RISHBALA FF: Wrong number, part 15 updated on feb

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Badbuddy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#181

Great update

Full on suspense

Madhu has such a big family...I loved the people, pics...all from different serials..

So, what is the unusual thing threat for Madhu?

And Mukund is saying he is getting surprise for Madhu...waiting to know what's that

Thanks for pm

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
wow dear..
your story is getting more interesting with each update..
keep writing..

THANKYOU dear... keep reading., how was your tour did you enjoy well

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 7 years ago

#183

Wow... awesome update

Quite intriguing

Posting the characters pic was a good one

We would get to imagine a face for the Character

What was that ...gurujis prophecy?

What cause them to scare for Madhus life ?

Who are Thier enemies and y they want to end madhu?

So many questions

And I know it's long way to go before we get the answers to these questions

Keep going ..nice work

Update soon

Thanks for pm

Meri jaan...

I am really sorry for late to read and Comment..caught up in some work

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
great update..
story is becoming more interesting with each update..

hmm.. thankyou dear

so many mysteries revolving around them.

YES

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madhu's life in danger..
what happened 18 years ago

MADHU'S GRANNY DIED BEFORE MUKUND AND BRIJ EYES

& who is with mukund??

GEET'S SURPRISE

who is RK's bhabhi?? where is his brother??
Is she behind all the secrets of his life??

YES .

KEEP READING

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: harini_
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nice update,
who's that man with Mukund,
till now Rk's past is mysterious now Madhu's too,
some one is after Madhu to kill her,she is un-aware about it her whole family is scared sth might happens to her,
in Australia Rk's bhabhi is there,what's her mystery,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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THANKYOU DEAR.. HEHEHE YES BOTH OF THE LEADS LIFE ARE A MYSTERY..

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: pirl18

Oh my god...U R really gutter minded 😉

THANKYOU and same to you pirl

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Fantastic update👏Story is getting interesting n mysterious too👍🏼So many questions left unanswered😕Can't wait for the next chappy

THANKYOU dear, keep reading keep supporting

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Hend_Refai
Good update we know that there is secret in her life threatening her life
and there is a secret in his life making him worry day and night
when all those secrets revealed

ONE BY ONE YOU WILL GET TO KNOW HEND DEAR

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Posted: 7 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
new characters.i loved all the new characters.

THANK YOU DEAR

U give a soft face to Brij.On the show Brij was so cruel.

HERE HE IS GOOD SO ONLY SOFT FACE

nice pics of new characters.never knew that madhu too have a mysterious life.who is with mukund?Granny was killed 4 trying to save mukund madhu?

YES

Who r those enemies n why r they after madhu now?RK's bhabhi calling him.finding it too mysterious.who is she?Is she an Australian or just an Australian citizen?who is his bro then?

ABOUT RK'S BHABI AND BHAI YOU WILL KNOW IN NEXT UPDATE

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Posted: 7 years ago

#190

PART 9

BANNER BY LOVELYUMANG

LADY: Rishu,
she pronounced his name in little australian assent. my name from her mouth sounds with such a pitch making myself convinced she owns me.. even without my conscious the word of relation between us flowed out of my mouth.

Rk: Bhabhi,
'bhabi' why am i calling her that even after knowing what they did. But i can't even deny that the life am living now is given by them. So i dont want to be rude to her but to make her clear with my thoughts.

Lady: yes Rk, how are you?

Rk: AM FINE, WHY DID YOU CALL ME ?

Lady: Rk did you find anything about them? Any improvements in mission

Rk: NO, WE CANT FIND THEM TILL NOW...

Lady: Hmm i know its almost impossible but i hope you will find it soon... you dont have much time only 8 months more orelse you have to... she left the sentence incomplete

Rk: I KNOW AM TRYING HARD... DID YOU GET TO KNOW ANYTHING ELSE THAT WOULD HELP US IN THIS MISSION

Lady: Not much the only clue we had i gave you when you went to india. anyways i will ask him if he knows

Rk: BUT HE DONT WANT ME TO GET IT.

Lady: No its not like that he wants you to stay here with us as our son. He want us to be a family, And you being safe is his priority.

Rk: But i have a family here my mother my sister and ge... i mean business.. they all need me.

Lady: yeah... ok how is bittuji am trying his number from yesterday but he did not pick so i called you.

Rk: HE IS GOOD, YES HE WENT TO SOUTH TO MEET SOME PEOPLE REGARDING MISSION.

