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Posted: 3 months ago
#51

Originally posted by: Moor278

Part 3

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Location: Mezbaani

“Puneet Sir… Do you mind checking this list?” Mannat asks Puneet and a clearing of the throat diverts their attention. It is Vikrant, standing by the table, looking at Mannat with eager eyes and a shy smile, hoping she would consult him too.

It's been a few days since Ronnie had introduced the idea of diversification and Puneet had been spending time with Mannat at Mezbaani. She had come up with a good amount of research and Puneet had been impressed which he dared not say aloud. But Vikrant was making agonizingly slow progress in his attempts to talk to Mannat. Puneet was observing with a keen eye now that he had some idea about what Vikrant feels for Mannat.


Just then Malla entered the restaurant. Puneet didnt miss the cold vibes Mannat and Malla shared, who were once good friends. But even more surprising was Vikrant's sudden move towards Mannat, he got up from the chair and in one quick stride he was next to her like a cat, almost crowding her personal space. Mannat shifted slightly in whatever space she had.


Malla tried to talk to Vikrant and he ignored. She greeted Mannat and was reciprocated with a curt smile. Malla then turned her attention to Puneet and the papers in front of him.

“What is this Punnu?”

“It's Puneet Malla… and this doesn't concern you…” Puneet retorted, irritated with the abridged name she calls him with.

“Oh come on… cant you just share… main vaise bhi bahot bore ho rahi thi ghar pe… tum aur Vikrant… and ofcourse Mannat tum bhi… koi bhi nahi hai mujhse baat karne, masti karne….”

“Kyunki hum sab kaam karne main lage hue hai Madam….” Puneet replies without letting her finish…

“Haan vahi to… I thought I will join you… are we ordering something???”


Puneet laughed at her… “Are you m….? Why would we order Malla? This is our restaurant… we can make whatever we want… and we have great chefs like Mannat here….”

Before he could even control, Puneet had made a huge gaffe…. He had not only acknowledged Mannat's skills but also said it aloud in front of her…

Puneet wished the ground would open up and swallow him… The Puneet Saluja, Head Chef had unknowingly broken his tough task master facade and that too for Mannat.


He turned to look around the table and his embarrassment touched the zenith.

Malla who was sipping water from her Stanley cup was stuck in limbo, her lips pursed around the sipper.

Mannat was awestruck, her eyes wide with surprise. Puneet could imagine the million thoughts running in her mind.

But he got stuck on Vikrant, who was gaping at him, his eyes betraying the slight anger and frustration that Puneet could feel… as if Vikrant will skin him alive…


He quickly tries to recovered and said… “Haan to… Mannat ko maine train kiya hai… The Puneet Saluja, Head Chef… how can she not be perfect….”

His words didnt make the desired impact.


Trying to divert the attention, he quickly asks Vikrant…

“Vikrant… Shall we go for a market survey today? Kya bolte ho?”

Vikrant is barely able to control his anger, her voice is laced with frustration that Puneet praised Ms. Mannat, his Ms. Mannat when he has not been able to talk 2 full sentences to her in past few days.

“Nahi… mujhe kuch kaam hai… tu jaa…”

The frustrated reply doesn't miss its aim, and taking a wild shot just for the livid glance Vikrant had given him a few moments ago, Puneet decides to take his chance…

“Mannat… what are you doing? Tum chalogi??”

Mannat looks at him in surprise… appreciation first and now a request to accompany him?

Mannat wonders if Puneet has grown some imaginary wings… since he was behaving like an angel around her. But she also quickly realizes the company she will have if she stays back… 2 people in the world she is most eager to avoid right now…


With quick decision, she replies… “Sure Sir… why not? Do you mind if I change? I can go home directly with you if we are late and unless you are not occupied!!!”

Puneet, who was expecting her to refuse, is stunned by her quick acceptance and rush of words.

He nods and she quickly moves to the service area with a faint smile.


Vikrant who is dumbstruck with the situation keeps looking at Puneet, his frustration palpable.

Puneet walks off with a shrug, whistling his way to the car.


In the parking lot, Mannat is sprinting… eager to escape Mezbani as fast as she can.

She is about to climb the front passenger seat when she gets a tap on her shoulder.

