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Madhu is paralyzed?? is she like this since the time of accident??
Flashback scene was so wonderfully written.. my heart is still pacing fast reading it as if I ran a marathon..🤢
RK got news about madhu & went to hospital.. she survived.. here was the change that you made for the happy ending right??😛
Rishi is his son but he did not know it then, i guess.. In this scene he mentioned her as relative & not wife means, it's rahul that dies?? Rk is single right??😳
You did not continue the flashback from last part.. you are showing the past in bits & pieces..
It is building up the suspense in the story.. the way of describing the past is also very beautiful
loved the narration..👏
you are one heck of a writer di.. why don't you try writing a novel??😉
Flashback scene was so wonderfully written.. my heart is still pacing fast reading it as if I ran a marathon..🤢
RK got news about madhu & went to hospital.. she survived.. here was the change that you made for the happy ending right??😛
Rishi is his son but he did not know it then, i guess.. In this scene he mentioned her as relative & not wife means, it's rahul that dies?? Rk is single right??😳
You did not continue the flashback from last part.. you are showing the past in bits & pieces..
It is building up the suspense in the story.. the way of describing the past is also very beautiful
loved the narration..👏
you are one heck of a writer di.. why don't you try writing a novel??😉
