No Time For Doubt- Arjun-Draupadi OS

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RosChel.Lobster

@RosChel.Lobster

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

this is very beautiful bheegi di...I loved each and every bit of this OS ❤️⭐️

another masterpiece by u 👏

I will miss ur OSs 😔

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amritat

@amritat

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome OS...
U just said somethings in your OS that i have been wanting to say, but refrained from doing so in this forum...
Draupadi's words were sharp n clear...

Thank u for writing this story...

Please continue writing on them...

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: AnuMP
Lovely👏
You OSs always make feel contented. Thank you😃

Thanks Anu😊. I'll miss writing ArDi OSs once MB is over...

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
lovely job

Thanks😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Sadhana_pr
This is the first time that I actually opened an OS post on this forum. And must admit, it was a very pleasant surprise😊. The writing is beautifully fluid and the content very skilfully wrapped in layers. But the prime reason for me enjoying this post is that it resonated with some views I personally hold. I had always felt that Krishna cared more for Arjun's learning and growth as a warrior and a human being, than for pre-declaring the winner of 'So you think you can fight' contest between two arch rivals prior to the duel.Hence, even though his enemy can find glory in this (quite valid)praise, the most pertinent reason for the praise was to keep Arjun's confidence and ego in check, as far as my perception of the scenario goes. Thus, I could relate so well to your expression of Arjun's turmoil and Draupadi's soothing answer dispelling all his doubts.

My favourite line-He knows that even you know you're better than Karna, both as an archer and as a human being.

I don't know why this just felt very complete in essence👍🏼.

Thanks Sadhna. That line is inspired by V Sukhtankar's analysis of Karna and Arjun in his book 'On the meaning of the MB' He says even if Arjun and Karna were both equally skilled, Arjun was far superior spiritually. I couldn't agree more😊 Yes, Arjun's ego needed both pampering (as Draupadi did) and a reality check (as Krishna did)...😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sanayabarunlove
This is soo damn beautiful!! very well written! i really hope we get a scene like this in the show too!!

Thanks Sanaya. I doubt we will as CVs are busy manufacturing Kaju emotional atyachar😆

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: bunnylovessunny
Perfection! Simple yet refined, beautifully written :D :D

Thanks Bunny😊...glad you liked it

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Uma90
Such a gorgeous OS!! Who can understand Arjun more than Krishna & Krishnaa?
Lovely one Bheegi!!! 👏 👏 I feel like reading it over & over again... 😳
This OS means a lot for an ArDi/ParAv/sakha-Sakhi fan like me.. 😭 thanks for the lovely piece of writing !! 🤗 😊

Aww...thanks Uma. A lot of us love the awesome threesome - the three Krishnas😊 I can't get enough of them

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: srishtisingh
wow sangeeta u hitted a chord with my heart with ur os! it is beautiful! I wish I could see something like this in starbharat

Thanks Srishti. SP is busy with Kaju these days😃...I doubt we will see any ArDi scenes like this😕