OS- That Night before War P2-p4 (Karna's OS)

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riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Bumping this further .. hope some more read as well..

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Diala D

@...Diala...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: riti4u

Karna-"She came for her other sons vrushali...never for me... but I wont disappoint her..My mother had first time asked me something.. I will make sure..She lives rest of her life regretting what she had asked for..."

Riti dear.. excellent updates.. am breathing deep.. and the para above.. echoing now.. 😊

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riti4u

@riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: ...Diala...

Riti dear.. excellent updates.. am breathing deep.. and the para above.. echoing now.. 😊

Thank you diala😃.. I m glad you liked it.. just a small attempt to showcase what this man must have gone thru which many dont try to see much😊

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

its so painful why did i read this just now , u r just a brilliant writer , one of best writer may be

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riti4u

@riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Patrarekha
its so painful why did i read this just now , u r just a brilliant writer , one of best writer may be

Aww..thank you so much dear for such nice words..😊..

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Nikhita

@nuckts

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

very touching part especially the last one!😭

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riti4u

@riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: nuckts
very touching part especially the last one!😭

🤗Thank you dear...😊

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Brahmaputra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Riti,

Fantastic as usual...👏..very touching too...😭

I like your simple way of writing a lot!⭐️

It amazes me and takes me through a time machine and drops me among the characters...!

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riti4u

@riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -Jamy-
Riti,
Fantastic as usual...👏..very touching too...😭
I like your simple way of writing a lot!⭐️
It amazes me and takes me through a time machine and drops me among the characters...!

Thank you Jamy..😃 glad that it touched you😊..I imagine myself with them too while writing😆..thus always tough to pen down emotional ones..