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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Varsha15778383

Oh this sultan.Such a horrible disgusting man.Hope he gets a brutal end

HE.WILL


Tina and RK what is this yaar So much complication already and now tina added more.Oh my god RK too liked Tina😲


LOVE...NO BUR HE LIKED HER
AND HE CHOOSE HIS FAMILY'S C
DECISION
IT WILL BE SOON OVER


butthe current situation is he love his wife madhu than anything or else he won't make an effort to help her from this trap


YES. HE LOVWS HER


But madhu ,she will be heart broken to know that everyone whom she believed and loved cheated her.RK her husband and sultan her brother whom she loved and respected cheated her in a very bad manner that no one can forgive them with a sorry and guilty feeling for what they did.

YES SHE WILL BE BROKEN
AND ITS UP TO HER TO MAKE DECISIONS



And tina is like adding salt to the wound ,madhu will be shattered .


SHE WILL BE


Her reaction to whole story and confrontation with RK and rishi will be so emotional and heart touching I feel. Because like ria ,madhu is also cheated by the man she loves and RK and rishi even tried to frame her as an insane person

YEP..


Sahil and ria ,their convo was so nice
I hope they ended as a couple because I want sultan to rot in hell

LETS SEE



Thanks for pm


YOU ARE WELCOME DEAR


My university exam is going to start so I won't be able to comment from next part onwards regularly.So once my exam got over I will comment on all updates regularly


TAKE YOUR TIME DEAR
BEST OF LUCK FOR YOUR EXAMS



THANKS VARSHA


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Nice update dear

THANKS

. Ria hides the truth from her family but she share something to sahil.


SHE TRUST HIM


Why they planned rk to get married to teena😡 and i didn't like that idea dear.


I AM SORRY ABOUT THAT


Waiting for the next update dear


UPDATING SOON


. I am waiting for rishbala's scenes😉.


NEEDS TWO MORE EPISODES




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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maithu_

Part 7!

I had an idea of what to wait for in this part before reading!
And you just doubled everything!

😊

I just want to kill that bas***d for doing this to Ria!

YEP


Ria should have told to RK in Sultan's abscence or something like!

SHE SHOULD HAVE.BUT SHE IS SCARED


But anyways, Sultan is for sure going to get a bad end!
Waiting for that

YEAH.HE WILL

Going for part 8!


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Posted: 7 years ago



Every child born in innocence carrying a part of God in them
The world and his experiences framed into a good one and bad one
Gradually the bad experiences and lashes by the destiny frames into a cruel devil
That's what made Sultan into a devil
Someone or some bad experiences ...I meant


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maithu_

Part 8!

Finally finished reading this part too!

THANKS


Can't wait to see Sultan's downfall!

HE WILL


Shail seems to be a good person!

NO


Are Ria and Shail married or the marriage stopped even before due to Sulu's activity

YEP



Hope RK didn't fall in love with that girl!

NO


Story going super interestingly!

THANKS



Thank you for all the PMs!

YOU ARE WELCOME DEAR



THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING EACH PART INDIVIDUALLY


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Posted: 7 years ago
nice love urstory such hycrate is that sultan nt leave ria or his sister madhu cheater he is shamless n wat rk n rishi doing with madhu is nt justifies like ria madhu trust rk n sultan more than her self she surely will be broken wen she gt to know their motives if rk teuly loved madhu he tirws something else instead of proving her insane Thank God diplai cme in make him realize his mistakes if she nt rk contonue cheating madhu n proving her insane i think madhi should nt forgave them easily of ria is theirs is n daughter madhu is aslo some one daughter so rk realize wat he done he tajen madhu fr granted nice update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi friends
Thanks for your likes and Lovely comments

I am sorry for the Teena part
Rk is bonded to his family and he Chooses the girl his family select for him
He likes her but he doesn't have love for her.
On the other hand...the character is added for showing the difference between true love and made up one


Teena fans

I am also a Teena fan
I Know she played a positive lovely character in utharan
Here she a little Negative.
Please pardon me ..if you feel offended



