Karna-Arjun SS : A Lonely Evening (last Part-Page-29) - Page 9

aru di .. its beautiful..im at a loss for words..the madhav loosing for parth part was sooo adorable..and the sister convo made me ROFL and of cuz brilliant bromance dear...the played until dey were drenched was comical..though i imagined them going back into the hastinapur rajya sabha together dripping wet..and having goofy smiles on their faces...dury wouldve had an heart attack..lol..no war..om shanti ! om shanti! o shanti! :P :P :P😉

@sri thanks for such beautiful comment , well i will thank you for making me enriched with ideas too since we are almost soul sister in our love for parav n kaju i too thought almost same sequence but then it will be arubharat then anyways thanks for your encouraging words

@rishbala thanks

Originally posted by: RoseFairy

@lumos thanks for taking such interest in my story and giving such complement that my writing changed your perception

see even i was against mythological fiction i at first disliked shiva trilogy for this reason but gradually i understood an author an artist has every right to express what they want every kind of creation is a creativity even those controversial painting, book and songs too which are said having hurt religious sentiment none can stop anyone to create them its upto people to accept or reject to like or dislike them but none can bound the freedom of creativity because imagination has no boundary

thats my perception now😃

What an outstanding update,Rosefairy...hats off to u for this 👏👏...

It seemed to be,Karna-Arjun immeresed wholly in their game work without even realising the forthcoming outcomes...oh...having that much eagerness to play that game.😆.. so cute brothers..madhav willingly losing himself for making arjun to win...that is madhav.😳.
Ganga-parvati convo was a hilarious one😛,and at the same time gangama words were absolutely right...but parvatima behaving like her sweet brother narayan...its not a surprise as it is wellknown that he is such a naughty man😉...Kaju came back to their real worlds...oh.this much soon.😭..anyway i loved their childish nature...Arjun began to recollect the moments he spend with chitrangada...such a lovely scene it was😳❤️..

btw,thanks for the pm

Aru..its the most beautiful update for me...👏I am too late to comment,though!!!! loved your portrayal of the devine sisters as well..so our sweet Little bro is finding ways to the heart of tough big bro...first through nature,now through music...😆 Cant wait to read more...

@Shiningstar another long analyzing comment and many many thanks for that, you are one of those readers writers are needed i am happy my story could attract you this much and don't worry kaju has few experience yet to have before returning to cruel reality and ya couldn't stop myself from mentioning my fav pair arjun-chitra here thanks again

@archu was waiting for ur comment no prob dear for late reply ur reply matters to me , u found it beautiful that's my biggest gift as writer, yeah in this evening everything is new to karna even arjun too thank you for commenting

@lumos honestly i still am not a fond of shiva trilogy but not becoz using mythology but because of its story n literature value which i found lacking in both 1st and 3rd part only 2nd part was really really good so i started loving most well written character ganesh rather than main protagonist shiva

and i loved dan brown works what a class literature and i secretly believed his theory too

