RISHBALA FF: Wrong number, part 15 updated on feb

yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: harini_
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesome update,
amazingly written,
loved it,
finally the wait is over Rishbala met each-other properly,
</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Rk is so happy seeing his princess he loves her truly,
liked Madhu-Radhaji bonding,
waiting for Australia's mystery,
continue soon,
thanks for the update

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THANKYOU dear, yes they met.. mystery will start to reveal from next part

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Amazinggg update😳Loved it❤️Beautiful banner😳Pics are lovely❤️RK mesmerized by Madhu was so cuteee Waiting eagerly for the Precap

THANKYOU dear, keep reading

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: magicalmirage
Nice update dear
Wow...that was a nice scene...rk sneaking in Madhus room
And the morning was so nice..Madhu falling and rk caught her

THANKYOU DEAR

Trishna and bittuji witnessing
The family scene was great
Update soon Meri jaan😃
Thanks for pm

SURE MY PRINCESS

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul
rk kissing madhu...madhu holding his hand and murmuring in sleep that the Prince should not go was romantic.

Thankyou dear

rk catching madhu not letting her fall was romantic. madhu thinks her dream was like reality. she didn't know that it was real and her price is rk. thanks for adding more pics.nice edit

THANKYOU for advice dear

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: pirl18
Such a sweet part u wrote.

THANKYOU DEAR

Congratulations for rishbala's first kiss. 😆
I was laughing at our superstar Rk selecting today's special dress..
What is the need Rk for choosing special dress,, u look smart in vest and pjs too 😆

OH MY GOD I REALLY THOUGHT SOMETHING ELSE.. ITS GOOD AT LEAST U END IT UP WITH VEST AND PJ'S... RK SAFE

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Originally posted by: Nesansheki
Really cute na
She feel tat it is dteam.rk astonished tat she feel him
Bt nw she gt doubt tat he is near
Tq dear

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Posted: 7 years ago

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PART 8

BANNER by lovelyUmang

In this update mostly there is no Rishbala moments its mostly about madhu's family.. from next update i will start to give little little Rishbala moments..

Delhi university girls hostel(8.30pm):
The gang enters their room after placing their bags on bed. One by one all went to freshenup and change to night dress...
All sit for chit chat before sleeping its not even an hour but they were missing km and Maa already..
ria: we enjoyed a lot na in km

madhu: yeah ria it was super fun, am already missing km and Maa..

trishna: only Maa and km or my bhai also

madhu: what? Y would i miss your brother , maybe i will miss bittuji but not Rk... what a attitude... trishna are your bhai now only learning how to speak... always answering in monosyllabic hmm. Yes. No... then how he became Actor???? How he says dialogues ?? She gives a confused look to trishna

Hearing her both trishna and ria broke out into laugh..

trishna: YOU doubt RK'S professional efficiency? Noway you must be kidding, i thought after what i saw today morning u will miss bhai... what a eyelock what a pose

ria: madhu u romancing my dd, am heart broken she said dramatically keeping her hand on forehead but you are like my sister so i sacrifice dd for you.. saying this she wipes her eyes like wiping tears. trishna also joins in fake consoling her... madhu Looking at their drama takes a pillow and beat them.

madhu: After seeing your family am missing mine, bhai,dada,papa,chachu, chachi, bhais, bhabis my village everything...

ria: hmm... me too, maybe after exams we can go for couple of days before starting our project.

trishna: ok can we sleep now tomorrow we have classes its already 10pm...

madhu: you both sleep na i will make a call to bhai and come..

trishna and ria: ok but dont take too much time

madhu: ok good night

trishna and ria: good night

MUKUND'S CAR

Its quite night a car is speeding toward delhi, no words exchanged between the three persons in car, the driver on wheels and two others on back seat looking outside window with different emotions running inside them...

One is excited to reach delhi while the other is seriously thinking about the happenings in lucknow, he never has even a small thought that his past will hit him like this again after 18years. His thoughts are shattered by someone shaking his shoulder slightly, He shifts his eyes to the person sitting next to him,

Man: mukund... your phone

mukund: hmm, i asked not getting what he is speaking about.

Man: your phone is ringing.

