FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 44

Originally posted by: hapc

Ohhh Pallavi's much smarter here. I was surprised by her request and delighted because then they spend more time together.. Yay!!. Raghav teaching her will do much good for her, I was looking forward to that indirectly on the show, but I guess I'm going to get to that directly here. Let's see whether he too learns something from her, not about business of course. I love how Pallavi openly admitted her desire for greatness, although Raghav warning her about losing her family seems ominous. I hope that Aayi and Nikhil don't leave her, but I will have to wait to find out. Thank you for the double update.

So pleased you are finding in this tale things that you enjoy, Sister. I write what I want to see and hope I'll find a handful of those who enjoy the same vision. I agree with you---I think Raghav has a lot to teach her. And I'm really enjoying her ambition coming out in recent episodes.

Your every update leaves me speechless and wanting for more ... just like the story khushi you have outdone yourself...

The outcome of this conversation between Raghav and Pallu is amazing ...

I love the business aspect between them ... I wish they did this in the show !!!

Keep up the amazing work, you rock ❤❤❤

My my! I love the fire in pallavi. She is so right. An ambitious and hardworking girl her is meant to touch sky.

I love the way you have shown Pallavi as confident person yet a very kind one. and you didn't leave her Baji Rao tagline here.

Pallavi here is smart and more practical than the show. and the direction the ff is going to- from the diamond ring and now to this new business venture or more like deal.

All this seems more logical and reasonable.

Waiting for Saturday to come-so you can update

Maya dear. Yet again I am late in commenting. But you know what I was totally engrossed in the story. Loved every bit of it. Sulochana did something good though her intensions were evil.

Beautiful update👏

Well written.. every day i take a look at the forum for your updates.. it make my days even the smallest update.

Really enjoy reading

I read the last 2 updates together, what a treat!

loved how she guessed that he’s the brother and the negotiation was beautiful

Sulochana probably thought she damaged whatever was going on by mentioning that Pallavai is a widow but I feel like unknowingly she helped them both.

I love love love how they are interacting like normal people do, not passing judgements and trying to help the other out in this scenario. But will he now make the connection between Mandar, her and the ring? Or was it just a plot device for them to meet for a few times and get intrigued with each other? Will Sulu make a mess and drag RaghVi as having an affair or something for leverage? Will Kirti smell mischief and investigate how Pallavi is able to offer her more money than established before since she mentioned they are in a loss? So many questions, thank you for such thought provoking updates, Sister.

Amazing update #20 and 21❤️

This story is so so beautiful...

EPISODE 22

*PRECAP*

Farhad entered Raghav’s office. The room was in darkness. He flicked on the lights—

Raghav was seated at the desk!

“Annah!” Mouthing a startled oath, he asked, “Why are you sitting in the dark?”

Raghav replied, “It wasn’t dark when I sat down.”

Farhad approached to hand him a large ornate envelope. “I came to drop this on your desk. It came by courier this afternoon. It’s from Mrs Raje's personal secretary.”

“It's an invitation to her birthday party—” and without allowing Farhad to express surprise, he asked, “Farhad, you are a keen student of history—tell me about Baji Rao.”

Farhad turned crinkled eyes to the ceiling as if recollecting a long-forgotten school lecture. “Eighteenth century. Maratha. Peshwa. Diplomat. Warrior. Never lost a battle. Two lovers. Why are you interested in Baji Rao?”

Raghav turned to the window, and looking over the twinkling lights of the city below, he spoke, his voice low, “I’m afraid I might end up being Baji Rao's second lover.”