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Posted: 8 years ago
both update is amazing
waiting to see now what kunti will say to drupadi
hope she don't hurt her again with her word
or try to impose her thinking
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Those were the days we lived in Hastinapur. Yudhi was crowned prince after the Gurukul training was over. Santanav Bheeshm sent Arjun to defeat Yavana King who was hostile. It was not an easy war to win as Yavana King was an expert in warfare.Arjun's victory over Panchal King gave his grandfather confidence that he can tackle the rival very well. " Kunti stopped to take breath.
Chitra asked curiously" How did he win the war? Really it was a great feat to defeat Yavanas at such a young age." Subhadra persuaded Kunti." Continue Bua What happened then?"

Panchali silently waited to hear her beloved husband 's exploits at such a young age."

Gandhari who is listening to them proudly stated." And he was just nineteen years old.He lead his army like a seasoned warrior. His grandfather beamed with joy hearing his victory news."

Kunti nodded her head and smiled." The King arranged the krauncha vyuha and thought Arjun could not counter it as he is still a child compared to him. But Phalgun learnt all the vyuhas from Guru Dron. He easily answered by arranging his army in Garuda vyuha. The King was taken aback and challenged Arjun to fight with him on one on one basis. He could not imagine his opponent has skill in using every weapon. He was easily defeated by Phalgun . The King felt humiliated and returned back.

Then the King planned to escape in order to avoid an official submission before Hastinapur.During midnight he along with a few of his followers started through the forest path in disguise.Phalgun who suspected the King from the begining did not sleep and got intimated by his spy about the way the King escaped.He followed them in lightening speed on horse back. Still there was two krosh distance between him and his rival. He shot his arrow with such precision that the horses were forced to halt and created havoc for their riders.Phalgun reached the King and injured him with his feather arrows. The King was taken captive and then released after he paid large ransom.

Kunti fondly touched the bracelet and revealed. " This was Yavana queen's bracelet made with nine gems. Phalgun asked me to wear it as it was a mark of his first triumph.Now I renounced everything. I am on my way to liberation. This should rightfully belong to Phalgun's first wife.I am not offering it to the queen of Aryavarth. I offer this to her who was won by him through his valour and got him spectacular fame." Kunti approached Draupadi and said." I feel it is precious. I hope you also keep it with you till you renounce every thing."

Panchali was dumbstruck .Arjun's symbol of victory Kunti gave it to her? She was confused.

She asked the same doubt when Arjun came to her in the night.Arjun laughed and questioned." Are you not happy wearing this? Chitra would have danced with joy if she received this."

Panchali confronted him " What do you think? I don't have regard for your valour? Even today I wear the black beeds chain that you brought from Kamarup Desh." She showed the beautiful short chain that she never parted with."

Arjun did not step back. He argued." But you gave away my present the sari I brought from Kamrup to Subhadhra . Remember? "
Panchali turned her face away and admitted." Yes. Because I was angry with you for bringing her."
Arjun pulled her to him and observed his wife who was lost in her memories. He still remember how difficult it was for him to convince her of his love !

Panchali looked at him and understood. They both are reminiscing those beautiful moments. She raised her hand and showed the bracelet." Finally I got this as your wife not as the queen"
Arjun kissed her hand and whispered in his husky voice." You deserve it Krishnaa.



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bubulswt

both update is amazing

waiting to see now what kunti will say to drupadi
hope she don't hurt her again with her word
or try to impose her thinking

Thanks a lot.
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update
loved it finally drupadi got some thing
from kunti not as queen but as arjun wife
loved it
I won't be online from 9th to 16th march
gonna miss your update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update. 😊 Finally draupadi got her identity not as a queen but as arjun's wife by kunti. loved it... Draupadi deserves it. U r a brilliant writer and potraying everything beautifully. keep up the good work..👍🏼
Edited by Divu55 - 8 years ago
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Dhritarashtra's Exile date is confirmed by Vyasa. It will be on Kartika paurnami.Gandhari,Sanjaya and Vidura will follow the King. As for Kunti she still did not get approval by her sons for her retirement into woods. The Pandavas and their wives believed she would oblige and stay back.Only two are aware of the impending event Sahadev and Arjun. Both are youngest one among the five and another among Kunti's sons. The two brothers tried to find solace pretending to be unaware of the inevitable.

