RISHBALA SS- Love You Gudiya (Last Part pg 15 dt 14/4) - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Aishu, Awesome update loved it

RK told the truth to Madhu and the reason why he was acting like that.
Thought Rishbala will be happy but Maya is obsessed with RK and she was his secret admirer.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear

Thank you so much ananya 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: pirl18

Owsm part dear
Maya is too much obsessed with Rk..
Waiting 4 nxt

Thank you so much 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

beautiful update aishu. .
madhu know all. ..
Maya. .uff! !she lied to rk. .
thanks for pm. .

Thank you so much sapna..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: manna43

Wonderful update.But what this Maya is,why she is forcing rk now.confused.

Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Supervampire

nice update

maya loved rk nd now back for rk
she is trying to hurt madhu nd blackmail rk
why she said that she has only three days?
thanx for pm

Thank you so much priyanka...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Hi buddies here is the next part...unedited so pls ignore mistakes 😊past in blue..


Love You Gudiya



Part-3



"Maya what r u saying..u love me..but..how it happen..i dont know who r u..then how..??"rk.
"yes..u dont know who is me but i know who r u..& i loved u a lot but before v could meet my destiny took me away from.."tears filled in her eyes..


she starts telling her story..(5 years back..)

"maya come fast..v will get late.."ria called her...
"ha..coming ria..wait.."maya came outside..
"sorry ria i cant come today.."maya.
"what..but y..?"ria.
"papa & ma went to market..madhi is alone here.."maya..madhu came outside..
"dont worry..madhu u also come with us.."ria.
"no..madhu is not well.."maya..
"hey pls come yaar..i feel bored without u.."ria.
"ria.."maya.
"ok..then i am not going.."ria.
"ria its ur collage na.."maya.
"didu what happend..?"madhu.
"today is the year ending function in their collage..i agreed her to go with her but u r here alone na.."madhu.
"no probs didu..i will adjust..ria di is ur bestie hah.."madhu..
"but what u tell when papa & ma ask about me.."maya.
"i will manage it..u dont worry..."madhu smiled..
"ok madhu..take care.."maya leaves with ria..
"maya y u r this much concerned about madhu..?"ria.
"y u r asking like this..?she is my sister na.."maya.
"half sister.."ria added..
"its true..our papa is diff v r from same womb.."maya.
"but i think malikji is more caring for madhu..."ria.
"no..not like that papa like me too.."maya.
"but..i think.."ria..
"pls..v can stop talking about this.."maya.
"ok.."ria nodded..


College..


"next is the violin show by Rishab Kundra.."the anchor announced & they hears huge applause from the audience ria too..
"who is that..y everyone is overexcited.."maya asked ria.
"Hm..Rishab kundra..rk..my rk.."ria.
"ur rk..?is he ur bf..y dont u tell me..?"maya.
"no..but i really wished if i could get him..not only all the in this clg.."ria.
"whats his specialty..?"maya.
"that u will understand after seeing him.."ris..maya gave a whatever face..
soon they hears a huge applause & here comes rishab kundra..
"maya..look he came.."ria tells to maya who is looking down..hearing ria she looks at the stage in vain...he starts playing the violin..everyone melted in that including maya..a smile appears in her face..ria notice this..program ended & he leaves..
"Rishab kundra.."maya mumbled..
"hello..come out from ur dream world.."ria snapped & maya came into her senses..
"now u understood..?"ria.
"yes...Rk..his handsome face..charm..more than this all.."maya.
"more that this all.."ria.
"his music skill.."maya.
"maya..r u falling for him..?"ria.
"i dont know but i think so.."she smiled..


after 2 days..


