Pandu and Kunti - A forbidden love os part 3 (A) in page 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Well written, chitra!! I am sorry but i cannot send PMs for the FF as i am quite busy!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
C'mon i don't lyk suspence...cute little cat?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Such a kuchi choo & sweet update 😛

Pandu wondering --- Tigress Pritha suddenly becoming adorable Kitty Pritha 😆 Nice

Post ur Part B soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Wow lovely update. The suspense will kill me. Please update soon
A small request please PM me when you update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
LOL! Akhir Maharathi Bheem ki mata hai... The part was beautiful and update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Writing on behalf of chitra,
Part 3 B,

Kunti truly had no answer to the question so as to why she was feeling jealous of madri for this guy in front of her who was stranger to her but vaguely familiar. Getting back to scene, kunti said,
" I need not answer to any of your questions. Just give reasoning for your act!"
" reasoning, huh? I myself don't know tthe reason"
" So you are so shameless that you just kiss a girl because you felt like and you tell it so confidently?"
Saying it she started moving only to be pulled back by pandu by her waist who pinned her to a nearby wall and said,
" not some vague reason, dear!!! A reason which world never knew, a reason which I cherish and you would too later" he said while some of the flashbacks came into their minds.
FLASHBACK,
Pandu was really happy after winning Kunti's hand in the swayamvar and they were soon tied in a wedding lock in a extravagant way. He was dazzled by the smile on Kunti's face which deep inside regretted for not telling the truth of her life to the most important person in her life. But the joy didn't last long as Pandu got the news of war of Madra Rajya and when he asked Kunti if it was okay for her if he left her alone on their wedding night. The replies which Kunti gave him, won his heart all over again. But sadly the already stolen heart was to be shared with Madra Kumari Madri. Which he regretted but couldn't refuse as the situation would result in a war.
FLASHBACK ENDS,
they were lost in each other with a determination in their heart that no one could separate them when they heard a sound of falling books.

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TBC
Hope you liked it!!!
I never wrote on Pandu and Kunti so I apologise for the update!!!
Please comment and like!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
It was nice darling.
And knowing that you have not written anything on Pandu and Kunti ever. You did exceedingly well.
Loved the flashback and the pinning part!
Stay blessed with the gift of writing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh dear, trust me, you have written it beautifully!! The Flashback part was beautiful.. I guess the books fell from Madri's hand.. Anyway update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes

It was nice darling.

And knowing that you have not written anything on Pandu and Kunti ever. You did exceedingly well.
Loved the flashback and the pinning part!
Stay blessed with the gift of writing!

Thanks a lot, darling!!!! Credits of the gift go to God!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic

Oh dear, trust me, you have written it beautifully!! The Flashback part was beautiful.. I guess the books fell from Madri's hand.. Anyway update soon!!

Thanks a lot, my priya sakhi!!!! I think i will have to do the next part too!!! So i will do as soon as possible!!!

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