You can throw tomatoes and eggs on me after reading it😆


Please read and quote your comments




Mendacious Promises



Part 9


kundra Mansion
Night
Rk averted his gaze from the book he was reading as he heard his phone ringing.he climbed down his bed and fetched the phone from the night stand.he saw an unknown number flashing .
'who the hell is this...I never give my personal number to anyone else than my family,"he mumbled
He swiped the green icon and put the phone to his ear
"Mr rishab kundra?"a sweet girly voice asked
"Yes speaking"rk said confused
"Well... baby...y didn't you sleep yet..it's nearing to midnight"girl said
",Who are you and what do you want?"rk asked in fury
"Oh sweet heart...don't get mad at me"she said in a seductive voice
"Who the hell are you and stop calling me those things"to said angrily
"Oh..you talk with your model in such a way?"she asked
",What?,model?...no way ...it's my personal number and I never give this number to anyone but family...tell me ..how you collected this number?"RL
"I am really impressed rk"she said
"Look girl...I am friendly with you all doesn't means I am interested in anything else...I am a real professional and I admires it...you might be a new one in this field that's y you don't know about me... now hear it clearly ...I am not interested in any you cause I don't want to fell in any relationship ...I respect my family's decision and my future will be decided by them"rk said
"What about one night stand..?"girl asked
"Are you not ashamed to ask this?..look girl ..I belong to my wife...whoever she will be..I am loyal to her",ro Said
"Really...I am impressed more rishab"the girl laughed
"Who are you and how you collected my numbe"ro
"Hey you forget me...Teena"she said
"Teena...oh ..I..I...am sorry"rk said
"Oh don't be rishab...I wanted to hear everything from you ..that's y I just played a prank"teens
"Well...now you trust me?"rk
",Yes of course rishab'teena
"Where you got the number from?'rk
",Rishi gave me your number.. actually I asked him..what were you doing?", Teena
",I was just reading"rk
"Tomorrow we are going to select the dress for engagement .. will you come with ria?'teena
"I am not good at shopping"rk
"Please...we can talk with each other na... please.. please"ria pleaded
",Han.. okay"rk
", Thanks rk... good night...see you tomorrow"Teena
", Good night Teena..c u"rk cut the call with a smile on his face
He heard someone clearing Thier throat and he saw roa smirking
"What?'rk
"Ma told me to ask you whether you are coming with us for shopping..?"ria
"Y..'"rk
"No. Rish..I know you don't like those shopping and all..btw rishi Bhai os also Coming and dipali too ..they have to select thier dress na..."ria smiling
"No ria..I.."rk
Ria again cut his words"it's okay rish...o will tella"ria
"Ria can you please allow me to talk?..,I am coming with you okay"rkk
"But y rish ..you don't like shopping?"ria asked faking Confusion
'its..it's...she.asked me to come',rk said
"She?who rish?"ria
"Teena"rk
Ria gasped"oh god...this boy is spoiled'she yelled out and ran to the hall.rk followed her and caught her .rishi.came out of his room hearing ria yelling
"What is it ria..?"rishi
Rk palmed her mouth and she bit on his hand
"Ouch..."rk Removed his hand and jerking it on pain.
"Rish is coming for shopping ..you know bhai the reason behind it is...",ria
Rk again palmed her mouth before she spit it out.roa struggled.to get off his grip
'rishu...leave her"rishi
Rk obeyed.him and glared at ria
"Because Teena asked him out"ria Stuck her tongue out at rk
Rishi Smiled and looked at his twin who was standing in an embarrassment.he moved towards him and hugged him. rkhhugged back.
"Best of luck man"he said Patting hos shoulder.rk went back to ria to hit her and she squealed and ran
"Stop it...what are you two..5 or 6..ria you are going to get married in few days and rishu...you in next year... please be little mature and allow others to sleep...now go and sleep ria.."rishi
Ria looked at rk and again stick her tongue out..and Ran back to her room
"Our ria is getting back to her normal self.."rishi said
"Han bhai"rk said
"I am really happy rishu...I couldn't see her in such a situation.. Dipali said me"rishi said with a film of tear in his eyes.
"HanbBhai...I am also happy... our little sister is back"rk said happily
"I wish our decision will be better for her"rishi sighed
"It will be Bhai...don't worry"rk
"Let's hope so... good night rishu"rish
"good night Bhai"rk

Morning

Kundra family get dressed and went for shopping.rk and Teena got time to know each other better while others indulge in shopping.few days later ..Thier engagement went well and they Decided Marriage date after a week of engagement.the whole family was really happy.. especially Radhaji as her daughter and son is getting married on the same day
"Oh..god..you had given every happiness to my family... please don't allow anyone to take this away.from us.."Radhaji
Rk and Teena got attached to each other as they talk by phone every night.