“Ms. Mannat, move aside please. I need to sit...” Vikrant tells her with a stern resolve.

Mannat looks at him in shock, while Puneet sniggers in the driver seat.


Composing himself, since he had low key expected this…

“I thought tum busy the Vikrant… kya hua??”

“Ummm… vo main baad main kar lunga… I thought I will join you guys too….” he replies, looking pointedly at Mannat.

Mannat is still holding the door… confused by Vikrants behaviour.

He grabs the door handle from hers and opens the rear door.

“Ms. Mannat, please get inside… we need to go…”

Mannat finds her voice somewhere… “But Sir… aap boss hai… aap piche… “

Vikrant mentally bangs his head for going back to the boss realm again ... “Ms. Mannat… corporate protocol… a female employee will sit at the back… even with her bosses… go and sit please… we are getting late…”

Mannat has no choice but to slide in on the back seat… Vikrant takes the front passenger seat and finally relaxes.

Puneet snorts, is met with an eyebrow raise by Vikrant… when he doesn't reply, Vikrant motions him to move and trio head off to the market.

Such a fun update, jealous vikku is a treat to watch! smiley27

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Posted: 3 months ago
#52

Great update Moor..I so wish Puneet would have got something to do in the show as well..koi na..your update suffices this need...smiley42

Wondering what will be told to Vikku by him....smiley27

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Team Vikrant

Posted: 3 months ago
#53

Originally posted by: Moor278

Part 4
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The trip to the market is full of secret glances from Vikrant, impassive behaviour from Mannat, silent nods and eye contacts. Puneet feels like he is forced into a very volatile situation yet he is amused with how the usually composed Vikrant is shifty and anxious around Mannat. He takes a protective stance and is always chivalrous but Mannat is strongly resisting all his attempts.

By the end of the trip, they are at least on talking terms and Vikrant is visibly relieved. While getting into the car, Vikrant smiles at Puneet, Puneet subconsciously reciprocates and Vikrant takes a step back. He notices himself in the mirror and then it dawns upon both of them that it was instantaneous. Puneet realizes he might have unknowingly played cupid.

Mannat takes the back seat without a question and busies herself in her mobile. Puneet notices that Vikrant is trying to catch her eye and just to trouble Vikrant a bit, adjusts the rear view mirror.

Vikrant humphs and stares at Puneet, Puneet chuckles earning a glance from Mannat. They commence their journey without further words.


Raveena's Room

Anu is sitting with Raveena and they are discussing some jewelry items Raveena has purchased.

Puneet comes in, sees them sitting together and lies down next to them.

Raveena lovingly runs her fingers through his hair and he relaxes.

With closed eyes, he continues…

“So Mom… as per our plan… I am keeping a watch on Vikrant… so far I have not found any reason to suspect him… or that he knew about any of this…. Vo bhi mere tarah hi clueless hai…”

Raveena slows her caresses and looks at Anu.

Anu moves closer and in hushed tones, says,

“But Mom… Malla is upset… she did not like this whatever prank they did… I mean she didn't confess anything to me… I tried to get it out of her… but she wont budge… what I mean to say is… it looked like she did want to marry Vikrant Bhai… but he refused… and use bhi agree hona pada ki ye prank tha… but she is not happy is what I felt.. ”

Puneet jumps up at that and says…

“I know right… Vikrant is still mad about Mannat… aise hi thodi main use lattoo kehta hun… he shows no affection to Malla lekin Mannat ki choti se choti baat use yaad hai, uska dhyan rakhta hai…. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha chal kya raha hai…”

Raveena, who is listening to all this very carefully, says…

“Isme jaroor Aishwarya aur Neetu Bhabhi ka koi role hai…. Un dono main aajkal bahot dosti ho gai thi… lekin jab se ye prank wala kissa hua hai… vo dono ek dusre se baat bhi nahi kar rahe thik se…. Something is fishy…”

Anu and Puneet look at each other and nod…

“Mom do you think???”

