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Posted: 3 months ago
#21

Originally posted by: shiro_shinchan

Jealousy & vikku boi is the trope to root for smiley37smiley37

elmo from sesame street is standing in front of a fire with his arms outstretched .

Haha... Thank you smiley31

filhaal Vikku in this story is only devdas... havent thought of jealousy angle yet smiley2

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Originally posted by: Shazia_h

Can just picture this meeting, Vikrant only attending because Ms Mannat was invited, Punnu only attending to irk Vikrant and Mannat because it’s her job! And Ronnie chairing with his mischievous smile.

Malla missed the memo?

Well done Moor, excited to read the next chapter.

Thank you girls... will clarify this in the next part smiley31

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Thank you girls... smiley31

Sab ko jealous Vikrant dekhna hai it seems hai na smiley39

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Part II

Some clarification incase its not clear....

I have set this story in the current track... where Vikrant did public proposal to Malla but backed out soon after seeing Mannat not relenting.

He termed it as a prank for the family. Malla had to agree.

Ronnie doesnt like Malla at all after this prank and he thinks theres something going on which he doesnt know. So he is taking action on his own.


------

Location: Mezbaani

“Ye kya plan hai Vikrant? Did you know about this?”

“Nahi yaar Puneet… I am as surprised as you are with this idea… pata nahi Dad ke dimaag main kya chal raha hai?”

“So you didn't know?”

Vikrant shakes his head in denial.

“Aur Mannat??? Use kisne bulaya? Jaroor tumne hi suggest kiya hoga!!”

Vikrant momentarily pauses and with a pained face replies, “Nahi… use bhi Dad ne bulaya… I was not aware”

Puneet wonders if Vikrant is telling the truth while Vikrant is confused with his line of questioning. Vikrant busies himself in the papers ahead of him, but a question lingers on his mind as well about Ronnie's motives to invite Mannat. Puneet can clearly see Vikrant is distracted.

Both men are trying to gauge the reactions of each other when Puneet’s wicked mind wishes to catch Vikrant again…

“Vaise tumne bataya nahi ki vo prank kis liye tha… or rather kiske liye tha?”

The papers Vikrant is handling suddenly drop to the floor and Puneet hides his chuckle once again. Seeing Vikrant so flustered is a treat indeed. To see how much that question rattles the otherwise cool and composed Vikrant Saluja.

“Chod na… kya karna hai usse tujhe? I told you na… it was a prank… bas aur kuch nahi…”

“Are but why????”

“Puneeeetttttttt….. Jaane de!!!!” the reply is tinged with irritation and sadness.

Vikrant quickly moves away just to avoid Puneets questions and he finally sits down in his chair, going over what just happened a few minutes ago, finally letting out that chuckle. He decides to discuss this with his mom about the new business idea.


Back at home, Raveena is rapidly pacing the room trying to make sense of this new proposal Ronnie has got for Puneet.

“Ronnie bhaisaab ne kuch bataya kyun kar rahe hai?”

“No mom… he didnt say anything… just that we have to work together… me and Vikrant…”

“To phir agar tum dono ko saath hi kaam karna hai to ye seperation kyun?”

“Seperation nahi hai Mom… unhone clearly bola ki ek hi business hai… just 2 verticals…”

“Mujhe ye kuch thik nahi lag raha Puneet beta…. Kuch to gadbad hai…”

“Mom… laga to nahi… anyway ye socho na…. I get to lead… take my own decisions… us Vikrant se to poochna nahi padega har baar….”

Raveena is still occupied in her thoughts when Mannat's name diverts her attention.

“Mannat ka kya? Vo kya karne wali hai?”

“Vo kuch nahi kar rahi Mom… vo bas inventory banane wali hai….”

“Mujhe vo ladki bilkul pasand nahi hai Puneet… aur Ronnie bhaisaab ne use tumhare saath kyun diya??? Kahi nazar rakhne to nahi??”

“Nahi mom… aur vo kar kya legi… main dekh lunga use…”

“Take care beta…. And let me find out on my own ki ye ho kya raha hai iss ghar main…”


About a week later, Ronnie is sitting by his desk reading the papers the lawyer has brought in. Everything seems to be in order and Ronnie decides to discuss this with the boys later in the day. He prepares to put the file away when he notices Neetu standing close by, peering over them. They are not on talking terms since the prank debacle and Ronnie can see Neetu is making attempts to break his silence.

