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Juhi

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Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#21

I luved the latest chapter Pooh! 👏 👏 👏 Can't wait till you write the next one! 😛

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Sania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

Yay, you updated! Awesome chapter Pooh! Loved it! Tanisha deserved a slap!

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POOJA

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

CHAPTER SIXTY TWO

She starts to cry,trying to look innocent😭..He leaves her there as his mum calls him on the terrace..for the function.. 😡

He comes up and searches for Mamta and Ganapathy in the crowd..and finaaly sees them...He wals excitedly to them...to hold his junior.. 😳

"Junior,come to Pappa....😳" Ganapathy smiles and gets excited to get into his lap...Akshay picks him up from Mamta's lap and hugs 🤗him....Mamta kept silent all the time...😕

He looks at her..and feels sad..but then he smiles and says, "Mamta,why can't you forget everything??Tanisha is lying..She even tried to intimidate me by telling me that you and Sid planned all this..and made her a part of this,cos you and...Sid....you both are in love.... 😕 "

"Akshay!!!" she looks at him shockingly... 😡

"But....i don't believe her..and that's why 'am saying she's a lier..."

"Enough..Akshay i never thought you'd stoop to such low circumstances....that you'd cook up such nasty and cheap stories to prove your innocence and to hide your unforgivable faults 😡 😭 😭 I hate you...and I hate myself..for having loved you more than anything in this world and i thought that you were the blessing ,the most cherishable one..given to me by my "GB"..but i was wrong...., 😭 😭 Hoe could i not see the wickedness and the devil behind this face...Please leave me...and my child..alone... 😭 😭 😭 "

She walks away snatching Ganapathy from his hand...he stands there helpless...Tanisha comes there and and says, "See what did i tell you?She simply doesn't want to patch up with you...and she fears it the most cos then she won't be able to go to her Sid...Akshay..believe me...i won't cheat you..cuz i love you..."

Akshay insides boil with fury😡...but he thinks it better to go away from her cos then she won't be alive...

The moon comes out in the night....Dadi calls Mamta who was reluctant to come first ,but had to give up....

"Mamta,this is your first Karva Chauth..and i know you are a girl who values her culture above everything...and i know for a small fight even if it has happened or not..as i don't know...,i want you to forgive him and come out and break the vrath...Akshay is very lucky to have a wife like you...and i know whatever happens you'll always love him and your love will be a lesson for others...Come beta..the moon is out...."

Mamta has tears in her eyes and thinks "Yes, Dadi our love is a lesson..no one should fall in love..it's blind and gives only pain...just pain and nothing else.. 😭 😭 😭 "

The pooja begins...Mamta gets ready and comes to the terrace with her thali...Her eyes looks for someone and suddenly ....

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago

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Juhi

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Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#24

Wonderful chapter Pooh!! 👏 👏 👏 I hope Akshay and Mamta will be together again soon.😳

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POOJA

@pj2012

Voyager

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

CHAPTER SIXTY THREE

....suddenly Sid pops in front of her...😕

"Sid,what are you doing here?" she asked looking confused😕...her eyes still looking for someone...

"Mamta,i came with Tanisha..her sisters called us...But,what are you doing here??Why are you doing this for Akshay???I really don't get this..that man hurts you..drstroys your life,your friends life and you still pray for his long life...do you still care for him Mamta..." he asked looking frustrated...

"Yes, Sid i do😡...but not for him..but for his family..who love me as their own daughter...I had to be here for them..." She turns looking agitated😡 and crushes a feeling to cry inside her heart...

Rani comes to her with Ganapathy😳...and tells her that she's looking gorgeous today😳 in this saree that Akshay had brought for her....Mamta smiles, trying not to make her sad and says , "Thankyou Rani...But where's your Bhaiyya??"

"Oh!! I forgot to tell you😕...he was here only...but suddenly his temperature shot up,probably cos he was in the rain yesterday night... " Mamta remembered him coming to her house yesterday night... " and he's in his room...he's having fever....I was hust going to call him...but now when you are here why don't you go and call him" and she leaves before Mamta could say anything.......

Mamta unwillingly walks😕 to Akshay's room...actually their room...in which she had spent the most beautiful part of her life that had changed into a nightmare😭....She walks slowly thinking about the yester years ........😳

When she was in the middle of the stair case...she tripped on her saree and was about to fall...when Akshay held her😳...and lifted her in her arms😳...Mamta looked at him 😳and wanted to get down...but he was adamant...She could feel his body was really hot..with fever...and still he managed to smile at her...😳

"Akshay,please put me down...What's wrong with you??I say put me down...Akshay!!!! Akshay...you are not well😭...you should be in your bed😭" Then she suddenly realise that she was still worried for him😕...and Akshay puts her down..and holds her hand😳...and pulls her to the terrace where everyone was waiting for them😊...even Tanisha and Sid 🤢stared at them from a distance...thinking that there plan has probably failed...and that Mamta has forgiven him...and they'd never get them...now......