"maya..maya.."shamseer calls in anger..she came..madhu & padmini also present there..
"what happend papa..?"maya..he slapped her..
"papa.."maya asked in shock..
"stop..y u steal money..?"shamseer.
"what..i did'nt do that.."madhu.
"if it is not u them whom..madhu..i know she dont do anything like that..500 Rs is missing from my wallet.."shamseer..maya looks madhu..she hides behind padmini..
"now u starts stealing also...how can i believe u..u done this becoz u r not my blood.."shamseer..everyone get shocked..maya cries..shamseer leaves angrily...padmini came near her & consoles her..she cried & leaves from there madhu too followed her..she went to her room and lie on the bed & starts crying her heart out..madhu sat near her & touched her shoulder...
"didu..i am sorry..i done that.."madhu..she looks her astonished..
"but madhu.."maya..
"i had taken it not for me..my friend trishna is a talented dancer & she is selected for a dance competition but for that she want to pay 500 Rs she is from a poor family..so she cant afford that so she decisides not to go..but she was really sad about that decision..i were unable to see her sadness..so i.."tears filled in her eyes..
"but u dont worry..i will tell the truth to papa..i did wrong so i deserves punishment.."madhu..
"no madhu.."maya wipes madhu's tears"do did'nt done any wrong actually u done a good deed..i am proud of u.."maya hugs her..


after 3 months..


Its holi & their chawl is celebrating holi..ria,madhu & maya r full of colors...
"didu i will come now.."madhu tells maya..maya nodded..she leaves..maya & ria continued playing with colors..suddenly maya's eyes stucked on rk who is standing in a corner...he is searching someone..
"ria..look rk.."maya..ria turns & saw him..
"i invited him for holi celebration..u became happy na.."ria..maya smiled..
"hey rk.."ria waved her hand & he saw her..
"hi ria.."he came near her..
"its difficult to identify u in this croud.."rk..ria smiled..
"u know who is this.."ria pointed at maya..he looks her...but he is unable to identify her as her face is filled with colors..
"she is ur secret..."before she could complete maya palmed her mouth..
"she is my..?"rk..
"nothing..nothing..u pls enjoy.."maya hurriedly to some colors & put it on his face & tries to run from their but she slipped & about to fall rk holds her..maya looks him by panting..ria giggled & she realize that she is in his arms..rk makes her stand properly & asks "r u ok..?"but she did'nt hear him she is still looking him like a statue..
"hello.."he snapped..& she came into her sense..
"what..?"maya.
"r u ok..?"he asked again ..
"ha..yes..yes.."maya..he smiled..her mind singing songs seeing him smiling at her..he leaves..ria came near her..
"ria..its conformed..i am falling for him.."maya..
"ria can u help me..?"maya.
"how..?"ria.
"can u pls tell him my love for him.."maya.
"me but.."ria.
"pls u only can do it..pls.."maya..
"ok..i will.."ria smiled..


Next week(college)


"Rk i want to talk to u.."ria..
"what..?"he looks her..
"i..i..i am her to forward a proposal for u.."ria stammered..
"what..proposal..from ur side.."he raised his eyebrows..
"no..from my friend's side.."ria.
"ur friend..ok tell who she..?"rk.
"maya..once u meet her.."ria.
"when..?"rk.
"last week during the holi party..a girl put color on ur face na she is maya.."rk.
"oh..but i did'nt saw her face.."rk.
"u will surely like her..she is very beautiful.."ria starts prasing her..
"hm..i like her character..day dreamer.."rk"first tell her meet me directly..then i will think about it..hah next week v r going to madhya pradesh pls tell her meet me before that.."he leaves..ria jumped in joy..



night


"hello maya.."ria.
"what happend..what he told..?"maya.
"he told he want to meet u.."ria.
"me..but ria.."maya..
"no excuses..meet him by tmr..next week he is going to MP.."ria.
"ria i am panic.."ria.
"dont worry yaar..he is not going to eat u.."ria teased...
"ok..but where can i meet him.."maya tells shyly...
"at park..i called him & told to come on lovers park tmr 10 am..he told he will & one more thing.."ria..
"what..?"maya.
"he is very excited for seeing u.."ria...maya blushed..