Lady: ok Rk i will call you after your dad comes back. Takecare

Rk: YEAH BUT CALL bittuji... AND TAKECARE BYE

He cuts the call and falls back on his bed thinking about the mission and remembers bittuji's travel to south so rushed to his room to discuss about it.

But stops seeing the time 12.40am so thinKS not to disturb him and goes to sleep.

kundra OUTHOUSE:(7.15am)

bittuji enter's study room after getting ready to speak with Rk about his travel to south india... Rk is seated in sofa rebittujing business magazine but the deep line in his forehead shows his state of being tensed. bittuji clears his throat to gain his attention,

Rk looKS up from the magazine and signs bittuji to sit placing the magazine in table and turns to bittuji.

Rk: bittuji what happened? Did you get any information..

bittuji: yes cheif, the people we hired in telungana, Andhra and karnataka has completed search and submitted reports but nothing is useful...

RK'S face seems like a valcano ready to pour out its lava.

Rk: you mean its utter waste.. our 3 months of search is a.

bittuji: Rk first listen to me completely,
We got some information from people of some parts of kerala and tamilnadu. I guess it would help us to some extent.

Rk: GOOD, SO we found them?

bittuji: not exactly but this clue will lead us few steps ahead in reaching them..

Rk: what we are waiting for then. Lets go there.

bittuji: No need they will come to delhi next week... am Keeping in touch with them.

Rk: OK THEN LETS LEAVE FOR KS. TODAY WE HAVE MEETING ON MR. MEHRA'S NEW PROJECT NEAR UNIVERSITY

they both went to km had their breakfast soon and left to KS.

DELHI UNIVERSITY CAMPUS(8.35am)
madhu and friends enters class and settle down in their usual place after the class hours they went to canteen for lunch and then to to collect few reference booKS for exam preparations.

Afternoon only one class is scheduled that is to discuss about each groups project details and allocate reference professors for each group.

The shocking thing is that they have to submit companies appointment letter for internship within one week and project can be started after finishing exams.

After class all settled in canteen to discuss topic and companies to apporach for internship... they don't really know much about companies that too in their own feild that is construction and infrastructure..

Ria: which companies we can apporach. Do you know any companies Trish, we dont know about delhi much

Trish: i dont have idea except kundra constructions

madhu: you mean your family business KS, its a top MNC we will have good scope for our project..

Trish: haan madhu, but i dont know i have to ask bhai about this.

madhu: we have to work with your bhai? Noway.. we wont get any information from him for our project.

Ria: why you are saying that madhuu. He will help us.. Trish is his sister we are her friends he will truely help us

madhu : No Ria, he will always speak in monosyllabic na,

Trish: dont worry madhu bhai will be mostly buzy and he won't handle interns like us.. so we would work with other managers only. Only problem is do KS have intern vacancy now?

madhu: ohh then its ok... whom to ask about it? We can call bittuji sir na

Ria: great idea madhuu

Trish: even if their is no vacancies in KS,he will help us with getting into any of our cilent companies.

madhu: ok then CALL him

Trish makes a call but bittuji's mobile comes switched off.. so they plan to make call or visit him in evening..

Suddenly Trishs phone rings she is showing all her 32 teeth after seeing the screen. Before attending she looKS up to see both devils busy in discussing about project so she moves away a little to speak to mukund unknown that both devils noticed that.

Ria: madhu did you see that he is calling her again... what you find is he good for Trish.

madhu: he is fine, but have to know a lot about him before deciding, the only thing i know about him for sure is HE IS A BIG FLIRT. I didn't call him yesterday... today i have to call him

Ria: hmm how you know he is a flirt.

madhu: because he calls me his girlfriend.. isnt it called flirting? If he is trying to cheat Trish then i wont leave him..

Ria: what you and his girlfriend?
Trish who cuts the call and reach near them hears Ria's last words.

Trish: what girlfriend? About whom you are speaking..

madhu: hmmm... about your brother Ria is asking whether he has any girlfriends or something like that.

Trish: No no bhai dont have any girlfriends..

Ria: Really, but he is handsome rich and famous he has everything a girl wants. They why?

madhu: who knows Ria? He maybe hiding it...

Trish: No madhu, bhai even accepted dbittuji's wish he is ready to marry anyone dbittuji and me choose but after his important projects may be after my final exam are over. Even dbittuji likes a girl for him

Dont know what happened suddenly madhus face falls she dint like his marriage talk that too associating his name with some other girl hurts her a little, she acts like she dint hear anything and starts to check her mobile notification.

