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Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Wonderful, to the point and true to the original characters. Its always a pleasure to read anything you write geetha because you never alter the character just for the sake of your story. And that requires some real skill in writing and a certain mastery on the epic itself

Wow Shruti, thats the nicest thing any one has ever said. I do my best not to alter the characters, but don't know how far it is successful. Good to know I have succeeded to some extent. 😊

This was really sweet!! Every one says that it was one sided love! U poured the inner emotion of them! Arjun had different from of love for his different wives. so it would be highly injustice if it is discriminated. When the real arjun didn't, many people makes it up! and subhadra was also not a dream girl! She didn't fell for him at once! I am very glad that you held up the inner emotion of their life.

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

like the story

Thank you dear. 😊

Originally posted by: aanvi98

This was really sweet!! Every one says that it was one sided love! U poured the inner emotion of them! Arjun had different from of love for his different wives. so it would be highly injustice if it is discriminated. When the real arjun didn't, many people makes it up! and subhadra was also not a dream girl! She didn't fell for him at once! I am very glad that you held up the inner emotion of their life.

Thank you. Yes, Arjun loved Subhadra and was so desperate to have her that he abducted her. And I do not think Subhadra was the kind of woman to fall at once for an abductor, no matter how charming.

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Beautiful OS dear😊

Thank you. 😊

Originally posted by: sadhana.np

Awesome os

Thank you😊

Awesome OS.
R u continuing it??

Lovely OS. Loved the description of Arjun...

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Awesome os
thnx 4 pm

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: sweetlife

Awesome OS.
R u continuing it??

Thank you. No, it is one shot😳