Sahadev had tears in his eyes. He stared at Arjun who has moisture in his eyes.They both are sitting in the private chamber that is meant for confidential meetings.They are waiting for the remaining three as they have to discuss Dhritarastra's request to grant funds so that he can perform sacred rites for his children.
Arjun asked Sahadev." Did mata reveal the reason for her decision?"
Sahadev nodded his head." No. But I know it is because of her guilty feeling towards Karna."
Arjun's face became dull." Why should she feel guilty? I was the one who dispatched him to other world. I incur sin for that. But Madhav said he should be punished because he supported evil Duryodhan
Sahadev agreed." Yes. He is no less than Duryothan. But Mata feels it is her fault to leave him after he was born.So she wants to redeem herself through penance and service to elders. But whom shall we call as Mata? I spend most of my day with her only. If she had gone...Sahadev's voice got choked .

Arjun took his younger brother in his arms. Sahadev is expressing himself. But how could he part with her? Though he always roamed away from her he felt for her.He used to feel relieved placing his head on her lap.Even now he enjoys when she arranges his curly hair properly.

The guard came and informed that the meeting has been postponed for next day.

Back in Dwaraka Krishna is relaxing at Rukmini's chamber after a hectic day . The Yadave Chiefs met to discuss the behaviour of young Yadava children in teens . Surprisingly they are becoming uncontrollable with their way ward behaviour causing inconvenience to their elders. Jambavati's son Samba is an active member of that group.The Yadava elders asked Krishna to interfere and make things fall in place.Krishna resorted to silence and Balarama fumed at those who tried to point finger at his brother. He thundered." It is not Kanha's duty to solve each and every problem.Ofcourse we will deal with Samba in our own way. I hope you all should flex your muscles and controll your own children."

Rukmini placed her hand on Krishna's forehead. Krishna smiled and said." How is father today? Feeling better?" Vasudeva is not keeping fit these days. Even after good medical help he is not able to recover. Devaki depends on Rukmini who always served them like her own parents.

Rukmini replied in a soft voice." He ate better today. He is constantly remembering Abhimanyu. He still could not come out of his shock ." How could Kanha allow Abhi to become a victim? Did he not think about Subhadra? " He wails.

Krishna had a calm expression on his face.After a while he said." You know it Rukmini...
Rukmini nodded her head." I know it Swami. Still I feel for Subhadra. She is like my daughter."

Krishna said." I understand your concern for Bhadra. But she has Parikshit. Think about Panchali. She lost every one. She loves Abhi more than her son's.Still she never tries to share Pari with Bhadra. "

Rukmini agreed." She is an exception Swami. She is Devine."
Krishna quipped ." Like you she is Devine Rukmini." His words poured his immense love for his wife . She is his eternal soulmate.
When will Satya come Swami?" Rukmini asked. Satya went to celebrate her father's birth day.

Krishna laughed and asked." Missing her already? She fought with me the day before she left.She accused me of becoming absent minded due to my separation with Parth. She said I won't miss her like I miss Parth. "
Rukmini smiled." Satya is right. All of us combined can not occupy your Arjun's place in your heart."

Krishna cornered her." Finally you are also jealous of my love for him?"

Rukmini answered defiantly." Never. I know you are Nar Narayan.The twins. I learnt the truth long before. " Krishna appreciated her with his loving glance.

Pragati rushed towards her father who almost lost his balance and stopped himself and Pragati from falling.He kissed her on her forehead and asked." Princess, when did you come from Gurumata? How is your trip to Kashi? How did you feel seeing Bholenath?"

Kripi took Pragati to Kashi to have a darsan of Visweswar. Arjun sent his confidential officers with them. He knew they returned but he wanted Pragati to stay with Kripi for some more time. He thought Pragati can not swallow the fact that her Daadi is leaving her soon.

Panchali just entered and observed the father daughter duo. They look so endearing together she thought. Pragati clasped Panchali's neck and exclaimed." Maa you became more beautiful. How come? Isn't it Pitasri? " she asked Arjun.

Panchali avoided her husband's look. She knew how that look is. She doesn't want to get caught in those hazel eyes...her daughter is watching after all.
Edited by ltelidevara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bubulswt

amazing update

loved it finally drupadi got some thing
from kunti not as queen but as arjun wife
loved it
I won't be online from 9th to 16th march
gonna miss your update

Its OK but miss your feed back.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Divu55

Awesome update. 😊 Finally draupadi got her identity not as a queen but as arjun's wife by kunti. loved it... Draupadi deserves it. U r a brilliant writer and potraying everything beautifully. keep up the good work..👍🏼

Thanks a lot. I wish I could do justice and live up to your genuine praise.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pragati could not swallow what she heard. Her grand mother who is like a mother to her is leaving after two months. She confronted her." Dadi please stay back. Why did you take such a decision? You know I hardly enjoyed my parents' presence. But finally when I got them back you want to leave? Not done."
Pragati hugged Kunti tightly and nodded her head looking up at her.

