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Doomsday approaching Mr. Mandaar Deshmukh. I loved how you used the movie plot and twisted it into this. Its pretty convincing... your romantic scenes. Im more for emotions than the mechanics of it anyway. Plz update soon.

And please continue ur other story.. the continuation of the trial by fire. I love that one. 😍😍😍

Damn hilarious one shot 😂

Amazing update 👏🏻

If only show's Kirti was this much sensible.

First confession done......rest on the way..... smart play👏🏻👏🏻

Amazing update 👍🏻

Hey, amazing update. I read the two updates together, you have excellently pieced it together leaving no loopholes ❤️!!All the characters being in their true nature. Keerthi definitely can make a turn around in the show too if the writers want!! This is the Raghav & Pallavi I want, smart, target oriented & the romance nicely flowing in between. The show is beyond my understanding these days. If forum writers are so brilliant, why can't professional teams deliver. Anyways,Hope to keep reading your fantastic work 👍🏼👏!!

Like how you have the preciseness of their meetups down to the T with Amrutha involved😳

Aww they meet chhup chhup ke, Cuties

While she was still catching her breath, a pair of strong arms circled around her from behind, at which she was not startled - Awwwwww, Chho Cozyy

"You touch her and see how I dissipate you into thin air!', roared Raghav - Did you convert my yesterday's Convo at the AT of how I think Raghav meant - Tereko Aise Hawa mein Filter kardega main Mandaar humesha ke liye. I love you for using a similar line

Mandar - all the while his feet tapping continuously and his hands ruffling his hair, often biting his fingernails.

- Good, that's how I want to see this creep like a scared cat🤪

Thank you!! I also prefer emotions over explicit content. ahaha.

I am going to update that story too, I just had a bit of a block on how to shape it up considering there will only be one chapter left before I conclude that story. Sometimes my brain switches off 😆

Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

Doomsday approaching Mr. Mandaar Deshmukh. I loved how you used the movie plot and twisted it into this. Its pretty convincing... your romantic scenes. Im more for emotions than the mechanics of it anyway. Plz update soon.

And please continue ur other story.. the continuation of the trial by fire. I love that one. 😍😍😍

Thank you for reading and commenting!!🤗

Originally posted by: Innocentlove96

First confession done......rest on the way..... smart play👏🏻👏🏻

Amazing update 👍🏻

Thank you so much!! I wish too that Raghav was not an emotional mess as he is right now. I expected him to be a hot mess initially but then get back to being his usual sly and perceptive self. Who the hell is Mandar?? I don't get it 😆Chalo koi baat nahi.....what can we do. He is the Don of Hyderabad, he has all resources at his disposal but I guess ITV works very differently. People don't want sensible stories, they like drama, a helpless male and a Nari Shakti female lead as the audience is mostly women....I hope our RR in his new avatar is KICK ASS!!!

I will continue soon, thanks for reading and commenting ❤️

Originally posted by: Shakti1604

Hey, amazing update. I read the two updates together, you have excellently pieced it together leaving no loopholes ❤️!!All the characters being in their true nature. Keerthi definitely can make a turn around in the show too if the writers want!! This is the Raghav & Pallavi I want, smart, target oriented & the romance nicely flowing in between. The show is beyond my understanding these days. If forum writers are so brilliant, why can't professional teams deliver. Anyways,Hope to keep reading your fantastic work 👍🏼👏!!

Hhahahah i couldn't help but write that dialogue. I can only imagine Raghav uttering these kind of dialogues!! I miss RR sometimes, I wish he was not so volatile with his anger.

I want Mandar to suffer....like really suffer. He is getting on my nerves and what's getting on my nerves more is how Raghav and Pallavi are rendered helpless in front of this cockroach. Abhi DOOM lake spray karti hu uspe 🤣

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Like how you have the preciseness of their meetups down to the T with Amrutha involved😳

Aww they meet chhup chhup ke, Cuties

While she was still catching her breath, a pair of strong arms circled around her from behind, at which she was not startled - Awwwwww, Chho Cozyy

"You touch her and see how I dissipate you into thin air!', roared Raghav - Did you convert my yesterday's Convo at the AT of how I think Raghav meant - Tereko Aise Hawa mein Filter kardega main Mandaar humesha ke liye. I love you for using a similar line

Mandar - all the while his feet tapping continuously and his hands ruffling his hair, often biting his fingernails.

- Good, that's how I want to see this creep like a scared cat🤪