“Nahi Puneet… I dont think Ronnie bhaisaab ko kuch pata hai…. He seems as unaware as all of us…anyway… keep your eyes and ears open… we need to get to the bottom of this for our sake…. Hum teeno ko saath hi rehna padega…”


Puneet is casually strolling the corridor when he stops in his tracks. He overhears Neetu and Aishwarya talking to each other in hushed tones. But the words he hears perks his ears up. Quickly pulling out his mobile phone, he starts recording the conversation. Each word troubles and hurts him as if someone stabbed him in the chest.


Seeing Vikrant coming in from the other side, he quickly makes an exit and grabs Vikrant by his arm, drags him to his room and closes the door.

“You are a big dumb idiot you know!!!!!”

Puneet begins pacing his room in frustration while Vikrant looks at him confused.

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To be continued

Beautiful writing , Moor smiley27smiley31

Thanks for the tag :)

Looking forward for the other parts..

Your writings are giving much needed fun filled, positive vibes than the show right now...

Punnu is not being utilized in the show and his presence and his active involvement in mezbani would have added spice to their dynamics and Vikku's jealous factor would be a treat to watch but they have failed ...

You have filled this gap in your writings ✍️..Great going and waiting for the continuation..🥰

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Posted: 3 months ago
#54

Originally posted by: Moor278

Part 4
-------

The trip to the market is full of secret glances from Vikrant, impassive behaviour from Mannat, silent nods and eye contacts. Puneet feels like he is forced into a very volatile situation yet he is amused with how the usually composed Vikrant is shifty and anxious around Mannat. He takes a protective stance and is always chivalrous but Mannat is strongly resisting all his attempts.

By the end of the trip, they are at least on talking terms and Vikrant is visibly relieved. While getting into the car, Vikrant smiles at Puneet, Puneet subconsciously reciprocates and Vikrant takes a step back. He notices himself in the mirror and then it dawns upon both of them that it was instantaneous. Puneet realizes he might have unknowingly played cupid.

Mannat takes the back seat without a question and busies herself in her mobile. Puneet notices that Vikrant is trying to catch her eye and just to trouble Vikrant a bit, adjusts the rear view mirror.

Vikrant humphs and stares at Puneet, Puneet chuckles earning a glance from Mannat. They commence their journey without further words.


Raveena's Room

Anu is sitting with Raveena and they are discussing some jewelry items Raveena has purchased.

Puneet comes in, sees them sitting together and lies down next to them.

Raveena lovingly runs her fingers through his hair and he relaxes.

With closed eyes, he continues…

“So Mom… as per our plan… I am keeping a watch on Vikrant… so far I have not found any reason to suspect him… or that he knew about any of this…. Vo bhi mere tarah hi clueless hai…”

Raveena slows her caresses and looks at Anu.

Anu moves closer and in hushed tones, says,

“But Mom… Malla is upset… she did not like this whatever prank they did… I mean she didn't confess anything to me… I tried to get it out of her… but she wont budge… what I mean to say is… it looked like she did want to marry Vikrant Bhai… but he refused… and use bhi agree hona pada ki ye prank tha… but she is not happy is what I felt.. ”

Puneet jumps up at that and says…

“I know right… Vikrant is still mad about Mannat… aise hi thodi main use lattoo kehta hun… he shows no affection to Malla lekin Mannat ki choti se choti baat use yaad hai, uska dhyan rakhta hai…. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha chal kya raha hai…”

Raveena, who is listening to all this very carefully, says…

“Isme jaroor Aishwarya aur Neetu Bhabhi ka koi role hai…. Un dono main aajkal bahot dosti ho gai thi… lekin jab se ye prank wala kissa hua hai… vo dono ek dusre se baat bhi nahi kar rahe thik se…. Something is fishy…”

Anu and Puneet look at each other and nod…

“Mom do you think???”

“Nahi Puneet… I dont think Ronnie bhaisaab ko kuch pata hai…. He seems as unaware as all of us…anyway… keep your eyes and ears open… we need to get to the bottom of this for our sake…. Hum teeno ko saath hi rehna padega…”


Puneet is casually strolling the corridor when he stops in his tracks. He overhears Neetu and Aishwarya talking to each other in hushed tones. But the words he hears perks his ears up. Quickly pulling out his mobile phone, he starts recording the conversation. Each word troubles and hurts him as if someone stabbed him in the chest.


