Rishbala SS - Revenge-A love story (completed pg 43 dt 21/5) - Page 33

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

PART-11

Superb update dear😊There is no piece in rk and madhu's life and i missed rishbala scenes so much...Now the balraj is also cama and what he will do?.

Thank you dear..thanks for the separate comments..loved it a lot😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi friends..here is the last part..a simple ending without any twists & turns..pls read & drop your reviews..pls ignore mistakes..


Revenge-A love story

Last part


balraj looked rk & smirks..he looks away..
"can u pls gave me way to get inside..?"balraj asked..rk moved aside & gave him way..balraj enters inside both madhu & rk looks them worried..balraj sat on the couch & looks radha & madhu..
"namasthea radhaji..this is u ur bahu..?very beautiful.."he said..radha gritted her teeth & looks away..
"mr.balraj u didn't came here to judge for any beauty contest na..lets get into the matter.."rk said & sat opposite to him..
"hm..very smart..just like mihir.."he said..
"where is my ma..??"rk asked him..
"did u forgot about the property..??"balraj..
"no but seems like u forgot about my ma..i want my ma..tell where is she..??"rk asked..
"dont u believe me..?"balraj asked..
"how i believe a ra**al like u..?"rk..
"oh..then u believed that mohan na.."balraj..
"i tink u knew what happend to him..ppl like u finally get that punishmeant..death.."rk said & hearing balraj laughs evilly..
"it was my punishment..i punished him for betraying him.."he said..radha & madhu looks him bewildered..but rk sat there like statue...
"y r u silent rishab..got scared hearing this.."balraj asked raising his eyebrows...
"scared..??for what..?"rk asked..
"oh..so u r not scared of me..??"balraj asked..
"never mr.chowdary.."rk..
"ok..u scared of me or not..its not the matter..its the matter about money right..i & mohan were 50-50 parters..but finally he betrayed me..money for him & prison for me.."he said & gritted his teeth..
"i said u na i want to see my my first.."rk..
"she is safe..first sign this.."he said by keeping property papers on the glass table before them..
"first i want to see my ma.."rk..
"first sign this.."balraj..
"untill i see my ma..i wont sign.."rk said with determination..
"u r making me angrily.."balraj said with a frown..
"first do what i said..."rk stood up & left..balraj looks him leaving & left angrily..madhu runs behind him..rk entere him room..madhu too enters & closed the door..
"whats ur intention rk..i dont want to wear white saree.."madhu..
"white saree..??"he looked her confused..
"if u die i become a widow na widows r usually wearing white saree.."madhu said..
"i didn't died yet na..then y u saying like this..?"rk asked..
"soon u r going to be die na.."madhu said with a bit anger..
"what..u want to say..??stop ur drama & say it clearly.."rk said..
"r u playing with that balraj..??dont u like to live..he killed the great criminal mohan & u r..u r making him angry..rk v dont want these properties..give it to him..meera ma is important for us na..after getting her v can go to any other place & live there peacefully.."madhu said..
"madhu u r really an idiot.."rk said & madhu glared at him..
"do u think my ma is with him..no she is not with him.."rk said..
"then..?"madhu..
"she is with papa ji..."rk said..
"what..with papa..??"madhu asked confused..
"madhu there r so many things there that u dont know..u remeber 1 week before i went to police station but when i come back.."rk said..