Nice update, but small one

The evening that was supposed to be the worst evening in his life was bringing one after another pleasant surprises for Karna. He started doubting is he really in his familiar Hastinapur? or he actually has been transported to a magical world otherwise how could it feel like each and every familiar object (and person too) seemed new to him? Today he realized that it doesn't matter how much one grows up, age of learning never gets over, one learns till last breathe and from anything or anyone like today he learnt about the divine beauty of nature, he learnt that one can find happiness in even a smallest thing if you keep heart of a child and he learn all these from the person in this whole world he hated the most, considered the greatest enemy of his life, the person who always came between him and his happiness, for whom his achievements were always denied to get recognition , the effort of proving himself against whom brought him in the place where he got tagged as a sinner an evil soul, along with recognition love,admiration and honour he gained same or even more larger amount of hatred ,insult and curse only for challenging whom, in the process of being better from whom he turned into an arrogant, angry, bitter,revengeful person to the level that even though his soul refused to give consent but for the shake of loyality and friendship he was a part of the plot of Duryodhan,Duhshasan and mamashree Shakuni to burn those 5 brothers and their mother in the house made of lac in Varnavart which took away the peace from his heart forever (although he knew in subconscious pandavas are able enough to save themselves and mother Kunti so for him the plot seemed just a test for them and he was sure they were alive when he noticed calmness on grandfather Bheeshma and prime minister Vidur's face which his friend was not able to see), today that very person taught him to find happiness in every single object and act, even a negligible thing or work can become very special if you do it by heart, without a single word that person brought back the innocence, the simplicity he left behind with his childhood.
If it was Vaasudev Krishna behind his changing thought process Karna wouldn't have been so surprised, he knows about Krishna's mesmerizing personality, If after his god Suryanarayan in this material world he respects someone with his heart and soul he is Krishna only but he had to conceal his feelings towards Dwarkadhish due to circumstances only Vrishali is aware of which. But Arjun out of all people making him looking within himself was not only unexpected but the very thought of which would have been sounded absurd previously but now everything seemed to be possible to Karna when he could get indulged in a childish game with his arch nemesis.
Karna was quite lost in his thoughts when Arjun's song brought him back, and again he was stunned, this is the sweetest melody ever he listened to and he couldn't simply believe an arrogant tough warrior can sing more melodious than Gods ,Gandharvas and Kinnars and that too Arjun? if the singer was Nakul , Karna still could believe because of Nakul's sophisticated nature, but about Arjun he only could recall the cold sarcasm, the pinching taunts, those harsh one liner which use to pierce Karna more than his arrows and drove him crazy and more thirsty for Arjun's blood . He never had seen a more sarcastic person than Arjun in his life. and today Karna got another lesson of life, a person never can be judged with a single quality or drawback, it takes more than a lifetime to know a person completely and probably to know one's own self too. Today Karna not only met an innocent, childish, playful, nature lover Arjun but also met the child inside him who he believed was killed long back with the cruelty and discrimination of society. In this evening only Arjun was not new to him but he himself seemed unfamiliar too to him.
Karna always wondered what is there in Arjun that attracts everyone towards him? Why on earth everyone does favor him? girls dream to marry Arjun (in jealousy Karna used to forget the fact that he himself was no less desirable in women eyes), mothers want a son as Arjun, teachers want a student as Arjun, every king wants a warrior like Arjun as his brother even warriors in battlefield want to die in hand of Arjun his valor became such a myth, he knows even after years passed they left for Indraprastha Arjun still rules heart of the masses of Hastinapur, Karna failed to trace the reason of which. He believed Arjun is simply overrated , his over popularity even overshadows his brothers. not even among Kuru princes Karna considered Arjun is definitely not best among Pandavas too. What does Arjun really have? if talks are on good looks then though handsome but darkish skin Arjun was not anywhere near Nakul having skin of molten gold, if talking about might and valor Karna considers Bheem to be superior than Arjun no matter how much he insulted Karna and Karna hated him, if someone says Arjun is intelligent his intelligence doesn't even stands in comparison to youngest pandava Sahadev's intelligence, if talking about how much knowledgeable Arjun is then did all forget about Yudhisthir? and if people says about Arjun's charm,wit,humor then it will be simply insulting to the person whose charm can make entire world running after him, Arjun's friend,philosopher and guide or may be more than that, Krishna, Karna always was jealous with Arjun in this reason too. because Arjun always roams like a shadow of Kishna Karna couldn't go near vaasudev or talk to him which he always longed for.
In this evening Karna at last understood what was there in Arjun, it was not a single quality but his versatility which mesmerized all , today Karna had to admit among kuru princes or even in Aryabart if he doesn't bring Krishna in comparison, Arjun was most dynamic personality he had ever seen.

Its amazing. The way u express each and every line in mind-blowing.. Thanx a ton for the PM... Will be waiting eagerly for ur next PM...

aru another beautiful arjunilicious update with kaju sprinkles. me very happy after reading