Draupadi: ||~A Happy Tale Lost In Oblivion~|| IMP NOTE pg 32 (8/7/16) - Page 15

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

Nice one girl... 😊 You understand Draupadi well. :) Continue.. and great to see that you are sticking to the original but narrate her Swayamvar soon too.

Originally posted by: vaikartana

Brilliant writing dear.The tense situation and Krishnaa's internal turmoil and her dilemma is portrayed flawlessly.And it touched me that she remembered HIM at her hour of sorrow.And the explanation of Kunti's eyes and attitude👏 And the last line... it just blew me off.Extraordinary update dear⭐️

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

what an update just loved it

Originally posted by: hpatgiri

Brilliant update. This was my fav line

"You made love a forbidden feeling in me Mata Kunti" I said regaining back my senses.

Do continue ur next part soon 😊

Originally posted by: maharjunfan

Awesome 👏 👏 pls continue soon..

Originally posted by: -bharti

A poignant memory of her life-changing moment!👍🏼

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Loved How You Described Draupadi's Expectations And The How All Of It Was Shattered, By Kunti's One Minute's Distraction. Loved The Last Line ! Waiting For The Next Part !

Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic

omg omg omg!! You have written it so beautifully gayu (would you mind if i call you that?)!! While reading, I can experience her pain and emotions! I feel as if its my pain! Poor Draupadi! I couldn't comment on 1st chapter (There was some problem with my internet, I guess).. But the chapter was beautiful! Thanks for the pm and continue soon!

Originally posted by: Meself

In my defence; my laptop isn't working and typing through my phone is a task in itself! Hence the late reply...secind to it is the fact that like button isn't working: simply because the me and the dreaded button never had any friendship let alone love between us. Thirdly if you come across typos and stuffs then let me tell you that my phone has a mind of its own!

I can understand your grievences... am also a victim of these above mentioned facts ! I liked the way you wrote it! 😃

Now with the grieviances all laid up, I can speak about the update. This was the turning point in Yajnaseni's life that broke her so much that after which I don't think she was the same bubbly girl that had accompanied Arjun in the forest. What exactly her mental state would be at that point? Shiuld she go back? Should she marry all five? Should she immolate herself or should she wait in hope; in dying hope that everything will somehow be alright...

Her silence at the Pandava's place said it all. Her dissapointment and her helplessness was all so evident. How at that hour she had been hoping for a solace that didn't come actually. This was just the beginning of all tgat she had to go through!

The ending note to this update where she mouthes that love is now a forbidden feeling for her is like a huge blow! All the Panadavas had infact married multiple times after her. Truly none of them could love her the way they loved their other wives!! Why was her heart stripped oof so mercilessly and then stabbed in a manner so? This will remain a mystery I believe!

I am in loss of words, they way in which u summed up Yagyaseni's life is commendable! 👏 Her endless trails with life just began from there and she could never be the young lady who happily accompanied her husband to meet her mother in law! They way life slapped on her, the way in a minute her whole dreams and happiness got shattered! You penned the whole thing beautifully! 🤗

It was a beautiful update Gayatri. Seemingly you've gotten into Draupadi's heart, for every word that you spin has a part of her soul.

Thank you so so much! This is indeed the best compliment I have ever got! 🤗

Waiting for the next installment!

Love,

Shivani.

Originally posted by: shweta2728

Aww poor draupadi! Yes you are writing really well! I love it! Please update soon! Thank you for the PM!