FS : Mandar calling Mandar (Part 4 of 4) End of story - page 7 - Page 2

Love this couple 🤗 I’ll update soon dear ❤️

Originally posted by: Shri_12

Kiara 😆

You won't believe but I wrote something similar on Shivani's AT. Only situation was Pallavi meeting Raghav in Amruta's clothes 😆

Smart couple, I like it. Loved this one, waiting for more

Mandar deserves much worse 😵

I love chup chup ke romance. Adds spice to the marriage 😎

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

Serves right for Mandaar

And we have chup chupke proper wala romance too.

Thank you!!$ 🤗

Raghav likes pulling her leg and he does have a dirty mind (who doesn’t ? 😆 Coz every second meaning is a double meaning), but honestly, Pallu is always more bold 😆 Raghav thoda sa sharmila types hai which is so funny coz you expect him to be the one who makes the first move, him being a Don. Atleast in my mind, Raghav is Sharmila 😆

I’ve not watched the epi yet, but I know they get thrashed 🤣

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Kiara, This was so funny🤣

And the way Raghav's pulling Pallavi's leg on her actions in the washroom - I loved their conversation & the double innuendos he was trying to pull in their conversation to lighten her mood😆

Ohh! How I loved Mandaar & Sunny getting thrashed while Pallavi laughed at their state in today's Episode

Part 2:

Pallavi woke up to a beautiful morning, with the sun shining on her radiant face but her heart knew that the glee on her face was due to Raghav's incandescent love. She quickly reached out for her phone and switched it on and to her surprise, Raghav was already calling her! Telepathy just got real, she mused internally.

"Hey sweetheart", greeted Raghav, with a huge smile on his face. From the looks of his ruffled hair and sleepy eyes, it seemed to her that he just woke up a few moments ago.

"Hey.....", she greeted back, sheepishly.

After a few minutes of sweet nothings and smiles that could put to shame all the sunflowers in this world, Raghav got to the main agenda.

"Pallavi, you'll have to be very careful there. Mandar is a crazy man, and my heart is full of fear. I will be listening to you at all times and there are two guards who are at my beck and call. They'll be near Deshmukh Nivas. If you're in trouble, just speak these words: JAI SHIVAJI! and I'll understand. Are you with me?" he inquired, to which she confirmed with a steadfast nod.

"Okay, now, switch off your phone and make sure the device is on at all times," he insisted.

"I am going to shower, I can't leave it on there!", laughed Pallavi

"Actually, I don't mind.....", he trailed off, earning a virtual slap from Pallavi.

"Okay then, speak soon Saree Ka Dukan. I will miss you all day!", he spoke sadly and his sad face got to her to which she threw him a quick flying kiss, immediately beaming him up!

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Keerti was having breakfast when Raghav walked in and sat at his usual place. The two siblings shared a sour bond, often not seeing eye to eye. Raghav always felt guilty for being the flag bearer of bad news in the past while Keerti felt angry at his inability to apologize earnestly, thus gloriously rebelling at ever chance she got. It made her feel powerful. She loved her brother, there was no doubt about it, though her actions always seemed to contradict her. However, of late, she was feeling heavy with guilt, after finding out that Mandar tried to kill his own mother. That shook her to the core and she couldn't help but introspect.

"Good morning Keerti", he greeter her with a warm but nervous smile.

"Good morning Raghav....how are you?", she replied, earning a surprised look from Raghav. She never asked him about his wellbeing, ever.

"I am fine Keerti, just worried...."

"Is it because of what happened to Pallavi's Aayi?, she questioned him, wanting to break the ice.

"Keerti, both of us love amma so much, I cannot imagine anything happening to her. Can you?", Raghav asked her, gauging her reaction, for he was aware that Keerti probably knows it was Mandar. Sunny must have spilled the beans by now. The thought of Sunny made his blood boil in anger, the crook doesn't deserve his sister.

"Raghav, I want to talk to you", she spoke urgently, leading him by his hand to his den. She had spent days introspecting and her conscience berated her for being so heartless. Her love for her amma poured out with the truth she was just about to reveal.

