funny SS : Arjun's troubles and his saviour (ud pg 4,6,8,10,12,14,16)

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Yajnaseni

@Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Sorry Aru Di but it is kind of difficult to make me laugh. So i didn't find the story particularly funny. But it is a good plot. I believe the next parts will be more comical. All the best and nice characterization!

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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

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shit.. i'm already laughing like a fool..

north south east west.. lolzz.. where will rangeela raja arjun go?

more than panchaali i'm feeling bad for him..

I'm waiting for the real humour to start now...

and wow! I loved draupadi's reason of not talking to Uloopi at all coz she is the one fofr whom arjun broke his wow of celibacy..

and chitrangada.. my god! she is gonna give a panchaali a run for her money in attitude department.

subhi is so sweet..

I think arjun will leave everyone and go to govind.. and then he will get to know that govind had double the number of wives to him.. then what must be his condition?

please continue soon..

i'm eager to read.

and thanks a lot for the pm..

love,

tich.

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Loved it, Aru!! It is so beautiful!! Haan ham krodhit hai Chitra, Uloopi par!! Aur wo uchit bhi hai!!! Beyond words!! Chitra to hame chunauti dene ki doo sahas kar rahi hai!! Aur Uloopi ki to ham baat bhi nahi karenge!! Ab hamare priya Aryaputra kahan jayenge!! Shayad apne Govind ke paas sujaav mangne kyonki iss vishay pe to un hi ko atyadhik gyaan hai!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

lol don't expect aru will write something funny of varaali and cotswolds standard coz is never her genre if she says funny it has to be of her kind only means she can't be out from her genre of flooding emotions.

and whoever hopes aru will ever give any arjun-Panchali good scenes never keep false hope, if aru ever writes anything on them the sun will rise from west lol

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Loved it Aru.Loved your description of Panchali's equations with her co wives.And finally my Chitra ...my ever favourite.Loved her character description.And now waiting for my Arjun to have troubles😉and his saviour to enter..

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Antacid :P

@Spring-Dew

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wow Arjun'd b'day prep 😎 mixed wid sm spice😈

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Wonderful ss dear

Finaly Arjun has to face all wives together😆

Finally I could find chitragandha somewhere 😊 really a brilliant one⭐️

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Poor...poor Sabyasachi!!! He'll probably end up running to Madhav for help given the fact he is staying with a fiery mighty empress; a warrior princess, a headstrong woman and a simpleton with determination! It'll be an interesting read!!