Arjun-Abhimanyu OS : Father's Heart

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maharjunfan

@maharjunfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Too good ya!! Heart touching!!

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

OH...no...aru di...cant express my feelings...i had totally broken..my paarth...so sad of him😭😭what a wonderful,emotional update👏...very well written...hats off..

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Ranjusha

@Ranjusha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Writing that can move mountains. Superb Aru 👏

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

It is hrt touching os

Cant express the feelling

I had tears

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Ryuki

@Ryuki

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Its awsome!..you are great to describing Arjun filling and emotion to Irava and how Abhimayu trying to heal the pain and the guilty filling from his father..😊⭐️

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Kavyyaa

@Kavyyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Beautiful OS aru. Thanks for sharing it with me. Something very different and so emotional.

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Pamalo

@Pamalo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

this is so hear wrenching di im crying soo much the day whem abhimanyu dies in the battle in the show i dont noe wat will i do u portrayed arjun's feelings so well tht i thought i was standing in the tent & witnessing tht scene beautifully written i've no words to tell u hw amazingly sad this is.

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Kalyani Nitin Bujone

@Kore-Soteira

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

So beautifully penned down the emotions of a father and a son in the battlefield... Abhimanyu sleeping on Arjun's lap and Arjun singing lullaby... so sweet.

I am at tears when I was reading your update. Abhimanyu, Arjun and karna are my favorites from Mahabharat

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Strikhedonia

@Strikhedonia

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Hello dear!😛

I'm Arthy! I just loved this OS! It was so heart-touching.. You know what, I always longed to read such OS... I wanted to always read about Arjun-Abhimanyu bonding and you gave me one. I'm so happy right now yet sad too. Sad because your OS was so emotional. Abhimanyu asking that promise from Arjun... OMG! I almost had tears in my eyes... Loved this.. Loved this OS a lot!❤️

And, Thanks a ton for the PM!😃

Take care🤗

Do write more!😛

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Vishva

@Guruvishva

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Hello dear 😳😳😳

Thus us the ever first I'm reading on this forum & this was fantastic 👏👏👏 You did a great job dear 👏👏👏 Still the tears are rolling over my face 😭😭😭 I always loved the bind between Arjun & Abimanyu 😳😳😳

This was something I expected dear . Your lines was in a great flaw 😳😳😳The story was very emotional...

The lullaby scene was the best 😳😳😳 I could imagine Shaheer & the one who acts as Abimanyu in our Mahabharat. ..😛 It was really very emotional...

These lines are still ringing in my ears 😭😭😭 From the fat Mahabharat war started I was working about Abimanyu's death a lot & this OS made me cry a lot

"did Abhimanyu know he was going away from me forever? that's why he sounded so mysterious that day? For eternity i will wonder that.was he really an angel who in that short period gave me happiness of lifetime?even before bidding adieu he gave me pleasure of fatherhood for last time? I know i have to wait to get my answers but all i know in the end i will meet him again for sure and i am looking for the moment from now onwards."

Thanks a ton for such a beautiful OS

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