Marriage day

Ria was nervous and she keep on whining to rk on one or the other thing and rk was doing everything for her friend com sister.rk has duty on both rooms where the bride ria and groom rishi was.getting ready.. meanwhile he had to chat with Teena also..the couple were ready for Thier new life and they entered.the auspicious mandap for marriage.the priest asked.the couple to stand for taking seven vows...and then it happened..
Ria felt the floor is staying and she fell blacked out..everyone stepped atound her and rk placed her head on his lap.he sprinkled some water on her face and she slowly.opened her eyes
"What is it ria?what happened?"sahil
"It might be out of stress.."rk said
"I am a doctor I can check her"one of Thier guest said.rk scooped her in his arms and took her to the room and placed her on the bed
"Please wait outside."..he said to the anxious crowd.
Few minutes later he called the families to the room.
"What is it doctor.. nothing serious ma"rk asked worried
"No..but..she is .. pregnant"doctor said
"What?...no way"rishi said looking at sahil
"No...rish..we didn't.."sahil said
"What? then..no .. doctor please check her... you might be mistaken"rk
"No Mr Kundra ..I am sure and preg card is saying so"doctor
"Oh god..ria.."rk cupped her face and looked at her.
"Sorry..rishi..but we can't bear the.burden of this sin"sahils mother
"Aunty... please.."rishi
"I am sorry rishi...in this case ...I can't.."sahil
They was about to.leavee and rk looked at Teena
"Teena"rk called
"I am sorry rishab..I can't disobey my parents"Teena left with her parents and brother
Soon the guests started to leave.dipalis parents went inside the room
"Sorry rishi..we can't get our girl to have a relationship with such a family..let's leave dipali"dips father and grabbed her hand
She Removed her father's grasp on her and she held rishis hand.
"I am sorry papa..but I love him and he is not at fault in this matter .he needs support now and I am here to support him.love is meant to be giving support in thick and thin.."dipali
"Okay..as you decide..but don't expect us to cooperate"dipalis father and they left.
"You...you ... spoiled our family reputation"rishi tried to hit her and rk.stopped home
"No Bhai..I will.ask her..what happened and we will find out a solution"rk
"What solution rishu?"rishi said with tears in his eyes
Rksshifted his gaze to the floor
"There is a solution"they heard a manly voice .they saw Sultan coming inside with a smile.
"Sultan?"rishi
"Yes..."Sultan
"What solution?"rishi
Ria glared at him and he ignored her.
"I will marry her', Sultan
"What ?you know her..."rishi
Sultan cut his words'i know and I am ready to accept her and the baby"Sultan
"But Sultan.."rishi
'i like her from the first sight itself and my love for her is eternal and it won't die out with these silly matters"Sultan"moreover I value our friendship rishi"
Rishi hugged him and he hugged.back patting his shoulder
'no..I don't want to marry him"ria said
"Ria...you lost the right to say anything"rishi shouted and tried to hit her but Sultan caught his hand.
"Let me talk with her please"Sultan
"Okay"rishi said .
Everyone left the room Leaving Sultan and ria to talk
"You moron...I am not going to marry you"ria
"Ria...I...I am really sorry"Sultan fell on his knees"please forgive me...I should have done those deeds with you..I fell in love with you at the very first sight and I wanted to make you mine..but I was not courageous enough to ask rishi ..I don't know when my inner demons possessed my mind and how low I acted with you .. please .. please forgive me ria"Sultans eyes welled ip
"No I won't...I won't believe you"ria
"Please ria... please forgive me... for our child..I need my child.. please."tear flow down his cheeks
"No Sultan"ria
"Okay ..I understand...I won't blame you for this decision..I am the one to blame ..you are a girl with self-esteem and I am proud of you..I don't know what you do with our child ..and I don't know how i live in this guilt..it's better for me to end this pathetic Life"he took the knife in the fruit basket andhe cut his vein..blood start to gush out of the wound and in few minutes Sultan felt dizzy and he fell down.n.ria ran to her family for help