“Suniye ji… main pooch sakti hun ye kya hai?”

Ronnie takes a deep breath, but without turning towards her replies, “Ye vahi hai jo tumhe chahiye tha…”

Neetu is immediately relieved and moves and stands in front of him.

She happily asks, “Sach… aapne sab kuch Vikrant ke naam kar diya?”

Ronnie replies, still upset, “Bilkul nahi…. Aur main ye bewakoofi kabhi nahi karunga…”

“To phir….”

Ronnie replies, trying very hard to control his anger, “Phir kya Neetu… tum samajh bhi rahi ho ki tum kya maang rahi ho??? Aur mujhe to samajh nahi aa raha ki tumhare dimaag main idea aaya kaha se???? Kya Anu aur Puneet hamare bacche nahi hai??? Main unke aisa kaise kar sakta hun??? No… I won't do it…”

“Nahi Ronnie ji… aap samajh nahi rahe hai..”

“Haan nahi samajh raha hun… aur na samjhunga…. Mere liye teeno ek jaise hai… main koi bhedbhav nahi karne wala… chahe mujhe koi bhi kitna hi force kare…”

Neetu is about to say more when she notices Raveena standing by the door.

Raveena comes in and Ronnie turns around to face her.

Raveena looks at both of them and turns to speak to Ronnie when he starts speaking.

“Accha hua tum aa gai Raveena… Puneet ne tumhe bataya to hoga hi…”

Raveena nods… still doubtful.

“Mujhe nahi pata ki kya ho raha hai aur koun kar raha hai, ya karva raha hai (he throws an angry glance at Neetu saying this) … par jo bhi hai… hamare bacchho ke bhavishya ka sawaal hai… Maine kuch decisions liye hai… and trust me vo sabke bhale ke liye hi hai…. Tumhe koi doubts ho to mujh se pooch sakti ho… but for now please understand that I am trying to protect what's ours… I am protecting the Salujas…”


Raveena peers into his eyes and can understand he is speaking the truth… She turns to look at Neetu and sees her panicking, terrified and confused. Raveena realizes Ronnie has some motive but it's not the same as Neetu. She doesn't reply, quietly picks a copy of the draft agreement Ronnie has prepared for her and leaves without a word.


Back in her room, she reads through the document multiple times yet cannot find fault in it. Something that would tell her if Puneet is to be disadvantaged in any manner.

She recalls all that Ronnie said and specifically the fact about protecting Salujas. She decides to dig deeper on her own.

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Posted: 3 months ago
#25

Originally posted by: Moor278

Part II

Some clarification incase its not clear....

I have set this story in the current track... where Vikrant did public proposal to Malla but backed out soon after seeing Mannat not relenting.

He termed it as a prank for the family. Malla had to agree.

Ronnie doesnt like Malla at all after this prank and he thinks theres something going on which he doesnt know. So he is taking action on his own.


------

Location: Mezbaani

“Ye kya plan hai Vikrant? Did you know about this?”

“Nahi yaar Puneet… I am as surprised as you are with this idea… pata nahi Dad ke dimaag main kya chal raha hai?”

“So you didn't know?”

Vikrant shakes his head in denial.

“Aur Mannat??? Use kisne bulaya? Jaroor tumne hi suggest kiya hoga!!”

Vikrant momentarily pauses and with a pained face replies, “Nahi… use bhi Dad ne bulaya… I was not aware”

Puneet wonders if Vikrant is telling the truth while Vikrant is confused with his line of questioning. Vikrant busies himself in the papers ahead of him, but a question lingers on his mind as well about Ronnie's motives to invite Mannat. Puneet can clearly see Vikrant is distracted.

Both men are trying to gauge the reactions of each other when Puneet’s wicked mind wishes to catch Vikrant again…

“Vaise tumne bataya nahi ki vo prank kis liye tha… or rather kiske liye tha?”

The papers Vikrant is handling suddenly drop to the floor and Puneet hides his chuckle once again. Seeing Vikrant so flustered is a treat indeed. To see how much that question rattles the otherwise cool and composed Vikrant Saluja.

“Chod na… kya karna hai usse tujhe? I told you na… it was a prank… bas aur kuch nahi…”

“Are but why????”

“Puneeeetttttttt….. Jaane de!!!!” the reply is tinged with irritation and sadness.

Vikrant quickly moves away just to avoid Puneets questions and he finally sits down in his chair, going over what just happened a few minutes ago, finally letting out that chuckle. He decides to discuss this with his mom about the new business idea.


