OS- That Night before War P2-p4 (Karna's OS) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Nan08

very well writtent riti.. both parts👏.. poor Karna really what a turmoil he must be going through.. because it was easier for him to hate pandavas as his enemies.. ppl who mocked him.. but coming to know they are his brothers was a kinda death blow to him even before the war started ... kunti was very very late

Originally posted by: riti4u

thanks for reading nandoos... 😃... i was thinkin noone is reading it...😭... thnks for encouragement buddy...😳

Originally posted by: srishtisingh

I don't have words to show how touched I am with this! big salute to u for putting forth the pain of karna

Originally posted by: vaatuhaara

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Beautifully written Rits...

fighting against oneself is the biggest battle in the world!

Originally posted by: panchaali

uff your writing is awesome Ritu..👏

it took my heart away, every line I want to quote..Karna's dilemma described very nicely

still this is my best one of this update 😊

Karna was once again alone ...and Night looked far from being over...He was being restless...he needed fresh air..he went out of his palace and there was darkness of night around...He was not sure which darkness was greater...darkness around...or within his heart...

.may be in search of himself... may be in search of that boy that was abandoned many years ago in the very river..."I never belonged to you mother...and you knew it...didnt you..."

those questioning eyes looked upon as first rays of sun came over him sparkling his entire body...as Sun had just come out to console his son...and answer his question along...

update soon dear 😊

Originally posted by: Cotswolds

riti4u, another beautiful, heart touching update. I am sad that this is final update ..😭
All his inner turmoil conveyed so effectively. Great writing.⭐️