RISHBALA SS- Love You Gudiya (Last Part pg 15 dt 14/4) - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Read all the parts.

Maya is obsessed with RK and has posessed Madhu's body.
Madhu would be shocked that her sister is doing this to her.

Thank you so much..yeah madhu cant bear it if she come to know her sister is doing all these..
Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAI92

Maya is so obessed and ria due to her Maya made Madhu as half sister.How will RK tackle this problem ??waiting for next part??

Thank you so much..will update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friends here is the next part...pls ignore mistakes..


Love You Gudiya



Part-4


"madhu..."he screamed & closed his eyes..
"rk.."he hears madhu's voice & opened his eyes..
"what happend..?"madhu..he looks her knife is missing..& everything is normal there..he hugged her..
"u r ok na.."he broke the hug & asked..she looks him confused..
"what happend..y u look worried..i am alright.."madhu..he again hugs her..he hears a laughing sound & raised his head..he saw maya on the ceiling & get shocked..the clock strikes 12.00 am..
"look rk..its the next day..tmr i will come to take u with me..the day when i lost u & that day itself i will gain u..bye.."she disappeared..he hugs madhu tightly & wept..she feels his tears on her shoulder..
"rk what happend..?"madhu..
"nothing madhu..i..i am just worried about u.."rk..


Next day..


"madhu y u look sad..?"rk..
"nothing rk.."madhu..
"tell na.."rk.
"that..tomorrow.."madhu..
"what..?"rk..
"tmr is my didu's fifth death anniversary.."madhu..
"what...?"rk..he got more worried..
"what i do now only one day left before me.."he thought..
"what r u thinking..?"madhu asked..
"nothing.."rk..he thought for a while & tells "come.."he hold her hand & went to pooja room..
"rk.."madhu..
"show ur hand.."rk..she forwarded her hand & he tied a hold thread in her hand..
"rk..this.."rk..
"dont remove this from your hand.."rk..she nodded confusingly..
they went out from the pooja room & he hears maya's voice again..
"u did wrong rk..but i dont want her body anymore & no one can stop me.."maya..he looks around but did'nt saw her..
"Hello rk.."he saw sultan coming towards him..
"sultan when u came..?"rk..
"now.."rk..
"dont u want to know y i came..?"sultan..
"u used to came here na.."rk..
"but today have a specialty.."sultan..
"what..?"rk..
"i am going to get married..next month.."sultan..
"oh..congrats..madhu take coffee for sultan.."rk..madhu nodded & leaves..
"rk..y u look dull.."sultan..
"sultan..i.."rk.
"what..any problem..?"sultan..
"i am gonna end tmr.."rk..
"what..what r u telling..?"sultan..
"come.."rk & sultan went out side..he told everything..
"what..its..its unbelievable..maya loved u..?"sultan..
"hm..tmr is the dead end.."rk..
"dont worry rk..i will do something for u.."sultan..
"no sulta..u cant u anything..only one day left.."rk..
"dont worry come with me.."sultan..
"where..?"rk..
"i know a baba..he will help us.."sultan..
"u mean exorcism..?"rk..
"exactly.."sultan..
"but.."rk..
"dont worry..i am with u na.."sultan..
they went to baba..
"baba..pls help.."sultan told the matter to him..baba thought for a while & told.."have solution but its like playing with death..r u ready to take risk..?"baba..
"i am ready for anything..i dont what anything happen to madhu..i am ready baba whats the solution..?"rk..
"maya loves u a lot..she is possessive about u..the only reason for she is with u is still u r a virgin..so he prohibited u from getting intimate with ur wife..she cant see u with any other woman.."baba..
"so..?"rk..
"before today 12.00 am u & ur wife want to become one..maya is still on the earth only for u..if she loss u then her power will decrease & i can send her atma to parlok.."baba..
"but baba if she try to harm madhu..?she tried once..."rk...
"dont worry i will do pooja here..she cant do anything directly..but remember one thing she try to stop u indirectly..so dont go outside at night..she will create illusions but dont believe in present..& pray to god...goodness will always win above badness.."baba..
"but baba..its..dont v have any other solution..??"rk..
"i told u na..the only reason for maya's comeback is u only..if u r not ready for this then only one solution is there.."baba..
"what...?"rk..
"u go with her to her world.."baba..
"which one u select..life or death..time is less.."baba..
"life.."rk..then go remember one thing she will create anything for stop u..dont come out side ur home night time..neither u nor ur wife.."baba..
"u want to come here evening.."baba told to sultan..he nodded..they leaves..sultan & rk reached sultan's home..rk sat on a sofa embarrassed while he hears a giggling sound..he looks & saw sultan..
"sultan.."rk glares at him..
"its a nice solution na.."sultan..
"u r laughing in my predicament na.."rk..
"sorry..sorry..but i couldn't control my laugh.."he laughed..
"sultan..stop this..if u were in my place what will u do.."rk..
"i will do what he said.."sultan..
"but how can i..?"rk..
"whats the problem in that...baba did'nt told u to rape any random women..she is ur wife na ur private property.."sultan..
"but what she will think about me..?"rk..
"rk i have a doubt.."sultan..
"what...?"rk.
"do u have any physical problem..?"sultan..
"what..what u mean..?"rk..
"did i want to explain it..?"sultan..
"sultan.."rk said in a warning tone..
"then whats ur problem..?"
"nothing..ok..but how i make madhu understand that maya is doing all these.."rk..
"u tell her..madhu want to know about this rk.."sultan.
"but she cant bear it.."rk..
"but she want to know this.."sultan..rk nodded..