When she feels someone standing behind her but before she turns a pair of hand closes her eyes. the roughness of hand makes her feel that it belongs to a male but who dares to play like this with her in whole college.

madhu: Who is this

Man: guess karo gudiya,

gudiya ? Only her family that too specially her brothers only call her gudiya but she knows its not mukund then whom this voice belongs to? She touch the mans hand to pull his hands away when her hand touches a ring accidentally. She stops her struggling immediately as she recognised who this ring belongs to as she is the one presented him that ring when he was going abroad for his studies.

madhu: Varun ?

Immediately the hands around her eyes got realised she turns around to see her brother come friend standing there smiling at her. She hugs him as she missed him a lot after he went abroad and returned only before 2months.

Varun handa: i missed you gudiya

madhu: i missed you too.. how are you? How is everyone in hp? How you came her? She started her questions still staying in his hug

mukund: gudiya i know you liked my surprise but look am also here.. No one remembers me now a days...
He says hinting Trish who dint call him after his return from hp.

madhu: bhai dont overact... BTW i really liked your surprise but varun here?

mukund: haan gudiya he is going to stay in delhi for next few months for his training.

madhu: Training?

Varun: haan gudiya, am join delhi university as an training professor.

madhu: what? You and professor... varun dont start your romeo avatar here. When are you joining from. she was shocked to know varun going to be a professor

Varun: From day after tomorrow.. so only i came today to complete the formalities. And give a surprise to you. Btw you dint introduce me to your new friend.

madhu: haan varun this is Trish my friend. Trish this is varun my brother.

Varun and Trish shakes hand, varun goes near Trish and whispers in her ears "hai bhabi, now i know why mukund has fallen for you" Trish shyly smiles. Seeing this mukund pulls him away and glares at him.

Ria also hugs varun as she also knows him from childhood as their are neighbours.

mukund: so can we all go out for dinner what say gudiya.

madhu: No bhai we are going to KS to meet Trishs bhai.

Varun: Mr. Rishab kundra?

madhu: Do you know Trish is a kundra? How you know RK?

Varun: just a guess you said KS. Whole world knows who is the owner of KS na gudiya. So

madhu: yeah, but we are going to meet bittuji, Trishs other brother to discuss about project work

mukund: ok then this sunday lunch at my place thats final and now i will drop you all there

All settled in mukund's car after dropping the trio and varun gave her a hug and left from there asking madhu to call them after reaching hostel.

kundra Studios (6PM)

Rk was going to and for in his cabin like a lion , how can this happen.. who is that? How dare he is to hug his madhu? What would be their relationship? Would he be her boyfriend or lover... but how come mukund her brother being silent seeing them hug... are their engaged and he is her fiancee. His thoughts are flowing uninterrupted thinking about various possibilities...

bittuji comes to Rk's cabin and knocked the door and waited for few seconds but no response again he knocked now he got panick and open the door to see Rk lost in thoughts walking here and there. He places his hands on his shoulder..

bittuji: Mk, what happened you seem lost
Somewhere

Rk: hmmm... nothing like that am waiting for your estimate buget file for our new Film.

bittuji: really, i thought you were lost in madhu's thoughts you even went to university leaving me alone in clients place.. hmmm what happened there

Rk is thinking how he was eager to meet her and went to university campus and how he say someone closing his madhus eyes and teasing her. He at once want to break his bones but before he get down from car he saw his love hugging him... then only he saw the people around they are not alone Trish Ria madhu's brother mukund are also standing around them. He cant able to see it anymore so he came back to KS without meeting her... Rk still in thoughts spoke out loud

Rk: hug happened

bittuji: what? Hug wow Rk i think its too fast. You hugged madhu bhabi. What she said.