He said pointing with his index finger towards my packet. I looked towards his pointed finger and touched my packet to feel a slight vibration with a ringtone playing in low tune.. i looked back at him and gave a nod after which he took back his hand and again turned towards window to continue his sightseeing.

I took my phone to see madhu calling me, i looked at my wrist watch it shows 9.50pm immediately i picked the call getting panicked about her safety

mukund: hello... before i continue i heared her voice from otherside

madhu: hello mukund bhai aap kaise ho? tum kahaan ho? aap delhi ya lucknow mein hain?

Her voice shows her being normal so he relax and continued speaking
mukund: am fine gudiya, (i can see him shifting little close to me with a smile on hearing the word gudiya) am on my way to delhi. Now say how is my gudiya how was your stay at trishnas place.

madhu: am fine bhai, hmm staying with trishna and Maa it was really good but am missing you all.

mukund: hmm. Dont worry gudiya i will come to meet you tomorrow with a surprise

madhu: surprise? What surprise bhai

mukund: you will get to know tomorrow gudiya keep patients.

madhu: ok how was your visit to home, how are all there?

mukund: hmm.. all are fine gudiya, ok now its getting late you go to sleep lets meet and speak tomorrow evening in your college after your class.

madhu: ok bhai gudnight
mukund: GOOD NIGHT gudiya

I cut the call and turns to him, he gave a small nod with straight face understanding my plan. I again turned towards window to forget myself in thoughts of what happened in lucknow..

Lucknow:

My car halted near my house at saturday early morning 6am, i can sense something is not normal as each time i come here my dadaji and papa would be waiting for me near main door but now no one was around, several negative thoughts surround my mind already with the call from dada to immediately meet him but i discard all my thoughts and picked my bag and went in.. i was not surprised with all my big joint family being their.. my chachi bhabis and maid preparing something in kitchen, brij reading newspaper, my 2cousins are alone missing but i know where they would be in backyard doing early morning exercise.

Varsitha bhabi was the first one to notice me who came to give chai to brij bhai...

Varsha: mukund when you come... why you are standing their.

Brij bhai saw me and smiled and came near me and picked my bag and handover it to servent to place in my room in first floor. And made me sit near him

I know within next few minutes whole family will be in living room surrounding me and that is what happened.. after all formal talks dadaji asked me to freshenup and come for breakfast.

(NOTE: Dadaji has 2 sons elder one is mohindar Malik and his wife rano Malik

MOHINDAR AND RANO

madhu and mukunds parents and 2nd son is ragunath(chacha) and his wife prema(chachi)

RAGUNATH AND PREMA
they sons

BRIJ AND VARSITHA

1. Brij Malik age 28 married to varsitha

TEJ AND ANITHA

2. Tej Malik age 27 married to anitha

VARUN Malik

3. varun Malik age 23 completed studies.)

After taking shower i reached prayer hall after daily pooja and breakfast.. along with my cousins i had masti time.. After that i spend some time with all ladies of my family, but from when i reached here i could see some tension in air whenever topic of madhu comes and all trying to change the topics... in the evening when i was going to meet dadaji i heard some sound coming from his room i went near and before i knock i heard the tensed talk of my father and dadaji but when i peek in i saw all mens there including my cousins. Its a shock for me to hear what they are discussing

M: am really worried about madhu now, I can't see anything bad happening to her.

Chachu: bhai don't worry nothing will happen to our gudiya.. mukund is going to be with her na.

M: But he cant be with her everytime, even if he is there he is alone how can he manage everything

Dadaji: mohindar don't underestimate mukund. He wont let anything happen to her.

Brij: but after what we heard from guruji we cant be careless dadaji. We all know what our carelessness cost us 18years ago.
Am confused what they are discussing about why they again speaking about that incident.

Tej: haan dadaji we have to make some arrangements to save her, She is the only hope for our family now.

M: haan beta we have to decide soon what can we do, we dont have much time mukund is already here... and by tomorrow night he will start back to delhi...

Brij: why can't we fix her marriage?

Tej: orelse we can bring her back to lucknow. She will be safe here

Chachu: Even me and brij can go and stay with her and protect her.

Dadaji: No we can't do anything what you all said. Firstly marriage she can't get married now we have to wait 8 more months. Secondly i cant stop her studies in middle and bring her back. Thirdly if you go and stay with her she will start to doubt. We can't let it happen.

