Rishbala SS Can broken heart be mended? Part 1 updated on page 2

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poojitha96

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi guys this is Poojitha after a long time Firstly I want to apologize for vanishing like that and leaving my stories incomplete. Now I am staring my new story on our Rishbala and will give regular updates. Hope you all like it.

Here come the Prologue.

This is the story of the girl who once believed in fairy tails but now completely hates love and believe that such feelings never exist. And the boy who is madly in love with the girl unknown to her.

Will he be able to make her fall in love him and bring her to her old self?

Will she be able to come out of her belief that true love never exist?

Will they have happily ever after?

Let's wait and find of the journey of this adorable couple.

Please give me your valuable feedbacks. Will update the sneak peak of the 1st part shortly.

Sneak peak page 1

Part 1 page 2

Regards

Poojitha

Edited by poojitha96 - 6 years ago

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poojitha96

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Posted: 6 years ago

Sneak peak

A girl sitting on a bar stool between all the loud music and dim lights with a tray of empty shots before her and a last one in her hands. Her eyes so lifeless and skin so pale. With never ending tears and blood shot eyes. Even in that dim lights one can easily point out that she is so shattered.

Girl: excuse me... 1 want 6... More shots. (speaking tipsy)

Another girl: Madhu it's enough, how much you are going to drink. Tomorrow is your sister's wedding and there are many relatives at your home.

Madhu: No Dips I don't want to attend that wedding I don't even want to be in my consciousness when it happens. But see na how much ever I am drink kuch asar hi nai hora hai. Dil mein abhi bhi utna hi dard hai. How do I forget that the person I loved the most ditched me for my sister and my sister who know that I love him happily accepted his proposal.

Kya paisa hi sab kuch hai?

He want her because she is a top model now and it would be beneficial for his ad agency and she wants him so that she can make her career bright.

Does emotions, feelings and values matters to them?

You know what Dips I hate myself for loving such a cheap person and from today onwards I believe that true love never exist. Sab log Matlabi hai or kuch Matlab keliye hi ek dusre ke sath hote hai.

With that she had another 6 shots.

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 6 years ago

Welcome back to the forum..

Awesome sneak peak, loved.. Madhu doesn't believe in love coz of some creep who cheated her for her sister & her sister is also no better who knew about Madhu's love.. Waiting for Rk's entry I know our hero will make everything alright.. Plz update soon I'm eager to read what happen next plz plz plz plz & if possible pm me whenever you update :)

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harini

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Posted: 6 years ago

Welcome back to the forum
Congrats for the new story,
Interesting sneak-peek
waiting for the first part,
continue soon

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annukumari007

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Posted: 6 years ago

Interesting sneak-peek dear..

Waiting for the first part please update soon..

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Maangeet

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Posted: 6 years ago

Interesting waiting for updates

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sujitha

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Posted: 6 years ago

Interesting concept dear...Madhu lost her faith in love and waiting for rk's entry...Please update soon dear...

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poojitha96

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 1

After a lot of pleadings from dips madhu left with dips. Dips was not able to handle a highly drunken madhu who is continuously blabbering all the swear words and curses for both her sister and her soon to be fianc.

D: Madhu plz keep quite we need to get you inside the car as soon as possible

M: mujhe kani... Nai janaaa dips sunoo na. Mujhu... (fainted)

With dips unable to handle her and about to drop madhu down a pair of hands encircled madhu's waist and carried her in his arms.

Dips was shocked to see that person and nervous took over her.

Guy: Deepali what is this? At this time of night you guys are in a place like this? (angrily)

D: (nervous) Bhai who actually madhu...

Guy: let's go home and then talk.

Madhu opened her eyes little and saw a face which she never expected to see.

M: Rishu... Tum wapas agaiya, sachi ab nai javooge na. Pata hai sab ne milke tumare Maddy ko bahut hurt Kiya. Kyu chelegaye Mujhu chudke (again lost her consciousness)

RK had tears listening to her and same with the case of dips.

D: when did you come back from US bhai?

Rk: This evening dips. Kya Hua madhu ko.

Why is she so broken?

D: (angrily) all this happened because of that mukund bhai. He pretended to love madhu so much and when time came he choose to marry that trishna because she is gonna be a top model and that would be beneficial for his company and increase his profitability. And that trishna knowing well that madhu loves mukund still agreed to marry him for her carrier, name and fame.

RK hugged madhu close to his heart and kissed her forehead. I promise madhu that I will never let anyone harm you let you cry. It's my mistake to leave you and go away.

D: why did you go to us bhai, if you were here then this day would never come. Both madhu and you might be in a relation and had a happy life too.

Hope you guys like this part

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harini

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update,
Mukund left Madhu for Trishna n he is marrying madhu's sister,
Madhu was heart-broken,
Dipali is Madhu's BF and Rk is her bro,
he loves Madhu but he went away now he is back from US
continue soon
thanks for the update