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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_chitra

ok here is d update..sorry could'nt pm u ppl..
thanks for ur awesome support n love..
i will do another update..n guys, plz say if u want me to turn this into a FF..or u want this to end after 3rd part.. 😉

2nd chapter
she was so restless for the past 2 days..that she decided to confront him..she was tensed but what could she do?
and he was very busy to talk to her about anything...she got up from a bad dreamcthst he was killed..but shook her head vigourosly and got ready for college..the thought of confronting him gave her goose bumps..then she rushed down stairs to see her elder bro havimg breakfast with his newly wed wife-devaki..who was serving..she said hi to everyone..took a piece of bread n went outside..thedriver called out to her: baby ji..aaye..aaj maine gaane bhi lagaya hai..!!..but pritha was too lost in her thoughts to reply him..and took her scooty to college..
AT THE COLLEGE
pandu was smiling to his bro..who was a fighter with nerdy glasses 😆 ...n then he looked at a speedy scooty..purple in colour and he expected a teacher to get down from it..but it was our pritha..all the boys looked towards her..she was like an angel..coming down from heaven..but dhrity(dritrashtra) was looking at another girl (gandhari) gauri..who also had nerdy glasses..pandu wondered"shall i talk to her?"
COLLEGE CEREMONY
every person in the college was in d auditoriam..but kunti was tensed..no..she was not hosting the ceremony..she was tensed because of pandu's awesome smiles and hugs with madri..she started hating madri a lot..she ws standing alone in the college terrace alone..thinking about the book she read "pandavas and their wife"... butbthen she suddenly heard someone climbing the steps wearily..she turned back thinking it might be an old staff who came to clean the terrace...but she was shocked to see pandu..huge and muscular..with his hair in spikes and hands in his pocket..he came straight to her and...the world stopped...she was paused..she asked him why he had come here and other thousands of questions when..he came so near to her that she stopped..his warm breath was making her blush..just then she tried to mave away..but he was not going to lose..he caught her bycthe waist which was so slim rthat he could catch her with one of his muscular hands..she hesitated..but surrendered..n then he joined his lips with hers..she is shocked..but feels that she has found another half of hers..she was happy..but just then her phone rang..she broke aprat of him..n picked it up..it was his bro..he said" pritha..come down..m waiting to go home..
she did'nt even say bye and left..wiping her lips woth her duppata..while he touched his lips and smiled..

next update..tommorow..plz comment n like
bye

OMG Chitra!!!! Kiss so fast!!! seems like Mata and Pithasri are faster than us!!! Amazingly written!! Don't end it so soon!! We want to read about Mata kunti and Pithasri Pandu more!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ah that was sweet 😊

Dhritarashtra - a fighter with NERDY GLASSES 🤣 & attracted to Gandhari with NERDY GLASSES too 🤣. Pandu the match-maker of his nerdy bro 😆

And Yes Kunti & Pandu here is damn fast - kissing already w/o even exchanging a single word 😲.

Do update ur next part soon. 😊

Edited by hpatgiri - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Hey! It was a lovely part... You should continue it! Update soon.. And Yagya thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Vow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!nice ha bt pritha as always ...in dilemma
I have always seen her 'vatsalya' nature and she is always the grt mother fr d wrld bt ppl oftn frgt she 2 was a lovely grl and had a luv story...
Very nicely described chitra n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here is d promo guys
Pritha to insult madri n ignore pandu
Pandu tryimg to get near her
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a nice update and promo.😃 Cant wait to know whats going to happen next.

You should continue and not finish in few updates 😊
Edited by iturkhahs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great Update!!👏..Kuntti & Pandu seem way ahead of their time in ur story..kissing already!😉😆..Nice idea to put an OS on Kunti-Pandu..their relationship was unexplored in FFs so far!👏👍🏼😊..should be interesting to read how this one goes further from here on..!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so i think i shud update soon n not finish it so soon..i think i shud change it into a FF n d 4th update will be on saturday...m sitting to write d 3rd update now..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_chitra

so i think i shud update soon n not finish it so soon..i think i shud change it into a FF n d 4th update will be on saturday...m sitting to write d 3rd update now..


Post it soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oppsy guys...i just was very busy with college wrk...m really sorry..
so here is d update..i request any1 who can talk to somebody 4 changing this into a ff..
pritha was not happy..how can he kiss her wothout asking her..was he trying to rag her or was he just using her because it
did'nt look like he liked her so much as he kept sitting infront of madri coo chi cooing with her all the time!!
she wanted to talk to mr.pandu...but as always she was in dillema..how could she confront him??..she looked at herself in the mirror...there stood a beautiful young lady who was so pretty as if god had made her perfectly...

he was soo shy..OMG! how could he kiss a lady when he was such a shy lad..
he looked at himself in the car's mirror...he was handsome but he did'nt look like the "pritha deserving" kinda person..
he thought may be big bro was more handsome but then he saw drihty giving a pink rose to the new nerdy girl who was gauri..
he smiled because some where some hearts were finding true love and some where people were still not able to realize their love!!
as soon as he entered the class..he was pushed on his arm by someone..but the hands were so soft..he could on those arms forever..but who was that person?? it was pritha pulling him to the terrace AGAIN!!
he thought maybe pritha wanted that experince again!! but he was wrong..pritha was burning like a queen from inside..
he made him stand in the place where the deed was done before..and she punched him right on his left cheek (aakhir bheemsen ki maa hai) he asked 'whats wrong?' in a husky tone (just like arjun's) whe. she looked up and faced him..staring in his eyes she said...'ohh so u dont even know what happened?..u kissed me right on my lips before evem asking me or telling me anything about your feelings?? and by your behaviour it looks as if you dont like me..u just used me..and u like that MADRI...' pandu got the shock of his life..the lady who looked so familiar was acting as if she was a stranger..but yes she was a stranger to him..he answered 'ok ok i m sorry..but why are you JEALOUS of madri?' kunti blushed..she lost he confidence..she could'nt control her self..her next step would surely give you a shock..and pandu also got a shock that how can a fierce tigeress become a cute little cat..????

sorry for leaving a suspense..this was just part A of my update..part B coming soon!!

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