Back at home, Raveena is rapidly pacing the room trying to make sense of this new proposal Ronnie has got for Puneet.

“Ronnie bhaisaab ne kuch bataya kyun kar rahe hai?”

“No mom… he didnt say anything… just that we have to work together… me and Vikrant…”

“To phir agar tum dono ko saath hi kaam karna hai to ye seperation kyun?”

“Seperation nahi hai Mom… unhone clearly bola ki ek hi business hai… just 2 verticals…”

“Mujhe ye kuch thik nahi lag raha Puneet beta…. Kuch to gadbad hai…”

“Mom… laga to nahi… anyway ye socho na…. I get to lead… take my own decisions… us Vikrant se to poochna nahi padega har baar….”

Raveena is still occupied in her thoughts when Mannat's name diverts her attention.

“Mannat ka kya? Vo kya karne wali hai?”

“Vo kuch nahi kar rahi Mom… vo bas inventory banane wali hai….”

“Mujhe vo ladki bilkul pasand nahi hai Puneet… aur Ronnie bhaisaab ne use tumhare saath kyun diya??? Kahi nazar rakhne to nahi??”

“Nahi mom… aur vo kar kya legi… main dekh lunga use…”

“Take care beta…. And let me find out on my own ki ye ho kya raha hai iss ghar main…”


About a week later, Ronnie is sitting by his desk reading the papers the lawyer has brought in. Everything seems to be in order and Ronnie decides to discuss this with the boys later in the day. He prepares to put the file away when he notices Neetu standing close by, peering over them. They are not on talking terms since the prank debacle and Ronnie can see Neetu is making attempts to break his silence.

“Suniye ji… main pooch sakti hun ye kya hai?”

Ronnie takes a deep breath, but without turning towards her replies, “Ye vahi hai jo tumhe chahiye tha…”

Neetu is immediately relieved and moves and stands in front of him.

She happily asks, “Sach… aapne sab kuch Vikrant ke naam kar diya?”

Ronnie replies, still upset, “Bilkul nahi…. Aur main ye bewakoofi kabhi nahi karunga…”

“To phir….”

Ronnie replies, trying very hard to control his anger, “Phir kya Neetu… tum samajh bhi rahi ho ki tum kya maang rahi ho??? Aur mujhe to samajh nahi aa raha ki tumhare dimaag main idea aaya kaha se???? Kya Anu aur Puneet hamare bacche nahi hai??? Main unke aisa kaise kar sakta hun??? No… I won't do it…”

“Nahi Ronnie ji… aap samajh nahi rahe hai..”

“Haan nahi samajh raha hun… aur na samjhunga…. Mere liye teeno ek jaise hai… main koi bhedbhav nahi karne wala… chahe mujhe koi bhi kitna hi force kare…”

Neetu is about to say more when she notices Raveena standing by the door.

Raveena comes in and Ronnie turns around to face her.

Raveena looks at both of them and turns to speak to Ronnie when he starts speaking.

“Accha hua tum aa gai Raveena… Puneet ne tumhe bataya to hoga hi…”

Raveena nods… still doubtful.

“Mujhe nahi pata ki kya ho raha hai aur koun kar raha hai, ya karva raha hai (he throws an angry glance at Neetu saying this) … par jo bhi hai… hamare bacchho ke bhavishya ka sawaal hai… Maine kuch decisions liye hai… and trust me vo sabke bhale ke liye hi hai…. Tumhe koi doubts ho to mujh se pooch sakti ho… but for now please understand that I am trying to protect what's ours… I am protecting the Salujas…”


Raveena peers into his eyes and can understand he is speaking the truth… She turns to look at Neetu and sees her panicking, terrified and confused. Raveena realizes Ronnie has some motive but it's not the same as Neetu. She doesn't reply, quietly picks a copy of the draft agreement Ronnie has prepared for her and leaves without a word.


Back in her room, she reads through the document multiple times yet cannot find fault in it. Something that would tell her if Puneet is to be disadvantaged in any manner.

She recalls all that Ronnie said and specifically the fact about protecting Salujas. She decides to dig deeper on her own.

Arey waaah..suspense suspense 👏👏 nice build up !

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Interesting update!! Ronnie being firm and using his brains to make sure all the Saluja kids get their fair share is a treat. I despise Neetu to the core. What she does cannot be termed love in any twisted ways according to me. Can we get more Manvik scenes in the upcoming updates please!! Looking forward to seeing how the story moves ahead .