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago

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Sania

@sania_12

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#26

Thanks for the awesome chapter Pooh! Hope you contrinue soon. 😳

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jays29

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Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#27

When are you gonna add more chapters??

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Juhi

@~*Juhi*~

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#28

Great chapter Pooh! Can't wait till you post the next one! 😳 😳

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POOJA

@pj2012

Voyager

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Posted: 18 years ago

#29

CHAPTER SIXTY FOUR

They both look at everyone with a strange kind of twinkle in their eyes😳..probably they both wanted to live to the fullest whatever time they both had got to spend together...And Mamta too couldn't resist herself,her anger had taken a backseat...for the time being!!Mamta looked like a new bride😳 and Akshay was looking extremely happy😃.....

Rishi and Rakhi were just speechless with happiness to see them together after what dramatic turns had twisted their happy world...Dadi comes to them and take them to the centre😳 .....

She smoothens Akshay's hair and smiles at him... "Bolu!!😳" as she sweetly called him.... "Bolu...you've given your dadi her most precious gift in the form of Mamta...She has brought so much of love and happiness to this family...I'm so very touched..and i wish and pray to God..that you both stay together forever and ever...like this..my blessings are with you..."

Akshay and Mamta look at eachother with a kind of longing and pity.... 😕 😭Suddenly Mamta took her eyes off him and looked away... " Bolu..bas bas..nazar lag jayegi 😆 ..meri beti ko..who's looking so beautiful.. 😳 ...you both can look into eachother's eyes for a lifetime..but now i want her to be with me...so now you stay here alone cuz 'am taking your Mamta with me for some time... 😉 "

She then takes Mamta away from the crowd to a far corner leaving Akshay with Ganapathy😕.....Akshay looked behind them for some time and then turning towards his son said😊, "Your mum still loves me!!! 😳 I can see it in her eyes...and now....... 😆 .....Pappa and Junior will spend the entire night playing...right my love..." 😳 😆

Ganapathy smiles at his dad as if there was some kind of mystery in his innocent smile..then the lill' one looks at his mum..and smiles .... 😳

Meanwhile...Tanisha and Sid were searching for the truth whether Akshay and Mamta have united actually or was this all some kind os acting going on🤢......

Tanisha goes to her sisters and tell them... "so, don't you two know that Akshay and Mamta...are..." "Tanisha.. 😡 " but before she could complete Akshay comes there and Tanisha eats the rest of her words with panic... 😕 "Akshay...hhh.. 😕 😊 i was just 😕 ..." she wipes off the sweat trickling down her forehead😕... she searches for a hankerchief..Akshay hands her his own... "Wipe your sweat Tanisha...doesn't suit you..."

"Akshay😕...thanks😊..i was just telling them how you and Mamta both love eachother😊 😕..."

Aditi frowns😡 and gives a sarcastic smile to Akshay "Huh!! 🤢 love each other...that we'll know soon...Mamta her wife..she's very smart....she knew I couldn't become a mum..and Radhika was a model so she also didn't wanted a child now..but she ..very smart...she brought a child to this family even before getting married.....love my foot!!!"

"Bhabhi...!!!" 😡Akshay shouts in anger....and raises his hand..

Aditi looks at him in anger and at once begins to cry when she saw her husband😭,Akshay's brother Abhay coming to them... "Akshay, how dare you??She's your bhabi and what has happened to you...that you've lost your mind...."

Akshay looks sad😭 and tensed😕..He feels sorry..for his behaviour... "Bhaiyya ...'am sorry....I couldn't control myself when she said...that my Mamta😭 ..she cheated me..."

Abhay looks at her wife with a skeptical look😕...

Soon Radhika jumps in between like an uninvited rocket and spurts out lies to hide her sister's hideous mind... "Bhaiyya...he's lying...Adu di never said like that..infact she congratulated him for his child Ganapathy..as we all were not here when he was born..and he..he's defaming my sis...how rude???" she also sobs like a crocodile 😭

Abhay's anger fumes😡 and he slaps Akshay😡..who looks very sad😭 and shattered at his two Bhabis behaviour and walks away from that place......Akshay takes Ganapathy and says.. "You are my child..." 😭

Sid comes to Tanisha and says, "Wow, we wanted fire but this is a blast😆...Now the heat will begin😡...and all of them will be pulling each other's hair for one person...Mamta😆..and then she'll be thrown out of this house and instictively from Akshay's heart also..Good work Tanisha👏..you know how to grill your sisters mind???ha ha 😃 " and they both smile wickedly😆..as if they had won some battle...🤢