"Keerti, what's wrong?", Raghav placed a concerned hand over his little sisters head as she sat down. He missed his sister and her pain was his pain. There are no two ways about it. Raghav swore that for his sister, he can be to hell and not twitch. Meanwhile, Keerti was mustering up all the courage she had in her to reveal the news which will change her life forever. She already assumed the implications and it meant no well for Sunny and Mandar. If Mandar went down, Sunny would so too. Her heart was divided between her love for Sunny and her love for her amma. She chose to side with the love she has for her amma and finally spoke up.

"Mandar pushed Pallavi's aayi from the terrace, Raghav", and with that, angry tears marred her cheeks.

Raghav knelt down and wiped his little sisters tears, urging her to carry on.

"Sunny told me about all this and I just can't keep quiet. How can someone hurt his own mother, Raghav! Both of us love amma so much, I cannot even imagine this for her", she cried on.

Raghav observed Keerti keenly, with a hawk gaze. After moments of silence, he broke into a smile, knowing that his nana's upbringing did not go wrong. Keerti chose the truth over everything else and for that, he will always love her a bit more.

"I know, Keerti. Pallavi told me", he revealed and left Keerti in yet another shock. The past days had been weighing heavily on her and what Raghav just revealed added to her aggravation, though she was not surprised. She knew Pallavi was just as smart as Raghav, no wonder they made a perfect pair! Her thoughts seemed to surprise her, there was nothing which was the same anymore, yet she felt light and at peace, for she upheld her nana's teachings.

"What will you do Raghav? Mandar is dangerous. Sunny is also helping him", it broke her heart to speak of her love in such negative light but she could not carry on with the facade.

"Keerti, how much do you love Sunny? More than Amma? More than Nana?", Raghav asked her, knowing that this is going to be difficult for her. Love makes people do the impossible and her love for that Khajur was beyond his understanding. He has been in love, but Sunny's love is only skin deep and that he figured out the first time he saw him with Keerti. After all, Raghav was an excellent judge of character.

Raghav stood up, as he waited for Keerti's answer. "Take your time, I can wait", he spoke as his hand rested on her head like a blessing, just as her Nana always blessed her. Keerti looked up immediately and made her decision.

"I don't love him more than Amma. I don't love him more than Nana. And I don't love him more than YOU, Raghav", she spoke firmly, her stance reminding him of his Amma's steel gaze. Raghav was shocked to hear his name in the list of people she loved. He never expected a reconciliation this soon but his sister never fails to surprise him. Raghav sat down on the chair next to Keerti's and tears of relief, hurt, happiness and sadness trickled down his burdened face. Keerti urged him to stand up and as he did so, she pulled out a rakhi and tied to his wrist. Raghav was at a loss of words and could not help but pull his sister into a tight hug.

"Happy Rakhi, bhai!" she smiled at him, a smile he had been waiting to see for over 10 years. A smile in which he found his kid sister, who always lovingly fought with both brother on this day, if only fate would have it otherwise, his Arjun would be here with them. But he knew that the little angel was smiling at both of them right now, knowing how loving he was and always wanted the three of them to be together at all times.

"Thank you Keerti. You know I will always protect you right?", asked Raghav, oh so lovingly.

"Yes bhai. I know that...", she replied earnestly. She meant every word. Raghav always reminded her of their Nana, a loving man, protective and extremely caring, just that she could never come to admit this before him.

"Will you do as I say? You'll have to help us, Keerti, we need your support", Raghav held her hands into his as he made this request. Keerti placed her hand over his, pressing them in assurance.

"Yes, I will help you", she beamed, happy beyond measure, a surreal feeling gracing her heart, almost as if decades of pain was erased in a moment.

Raghav called for Farhad and urged him to call Amruta so that she could convey an important message to Pallavi. Her phone must be switched off and Amruta was their only bridge.

'Mission for the day abolished. Wait for my instructions. Switch on and call ASAP"

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Sunny was relaxing on his porch when he heard his phone ring. It was Mandar.

"Not again", he muttered, and begrudgingly, he answered the call, knowing how important it was to tend to Mandars plans. After all, Mandar was going to lead him to Raghav's wealth.

