Tales of Panchaali and Pandavas

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Hello all. I have made some scenes of Panchali with all her husbands. (One with each I mean). This is just some of my thinking and I wanted to share it as some write-ups with everyone. I will post each scene in my own words in my next posts and I hope everyone enjoys reading them. These write-ups are not a part of the real epic or a part of the serial. Everyone is welcome to comment and tell me if they want any other scenes. I will soon share my first scenes and continue with them in my next posts. Please so share your thoughts and check the thread regularly for the new stories.

No bashing of any actor/actress or any other member is allowed. Please do remember the rules of IF. Another point is, please don't make the stories a matter of controversy. If you don't like the stories, please ignore.😊 But its a simple request, please do not create problems in the thread regarding romance in the stories or any other kind of element. Enjoy reading.
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Yudhishtir and Panchaali

It was the day before The Pandavas and Queen Panchaali was to leave for Hastinapur. They had received an invitation from Duryodhana (although it had the stamp of the Hastinapur royal palace showing approval of the blind king Dhritarashtra) Yudhishtir knew that it was actually Duryodhana and Shakuni who invited them. But he was hesitant. He knew of his terrible love for this dice game but on the other hand he knew, or he discovered this through Panchaali that he really did not mastered it. Yudhishtir decided to talk to Panchaali, who currently was in his year. Yudhishtir knew Panchaali's whereabouts and thus, he went to the balcony of his huge magical palace, Indraprastha which was also Panchaali's favourite place of the palace. there she was with her maids. One of them braided her hair as she spoke "My husband is not fond of the sea-essence. Please bring the lotus one." Within a moment, Panchaali looked back and understood that Yudhishtir needed guidance. Yes, that ws how she saw it. She knew Yudhishtir's facade of righteousness would only work when that peace was in his mind. But we needed to hunt for peace.

Panchaali told the maids to leave and not to forget her lotus essence. "You played yesterday." she said. "How do you know?" Yudhishtir asked although he understood that it was the marks in his hands which spoke." But asking how she knows would make his wife, the beautiful Yajnaseni happy. It worked too. Panchaali explained with a smile that it were the marks indeed.
"Should I do it?" Yudhishtir spoke in his confused voice. "What if I say no? It will not change you." Panchaali smiled." I have come to you to seek your advice Panchaali."
"I know aarya. And I want to ask you if your mind told you to do so or YOU thought of coming. If your mind told you, you better not go to the arrogant Duryodhana.As i know that your addiction takes over your mind.So, your mind dont work at times As you should never let your addiction control you. But if you know that you can have control over your addiction and you are too eager to show them that you are right, you should go. But let not the facade be yourself. You know what I am talking of. Your facade of a calm and composed King."
Yudhishtir was about to answer when a young maid of Panchaali's entered the balcony came running to her with some colourful petals. "princess," she said, " My friend tells me that if I give my petals to her she would give me her dolls.What should I do princess?" Panchaali held the petals in her hands. "You can only control these petals as your own if you love them. And never trust love to someone else's hands. The results are terrible. Now you can decide yourself. Fine?" Panchaali looked at Yudhishtir. Her expression said that she consented to his decision. And she believed her advice would have a role to play.

(the petal thingy in my story is just a made up thingy. Panchali is not like Krishna here.😆😆😆 she didn't know what was to happen!)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved what you did here. 👏
And I guess this is what we might just end up seeing in ⭐️Bharat as well!!!
⭐️Yudi asks for ⭐️Draupadi's paraamarsh a lot, he diligently follows her advice, and has vowed to be 'samarpit' towards her as well. So, I could actually see this kind of a convo occurring between them when the dice game invitation comes.
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loved it 👏⭐️..do continue...
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pls write more about yudi panchali and pls put some romance it is fab story which matches to their 👏character
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVABLE ONE,BUDDY...

pls contiue it soon...
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hey its realy nice and insrusting
I realy love to see more and more scenes of panchili-pandavas and panchali-krishna,but in TV its not possible to show only thier scenes,
so u made my dream come true
i liked to read more to panchali and their husbands bonding
eagerly waiting for the next part
update soon dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brishti u r amazing...I had no clue u r so fine at writing 😲 too good..continue soon :))
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Bheem and Panchaali

Panchaali was very happy that day. It was a bright morning and her current husband, Bheem was to take her out for a walk and after which, he had promised that they would cook the day's food together. She knew why Bheem did so. She was sad because of her husband, Arjuna was in exile for 12 years at the moment. Bheem must have noticed and Panchaali knew that Bheem had a good mind to do anything for Panchaali. As planned, Panchaali and Bheem walked through the beautiful gardens of Indraprastha. "Aarya, don't you miss Hidimba?" Panchaali asked. "They are happy. You don't worry." Bheem said with a twinkle in his eyes. He wanted to ignore them Panchaali thought. They continued to walk when suddenly they found a log of wood in the path. Bheem seemed angry. Panchaali knew this nature of Bheem pretty well. He would be angry with anyone who would seem to be as powerful as him or anyone who had the guts to stand in front of him. This made him look stupid too. Panchaali has noticed in the court of Hastinapur too. Bheem had a very exaggerating relationship with Duryodhana the Kuru prince.

Bheem walked up to the log as if nature was a challenge in his way. He was about to pick it up although it hardly obstructed the path of the couple, when suddenly Panchaali said "ouch!" Bheem turned back giving the full garden an earthquake!!!!!! Panchaali held her toe and seeked help from Bheem to pull out a thorn which stung her. Bheem ran to his wife and raised her stung toe with care. He carefully pulled out the thorn although while pulling it out Panchaali kept saying ouch and aww when she saw Bheem putting in more effort than necessary. She wanted Bheem to use his strength properly. The log in the mean time was abselutely safe. Finally Bheem pulled out Panchaali's thorn and looked at her beautiful face. Panchaali gave him a naughty smile. "You know aarya," she said with some tricky eye movements.. "it tickled me when I pierce a thorn into my toe purposely." Bheem gave a huge laugh and created sound pollution while they continued their journey speaking of what to make for the meal..

(I have a meal scene in my mind too which i will post in continuation! Meanwhile I'll move on to Arjuna!)
Hope you all are enjoying!
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Originally posted by: Rushika

Brishti u r amazing...I had no clue u r so fine at writing 😲 too good..continue soon :))


Thank uuu😊 And I knw you are waiting for the Arjuna one.. RIGHT?

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