Evening

sultan went to baba & rk to his aparment..

kundra mansion..

Rk went to his room & saw madhu is cleaning the shelf..he went near her & back hugged her..madhu removes him hand & told "dont touch me.."
"what happend..y u looks angry..?"rk.
"where were u..?"madhu..
"i went to sultan's home.."rk..
"why u did'nt told it to me..i got worried.."madhu..
"sorry.."rk..
"no.."madhu..
"madhu pls.."he tries to touch her hand but she stops him..
"dont touch me..its a punishment.."madhu..
"punishment..?"rk..
"hah...for 1 week.."madhu..
"1 week..no...but today.."rk...
"today..today what..?"madhu..
"vo..hm.."he stammered..
"hm...what..?"madhu..
"that..nothing.."rk..she leaves from there after giving him a look..
"OMG..i forgot to tell about maya.."he thought & runs behind her..
"madhu stop..i want to tell u one thing.."rk..she stops & turns..
"i want to tell u one thing..."rk..
"i dont want to hear.."madhu..
"but its.."rk..
"i told u na..i dont want to hear ur cheap excuses.."madhu..
"but not.."before he could complete she tells.."u will not tell anything its swear on me.."she leaves..
"what u have done madhu...now i how tell u about these problems.."rk..
"what happend rk she did'nt hear ur words na..u r trying to win above me..u do whatever u can but i am gonna win today.."he hears maya's voice..


night..

in baba's home..

baba starts pooja..sultan also present there..he too a mirror & chat some mantras & splashes holy water in it..they hears the screaming of maya & she appears there...using his powers baba shut maya's spirit in a pot & covered its mouth with a piece of silk..& gave it to sultan..
"i will come now..keep this safe dont remove this cloth or place this pot on ground.."baba..sultan nodded..


kundra mansion..


rk is walking all around the room & thought about the punishment given by her..madhu came to room & saw rk in deep thinking..she smiles seeing his face..she came near him & snapped..he came into his senses &looks her stunned..she laughs seeing his expressions..suddenly she hears the voice thunder & hugs him tightly he smirks & hugs her back..rain also starts showering along with thunder lightning..
"romantic mood hah..?"rk..she breaks the hug & looks him who is smirking at her..
"not at all.."madhu..
"really.."he caught her by her waist..
"rk..whats this..leave me.."madhu..
"no..."rk.
"rk leave me.."madhu again said..

in baba's home sultan is waiting for baba to come..he hears some voice from inside the pot & tightened his grip on pot..

in rishbala's room...