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Woww now this is getting interesting ...liked to see Ronnie taking a firm stand for the kids despite Neetus reluctance....

Awaiting next ....smiley31

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Posted: 3 months ago
#28

Originally posted by: Moor278

Part II

Some clarification incase its not clear....

I have set this story in the current track... where Vikrant did public proposal to Malla but backed out soon after seeing Mannat not relenting.

He termed it as a prank for the family. Malla had to agree.

Ronnie doesnt like Malla at all after this prank and he thinks theres something going on which he doesnt know. So he is taking action on his own.


------

Location: Mezbaani

“Ye kya plan hai Vikrant? Did you know about this?”

“Nahi yaar Puneet… I am as surprised as you are with this idea… pata nahi Dad ke dimaag main kya chal raha hai?”

“So you didn't know?”

Vikrant shakes his head in denial.

“Aur Mannat??? Use kisne bulaya? Jaroor tumne hi suggest kiya hoga!!”

Vikrant momentarily pauses and with a pained face replies, “Nahi… use bhi Dad ne bulaya… I was not aware”

Puneet wonders if Vikrant is telling the truth while Vikrant is confused with his line of questioning. Vikrant busies himself in the papers ahead of him, but a question lingers on his mind as well about Ronnie's motives to invite Mannat. Puneet can clearly see Vikrant is distracted.

Both men are trying to gauge the reactions of each other when Puneet’s wicked mind wishes to catch Vikrant again…

“Vaise tumne bataya nahi ki vo prank kis liye tha… or rather kiske liye tha?”

The papers Vikrant is handling suddenly drop to the floor and Puneet hides his chuckle once again. Seeing Vikrant so flustered is a treat indeed. To see how much that question rattles the otherwise cool and composed Vikrant Saluja.

“Chod na… kya karna hai usse tujhe? I told you na… it was a prank… bas aur kuch nahi…”

“Are but why????”

“Puneeeetttttttt….. Jaane de!!!!” the reply is tinged with irritation and sadness.

Vikrant quickly moves away just to avoid Puneets questions and he finally sits down in his chair, going over what just happened a few minutes ago, finally letting out that chuckle. He decides to discuss this with his mom about the new business idea.


Back at home, Raveena is rapidly pacing the room trying to make sense of this new proposal Ronnie has got for Puneet.

“Ronnie bhaisaab ne kuch bataya kyun kar rahe hai?”

“No mom… he didnt say anything… just that we have to work together… me and Vikrant…”

“To phir agar tum dono ko saath hi kaam karna hai to ye seperation kyun?”

“Seperation nahi hai Mom… unhone clearly bola ki ek hi business hai… just 2 verticals…”

“Mujhe ye kuch thik nahi lag raha Puneet beta…. Kuch to gadbad hai…”

“Mom… laga to nahi… anyway ye socho na…. I get to lead… take my own decisions… us Vikrant se to poochna nahi padega har baar….”

Raveena is still occupied in her thoughts when Mannat's name diverts her attention.

“Mannat ka kya? Vo kya karne wali hai?”

“Vo kuch nahi kar rahi Mom… vo bas inventory banane wali hai….”

“Mujhe vo ladki bilkul pasand nahi hai Puneet… aur Ronnie bhaisaab ne use tumhare saath kyun diya??? Kahi nazar rakhne to nahi??”

“Nahi mom… aur vo kar kya legi… main dekh lunga use…”

“Take care beta…. And let me find out on my own ki ye ho kya raha hai iss ghar main…”


About a week later, Ronnie is sitting by his desk reading the papers the lawyer has brought in. Everything seems to be in order and Ronnie decides to discuss this with the boys later in the day. He prepares to put the file away when he notices Neetu standing close by, peering over them. They are not on talking terms since the prank debacle and Ronnie can see Neetu is making attempts to break his silence.

“Suniye ji… main pooch sakti hun ye kya hai?”

Ronnie takes a deep breath, but without turning towards her replies, “Ye vahi hai jo tumhe chahiye tha…”

Neetu is immediately relieved and moves and stands in front of him.

She happily asks, “Sach… aapne sab kuch Vikrant ke naam kar diya?”

Ronnie replies, still upset, “Bilkul nahi…. Aur main ye bewakoofi kabhi nahi karunga…”

“To phir….”

