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Posted: 3 years ago
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Unres

I can’t remember if I’ve already said this before but I am a big fan of your descriptive writing! It amazes me how you can describe each and every scene to such detail. 👏


This was a wonderful take on this track!

Farhad witnessed their kiss and was happy to be in that position 😂😂 I love Farhad a lot! He’s a blessing in disguise for both Raghav and Pallavi.


The way you showed their patch up and their thinking was great.


Lastly, next part kab post kar rahi ho??? I’m waiting!🤩


Thanks for the tag in this lovely story! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks a lot for all the appreciation love. I love Farhad... that's why I just had to write something on him. And I want the makers to explore Raghav & Farhad's relationship more...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

Unres

I can’t remember if I’ve already said this before but I am a big fan of your descriptive writing! It amazes me how you can describe each and every scene to such detail. 👏


This was a wonderful take on this track!

Farhad witnessed their kiss and was happy to be in that position 😂😂 I love Farhad a lot! He’s a blessing in disguise for both Raghav and Pallavi.


The way you showed their patch up and their thinking was great.


Lastly, next part kab post kar rahi ho??? I’m waiting!🤩


Thanks for the tag in this lovely story! 🤗

Finally updated my comment😅

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Anoushka, I looooove you for writing this.....Did I tell you, you wrote an exact plot straight outta my mind for these two


I had literally imagined sth happening to Farhad which'll make these 2 idiots realize how important talking to each other is🤡 .....Such a Sadist I am🙈


But kya karein....Cherry on the Cake - Farhad witnessing & teasing his Anna & Bhabhi on their mini makeout session🤣.... Raghav screaming at him for lying in the hospital on his one day-off. Bechare ko chutti Kabhi nahi milegi ab😆


I love Farhad & as soon as you wrote about Pallavi arriving at the hospital...I knew it was Farhad on the Bed....I was so Saddd...such brilliant weaving in the story👏....Ek Farhad hi hai jisske liye dono ekdum darr jaenge🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Glad you enjoyed! I think somewhere Farhad is the only person who can knock sense into these two thick heads sometimes! 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Anushkha my dear please please update the story 🥺🥺 Waiting for the second part 🤗🤗

I hope you will update soon ❤️❤️😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Mann not Farhad were my initial thoughts. 😭

I was so happy that Raghav and Pallavi had their reconciliation and found a middle ground instead of one winning and the other losing but to have Farhad interrupt their kiss😆 and quite a fierce one at that 🤣 was just amazing. Especially his lage rahiye Anna. I love how Pallavi took the initial adult route of checking if everything is ok and Raghav just began yelling. It really speaks of the dynamics between them. I must say though Pallavi saying she was glad it was Farhad and not Raghav in front of Farhad was harsh💔. Now that I know he woke up I hope he didn't hear that. The ending of this part was lovely. Waiting for the next one

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I know right. It is harsh but the truth. She loves Farhad, she is hurt, in pain seeing him like that. But I know Farhad would understand if she feels slightly relieved (however selfish that sounds) that it is not Raghav in his place. That would have killed her.


Farhad would feel sad but he wouldn't expect her to feel any different.


Saying thus, lets see if Farhad has heard it or not.. 😉


PS: btw, you haven't read deception game yet? I was waiting for your comments on wp. 😒

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

I know right. It is harsh but the truth. She loves Farhad, she is hurt, in pain seeing him like that. But I know Farhad would understand if she feels slightly relieved (however selfish that sounds) that it is not Raghav in his place. That would have killed her.


Farhad would feel sad but he wouldn't expect her to feel any different.


Saying thus, lets see if Farhad has heard it or not.. 😉


PS: btw, you haven't read deception game yet? I was waiting for your comments on wp. 😒

I haven't gotten to that yet. I'm sorry. I'll probably read it by next week and definitely comment.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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When will you update the next chapter?❤️


Eagerly waiting for it 😭


take care ☯️

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