Kunti smiled but desisted from any argument. She knew Pragati will not reconcile to the fact. But she is too young to understand why she took her decision. She changed the topic." You went away for two months Pari missed you so much.Go and meet your dear Parikshit. " Pragati's eyes twinkled and she ran away to meet Pari.

Arjun who observed everything crossed his mother." Why did you divert Pragati? What would you do or say when the day arrives? She will be depressed."

Kunti did not relent." I entrust you Phalgun. You should convince her and prepare her."
Arjun refused outrightly." I am not convinced of your decision. How could I convince my daughter? Think again." Kunti patted on his cheek and said." You will do it. For my sake. You never disobey my word though it causes pain to you."

Arjun understood what she meant to say.He obeyed her word and shared his wife.
He turned back and walked away while Kunti stared at his disappearing figure with tearful eyes.

It is a warm afternoon at Hatinapur. The Sun just started his journey towards west making way to gentle breeze that brought relief to every one.

Bheem,Arjun and Sahadev are sitting in the mango grove of the Royal garden. They are discussing about the impending rituals and charitable deeds planned by King Dhritarashtr before he leave for the forest.Arjun is trying to convince his Bhrata Bheem who is miffed and dissatisfied. He scolded Arjun" Why are you so tender at heart? Just now we performed Aswamedh and spent most of the funds.Where is the necessity to spend again?Let him go to forest without much pomp. No need to burden ourselves."

Arjun is desparate. He doesn't want to disappoint Dhritarashtr. At the same time he hates to hurt his Bhrata Bheem.He looked at Sahadev for help. But his younger brother is afraid of Bheem.

Arjun pleaded with Bheem." Bhrata! He may have done us wrong but now he is helpless. We should oblige for the last time and send him peacefully."

Arjun added in a low voice." I will offer the gold I brought during my conquest. Let us not spend from treasury." Bheem looked at him and stated." You are hopeless my brother.You won't change. Do as you wish.But for the last time."

Yudhishtir felt elated and offered his share also.

Panchali looked at him and smiled." Finally you are able to convince your Bhrata Bheem. Quite an achievement.He came to me and ordered me to control your ways. " Restrict him from throwing away his hard earned money for the sake of undeserving people."He told me.

Arjun caught hold of her shoulder and asked." So you are going to do that now?"

Panchali bit her lip and confessed." Yes Ofcourse. Your Bhrata Bheem's order."

Arjun smiled at her and placed his hand on her Chaabis hanging on her waist.They both remembered the beautiful moments of past and got struck in good old Indraprasth memories.

Arjun got back from his past and pulled her closer.He touched her lower lip with his forefinger and asked her ." What do you think If I give away my share ? Am I wrong in offering it to Jyesht Pita? "

Draupadi pushed back his curls and said fixing her gaze." Arjun, Why are you asking me? Since the begining of our journey it is you who accumulated wealth and made us prosperous. You never felt any urge to use it for your own happiness. You offered everything to us and never let any wish unfulfilled. We lost everything due to your Eldest's weakness.Again you got back our kingdom with your valour. The treasure you brought got utilised for Aswamedha. If you now want to offer it to your Jyesht Pita what is wrong with that? Go ahead. You do as you wish."

Panchali stretched her hand and gave him the chabis. She confessed sincerely." I don't mind offering my ornaments also if you want.At this point of my life I need our togetherness more than ornaments."

Arjun took her in his arms posessively and assured." No need of your ornaments. My share and Eldest's offering is sufficient for Jyesht Pita. I just want reassurance from you. You are my moral support. " He then cheekily remarked." Anyway Yajnaseni looks ravishing even without ornaments. Proven fact.Isnt it?" Arjun removed her bangles and golden chain and proceeded to take away her ear rings. He took off her mang ka teeka and spread her hair flowing on her back.

In the moon light that is penetrating inside Panchali's beauty shone with splendour making Parth mesmerised. " Surely it makes a difference " he whispered. Panchali questioned him with her eyes.
Arjun kissed her earlobe and stated." Devine origin. Surely being a fire born you stand above others. Talk of the Antahpur,Then at Indraprasth,now at Hastinapur."


Edited by ltelidevara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow! lovely.. specially the last part.. Beautiful! It was fab

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