Rk scooped madhu on his hand & placed her on the bed..
he looks around & finds maya is not there..he release his breathe in relief..
he leaned towards her & planted a kiss on her forehead..& he looks her lips & moved his lips towards her..but suddenly her phone starts ringing..
"oh damn..who is calling at this time..?"rk..she raised from the bed & picks the phone & saw padmini's name (ma)is displaying..
"hello ma.."madhu..
"hello madhu..pls come fast.."padmini tells worried..
"what happend ma..?"madhu..
"madhu ur papa is not well..he is not opening his eyes pls come soom..i am worried.."padmini.
"dont worry ma..v will come now..
nothing will happen to papa.."madhu cuts the call..
"what happend..?"rk..
"rk papa is not well v want to go now..."madhu..
"no madhu..v wont go today..i will call dr. & give ur chawl's address.."rk..
"but rk he is serious..v want to take him to hospital.."madhu..he remembers baba words & thought "this is definitely maya's play.."
"maya u will not go now..i want u now.."he said hardly..
"rk..there my father is going to die u want to do s*x with me now itself.."she said him in a low anger tone & pulls him & get of from the bed..she opened the door & tries to go but he stops her by holding her hand...
"madhu ur life will be in danger..let me tell pls.."rk..
"what the hell u r going to say..i dont want to hear anything.."madhu starts walk downstairs..he walks past her..
"madhu nothing happened to ur papa these all r just illusion..."rk...
"illusion..?"madhu..
"yes.."he took her phone & shows the call history...padmini's number is not present in incoming calls list..madhu looks it astonished & then looks rk..
"great play rk..u deleted ma's number from this & acting before me.."madhu again start walking..she opened the main door..
"madhu pls no.."he tried to say about maya but his voice struck on his throat without any reason..madhu stepped outside at the same time the pot in sultan's hand broken into pieces..sultan jerked back & maya's soul came out..
"oh no..how it possible..rk.."sultan..

"madhu.."rk calls her by standing on the door step..suddenly the wind started blow faster & he saw maya's spirit coming towards madhu..
"madhu..come back pls.."rk called..she turns & saw rk is looking at a direction bewildered..she looks the saw direction & for her wonder she too saw maya's spirit..
"didu.."madhu..
"u bi**h..u r trying to take my rk away from me.."she tries to enter her body but becoz of the holy thread she could'nt..she fumes in anger & raised madhu in air..
"Rk.."madhu screamed..
"madhu.."rk..
"come rk..come out if u want to see her alive.."maya..
"maya leave her.."rk.
"first do what i said.."maya..rk thought for a while & then stepped out side..maya leaves madhu & rushed towards him & enters his body..madhu looks him..his eyes turned red & he came near madhu & griped on her neck..
"i will kill u.."he said in maya's voice..
"didu..leave me..what i have done to u.."madhu..
"u snatched everything from me..now u r trying to snatch my rk from me.."maya..
"Rk.."madhu yelled..he come into his senses..
"madhu.."rk..but again maya came & tries to attack her but rk tried a lot to control himself & tells madhu finally"madhu..i cant defeat maya..i am going far from u or else she will kill u using me..i cant do it..so i must..."rk.."rk.."she calls bewildered..
he runs from there & madhu runs past him trying to stop him..sultan & baba also come there..when baba returned back sultan told everything to baba..& they went to save rk & madhu..
"baba..do some thing.."sultan..
"i am helpless maya is very powerful now.."baba..rk runs towards a cliff madhu followed his..he stop at the edge & turns & looks madhu for the last time..madhu came there running by saying "no.."..tears rolled down his eyes..& he jump of the cliff..
"Rk..."madhu yelled & goes near the cliff & saw rk is falling to depth..
"Rk.."she tries jump along with him but sultan came there & hold her hand..she cried & faints..



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Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Superb update aishu.really intriguing..I feel like to slap Madhu
She spoiled all the plans.and Maya entered rk and rk jumped from the cliff.what will happen now.please update asap.thanks for pm
Edited by magicalmirage - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Awesome update aishu..
Madhu didn't believe his words..
Feel bad for RK..
Sultan teased RK..Haha..
Maya entered RK's body..He jumped from cliff.
Oh No..How can she save him?
waiting ..
Update soon..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Superb update dear
Madhu is stubborn
I felt like slapping her
I hope rk is fine
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Awesome update,
Maya is so powerful baba also didn't able to control her,
poor Rk Madhu misunderstood him,
Madhu also seen Maya's spirit,
to save Madhu from Maya Rk jumped from the cliff,
hope Rk is safe,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Scary part...
Hope Rk will be alright...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Stupid Madhu didn't listen to RK.
You left at cliffhanger.
Eager to know if RK survives?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Feel bad for RK and Madhu is so ignorant,

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