Morning

Kundra family was waiting for the doctor in the hospital .ria.was.crying leaning on his shoulder. He gently caressed her hair and mumbled soothing words to her.rishi was walking here and there in stress and dipali taking care of Radha.
Few minutes later
Doctor came out of the ICU.
"Doctor how's he?"rishi
'he is conscious now...who is ria?"don't
Ria went towards him.
"He want to talk with you"doctor
"Yes"ria nodded and went inside.sje saw Sultan lying on the bed .
"Ria",he called in a cracked voice"I am sorry...I wanted to get away from you and from my pathetic Life..but..", Sultan
Ria palmed his mouth and shook.her head in denial .tears rolled down her cheek and Sultan wiped it with his better hand.
"Ria...I am sorry honey.."Sultan
Ria Smiled at him
"Will you marry me ? ...for our child?"Sultan
Ria nodded and Sultan Smiled in relief
"Sultan... that.. that ..tale and document?"ria fumbled with her words
"Ria...we will destroy it once I came out of this hospital...I promise"Sultan
"You will do it na"ria asked in doubt
"Yes ria... please don't make me more guilty by doubting me ..I have no intention to be back to that monster which I hate the most"Sultan said tears in his eyes
Ria Smiled wiping his tears
"Ria can you Promise me one thing?"Sultan
"What?"ria
"We won't reveal your brothers that it's my child"Sultan
"But Sultan.."ria
"Look ria...if they came to know the whole thing ..they will kill me ..it's true I deserved it ...but I want to live with you ria and my child...I want to see his face...then I am ready to die"Sultan with tears
"I promise Sultan...I won't tell them"ria
Sultan took her hand in his and kissed in her palm.

Few days later

Ria get married to Sultan and rishi to dipali
"Sultan...what are you going to say to your family?"rk
"I need time for that...I don't know how my father will react to this..I think if I go there with ria and child ...they wouldn't have any excuse other than accepting us...so let's wait for the chil to born"Sultan
"You are right Sultan"rishi
"Yeah ...it's only a matter of nine months"rishi"Sultan...I am very much grateful to you... otherwise we should have thought of ending our lives'rishi
"You are my best friend rishi...how I will let you do that"Sultan
Rishi Smiled at him in gratitude

Sahils officr

Sahil heard a knock at his door and saw Sultan
"Sultan... come in yaar.."sahil
Sultan placed a bundle of money on his table before sitting down on the chair across sahil
"Thanks Sultan"sahil took the money and dropped it in his briefcase.
"Btw ... Sultan I don't get your play...what are you planning...and if it's all for marrying ria...then y you wanted me to do all this ...you could asked rishi for her at first place?"sagil asked in wonder
"No one gets my game sahil.."Sultan smirked"this marriage...it's like a long time investment...you might heard about it...we will be get the profit after few years of investment.. like that"
"And the child?"sahil
"Child...?..it's just a bonus from God..who is my partner...right god?"he looked at the idol of God and asked
"What is your plan?"sahil
"Wait and watch"saying that Sultan left the office and sahil keep on looking at the way with his mouth wide open.




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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cutical

nice love urstory

THANKS


such hycrate is that sultan nt leave ria or his sister madhu cheater he is shamless



YES .HE IS


n wat rk n rishi doing with madhu is nt justifies like ria madhu trust rk n sultan more than her self



TRUST TO GET BETRAYED...THAT IS WHAT HAPPENED


shesurely will be broken wen she gt to know their motives



YES .SHE WILL BE


if rk teuly loved madhu he tirws something else instead of proving her insane



HE WAS BLINDED BY HIS LOVE FOR RIA


Thank God diplai cme in make him realize his mistakes if she nt rk contonue cheating madhu n proving her insane



BUT HE LOVES HER AND FEELING GUILTY FOR DOING IT.MOREOVER HIS TWIN BROTHER WAS PERSUADIND
G HIM TO DO I


i think madhi should nt forgave them easily of



SHE WONT


ria is theirs is n daughter madhu is aslo some one daughter


HER BROTHER DOBE THIS WITH HER


so rk realize wat he done he tajen madhu fr granted nice


YES .FINALLY HE DONE SOMETHING WORTH HER FORGIVENESS


update soon



Updating soon




Thanks for reading


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: magicalmirage




Every child born in innocence carrying a part of God in them
The world and his experiences framed into a good one and bad one
Gradually the bad experiences and lashes by the destiny frames into a cruel devil
That's what made Sultan into a devil
Someone or some bad experiences ...I meant



Please don't make him victim eventually
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Posted: 7 years ago
What an actor
to fake his suicide

I hope this Sultan to rote in hell

But we still don't know why the twins helping him
Edited by Hend_Refai - 7 years ago

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