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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: darlunia



OMG...Usha...🤗 🤗...of course I do 😊. I just posted at the CT a few days ago wondering where you, Skep, Dew and everybody else was. How are you?


Well .... you know what's happening in Geet .... so the motivation to be there has waned !

I haven't heard from the rest either ... !

Loved your earlier comment how Sridevi's FF stimulated your brain cells that are slowly dying from watching meaningless serials 👏 👏

That is soooooo true .... I'm fed up with the way most serials go after the first few months ....

Sri's FF is like a breath of fresh air ....... I come here several times a day in the hope that she's posted the next part ..... 😳 !!



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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry for the side bar conversation Devi but I have not chatted with Usha in ages. 😊

@Usha...did not know you watched Maryaada. Kismat and Maryaada are the only two shows even remotely worth watching these days. Hema and Shelly from CT also watch the show and come on to the forum every so often. I miss the CT junta...sanest group on IF.
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Sri ... When's the next par coming ??? 😳 .... I'm hooked now ! 😆

@ Jaya .... I dont really watch Maryada ... I just visit the forum and catch up with the happenings .... AdiYa have lost their charm .. for me at least ..... I stilll have some hope for Gaurav-Vidya !!

But now ... I visit this forum just to check on Sri's thread ! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
read the whole ff in one go .very interesting .
the paradox things are mind blowing.👏
plzzz update it soon.
waiting eagerly for it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
last 2 chapters were fantastic, they were so grippping , I didn't want the chapters and I wanted it to go on and on...
can we have an update today pleeease?😳
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Posted: 14 years ago


Chapter 25: Salome - 3

"Salome…"

Her voice had floated to him in its usual lilt and he had looked up at her from where he had been seated at the table going through her investment portfolio. She had been standing by the window looking out for a while and he had noticed that she had been subdued throughout the day.

"Hmm...?" He had prompted her to continue.

"Salome. My name. Do you know that I don't know anyone else with that name?" She had finally said.

"It is an unusual name." He had agreed.

"My mother named me, you know. She chose that name after I was baptized in the church; ironic, don't you think? Maybe even sacrilegious. She had never really been the religious sort, but we still occasionally went to church and I took some Catechism classes growing up. I had always been a voracious reader and Bible was my first set of grand stories. Eventually I came across Salome and John the Baptist and I asked my mother why she had named after this dubious character. Why not Mary or Elizabeth, good solid Christian names."

He had turned away from the laptop to give her his complete attention, but she had still stood looking out the window.

"She told me that everyone wanted to be virtuous Mary's and Elizabeth's. That everyone wanted to be "good." She had decided that her daughter would not be like everybody. Her daughter would be beautiful and unique, a set apart from the rest, fawned over by kings and beggars alike. Entirely different from all the Mary's and Elizabeth's of the world."

She had been quiet for some time afterwards, but he had not spoken at all to break the silence for fear that she would stop talking. She had never talked of her childhood or her past before that day.

"Given what I became, she should have named me Mary. Not all Mary's in the Bible are known to be virtuous, you know." She had turned around them to face him, leaning back against the ledge with a smile.

He had gone home that night and had researched the Mary's of the Bible. There were several that came up, but only two were of prominence. Mary the Mother of Jesus was obviously the virtuous choice to whom Salome had referred. There was a second woman, Mary of Magdalene, who was a more controversial figure. She had been first identified in the Bible when she had washed Jesus' feet with precious oils and wiped them with her hair. There was also some reference to Jesus freeing her from 'the seven demons.' The point of contention in her history came in sixth century AD when Pope Gregory the Great noted in one of his sermons that Mary Magdalene was in fact the penitent woman with a past of prostitution, 'the seven demons' representing her vices. For many hundreds of years after that, this idea spread in the church and Mary Magdalene went on to become identified as the woman who turned from her wicked ways and became a follower of Jesus. However, in more recent history, the work of many scholars had found that Mary Magdalene was in fact not a prostitute and had deemed the whole thing to be one of the great misidentifications in history. In fact, some theories – if the popular novel Da Vinci Code was anything to go by – even posited that Mary Magdalene had in fact been the wife of Jesus.