Saying this i saw dadaji standing up from his seat and go near window and looking out toward our backyard.

M: So now what is the solution how we are going to protect her.

Dadaji: i have decided something and i will talk about it to mukund don't worry.

Chachu: papa but he doesn't know anything about it.

Dadaji: how many days can we keep him in dark... he have to know one day

Brij: whatever you said is right dadaji.. i will go and call him here.

Dadaji: No need brij... saying this dadaji turned back from Window, after few seconds i heared his voice saying

"mukund you can come in" all mens turned towards door and i know am caught so i entered the room. Brij bai went and closed the door so no one else hear our talk.

mukund: what are you all talking is gudiya in some problem but what is that?

Dadaji: yes beta, she is in big problem. And i want you to listen to me carefully. saying this he pulled me to sit on a chair and himself sat opposite to me

"mukund our enemies are after her i want you to keep her safe"

mukund: Dadaji our enemies? But why her and what it has to do with that incident?

Dadaji: yes our enemies, it has a lot to do with that incident... do you remember how your granny died.

mukund: yes, when she was returing back from temple with madhu brij and me 18yrs back she died in an accident.

Dadaji: No she was murdered by our enemies...

mukund: what murder? But why?
am shocked would really be an under statement here, my granny is such a soft spoken lady and cares for all what would be their enemity with her.

M: because she made you and madhu escaped from them.

mukund: Am confused.. madhu was Just a 3yrs child then.

Dadaji: mukund main aapako sab kuchh samajhaoonga ...

After that whatever he said i just can't believe but i can't even sho it away... because madhus life is involved in it.. anyhow i want to save her.

mukund: Dadaji we are in 21st century and you are speaking like this its all are just a story.

M: mukund this is what i said when my time came to save my mother but i failed now i dont want you to do same mistake.. you believe or not tomorrow we are going to meet guruji in mandhir.

Chachu: Tomorrow when you are leaving to delhi just do as per our plan and what your dadaji say.

mukund: you all know how much i like my gudiya and for her i will do it... but only for her i dont believe what you all say.

Saying this i went out of that tensed atmosphere to get some fresh air to terrace. from where i could see the garden around my house, cows shed, in backyard my eyes stoped at a spot seeing a weird plant that is only 2 to 3 feet tall its not first time am seeing it from my childhood its still in same height it never flowered or yeild any fruits, but i dont knoow why its dadaji's favorite plant.. he wont allow anyone other than family members around it.

After few minutes i came down had dinner and slept to face the unbelievable day of my life which convinced me to believe my dadaji's story.

I came out of my trace when the car halt before my 3bhk flat in delhi at 11pm. Without inviting him properly i left to my room just asking him to occupy room next to mine. I need some rest before i meet madhu.

Kundra Outhouse(8.45pm)

Rk entered Outhouse after dropping the trio in hostel. He is flying on cloud9,

its really a surprise for him that his dewane came home and spending time with her around is like a fairytale for him that always has happy ending, But life is not a fairytale he knows. When his truth is in open light before madhu.. he cant able to think more about her reaction.

For now he dont want to think about it but enjoy his life as much as possible. So he have a lot of memories to cherish his whole life. For the time being he want to forget everything happened in Australia.. but is it that easy when his past is keep on chasing him.

His phone vibrate in packet he takes it to see a call from unknown number. He doesn't know whether its madhu or others so he attend the call.

Rk: HELLO
i answered with a smile and hope that it would be my princess but next second all my hope and smiles vanished from my face hearing a little familiar lady's voice from otherside it didn't take me a long time to identify who it is.

LADY: Rk,

she pronounced his name in little australian assent. even without my conscious the word of relation between us flowed out of my mouth.

Rk: Bhabhi

Precap: Rk on call, mukund's surprise for madhu, madhu meeting RK in office.

Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

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wow dear..
your story is getting more interesting with each update..
keep writing..

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Awesome update!!

Loved it.

Thanks for d pm:)

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Posted: 7 years ago

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great update..
story is becoming more interesting with each update..
so many mysteries revolving around them..
madhu's life in danger..
what happened 18 years ago & who is with mukund??
who is RK's bhabhi?? where is his brother??
Is she behind all the secrets of his life??

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