Unknown of all this at the far corner of the terrace Dadi smiled 😊at Mamta and took out an old and expensive looking necklace and places it into Mamta's hand..Mamta looks perplexed.. "Beta...i wanted to give this old family neclace to you months ago..when you first came to our house and made it heaven...you've given my Akshay all love he could ever wnat by giving him a child..his Ganapathy...Ganapathy is the star of our eyes..our world and thanks to you..he makes me remember of lill' Akshay....he's just like his father...😳"

"Dadi" 😕 😭

"Anyways, now looking at you and Akshay together with my adorable grandson,Ganapathy 😳 ..i feel the time has come...I feel so happy....You look like a perfect family and this necklace is just a small gift to you fom this old lady..my love to you...this has been in our family since years and it's very expensive but its monetary value is very less when compared to the prestige and affection associated with it since ages...and it's our family's custom to give it to the most abled daughter in law in our family..i was waiting for years..and now i've found its true owner and beta it's you...you've proved it by the sacrifice and love for Akshay...You will never allow this family to be broken apart..i can trust you blindly...you promise me that you'll keep this family together for ever...Promise me..."

"I promise you Dadi...but i can't take this ...." she looks with tears oozing out of her emotionally charged eyes.. 😭 😭 The tears then freeze in her eyes when she looks into the old eyes...she is choked with emotions welling up in her..to burst out finally..from what she was undergoing all these days after what Akshay did to her.... 😭 She could have bursted out any moment..she falters for words and finally with whatever courage was left in her she manages to look into the old but twinkling eyes,she then falls to her feet... "Dadima..i can't take thisI no longer 'am a part of this home,this family..I don't want to betray your love....Please forgive me..." 😭 😭

On seeing all this all other family members gather around them...Akshay was playing with Ganapathy unaware of all this😳....

Rakhi looking scared and tensed😕 comes to them and tells a shocked Dadi.. "Ma..you know her...she's so down-to-earth that she doesn't feel herself to be deserving enough to get this family treasure..." 😕 Dadi then sighs😳 ,feeling relieved😃Aditi and Radhika widen their eyes at this😡...with frustration and anger..Dadi turns to Mamta..and lifts her up from her feet 😳 "Oh!! my child you are so innocent..this doesn't belong to anyone but you..and now you've proved that..i have no doubts left.... "

Dadi hugs her🤗,Mamta is shocked and looks at Rakhi..who pleads to her to be silent..Mamta is helpless 😕 😭

Dadi calls Aditi and asks her to call Akshay...she frowns 😡at this and says, "I'm no one's servant to be working for this woman..this Mamta...She's very smart..i knew it from the day she became my sister Tanisha's friend....she knows how to convince people to her likes..."

"Aditi!!!" 😡

But she goes away from there with her sister Radhika...Rani comes and says, "Dadi i'll go and call bhaiyya..he's down in the hall with Ganapathy....."

Dadi smiles and says , "Go beta.."

Rajive and his wife ask sorry for their daughter in laws's behaviour.....Dadi says, " it is okay"

Rani sees Akshay in the hall playing with Ganapathy😳 and some other kids...She smiles ..and calls him.. "Bhaiyya Dadi is calling you up on the terrace.."

Akshay reaches the terrace with Ganapathy..and looks at the entire family gathered around Mamta and Dadi with surprise.. 😕 ..

"What happened? 😕 Why's everyone looking at me like this?" he then turns to Mamta who was stealing her eyes... "Mamt 😭 😕 ...have you 😕 ...have you told them everything!!" he says looking at her apprehensively.. 😕

Dadi stops Mamta and comes to him and takes Ganapathy from him and hands him over to Mamta..now Akshay wqs sure..the truth was out and like Mamta Dadi too hated him now..he lost everyone he loved..the last hope of getting his love back,his Dadi too now seemed like his hater 😭

"D-a-d-i 😕 "

"What Dadi..??? 😡she's told me everything "

Akshay is shattered and fumbles ... "Dadi.... 😕 😕 I'm sorry..I didn't wanted to hurt her or anyone else....I'm innocent..please believe me.."

"Akshay...no you are at fault and you'll receive punishment for that..you are not innocent.."

Akshay looks at her... 😭

"yes.." and she holds his ear and smiles.. 😆 .. "You've almost forgotten about your wife afetr getting your son..you really don't seem to spend much time with her now.... 😉 I won't tolerate this..."

"Dadi 😊 " he looks surprised and relieved 😃 and then smiles at Mamta 😳 😃 ..who too smiles at him..making Tanisha and Sid feeling bad... 🤢

"I order you..to take my daughter in law somewhere out and spend some time with her..only you and her...understood...stupid.." she taps his head 😆

He smiles... 😊 😳

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago

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Nishtha

@Nishtha

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#30

guys soon i am goign to stop watching mamta instead will wait for your and jaggu FF'c they are great and way better than the show itself!!!

pooh great chapter i just read this 64th chapter and fell in love staright away great great great..writing!!!
take a bow!!!
seriously 👏 👏 👏