha tab ussane dekha ki ek aadmi uss bachi ke pass bhag ke aa raha hai…. per camare me usaka chehera nahi dikh raha tha per usski jeans ke front side wale pocket se CID ka batch bahar aaya hua clearly dikh raha tha….. or badme ki recording hue hi nahi tha….. shayad tuhara hath ka jhataka lagne ke karan ussame kuch technical problem aa gayi hogi….

Daya: jab humne CID ka batch dekha toh humne socha ki pehele aapne level pe dekhtae hai ki aakhir matter kya hai fri ACP sir ko batayenge warana sir sab ki pared karwa denge

Then Abhijeet continue with rest part of Story

Abhijeet: jab uss list me hume yeh address dikha toh hume laga ki kuch gadbad hai kue ki hum jante the ki yeh address tumhara hai….. or issi liye hum yaha personally aa gaye….

After listening all the story its hard for Vivek to control his laughter……. Slowly he burst in to laughter….. DUO look at each other then give tough look to Vivek……

Vivek instantly control his laughter….. and then DUO burst in to laughter………….. Vivek joins them… seeing all three boys burst in to laughter Jiya come to them…..

She pulls Vivek down….. Vivek went on knees to match the height with her……

Jiya: Mama yeh kon hai…. or yeh itana has kue rahai hai……

Daya went on keens and Abhijeet bent a bit……..

Daya: HI jiya mera naam Daya hai……. oe Yeh hai Abhijeet

Jiya: aap mere mama ke dost ho……

Vivek gets embarrassed on this question…..

Vivek: nahi Jiya… yeh mere sir hai……

Jiya: Toh yeh dost kiske hai….

Daya and Abhijeet together Jiya ke………

Jiya: nahi aap toh kitane bade ho aap mere dost kaise ho sakte ho….. DUO smiles on this answer…..

Daya: acha agar mai tumhe gift dunga toh kya tum meri dost banogi………

Jiya think for a while: hmmm agar muse gift pasnad aaya toh……

Daya Takes out GD macchar from his pocket and give it to Jiya……

And forward hand for shake hand…….. Jiya grab the GD macchar and Shake hand with Daya…

Abhijeet also forward his hand for shake hand

Abhijeet: friends

Jiya (complaining tone): aapne muse kaha gift diya……

Daya Lift Jiya Up in his hands: Hmmm Jiya meri dost hai or Abhijeet bhi mera dost hai…. toh Abhijeet bhi jiya ka dost hua… correct…..

Jiya pretend like she is thinking Abhijeet makes a please face to Jiya….

Jiya giggle and shouts correct then make hi five to Daya and instantly grab Abhijeets hand….. then DUO with Vivek spend some time with Jiya

After same time

Daya: waise iss ka naam GD macchar hai na….. (He is holding GD Macchar in his hands)

Jiya: Haan per aap ko kaise pata……...

Daya: hmmm Bas aaise hi pata laga liya humne……

Per isska naam GD macchar kue hai: Abhijeet makes Query

Vivek: GD ka full form hai Gadget Doll

Daya: Gadget Doll Yeh kya hai…..

Jiya: Muse na sare papa ke Gadgets Passand hai toh papa muse Gadget Doll Bulate hai…. (she giggles)

Abhijeet and Daya share amazed look……..

Vivek explain: Siddharth engineer hai usse naye naye gadget banana ka shock hai… her samay kuch na kuch naya invent karta hi reheta hai Iss macchar ko bhi ussine banaya hai…..

After spending some more time with Jiya and Vivek…… DUO takes leave from them…. From starting to end Jiya is playing with Daya now also she is on his back…….. Daya holding her hike back pack …… and Abhijeet supporting her from back side…. They are move towards door…. Then they see off Jiya and Vivek and went out

Suddenly Jiya called Daya from back side

She is holding GD macchar and His remote in his hands

Jiys: Daya uncle… she runs towards him….

Daya seat on his knees and come on her height….

Jiya: Daya uncle aap na iss GD ko aapne sath leke jao….

Daya Abhijeet and Vivek are amazed

Daya: kue aap ko toh yeh bohot pasnad haina

Jiya: haan per aap bhi muse pasand hona……. Toh yeh meri taraf se aap ko gift…… aap na issko Bad mans ko pakadane ke liye use karan

Daya heisted to take it but Jiya made sweet face and say Please so he takes it then Jiya kiss him on Cheek and Daya on her Forehead

Then DUO and GD macchar ki sawari nikali Bureau ki taraf…… :D

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Bohot Dino bad kuch banaya hai Hope U like it


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my Sweet DADA, Aapki Doyum Anniversary per meri janib se
kuch DUAON k phool






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@ AMANDEEP aka 😛 DEEP Ooops AMAN 😉😆


dada k liye bht he badhiyaa Surprice hay 😳👍🏼

😳 both Siggies of my DUO r awsum n adoring ☺️



Party is Yummy n Great😛
luv de Menu😉

🤗Thank u for being such a Luving Companion 🤗




Originally posted by: Forfriends

Bohot Dino bad kuch banaya hai Hope U like it




hey Fruity "F"
mind blowing Siggi ☺️

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will read STORY ASAP
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Edited by vevah - 12 years ago

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