funny SS : Arjun's troubles and his saviour (ud pg 4,6,8,10,12,14,16)

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Loved How You Managed To Make Us Laugh At The Extraordinary Fight As Well As Be Overwhelmed By The Love Of The Queens ! And Kanha Toh, As Usual Is The Best !!

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Wow...Hats off to you Aru...I could not have imagined a perfect ending for this funny yet memorable SS 👏

Firstly, the description of the magnificent palace, the way you have compiled each & every style & flavour of each of Arjun's wife in the palace was beautiful 😊

Secondly, the way Krishna made Arjun realized how each of his wife wanted to make his janamteethi special for him in their own special way 😳

Thirdly, the ending, the Parav part was so magical...I simply loved the last line...

'Waves of divine melody transported Parth world of blissful slumber. Gudakesha too cant resist Leeladhar's leela' 😳 😊

Wonderful Aru...hope u will come up with yet another beautiful piece soon 😛

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Thanks for the PM. Really loved all your updates . Very nice ending😃

Edited by Nonie12345 - 10 years ago

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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+ 36

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Superb ending Di

loved it to the core!!

everything was so beautifully penned!👏 Hats off to u!

thanks for pm!

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

my god!! what a perfect ending of d story! u never fail to mesmerize ur readers!! The description oof the palace is soo beautiful I can visualize easily!! and the last part was divine its indeed a treat fr paravians frm you!! loved it! nad yes apecial mention to dis line got d hidden point 😉 "He always wonders what makes Panchali so attached with the brightness of the Sun."

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taruna

@taruna40

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

interesting aru as always

tx for the pm

very mesmerizing

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Aru this os should have been named as Mesmerisingly Paravlicious⭐️I lovvveddd it so very much.Loved the way Madhav materialised each of Arjun's wives ideas and made his Parth realise how special he was for his patnis.Loved the way you described how the personalities of each wife reflected in their ideas.And finally I was swept off my feet by the special gift Madhav gave to his Parth.Nothing could have been better.Not only Gudakesha but me too was carried into the world of bliss through your story Loved it loved it and loved it

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

thanks to everyone for liking this ss i am grateful to you all

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Wow...What an ending!!...Marvellous...How beautifully U have written...Hats off!👏👏

Madhav..brilliantly reveals to Arjun, the deep n pure love of his queens towards him..

Arjun,how cutely he asking for a gift from madhav...n the gift ,which Madhav presents to Parth was very precious n divine one,which cannot be compensated with anyother things...

Such an expert writer u r!!...keep it up!...

Thanks for the pm..😊