Ronnie replies, trying very hard to control his anger, “Phir kya Neetu… tum samajh bhi rahi ho ki tum kya maang rahi ho??? Aur mujhe to samajh nahi aa raha ki tumhare dimaag main idea aaya kaha se???? Kya Anu aur Puneet hamare bacche nahi hai??? Main unke aisa kaise kar sakta hun??? No… I won't do it…”

“Nahi Ronnie ji… aap samajh nahi rahe hai..”

“Haan nahi samajh raha hun… aur na samjhunga…. Mere liye teeno ek jaise hai… main koi bhedbhav nahi karne wala… chahe mujhe koi bhi kitna hi force kare…”

Neetu is about to say more when she notices Raveena standing by the door.

Raveena comes in and Ronnie turns around to face her.

Raveena looks at both of them and turns to speak to Ronnie when he starts speaking.

“Accha hua tum aa gai Raveena… Puneet ne tumhe bataya to hoga hi…”

Raveena nods… still doubtful.

“Mujhe nahi pata ki kya ho raha hai aur koun kar raha hai, ya karva raha hai (he throws an angry glance at Neetu saying this) … par jo bhi hai… hamare bacchho ke bhavishya ka sawaal hai… Maine kuch decisions liye hai… and trust me vo sabke bhale ke liye hi hai…. Tumhe koi doubts ho to mujh se pooch sakti ho… but for now please understand that I am trying to protect what's ours… I am protecting the Salujas…”


Raveena peers into his eyes and can understand he is speaking the truth… She turns to look at Neetu and sees her panicking, terrified and confused. Raveena realizes Ronnie has some motive but it's not the same as Neetu. She doesn't reply, quietly picks a copy of the draft agreement Ronnie has prepared for her and leaves without a word.

Back in her room, she reads through the document multiple times yet cannot find fault in it. Something that would tell her if Puneet is to be disadvantaged in any manner.

She recalls all that Ronnie said and specifically the fact about protecting Salujas. She decides to dig deeper on her own.

Awwee you gave brain to every character smiley36

This is what Vikrant should have done after Mannat walked out saying the proposal purpose is served in the show 😭

Love this Ronnie who has voice against Neetu and is looking out for all the kids

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Originally posted by: Moor278

Part II

Some clarification incase its not clear....

I have set this story in the current track... where Vikrant did public proposal to Malla but backed out soon after seeing Mannat not relenting.

He termed it as a prank for the family. Malla had to agree.

Ronnie doesnt like Malla at all after this prank and he thinks theres something going on which he doesnt know. So he is taking action on his own.


------

Location: Mezbaani

“Ye kya plan hai Vikrant? Did you know about this?”

“Nahi yaar Puneet… I am as surprised as you are with this idea… pata nahi Dad ke dimaag main kya chal raha hai?”

“So you didn't know?”

Vikrant shakes his head in denial.

“Aur Mannat??? Use kisne bulaya? Jaroor tumne hi suggest kiya hoga!!”

Vikrant momentarily pauses and with a pained face replies, “Nahi… use bhi Dad ne bulaya… I was not aware”

Puneet wonders if Vikrant is telling the truth while Vikrant is confused with his line of questioning. Vikrant busies himself in the papers ahead of him, but a question lingers on his mind as well about Ronnie's motives to invite Mannat. Puneet can clearly see Vikrant is distracted.

Both men are trying to gauge the reactions of each other when Puneet’s wicked mind wishes to catch Vikrant again…

“Vaise tumne bataya nahi ki vo prank kis liye tha… or rather kiske liye tha?”

The papers Vikrant is handling suddenly drop to the floor and Puneet hides his chuckle once again. Seeing Vikrant so flustered is a treat indeed. To see how much that question rattles the otherwise cool and composed Vikrant Saluja.

“Chod na… kya karna hai usse tujhe? I told you na… it was a prank… bas aur kuch nahi…”

“Are but why????”

“Puneeeetttttttt….. Jaane de!!!!” the reply is tinged with irritation and sadness.

Vikrant quickly moves away just to avoid Puneets questions and he finally sits down in his chair, going over what just happened a few minutes ago, finally letting out that chuckle. He decides to discuss this with his mom about the new business idea.


Back at home, Raveena is rapidly pacing the room trying to make sense of this new proposal Ronnie has got for Puneet.

“Ronnie bhaisaab ne kuch bataya kyun kar rahe hai?”

