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Uma90

@Uma90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: bheegi

Aww...thanks Uma. A lot of us love the awesome threesome - the three Krishnas😊 I can't get enough of them

Can u please write one more os on the three of them if u can... before the show ends...😭

It is my sincere request...😳😳

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -TomNJerry-
simply lovely ... just like one of those missing pages from the epic itself ... it fits so perfectly ... really well written...👏

a loving wife who senses her husbands doubts and forgets her own victorious moment ... and becomes the strong determined wife who rebuilds confidence and self esteem in her husband ... with a wife like her and a hand of blessing from the Lord himself how can victory limit itself to you!

Thanks Tom. If MB had a female author, I'm sure we would have many more scenes between the Pandavs and their wives😊. No wonder, a lot of women authors love writing about Draupadi and her POV

To his credit, Ved Vyas did give quite a lot of footage to Kunti, Gandhari and Draupadi but he shied away from any intimate details between the couples...oh well we all can just speculate and imagine😊

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-TomNJerry-

@-TomNJerry-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks Tom. If MB had a female author, I'm sure we would have many more scenes between the Pandavs and their wives😊. No wonder, a lot of women authors love writing about Draupadi and her POV

To his credit, Ved Vyas did give quite a lot of footage to Kunti, Gandhari and Draupadi but he shied away from any intimate details between the couples...oh well we all can just speculate and imagine😊

call me TJ ... coz thats what everyone calls me 😆

sure! ... i guess we have you to fill in the gaps Ved Vyas has left out ... please continue we so love your talent of reading into characters so thoroughly and easily 👏

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Shriya95
Read it in d morning itself but dint get d time to comment...it was beautiful!!!!! Very very good!!!
U captured every little emotion beautifully sangeeta di!!!awesome😃😃

Thanks Shriya😊...I'm glad you liked it

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Rushika
this is very beautiful bheegi di...I loved each and every bit of this OS ❤️⭐️

another masterpiece by u 👏

I will miss ur OSs 😔

aww...thanks Rushika. Hope I can write one more with the three Krishnas before the show ends...let's see😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: amritat
Awesome OS...
U just said somethings in your OS that i have been wanting to say, but refrained from doing so in this forum...
Draupadi's words were sharp n clear...

Thank u for writing this story...

Please continue writing on them...

Thanks Amrita...I know what you are talking about. It's her POV and this is fictional...so everything goes😉

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Ramykrish

@Ramykrish

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Beautiful.The message given by you is absolutly correct.Karna was a mixture of a personality

who had inferiority complex and a rage to always do better than Arjuna.He never concentrated for a definite goal.His only goal was to be better than Arjuna.But Arjuna always wanted to be better each time of the current victory.A true hero Arjuna who always enjoyed the Almighty Support.Whereas Karna was always with adharma and had explanation for it.And the way he spoke abt Panchali was

Unpardonable.I vaguly remember in BR Chopra's Bharat they would have given a dialogue for Arjun

where he says he will cut his tongue for abusing Panchali.But in this StarBharat our Arjun is so respectful to him and no direct hate was shown.May be Karna has lot of Fans.

Once again fantastic OS.👏

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asu129

@asu129

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Hello i m a new user...i have been watching all mb os

And i must say u all do a grt job👏

And this one was awesome...!

I wish to try writing something on draupadi

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Devashree

@devashree_h

Channel Moderator

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Bheegi, you are one of my writers here. I always love how you grasp the vulnerability of characters in the situation and then take them out of it. I loved how you inserted Yudhi in the beginning.🤣 We can say its an alteration of scene where Yudhi thinks Arjuna killed Karna and things flare up after that.😆 Just then Arjuna finds the one he needs the most,😉 And she puts his doubts at rest by putting her utmost trust in him. I loved that part.

Special mention to how you always end your stories in the most beautiful ways.

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Sadhana_pr

@Sadhana_pr

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks Sadhna. That line is inspired by V Sukhtankar's analysis of Karna and Arjun in his book 'On the meaning of the MB' He says even if Arjun and Karna were both equally skilled, Arjun was far superior spiritually. I couldn't agree more😊 Yes, Arjun's ego needed both pampering (as Draupadi did) and a reality check (as Krishna did)...😊

Thanks Bheegi for informing about the book. Looks like I will be grabbing it now.😆

I had actually found the most in depth exploration of the spiritual connection between Arjun and Krishna in The Great Golden Sacrifice of Mahabharat. Ever since I have read it I have been looking for other books along the same line. Thanks again😊

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