Alright ! So here's another update and it's as usually AWESOME !!
Time and again i ask myself that could this Madhu be anymore cute?? Just look at the way she always seems so lost from her Brown baby Orbs. Not only this RK, anyone in the world will get attracted to her innocence and would decide to make her their Prey..
As i was reading the update, i thought why not to tune in to I,m so lost without you. I had listened it for the very first time after you mentioned it being played in Music room while RK and Madhu danced on it. With RK getting into her clothes , getting intimate with her kissing her on neck and all.. so this time too it was played in my earplugs while i read this update. but this time it felt so perfect. It was like this song was made for this Update .. lol... the way she was lost,.."I,m so lost without you .." and then when those As*holes were harassing her in Market ..the way madhu was scared..those lines perfectly fitted on her according to the situation
"Oh I dont really know
what i,m gonna do
Do u see a ray of hope
see it for me too
I miss u come back to me..."
I got the feeling like Madhu was hoping that from somewhere that Beast would come and turn into her savior. but alas ! that was not the case. Because the beast would always remain a beast ;-)
But still it would have been silly if Madhu would have hoped for RK because we all know how the story is actually like. And as i said earlier,.. if it wouldn't have been this way then people won't be finding it worth commenting. They are still commenting because they simply can't ignore the charm which this story has to it's peak !
Your stories are like Aaniya.. What is that which is a famous say of People?
yeah.. They Can Love it
Or they can Hate it
But they simply can't ignore it. ;-)
hahahahaha and i loved how she was like she'll faint at any moment when she saw the cordial relation of our Hawtyy with those As*sholes.. God Seriously yaar!! Even i would have freaked out if i was in her place . My nightmare Befriended with more than one nightmares hahaha..😆🤣 does that even make sense.. ?😕🤔 Well .. i guess no.😳😆
Oh and RK was a member of Political Party?? Aaghh Now it DOES make SENSE !!
RK was dragged into that bullshit by those people .. After all it's all politics. One of the most dirtiest company where people are literally As*sholes @!!
and i wanna seriously say this to you Aaniya !
I LOVE YOUUU!!!!!
I LOVED THE WAY YOU SHOWED RK'S POSSESSIVENESS EVEN IF IT WAS JUST IN SOME 2 3 LINES! BUT U DID!!!
you absolutely rocked it girl!
the lines ..!! ufff ..My Most Favorite Dialogues of this update so Far!! I wont say *of this story* cause their are many more lines which are mine favorite ones. more than this one 😃😳
(Shaksam exclaimed "we have just got her yaar.. Do u know her ?"
RK'S EYES HARDEN HEARING HIM!! but regardlessly he didnt give it away.
"She lives in my home" RK spoke. his eyes fixed on Shaksam, DARING HIM TO SAY A WORD ABOUT MADHU, MORE !!!!!)
A GREAT never ending applause from my side to you on this one !
AWWw for a long time i waiting to see Oops i mean read their kissing scene again, but after that day when she locked
herself in her room for two days *chuckling* RK never kissed her again..! But u made my day .. yayy..
i cannot love u anymore for it.
THE PASSION IN THIS STORY IS TO DIE FOR !! ❤️
the way he roughly looked at her when she didnt respond to his kiss at first and then kissed her again was TERRIFIC !!
ohh so this time she was not in a daze like the first time,. she was in her full senses this time.. hmm
i quite like it.. cause she even responded with that moan when he cupped her breasts.
unlike last time... at that time she was so shell shocked that nothing got registered in her mind !
i loved this one too yaarr!
and also loved how he intimidated her by saying that she would have to answer people downstairs that what her belongings were doing in his room even her dupatta... lol...
khud ek tw bechari ki izzat looti and now even making her scare on it.!hahahahaha aahh,, that's the reason i love you RK!!
so finally the things are back to the present ...now would love to read the present phrase and also their *ahem* *ahem which they will do only in present... haayiii..
you must keep their sex scene extremely HOT and Rough One ! ☺️
I know you can cause u are best in ADULT GENRE!!
P.S : I just don't know why the f**k people have to think from their POV if they're reading a fiction. The rules to read a fiction is just to let it be the way it is. How can people be such dumbAsses?!😡. that they can't see that a real bad person wont love anyone without their own selfish reasons. And Time and again RK has shown himself to be a Protective , Loveable man just not towards Madhu but that's how this story has formed . THEIR LOVESTORY HAS FORMED!. It was , has always been and is just a lust what he considers he has with madhu but how that lust will eventually out of nowhere in the blue would turn to love is what the story is all about. In amidst of all Crazyness , Lust , passion, hot steamy Romance , sensuality ..people commenting on your updates are oblivious to that something beautiful which is blossoming between them . No lovestory sounds interesting to me unless it is filled with hot romance and Passion at heights.!!
And this is story of yours Aaniya is just what simply seems a complete Package to ME. I don't know and i can't say about other people but u definitely ignites a Fire within me with it's every update !
Keep Up the same effort!!
with lots and lots of love... :*
Love,
Annie
Edited by -LoveAnnie- - 8 years ago
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