me Krishnaa -on Krishna pg-1,on Arjuna initial & on portraits pg-4 - Page 4

sorry becoz of having high temperature since last night i couldn't thank my readers

@Prateti thanks

@shani dear first of all a hearty thank you for giving me such a big analyzing comment which i always longed for
well i was scolded earlier too for adding such prefix but honestly after every write up i always feel it was not upto the mark
and secondly this piece was not at all a pre planned story of mine which i had to think a lot for presenting i was writing it in a flow without thinking where is it heading to hence i had put that disclaimer
i seriously feel i have way to go before being called a writer

well i always felt Panchali ofcourse had attraction towards all of them otherwise it was not possible fulfilling duty of wife with such devotion

after my fever gets cured i will surely be back with the flow

@shiningster thank you for such encouraging words

@archana thank you dear its only u who commented on that update but if panchali could know the fact at first place then i had to rename the story as Arubharat and this Panchali would have been called AruPanchali😆

@usha thank you for liking it yes its completely my feeling

@sohini dear yeah u know na i will always keep ParAv in any form both of our most favourite angle is this one and for me Panchali is normal only becoz being attracted towards more than one person is somewhat very natural, thanks for commenting

One of the best updates from u touching and very deep feelings.

😆very true aru..Panchalii was not supposed to know anything..

Its official you are turning into a phenomenal writer. U should consider writing seriously and publishing it too. Such talent should not be confined to only a small audience. Loved it 👏

beautiful updates... and loved the part where you described the portrait of Karna... specially "ancient intense eyes...with sadness"

Fantastic the thoughts of Draupadi 👍🏼

Wow such a beautiful flowy autobiographical narrative of a power woman. This is well written by you.

Loved your take on Panchali's thoughts about her Pandav husbands, Karna and rest.

Do write more Arunita di.