Rishbala FF Mendacious Promises part12 page54 dt19/12

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Hi friends I am starting a new story.Some promises made on lies.please read it and support me as usual.thank you.

Mendacious Promises

Prologue


Madhu looked at her mehndi.its deep red and she blushed looking it
"Han...My princess you are looking at your mehendi?..I feel like you were born just few days back.when nurse gave you in my hand .You were just a little girl .You were sleeping and when I touched your folded little hand you opened moved and smiled in sleep.madhu...It was the greatest moment in my life and now you are going away from us.."shamsher Malik
Madhu saw tears glistening at the corner of his eyes.madhus eyes welled up with tears.
"Malik...Are you making my daughter cry.look she is getting married and our girl is not a. Small kid.its her great day and make her cheerful"padmini
"Yes..Padmini.my girl grown up"malik kissed on Madhus forehead.
"Btw where is sultan bhai.why he not reached yet"Madhu
"He will be here by evening.he missed the flight"padmini
"Yes...He won't ever change...He is really irresponsible"malik
"Papa. ...Y u always keep scolding my bhai?"Madhu
"OK..Sorry baba...By the way our son in law and family reach by night na"malik
"Han...Meeraji called me $padmini
"Rishab is a nice boy...I like his manners..Malik was not convinced till he talked with rishabhe couldn't trust rishab as this proposal was recommended by sultan"padmini"
"It was my mistake ..Okay ..."malik

Night

Madhu opened the window and looked at the starts .She felt really happy.someone cupped her eyesshe touched the hands and said "Trish"
"You find me out...I thought you will say Rk"Trish giggled
"Rks hand is not that smooth"Madhu
"How do you know"Trish raised her eyebrows.
"Hmm...That I guess and in engagement I touched his hand ."Madhu shyly smiled
"Yeah... Tomorrow night you gonna touch his..."Trish
"Stop it Trish"Madhu blushed
"Y you won't ...?"Trish
"Trish shut up na"Madhu looked her pleading
"OK...Dear bride...Let's sleep.today I am sleeping here tomorrow onwards you will get someone to sleep near you"Trish
"Han...I will tell papa about you and Bhai after my marriage"Madhu
"Do something for your friendship."trishna
Madhu pinched her.

Morning
"Y are you late Bhai.tou promised me to reach here by evening."Madhu
"I am sorry Madhu.i missed the flight again"sultan
"Why not.. Irresponsible donkey"malik went inside
Sultan looked at padmini and she signalled him don't bother.

Evening

"Hey Madhu..Baarat reached at the house door"Trish
Madhu smiled shyly.ahe was dressed in bridal attire and she looked gorgeous.padmini come to see her.
"My child looking beautiful"padmini.
"Come Madhu time for wedding"
Padmini made her sit near to the groom.he looked at her and smiled.madhus heart pounded up.they performed the rituals and stood up for pheras.the pandit was chanting mantras and he explained the promise s of pheras.madhu listened it and promised herself to keep it.rk smirked and looked at sultan.sultan smiled.


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aishu007 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow chechi nice update..
congrats for your new story..
madhi is getting married to rk..
but something is fishy about sultan..
update next soon..
Thanks for the pm..
Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for new story. ..di
malik become emotional. .
rishbala are married now. .
thanks for pm. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrates for new story ka.
Malik don't believe Rk.
Rk are married.
I thought,anything is going between RK and sultan.
Thanks for pm.
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on the New Story.
Loved the prologue its fantastic.
Rishbala are getting married but Sultan and RK something is fishy with their behaviour.
Is Sultan taking some sort of revenge and thus must have asked his friend RK to marry Madhu.
Curious to know what happens next. Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story,
Awesome start
Malik is having some problem with Sultan, he always scolding Sultan,
Rishbala got married,Madhu is so happy,
what's going on b/w Rk & Sultan
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
Edited by harini_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Another story.wow.
Sultan is madhu's Bhai.
Rishbala married.
Why Malik always scolds sultan.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing prologue
Something is fishy why did rk smirked at sultan
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hmm..
Promises..
Based on lies..
Quite intriguing..
More than rk madhu..
Everyone is more interested in rk sultan..
Hahahaa..
Awesome start..
Thanks for pm :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congo for new story
Nice start

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