"Sunny, I've booked a date for the court marriage", he whispered to Sunny urgently.

"What! When?"

"Two weeks later. Meet me at the recreation park, I'll explain", and with that Mandar ended the call, feeling elated at winning this war against Raghav. He made a mental note to thank Pallavi for the brilliant idea. If he kept Raghav engaged in his sisters problems, it would serve an amazing distraction and buy him more time to get Raghav to sign the divorce papers. Mandar was glowing in the after glow of his achievements when Pallavi walked in.

"Mandar, have you fixed the wedding" she asked him, pretending to tend to his bruised face with a cold pack, sending butterflies in Mandar's stomach. All thoughts of sanity seemed to leave him at the sight of her pretty face.

"Yes, I have", he spoke, almost as if in a trance. His "Tum mere ho", playing in the background of his brain. It seemed to be stuck with him forever, ever since he saw Pallavi.

"Great. Mandar, you know we must be careful with Raghav, he's a powerful man. You must do as I say, I know all his strengths and weaknesses. Keerti is his weakness. Their marriage will break him. But for two weeks, lie low", she spoke, as if narrating a script from a spy genre movie, to which Mandar nodded, taking in her beauty, oblivious of the storm that was brewing, his doom.

Mandar pondered over how the tables have turned in his favor so easily. His marriage with Pallavi was going to get Sunny and Keerti their fairytale, but now, Sunny and Keerti's marriage will earn him his much awaited wedding. Two weeks did not seem like a long time. In the meantime, he intended to spend quality time with the love of his life, spoil her rotten and make her love him as much as he loves her. After all, he did possess the power to make any woman fall for him.

Pallavi observed Mandar carefully, almost reading his thoughts. She was extremely happy with this new plan. And now it was time for phase two.Mandar received a call which broke him out of his undying obsession for Pallavi. Pallavi left the room, but stood outside the room to eavesdrop.

"Hello, who is this?....Hello!!", Mandar got irritated as he heard no one speak from the other side.

"Hello! Who is this??', he screamed. Boy oh boy, this man had a low tolerance level, smiled Pallavi, which was of course really good for their ultimate plan.

He screamed the third time, gritting his teeth and the response left him confused and scared.

"Who?" he stammered.

"It's me, Mandar, that's my name, and I know what you did", spoke the man from the other end.

Mandar immediately disconnected the call, his heart pounding heavily against his chest and sat on the bed, sweating profusely.

Pallavi smirked.

"Got him!", both Raghav and Pallavi spoke simultaneously.

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Hello everyone!

Part 2 is here!

I hope you like it.

Also, I just can't let Keerti be the negative one. I've loved her and hated how the CV's butchered her character, so I'm trying to make it up here 😆

Best wishes,

Kiara

Very nice and interesting

I loved it!!! Im so glad you turned Keerti positive. I hated how she said she loved Sunny more than Raghav. I mean come on... that can't be possible. Im so glad you made her say the opposite and the more believable thing here...

Update soon.

Btw, is the title taken from the film Kartik calling kartik? Does it have any significance from that movie? Is Mandaar schizophrenic?

Now i get why it says Mandaar calling Mandaar 😲😲

Hey! Thanks a lot!

Exactly, how can a sister turn against her brother for a useless khajur 😡 I loved Keerti and for drama they turned her negative otherwise she’s such a lovely girl.

Yes, the title is inspired from Kartik calling Kartik. I want to do something of that sort, stay tuned, I’ll probably finish this today 😎

Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

I loved it!!! Im so glad you turned Keerti positive. I hated how she said she loved Sunny more than Raghav. I mean come on... that can't be possible. Im so glad you made her say the opposite and the more believable thing here...

Update soon.

Btw, is the title taken from the film Kartik calling kartik? Does it have any significance from that movie? Is Mandaar schizophrenic?

Haan ji. Stay tuned, inko aaj hi niptana hai ❤️

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

Now i get why it says Mandaar calling Mandaar 😲😲

Yessss!!! I liked Keerti too! Waiting....