Seeing Vikrant coming in from the other side, he quickly makes an exit and grabs Vikrant by his arm, drags him to his room and closes the door.

“You are a big dumb idiot you know!!!!!”

Puneet begins pacing his room in frustration while Vikrant looks at him confused.

----

To be continued

Apun ko next part de do thakur! Abhi ke abhi!

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Originally posted by: WittyKittyVixxy

Apun ko next part de do thakur! Abhi ke abhi!

Likhne to do Gabbar!!!! smiley37

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Posted: 3 months ago
#56

Originally posted by: Moor278

Part 4
-------

The trip to the market is full of secret glances from Vikrant, impassive behaviour from Mannat, silent nods and eye contacts. Puneet feels like he is forced into a very volatile situation yet he is amused with how the usually composed Vikrant is shifty and anxious around Mannat. He takes a protective stance and is always chivalrous but Mannat is strongly resisting all his attempts.

By the end of the trip, they are at least on talking terms and Vikrant is visibly relieved. While getting into the car, Vikrant smiles at Puneet, Puneet subconsciously reciprocates and Vikrant takes a step back. He notices himself in the mirror and then it dawns upon both of them that it was instantaneous. Puneet realizes he might have unknowingly played cupid.

Mannat takes the back seat without a question and busies herself in her mobile. Puneet notices that Vikrant is trying to catch her eye and just to trouble Vikrant a bit, adjusts the rear view mirror.

Vikrant humphs and stares at Puneet, Puneet chuckles earning a glance from Mannat. They commence their journey without further words.


Raveena's Room

Anu is sitting with Raveena and they are discussing some jewelry items Raveena has purchased.

Puneet comes in, sees them sitting together and lies down next to them.

Raveena lovingly runs her fingers through his hair and he relaxes.

With closed eyes, he continues…

“So Mom… as per our plan… I am keeping a watch on Vikrant… so far I have not found any reason to suspect him… or that he knew about any of this…. Vo bhi mere tarah hi clueless hai…”

Raveena slows her caresses and looks at Anu.

Anu moves closer and in hushed tones, says,

“But Mom… Malla is upset… she did not like this whatever prank they did… I mean she didn't confess anything to me… I tried to get it out of her… but she wont budge… what I mean to say is… it looked like she did want to marry Vikrant Bhai… but he refused… and use bhi agree hona pada ki ye prank tha… but she is not happy is what I felt.. ”

Puneet jumps up at that and says…

“I know right… Vikrant is still mad about Mannat… aise hi thodi main use lattoo kehta hun… he shows no affection to Malla lekin Mannat ki choti se choti baat use yaad hai, uska dhyan rakhta hai…. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha chal kya raha hai…”

Raveena, who is listening to all this very carefully, says…

“Isme jaroor Aishwarya aur Neetu Bhabhi ka koi role hai…. Un dono main aajkal bahot dosti ho gai thi… lekin jab se ye prank wala kissa hua hai… vo dono ek dusre se baat bhi nahi kar rahe thik se…. Something is fishy…”

Anu and Puneet look at each other and nod…

“Mom do you think???”

“Nahi Puneet… I dont think Ronnie bhaisaab ko kuch pata hai…. He seems as unaware as all of us…anyway… keep your eyes and ears open… we need to get to the bottom of this for our sake…. Hum teeno ko saath hi rehna padega…”


Puneet is casually strolling the corridor when he stops in his tracks. He overhears Neetu and Aishwarya talking to each other in hushed tones. But the words he hears perks his ears up. Quickly pulling out his mobile phone, he starts recording the conversation. Each word troubles and hurts him as if someone stabbed him in the chest.


Seeing Vikrant coming in from the other side, he quickly makes an exit and grabs Vikrant by his arm, drags him to his room and closes the door.

“You are a big dumb idiot you know!!!!!”

Puneet begins pacing his room in frustration while Vikrant looks at him confused.

----

To be continued


Wow Moor..The plot is intensifying now ..Love it !!!

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Posted: 3 months ago
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You left us at a cliffhanger. What did Puneet hear that made him angry? We all know Vikrant is an idiot but what made Puneet realize the same. Can't wait to find out. Thanks for the tag.