1 week before

rk was driving but he parked the car on the road side when he got a call from malik..
"ha..papaji.."rk..
"hello..can u come here now..?"mohan..
"what happend papa..any problem..??"he asked..
"no..its..pls come here fast.."he told & cuts the which made him more tensed..rk starts the car again & drove to chawl...rk rang the calling bell & malik opened the door..
"ha beta..come.."malik..rk..
"whats the matter...?y u called me..??"suddenly rk's eyes falls on a woman who sitting on the couch..he looks malik & then went near her to face her..
"ma.."he muttered with filled eyes..she raised her eyes & looks him..
"rishu..?r u my rishu..?"she asked..
"yes ma..i am..i am ur rishu.."he said & holds her hands..she cupped his face & kissed on his forehead..
"bhai..this..this is my beta..he grown up na.."she said & malik smiles..
"papajj..how this..??"rk asked..
"rishab...u know y mohan jump out off from that asylum...?"malik asked..rk nodded no..
"meera escaped from his custody..she was his weapon na..meera came here yesterday night..but he was killed by someone.."malik..
"i will say this good news to everyone.."he said & took his phone from his denim's pocket..
"no..not now.."malik stopped him & he looks..
"mohan kundra's family is a threat for ur family too.."malik said..
"means..?"he asked confused..when malik was about to say meera spoke"i ran away from there but he found me..he again tried to take me with him..but some how i managed to escape from & hides behind & tree..then i saw some people circled..& one man asked about me & mihir's properties..i didn't see his face but he killed mohan & threw body into a cliff.."meera said..
"who is this new avathar.."rk..
"dont know..we have to find it out..till then this is our only secret.."malik said & rk nodded..


Present


"then y dont u tell about this to me..?"madhu asked..
"madhu i said na..papaji said no need to tell this to anyone till v found him..anyone means anyone.."rk said..
"u always have ur own secrets..wont let me come to know about anything.."madhu...
"again..can u pls shut ur hippo sized
mouth for sometime..?"rk..
"what..u r saying my mouth is a hippo sized one..??"she asked..
"uff..madhu stop..i dont wanna start a fight again.."rk said..
"so whats ur next plan..how u r gonna defend that balraj..?"madhu..
"abhay promissed me to help.."he said..
"abhay..??"madhu asked confused..
"ha..abhay kapoor..once i told u about him na..my bhai's friend..now he got transfer from delhi to mubai..yesterday i called & he will help us.."rk said..
"oh..this balraj na he is really a moron.."madhu chuckled...
"not as much u.. "he said & smirks..madhu glared at him..


Night

**ring-ring**


rk picks the call..
"hello.."rk..
"its me.."balraj's voice..
"whats the matter...?"rk..
"tmr morning my people come to pick u up.."he said..
"for what..??"rk asked..
"they will bring u to my place..there u sign the property papers & u will get ur ma.."he said..rk smirks & said.."ok.."& cuts the call..
"who was that..?"madhu..
"balraj.."he said & calls abhay & said everything..
"i am afraid.."madhu.."r u going alone there..??"
"yes..dont worry i will be safe.."he said..


Morning


a white innova car stops in front of rk mansion..rk enters inside & closed the door..madhu saw all these through the window & gasped..
"madhu.."she hears radha's voice & turns..
"ma..i am scared..will he do anything to rk..??"madhu..
"dont worry madhu..nothing will happen to him.."radha..

Evening

madhu tried rk's number but its switched off..
"y they r taking this much time..?"she thought & got worried..


**Dong-Dong**


hearing the voice of the calling bell madhu rushed to downstairs..radha already opened the door & she saw rk & abhay on the doorstep..she ran to him & hugs him..
"u r ok na.."madhu..
"yes madhu..i am completely fine.."rk said..
"then y u took this much time..i got worried.."she said..
"i went to police station..abhay wanted to register case against him.."rk..
"so he.."madhu..
"got arrested.."abhay said"my guess was correct he planned to kill him after getting sign from him.."
"but he & his force came at right time to save me..thanks abhay.."rk..
"its my duty.."he smiles & they shared a hug..


After a week(night)