Next day..


maya tells bye to madhu & leaves..she drives her scooty in the thoughts of rk..
"today i am going to meet my love.."maya smiles..he reached a bit near park & saw rk is sitting on a bench from far..she tries to wave her hand but he did'nt saw her..he gets a called & stood from the bench & talks to the person..she again starts waving her hand without minding her driving..all hears a huge noise..& everyone gathered around maya who is lying on the ground semi consciously..she loss the balance of scooty & hits a tree..her face was drenched with blood..rk too came there hearing a huge noise & came & saw maya..again he did'nt saw her face becoz of blood..
"y u all simply watching this..is this looking funny.."rk said a scooped her in his arms..she saw him by the corner of her eyes & smiles...


Hospital


"she is critical..only a bit chance for her.."dr informed him..he gets tensed & saw ria calling..
"hello ria.."rk.
"what happend..did u saw her..i sm trying her number from the past 10 mins..she not picking the call.."ria.
"no ria..i am now at hospital.."rk.
"what..rk r u ok..?"ria..
"yes..."he told the whole things happend..
"ok..i will come now..which hospital.."ria.
"city hospital.."rk.
ria came to hospital..
"rk.."ria.
"ha ria..my ma called me now..papa is not well.."rk..
"u go rk..i will manage this.."ria..he leaves just then dr came outside & says "patient asks for mr.Rk."
"Rk..but..OMG..is she maya .."ria got tensed & enters inside ICU..
he identified that it is maya..
"maya.."ria called in pain..she signaled her to come..she goes near him..
"i want to him ria..i want tell my love..will i go from this world before that.."tears filled in her eyes..ria palmed her mouth..
"pls stop telling like this.."ria cried..
"Rk.."she mumbled & passed away..
"maya.."ria shook her & cries..



...Flash back ends...


Maya cries remembering all this..rk's eyes also filled with tears hearing her story..
"death cheated me once..if i died after telling my love i dont get this much sad..one week after my death u went MP & i again got a chance to meet u.."maya..
"then y u lied to me..?"rk..
"becoz if i told u the truth will u come with me..?will u accept a body less spirit..& my greatest fear was that when i tell the truth u try to go away from me..so i told u both to not get married before finding my murders.."maya.
"but y u punished sultan too..?"rk.
"how can i punish u only..then u will come to know about the truth na.."maya..
"i were single for these all 5 years..then y u did'nt tried to get me..?"rk.
"becoz i am a spirit..i have no body..i cant make u mine without a body.."maya.
"so u choose madhu's body hah..?"rk.
"yes.."maya..
"how can u think like this..she is ur sis.."rk.
"half sister.."maya..
"i am only madhu's u will not get me.."rk...maya gets angry..
"u will be mine only rk..& day after tmr it will happen.."maya..he looks her confused..
"u r thinking how na...day after tmr is a special day only comes after every 5 years..& i can hardihit u without the help of a body..my powers will get doubled that day.."maya..
"maya no..if u loved me so much then y r u hurting me.."rk.
"becoz i want u...from very young age also madhu got all happiness but i wont let her get u..i want to win this time.."maya..
"y r u behaving like this..u know how much she loved u.."rk.
"Rk stop..i dont want to hear anything.."maya..
"no maya...i love madhu not u.."rk..maya gets angry & her eyes turned red..she enters to madhu's body..madhu stood from the bed with jerk & came towards rk..he moved back..she took a knife..rk looks her bewildered..
"u love her na..then i wont let her
live anymore.."she told this & raised her hand to stab herself..
"madhu..."he screamed..





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Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Superb Update aishu..
Feel bad for Maya..
Her past was so sad...
She loved him verymuch..That'swhy she don't want to leave him...
But She wants to take her sister's life..
What is he going to do?
How can he control Maya?
Madhu tries to stab herself,because of Maya influence..
Waiting ...
Update soon..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Superb update.felt sorry for Maya.she loved Madhu but after her death she is jealous and she want rk.so she is going to kill Madhu.please continue soon.thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Superb update
Feeling sad for Maya but what she is doing with rk n madhu is wrong
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Awesome update,
its one side love from Maya and Rk didn't seen her face before and she lied to Rk,
what ever she is doing now is wrong,
Rk loves Madhu ,Maya is jealous of Madhu and trying to hurt her,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

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