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Posted: 3 months ago
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I honestly wish some of you amazing folks here in the forum get a real shot at being creatives or storytellers because I’m sure you guys would bring a refreshing, revolutionary change to the usual ITV tropes. Do consider exploring this space seriously, guys !

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Originally posted by: Uma85

I honestly wish some of you amazing folks here in the forum get a real shot at being creatives or storytellers because I’m sure you guys would bring a refreshing, revolutionary change to the usual ITV tropes. Do consider exploring this space seriously, guys !

I agree for both meera and moor.... Mera tho time pass haismiley37
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Posted: 3 months ago
#60

Originally posted by: Moor278

Part 4
-------

The trip to the market is full of secret glances from Vikrant, impassive behaviour from Mannat, silent nods and eye contacts. Puneet feels like he is forced into a very volatile situation yet he is amused with how the usually composed Vikrant is shifty and anxious around Mannat. He takes a protective stance and is always chivalrous but Mannat is strongly resisting all his attempts.

By the end of the trip, they are at least on talking terms and Vikrant is visibly relieved. While getting into the car, Vikrant smiles at Puneet, Puneet subconsciously reciprocates and Vikrant takes a step back. He notices himself in the mirror and then it dawns upon both of them that it was instantaneous. Puneet realizes he might have unknowingly played cupid.

Mannat takes the back seat without a question and busies herself in her mobile. Puneet notices that Vikrant is trying to catch her eye and just to trouble Vikrant a bit, adjusts the rear view mirror.

Vikrant humphs and stares at Puneet, Puneet chuckles earning a glance from Mannat. They commence their journey without further words.


Raveena's Room

Anu is sitting with Raveena and they are discussing some jewelry items Raveena has purchased.

Puneet comes in, sees them sitting together and lies down next to them.

Raveena lovingly runs her fingers through his hair and he relaxes.

With closed eyes, he continues…

“So Mom… as per our plan… I am keeping a watch on Vikrant… so far I have not found any reason to suspect him… or that he knew about any of this…. Vo bhi mere tarah hi clueless hai…”

Raveena slows her caresses and looks at Anu.

Anu moves closer and in hushed tones, says,

“But Mom… Malla is upset… she did not like this whatever prank they did… I mean she didn't confess anything to me… I tried to get it out of her… but she wont budge… what I mean to say is… it looked like she did want to marry Vikrant Bhai… but he refused… and use bhi agree hona pada ki ye prank tha… but she is not happy is what I felt.. ”

Puneet jumps up at that and says…

“I know right… Vikrant is still mad about Mannat… aise hi thodi main use lattoo kehta hun… he shows no affection to Malla lekin Mannat ki choti se choti baat use yaad hai, uska dhyan rakhta hai…. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha chal kya raha hai…”

Raveena, who is listening to all this very carefully, says…

“Isme jaroor Aishwarya aur Neetu Bhabhi ka koi role hai…. Un dono main aajkal bahot dosti ho gai thi… lekin jab se ye prank wala kissa hua hai… vo dono ek dusre se baat bhi nahi kar rahe thik se…. Something is fishy…”

Anu and Puneet look at each other and nod…

“Mom do you think???”

“Nahi Puneet… I dont think Ronnie bhaisaab ko kuch pata hai…. He seems as unaware as all of us…anyway… keep your eyes and ears open… we need to get to the bottom of this for our sake…. Hum teeno ko saath hi rehna padega…”


Puneet is casually strolling the corridor when he stops in his tracks. He overhears Neetu and Aishwarya talking to each other in hushed tones. But the words he hears perks his ears up. Quickly pulling out his mobile phone, he starts recording the conversation. Each word troubles and hurts him as if someone stabbed him in the chest.


Seeing Vikrant coming in from the other side, he quickly makes an exit and grabs Vikrant by his arm, drags him to his room and closes the door.

“You are a big dumb idiot you know!!!!!”

Puneet begins pacing his room in frustration while Vikrant looks at him confused.

----

To be continued

Its superb 👌 👏...

My detective punnuuuu...shabashhh 🤌😎

Kaash punnu ko show mein bhi aise utilize kartha 🥲

Awesome update Moor🫂..waiting for the convo bw vikku punnuu 🤞

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