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supriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

wow FF ...well loved reading FF,SS ,OS thank u so much smiley gonna read all of them then wil b back to comment :)

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Nachiketj

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Posted: 10 years ago

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To be honest...adhi twins vachlyavar zara me 2 mins thamblo...twins pahijeytch ka...purna write up vachlyavar patla pan mahit nahi ajunhi vatta twins...required? Baaki writing skills 10/10, cud visualise evry scene 👍🏼

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nachiketj
To be honest...adhi twins vachlyavar zara me 2 mins thamblo...twins pahijeytch ka...purna write up vachlyavar patla pan mahit nahi ajunhi vatta twins...required? Baaki writing skills 10/10, cud visualise evry scene👍🏼

twins required ahet ka mhanaje?? tula kay mhanayache ahe nahi samajale mala...

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Kshiti2014

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Sayali khupach chan.. emotional kelas yaar.. pan sundar part 3.. pillu tillu aie la tras nahi denar..

Actually majha chotasa pillu 5 months ch ratriche 1.15 am jhale tari jhopachnaav ghet nahi aahe..

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Nachiketj

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Smiley_23

twins required ahet ka mhanaje?? tula kay mhanayache ahe nahi samajale mala...

Mhanjey normal 1ch single child...MD la evdhyat 2 mulanchi aai twins jari asle tari...lahaan vattey ti mala 😳 neway u continue mayb i can't explain..

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gs34410

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Sayali, you have a great gift of writing ⭐️

I loved it 👏

After reading part 3 I WANT MORE😊

I don't care what they do in the serial, tu asach chaan lihit jaa!! Looking forward to your next update.

PS: in my opinion you should also post the part 3 of the Anniversary write up. I don't think there is anything in that writing which you should be shy about😳

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JaniBande

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Sayali, as usual pharach chhan. twins chi idea avadali. double surprise. I think its cute. tyanchya family madhe nahi ahe tar it will be good for them. Archu cha kay mhanana asel yavar ? :-).

The serious matter with MD's birth is so touching. Pan everything will be ok. AD cha MD chi kalaji ghena pahilyapasun ( tyala news kalalyapasun) sukhavun jaata.

Tu kiti atmasaat keli ahes he characters. amazing!. Tu lihit raha.

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-Zoey-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Sayali, Ekdum Masta! 👍🏼The conversation of AD with unborn baby is just mindblowing idea.You are in right direction. Keep them coming.

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nachiketj

Mhanjey normal 1ch single child...MD la evdhyat 2 mulanchi aai twins jari asle tari...lahaan vattey ti mala 😳 neway u continue mayb i can't explain..

hehehe Bhavana pochalya...😆