Rk: its not me but... he dont want to speak about it.. bittuji leave that now show me the budget file..

they keep discussing about the project when bittuji's cell rings Rk glares at him for disturbing sound as already his mood is not fine he said bittuji to put it on silent mode and again continued meeting.. bittuji's cell was ringing again and again... after 15mins bittuji leaves to his cabin to make necessary changes in budget files as per Rk's suggestions..

bittuji comes out and checKS his phone to see 4 missed call from Trish and a message stating ''she is waiting in his cabin to meet him''. He goes to meet Trish to his cabin.

bittuji enters his cabin to see all three girls are sitting and Ria was eating chocolate cutely like a chubby kid he was standing near his cabin door watching her, Suddenly he realise what he was doing chides himself and goes to seat...

bittuji: hello Trish madhu Ria you all are here? If you need anything you could have called me or you came to meet Rk

Trish: No we came to meet you only bhaiya, hum aapako dopahar se phone karane kee koshish kar rahe hain but your phone was not reachable.

bittuji: yeah i was in a meeting so i would have switched it off.. btw what is the matter?

madhu: bittuji sir we need your help?

bittuji: madhu you can call me bittuji itself no need of sir and all and what help?

madhu: Do KS have any interns vacancy? She explained him about their project and other details...

bittuji: "yeh ek saadhaaran baat hai, main HR se baat karoonga."He calls Hr through intercom but he dint pick the call bittuji cuts the call. "I think he has already left for the day isalie main kal subah aapako phone karoonga. dont worry"

Ria: bittuji is DD here?

bittuji: haan Ria he is in his cabin reading a script.

madhu: ok bittuji, already we are getting late we are leaving now.

bittuji : come i will ask the driver to drop you.

Trish: Thankyou bhai. All four walKS towards the lift... when madhu remember she left her phone on table and excuses herself to collect it and come. . .

Rk comes out of his cabin to see bittuji he enters his cabin but finds no one around so he was about to open the door he pull it with force at the sametime madhu was holding the handle looses her balance and falls on Rk and both falls on floor madhu's head near his shoulders stay still to calm down her heartbeat that jumped high because of sudden pull and Rk holding her tight to himself in this arms.

After relaxing herself she looKS up to see her saviour and thank that person after seeing him she got lost in his eyes blankly looking into his dark brown eyes. The same eyes and person haunting her everyday after their first meet which she herself dont want to accept.. upon realizing their position she tries to stand up but endsup again falling on him as her shalls one end is under Rk in this process madhu's lips touches Rk's left cheek..

Rk'S POV:

AFTER bittuji left i throwed the file on table and tried to relax and concentrate but i can't so i planned to call it a day off and leave for Outhouse and went to fetch bittuji and opened his door noone was their but i can smell a sweet fragrance but it was mild i chided myself even before my mind comeup with an idea of it being my misty's.

I once again inhaled that smell and i moved back and pulled the door to go out but i sence someone holding it from otherside the next moment something came banging me and made me fall on floor along with a person. The first thought that crossed my mind is can it be bittuji.

But from when bittuji's skin become so soft and he turned so light weight??? Again the same sweet fragrance hit my nostrils heavily as its owner is on top of me calming down ownself keeping head on my shoulder and soft fingers placed on my chest i felt that someone over me moveing there head up and looking at me making me open my eyes to be lost in a hazel eyes.. not someones eyes but my misty's eyes, my misty in my arms and closely looking into my eyes without a blink. i lost myself in my hazel ocean of her eyes.

Suddenly i felt her eyes widening as if she now only realised our position after using me as her bed royally lying on me for past few minutes.. really i dont mind it, she was trying hard to get up and was almost successful in it which i dont like , her going away from me but she again fall on me with a bang her lips directly coming into contact with my left cheeKS... i again closed my eyes totally lost in the feel of her soft lips on my cheeKS... Our first kiss that too from my misty, Did my misty really kiss me or everything a dream of mine but the warmth of her lips on my cheeks was very much for real, even though it lasted only for few seconds its a bliss.

i felt some movement under me i opened my eyes to see her struggling to release her duppatta that is under me.. ny lips automatically curved into a smile, i raised up a little the next second she pulled her shall out and stood up. I helped myself up and looked at her to see what is her reaction for our first kiss but nothing she was just dusting her dress after a second looked up at me and moved close to me raising her hands towards me but her hands went past my hands to table and took something from their and turned away walking to door and opened it but before the door is closed she stopped but didn't turn

madhu: am sorry
i heard a mild whispering and the doors closing behind her

SORRY? sorry for what not giving a complete kiss my craze brain popped up a question. but what she is doing here in KS at this time, who was the guy she was hugging in college i followed her to get my answers.

Precap: Randeep and aliya's phone call getting to know each other better, did madhu and friends got internship in KS

Friends am really sorry about being late again... i am little busy in my brother's marriage.. after feb7th my updates will be given regularly...

Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago

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