“No mom… he didnt say anything… just that we have to work together… me and Vikrant…”

“To phir agar tum dono ko saath hi kaam karna hai to ye seperation kyun?”

“Seperation nahi hai Mom… unhone clearly bola ki ek hi business hai… just 2 verticals…”

“Mujhe ye kuch thik nahi lag raha Puneet beta…. Kuch to gadbad hai…”

“Mom… laga to nahi… anyway ye socho na…. I get to lead… take my own decisions… us Vikrant se to poochna nahi padega har baar….”

Raveena is still occupied in her thoughts when Mannat's name diverts her attention.

“Mannat ka kya? Vo kya karne wali hai?”

“Vo kuch nahi kar rahi Mom… vo bas inventory banane wali hai….”

“Mujhe vo ladki bilkul pasand nahi hai Puneet… aur Ronnie bhaisaab ne use tumhare saath kyun diya??? Kahi nazar rakhne to nahi??”

“Nahi mom… aur vo kar kya legi… main dekh lunga use…”

“Take care beta…. And let me find out on my own ki ye ho kya raha hai iss ghar main…”


About a week later, Ronnie is sitting by his desk reading the papers the lawyer has brought in. Everything seems to be in order and Ronnie decides to discuss this with the boys later in the day. He prepares to put the file away when he notices Neetu standing close by, peering over them. They are not on talking terms since the prank debacle and Ronnie can see Neetu is making attempts to break his silence.

“Suniye ji… main pooch sakti hun ye kya hai?”

Ronnie takes a deep breath, but without turning towards her replies, “Ye vahi hai jo tumhe chahiye tha…”

Neetu is immediately relieved and moves and stands in front of him.

She happily asks, “Sach… aapne sab kuch Vikrant ke naam kar diya?”

Ronnie replies, still upset, “Bilkul nahi…. Aur main ye bewakoofi kabhi nahi karunga…”

“To phir….”

Ronnie replies, trying very hard to control his anger, “Phir kya Neetu… tum samajh bhi rahi ho ki tum kya maang rahi ho??? Aur mujhe to samajh nahi aa raha ki tumhare dimaag main idea aaya kaha se???? Kya Anu aur Puneet hamare bacche nahi hai??? Main unke aisa kaise kar sakta hun??? No… I won't do it…”

“Nahi Ronnie ji… aap samajh nahi rahe hai..”

“Haan nahi samajh raha hun… aur na samjhunga…. Mere liye teeno ek jaise hai… main koi bhedbhav nahi karne wala… chahe mujhe koi bhi kitna hi force kare…”

Neetu is about to say more when she notices Raveena standing by the door.

Raveena comes in and Ronnie turns around to face her.

Raveena looks at both of them and turns to speak to Ronnie when he starts speaking.

“Accha hua tum aa gai Raveena… Puneet ne tumhe bataya to hoga hi…”

Raveena nods… still doubtful.

“Mujhe nahi pata ki kya ho raha hai aur koun kar raha hai, ya karva raha hai (he throws an angry glance at Neetu saying this) … par jo bhi hai… hamare bacchho ke bhavishya ka sawaal hai… Maine kuch decisions liye hai… and trust me vo sabke bhale ke liye hi hai…. Tumhe koi doubts ho to mujh se pooch sakti ho… but for now please understand that I am trying to protect what's ours… I am protecting the Salujas…”


Raveena peers into his eyes and can understand he is speaking the truth… She turns to look at Neetu and sees her panicking, terrified and confused. Raveena realizes Ronnie has some motive but it's not the same as Neetu. She doesn't reply, quietly picks a copy of the draft agreement Ronnie has prepared for her and leaves without a word.


Back in her room, she reads through the document multiple times yet cannot find fault in it. Something that would tell her if Puneet is to be disadvantaged in any manner.

She recalls all that Ronnie said and specifically the fact about protecting Salujas. She decides to dig deeper on her own.

So nice to see Ronnie with a functional spine & a subdued Neetu.

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Nice part. Loved reading it and eagerly waiting for next part.

Please include some ManVik moments also.

I am loving this Puneet and Vikrant. Hope in the show also they pay attention to their bonding instead siblings rivalry.

Thanks for tagging me.

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Posted by: sh8l0a · 2 months ago

Hello guys , I am Shilpa. Have been a fan of ayesha and adnan from there previous shows. I am hooked to Manvik! But the current track had made...

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