The part of the story that had struck him had been the misidentification. Mary Magdalene had been cleared of the charges raised against her and had been officiated to a much more prominent status in the church. So, why then would Salome say that she should have been named after this particular figure from the Bible? He hardly thought that it was because she did not know of this bit of controversial history herself. In fact, if he could gather as much from 30 minutes of research, then someone like Salome would be much more knowledgeable. There had been something about the whole thing that had stuck with him and he had had this nagging feeling that he had been missing something that should have been obvious to him.

"But, alas, I am Salome. And sometimes our names – or our namesakes – determine our fates. Don't you think, Gaurav?"

She had laughed at the end and he had been determined to look up the history of Salome as well, which eventually led to him buying a copy of the Luini that now hung up in his parlor.

He had asked her whether she thought his name matched him; whether she thought he had a great deal of pride. Even though his tone had been teasing, she had turned quiet for some time.

"You are nothing like I expected, Gaurav. Nothing about you matches your name, your sire, or your family. You alone defy your fate." She had eventually said.

He had been taken aback by her proclamation and had chuckled without humor before he told her, "If I defied fate, Salome, you would be my wife now and I would have taken you and my mother far away from this place."

"Destiny is still yours to make, Gaurav, even if your first plans didn't work out." She had told him in answer.

"Have you eaten dinner?" Vidya's voice called him back from his musings.

He looked at her, holding his copy of Animal Farm in her hands, a Gaon Waali who was nothing like what he had expected.

He shook his head. "Let's go out to dinner today."

She smiled, a surprised relief evident there, and he smiled back.

He waited for her to go ahead of him and when he followed her out of the room, he asked, "So, what puzzle do you have for me today?"

She laughed at his question, "You better hope dinner is long, because this will take a while."

With the return of this routine, the mystery that was Salome receded back into its venerable glassed shelf in his mind…

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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW ... love this part ...not only Gaurav and Vidya ... Gaurav & Salome also have such interesting convos ...

Great job Sri ! ... keep it up ... now when's the next part coming ??? 😉


And hey ! ... G is taking V out for dinner ?? ... love it !!! 😊
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Chapter 26: The Truth


He looked at the calendar that afternoon while at work. He had been married five months and had yet to see Salome in person. After that one month that she had requested off after bringing her mother home with her, she had requested another month and then another. He texted her twice a week religiously, even though her replies were now more and more delayed, until his last text had been one to bring her to task for her evasions.

"Do you ever plan to see me again?"

It had taken her two days to respond to him and then she had written back saying,

"Gaurav, ask yourself truly, do you really want to see me?"

"What sort of question is that?" He had written back, agitated at her tendency nowadays to answer a question with a question.

"You are angry and you are ignoring my question. I am sure your mother chose well when she picked your wife. So, let me ask again. Do you really want to see me? Or are you just afraid that I will think your love is fickle if you don't keep us this twice per week texting ritual?"

He had initially thought about not answering her, wanting to remain irate. But then again, she had always been frighteningly good at honing in on his weakest spots.

"Salome, do you think my love is fickle? Be truthful." There were moments now when this question came back to haunt him with increasing frequency and so he posed it to her.

"Rather than answer that, let me tell you what I think about the truth, as you call it. Truth is only as good as the questions you ask, Gaurav. And sometimes, when you don't know what questions to ask, you never get to the truth at all."

He thought he would pull his hair out at that moment.

"Salome, stop being cryptic! It's hard enough to do this over this absurd medium without you writing in riddles."

"You think this would be easier done in person?" She wrote back.

"What exactly are we doing?" He asked her, now knowing without a doubt that this had been her plan all along.

"You know what we are doing, Gaurav. You've been wanting to do this for a while, but I know you… you never will. You love me unconditionally and you're loyal to a fault. You would never have left me on your own. Loving me would not only cause you to gray prematurely (I don't have to worry about balding, as your hair is literally like 3 shrubs-full. Yes, yes, I am known for my ill-timed humor), you would also likely expire from a premature cardiac arrest or aneurysm. We can only handle one such person in our life; someone who sucks up so much of our flesh and blood – and yours is your mother. She will not leave your father because of her misguided honor. But she will not survive long without you as her life's energy. Remember what I told you before… destiny is still yours to make, Gaurav. And for that, we cannot be together."

