Draupadi: ||~A Happy Tale Lost In Oblivion~|| IMP NOTE pg 32 (8/7/16)

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Gayatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: smartfotografi
"like cold arrows from a bow" -why you choose this words to decribe her calamity?
The writer usually used words "thunder light" or kind like that.

I really don't know! i write with flow! And of cold.. I indeed felt it was like how an ice cold sharp object pierce thru you!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: luv_sakshi
Awesome Piece of writing Gayathri!! Loved the Depth & Emotion brought in thru' out! It only added to the effect of the write up & made the reading so much more involved!

Arjun's Silence must've Killed Draupadi at that point of time..i could feel her pain while i was reading thru' it..

Well Done!! Do continue soon..and thank u for the PM!

Thanks a ton Chandrika! Comment meant a lot! Yes indeed I felt his silence must have pained her the most!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

I really don't know! i write with flow! And of cold.. I indeed felt it was like how an ice cold sharp object pierce thru you!

I would say a nice choice of words as coldness is usually symbolic of numbness so I guess it is a perfect description!!

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Gayatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: smartfotografi
"You made love a forbidden feeling in me Mata Kunti"
Closing statement in the end 2nd chapter, with Draupadi's conclusion for the situations her face off, make your reader can feels her deep pain and sorrow.

You describe Drau's inner conversations so well.

Thank you so much 🤗 means a lot...😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: srishtisingh
sorry for being late! its something I always felt regarding drau and u expressed it with so much beauty, innocence and maturity! continue plz

Thank you so much! Appreciation indeed means a lot! 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
Absolutely brilliant Gayatri...fantastic writing
The last words of Drau made me tear up...so much pain and disappointment hidden in those words...very well expressed
Thanks for the PM...waiting for the next part

Thank you so so much! I know its really painful and as I wrote it I could feel her pain! Sorry for the Delay in update.. I shall update mrw! was lil busy!