meera & radha went to upstairs hearing an arguing sound..
"whats going on here..??"meera asked rishbala who was fighting as usual...
"ma..its not me who initiated..its this pagal.."rk said..
"no ma..its his problem.."madhu said..meera & radha smiles..
"ok..whats ur new problem..?"radha asked..
"this pagal want to go for honeymoon next week.."rk said..
"only this much..whats wrong in this.."meera asked..
"ha...make him understand ma.."madhu..
"rishu..whats this beta..whats wrong in this..?"meera...
"ma..u know where she want to go.."rk..meera & radha looks him..
"antartica..she is really mad.."rk said..they looks her astonished..
"y r looking like this..i heard that the place is very cold & no one is there..so i said him its the.."before she could complete he palmed her mouth..
"whats it..??"radha..
"nothing ma.."he said..madhu fidgeting inside his grip...
"rishu..whats this rishu..let her say..."radha..
"no ma..problem solved.."he said..they smiled & leaves..rk took her hand off her mouth..
"madhu r u gone mad..u know what u was about to tell..?"rk asked..
"what..u told me it na.."madhu..
"oh god..when i feel like marry u..pagal..i will marry any other girl &.."he stopped..
"y u stopped..say it..so this ur intention hah..divorce me & marry another bi**h.."she said..
"my foot..."he said & went to bed..
"rk..u r gonna sleep..?"madhu..
"then what u want me to do..dance..should i dance now..??"rk said & lie down..
"y u r thich much angry..okk..i dont wanna go there okk..i will say another place.."madhu said & sat on the bed..
"whats next..mars..?"he said & turn to other side..
"r u really angry with me..?"she asked..
"yes.."he said..
"y..what i had done..?"madhu..
"what u tried to tell them madhu..what they will think about us.."rk.
"u didn't allow me to tell na.."madhu..
"they can understand.."he said..
"how..??"madhu..
"will up pls shut up or i want to shut ur mouth with any tape.."he asked with a bit anger..she chuckled..
"shut up.."he turned off the light..but madhu switched on the light again..
"madhu.."rk called annoyed..
"what..?"madhu..
"dont u allow me to sleep..?"rk..
"no.."she said..
"what u want..??"he asked..
"you.."madhu said..he looks her & smirks...
"dont u want to go antartica for that.."rk..
"dont tease me.."she said..
"but from where did u got that idea..??"rk..
"that..its a cold place na..so thought.."madhu..
"to go & die there.."rk"v will froze madhu.."
"so..?"madhu..
"so what..i am sleepy.."he said..
"i am not sleepy.."madhu..he looks at at her smirks..
"err..stop smirking.."she said..
"then..?"he said..
"u r bad.."madhu..
"really..?"rk..madhu turns to other side...
"antartica.."he said & giggled..
"i will kill u.."she said & climbed above him..he startled by her sudden action..
"madhu what r u doing..?"rk..
"gonna kill u.."madhu said & slammed her lips with his & kissed him passionately..he hugged her tightly & his right hand hand moved to the zip of her suit while left to her waist..he opened the zip of her suit in a go..madhu raised her head & looks him who is equally panting..
"rk..i love u.."she said..
"i love u too madhu.."he said & they closed their lips again..&..


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Haha..dont know why my most of the stories ending like this...so after that &..its according to your imagination..
goody minded people imagine decently😊...
dirty minded people imagine evilly😈..

& all my lovely friends thank you so much for your great love & support🤗...
thank you so much dears❤️❤️❤️..

-Aiswarya-



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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful ending
Meera was with rk n he was just baiting balraj to catch him
Last part was cute loved rishbala nok jok
Pls write epilogue
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update Aishu..
Balraj is idiot and tried to fool RK..
Rk is over smart..
But this madhu is making serious scene as a comedy one..
Meera escaped ...nice..
Last part is so cute..
Liked their cute fight..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
haha nyc update superb story
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful ending Aishu
I loved this story so much...in every update, suspenses...I'll miss this story

Hmm..So Rk knew Meera was safe...so that's why he was dealing with Balraj instead of going what he said..

Balraj had planned to kill him after his work finished...but all went well...
Madhu was worrying so much for him..but Rk...he was keeping secret..

lol..how much will they fight?
Antarctica?? She is too much...hehe...and she was going to say Radha and Meera about getting hit and all...Lol...
They fight a lot lot but love each other a lot too...loved reading their nokjhoks..

Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome end ash..
everything ended in good light
as for the end part option.. well i choose the later one, cause my mind is roller coaster ride..
lolZ...
thnx for this lovely story & pm :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice ending.Their Nok jhok changed into love.Finally happy family.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome ending ..
Tnku for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice ending..
RK baited Balraj.
Rishbala are fighting as usual.
Madhu wanted to go to Antartica for honeymoon.

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