JYRG.... New Beginnings... Part 11 LAST PART... on Page 19 - Page 4

Originally posted by: gs34410

Sayali, you have a great gift of writing ⭐️

I loved it 👏

After reading part 3 I WANT MORE😊

I don't care what they do in the serial, tu asach chaan lihit jaa!! Looking forward to your next update.

PS: in my opinion you should also post the part 3 of the Anniversary write up. I don't think there is anything in that writing which you should be shy about😳

Originally posted by: JaniBande

Sayali, as usual pharach chhan. twins chi idea avadali. double surprise. I think its cute. tyanchya family madhe nahi ahe tar it will be good for them. Archu cha kay mhanana asel yavar ? :-).

The serious matter with MD's birth is so touching. Pan everything will be ok. AD cha MD chi kalaji ghena pahilyapasun ( tyala news kalalyapasun) sukhavun jaata.

Tu kiti atmasaat keli ahes he characters. amazing!. Tu lihit raha.

Originally posted by: -Zoey-

Sayali, Ekdum Masta! 👍🏼The conversation of AD with unborn baby is just mindblowing idea.You are in right direction. Keep them coming.

Woww Sayali, read all the 3 parts of the anniversary at a stretch...awesome it is...now i can see that many scenes of the annv celebrations in the serial, were picked up from your story...esp the marrying again part...even those romantic scenes are almost same to same...also Adi-Meg bringing those goodies, (the jam, squashes and stuff)...that too is there in your story, about shopping from MAPRO...well not bad ha 👏 looks like your Jitu Bhaiyya has flicked quite a lot from your storyline 😊

Originally posted by: vidya0906

Woww Sayali, read all the 3 parts of the anniversary at a stretch...awesome it is...now i can see that many scenes of the annv celebrations in the serial, were picked up from your story...esp the marrying again part...even those romantic scenes are almost same to same...also Adi-Meg bringing those goodies, (the jam, squashes and stuff)...that too is there in your story, about shopping from MAPRO...well not bad ha 👏 looks like your Jitu Bhaiyya has flicked quite a lot from your storyline 😊

And you can post the 3rd part of the annv in the thread itself...i dont think there is anything censurable in it 😛

Also your latest installment of new beginnings is very nice...Adi-Meg getting twins...thats nice...reminded me of ZGH, where Kashaf on knowing that she is going to get twins, is a bit worried...but Zaroon in his calm and confident way removes all her fears.

All in all enjoyed reading all the parts...keep them coming 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Smiley_23

CC chi demand hoti twins chi... so added it...😆

and in the END everything will be 👍🏼

Thank you for fulfilling my Pedha-Barfi wish, and also for your wonderful writing. Bless you! 😊

Originally posted by: Smiley_23

hehehe Vidya me too ZGH fan... Loved Kashaf more thn Zaroon...

Originally posted by: -Zoey-

Great! Good to know you too are ZGH fan. I have recommended this to Rupali,but looks like she didn't watch it yet.

Btw, I think there are various forms of FF. What is OS? And What is called what you are writing? *Just Curious *

Dear Sayali,

Sayali, Awesome write ups.. I hadn't read your Anniversary parts.. attach vachle.. And I loved them! Part 3 pm karshil ka mala? I would love to read it 😆