Despite the troubling revelation about his love for her a few months back when Vidya had asked him the Liar Paradox, Salome's current proclamation did not bring any relief. In fact, he felt it quite strongly in his chest; like someone was squeezing all the blood out of it.

"You don't think my love is strong enough?" He had written back.

As he waited for her answer, he wished that she would not again write a riddle or ask a cryptic question, because he really wanted to know the answer. He wanted her to tell him what he felt... He trusted her judgment better than his own.

"Gaurav, you are the only man I know whose love is strong enough to supersede the bindings of romantic love. Haven't you figured this out already? Romantic love is the most conditional love there is… and it should be. You have to expect to receive love in return; without it, you leave yourself at the other's mercy and your belief in their character. That sort of belief is given freely when you don't have much life experience. The closest approximation of unconditional love, I have heard, is what a mother has for a child; forgive me when I say that I don't believe that, but then again, my belief is obviously colored by my own experience. So, yes, Gaurav, the long and the short of it is… think of this as a graduation… you've officially been moved up from the trappings of romantic love."

"Sometimes I don't know if you mean what you say or whether you are just patronizing me." He wrote back honestly.

She waited a bit before answering, but she was deadly serious for once, her answer not laced in the least bit with her at times caustic wit.

"Gaurav, listen to me. We cannot be together. But that fact doesn't mean anything. We have a bond that has always been there and will always be there. It can never be broken. Not by your wife and not by anyone who tries, not even us. You have to believe me on this. I pray that we never meet again, if for nothing, then for the sake of your wife. I fear that if there would ever be such an occasion, it may not be a pleasant one. I won't say that I love you now, because I abhor that word… you may have guessed before. But whatever that emotion is and if there is any truth to it, the only human being that I feel that for is you. Don't text me anymore."

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok..i have been a very bad reader n have not commented for long..though was reading every update!!
Will do now!!

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Ah..finally..😆 i really am liking how the story is proceeding..5 months of marrriage and Gaurav and vidya have become more than friends..now they need eachother ,,more like companions i must say..
They both are sharing a bond which even they have no idea where it will go..how he tries to protect her from her father and wants to keep her safe.😳He wants to help her and also take to dinner..wowo😃

One side where gaurav is trying to help vidya with her studies and be friendly with her..he still is missing salome..the mystery of her name and that painting was really interesting..want to know more about her and her past.

While i see all are joining "Team Vidya" 😃.. its Gaurav-salome's relationship what am looking forward to along with gaurav-vidya's growing bond..of course they both love eachother but there's more to it..gaurav still finding ways to go to her(salome) back and she trying to convince him to move on in his life with her wife..does she really want it?I am not sure and i think she doesn't even.Well i really feel pity for gaurav sometimes..2 ladies in his life and neither of them are trying to woo him..😆

I have been listening to the song u gave link to and i realised it's the original version of chandramukhi..(which i saw to know how much it is same from the one i saw i telugu..)though i have no idea of language and lyrics ..yes the music is haunting and really connects well with the chapter.Thanks for posting it!😃

BTW i have started reading "Love and despair" ..it's very long..so will need lots of time to complete.😃

I have pointed before too..and asking again..is there a reason u haven't named the story till now..and would we ever see salome's picture?😳

Lastly to say i think u story has inspired me to "think" 😆 to write something(a OS to be precise)..i have no idea when i will pen it down though!

Waiting for the next update and i know u didn't be reminded like me..u are very good updater i must say!!
😃
Good wishes Devi!!

Sri:-)

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ahhh ... loved the exchange between S & G ...


S comes across as a very intelligent / sensible / pragmatic person ... and very discerning too !!!

Will G stop texting her ???

And ... will the dinner date help V in understanding her husband a little more ... and vice versa ???

Impatiently waiting for he answer ... 😆

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