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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update.
When will they know about each other?
Waiting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update.
When will they get to know about each other.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry for late updation ,
Shikky angrily presses Raj's hand asking him the reason for his strange behaviour .Raj signs him to be cool ,Rishab thinks about the same and says"Yaah Raj,it's a good idea because if I go to home I need to see the face of that Madhooo,it's better to stay out for at least a night without seeing the face of that girl "Rishab leaves them and goes to talk to the canteen owner .Shikky shouts "Fool,Tum ek fool ,why the hell are you making the matter more and more complicated ".Shikky sees Madhu coming there and tells"I am feeling very unsafe here ,I am not in any of the night party ,I am going to meet RK only after things gets very calm ".Raj peers into laughter .He says"Come Shikky,nothing can happen ,you just say that you don't know things ,react as per his wish ,now let's chat with Madhubala Madam".Shikky asks him"Don't shout Madhubala in 22 volume say it in mute ".
Padmini sits with phone in hand waiting for the call of Madhu with so much tension .He sees Shamsher coming in with suitcase and closes her eyes ."What if this girl makes any issue in Radha ji's house ?"asks her to him .Shamsher sits opposite to her in the sofa and remove his socks .He notices her being so much tensed .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Everyone knows that Rishbala can't get along well with each other.
Waiting for the revelation.
Awesome update, loved it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Padmini presses her head with fingers and closes her eyes with so much tension .Shamsher laughs seeing her fear and tension "Padminiji why are you behaving like a small kid getting so much fear for everything ,be calm .". She ses him by opening her eyes and says" Malikji ,i think you dont forget the way they made a problem when they are little kids ,always Madhu is in loggerheads with that poor boy .Now if she behaves in such a way then wat can we tell to Radha ,I won't talk with her for the activity of Madhu anymore ".he controls his smile and continued " Madhu is your daughter ,she can't do anything wrong and moreover Radhaji or Mohan ,they won't mistake her for her activity ,Rishab is also nice type,I hope they don't want to fight anymore .Madhu is not the same 3 year old kid ,she is grown up lady ,so now be happy ".Padmini walks from there without telling anything to him
" Mmm tell more about you Madhuji "says Raj sipping the coffee .Madhu talks about her likes and dislikes when Shikky sees whether RK is coming .Shikky asks Madhu" Where are you going to stay ?".she tells him elaboratly about the friendship between Malik and Mohan Kundra."So Shikky sir ,I am going to stay with Mohan Uncle and Radha aunty ".Raj smiles mischievously Asking " Hey madhu ,you asked about my simran now just tell the matter about(whispers) ,do your uncle have any handsome hunk as son ".Madhu face gets tighten in anger .Shikky curses Raj when RK walks there .
Sultan sits in the library thinking about madhu and meeting her for first time but he feels like meeting her before itself ." Where did I met here ,I have surely saw her somewhere but ,,,,,,,,".he sees some of his students approaching him with books and walks away to talk to them leaving his phone in the bench .the begin to phone vibrate continuously .One of the passeby sees it calling him "Sultan sir ,phone for you ". .he sees Mohan kundra's number in display and picks the call with hesitation .
" Listen Raj ,Aunty has a son but he is not the handsome hunk or something else ,he is literally like a gorilla,have you seen any movie where the more devilish character exist ".RK interrupt telling " Like the ouctopus face in Pirates of carebean".Shikky sees RK and Madhu with confused reaction and burst into laughter thinking RK telling about himself .madhu exclaims "Exactly ". Raj innocently says" But you must not compare some one with such a odd looking person .".RK sits near Shikky asking "Did I missed something ?". Madhu sees Paddo's message and leave to call her .RK repeats his question .Shikky tells" Nothing bro,we are asking about her family ,she explains about her long lost family friend ".
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Superb update dear
Loved it
Poor rk doesnt know that he is giving madhu ideas about himself only
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Awesome update,
Madhu is describing them about Rk features poor Rk he don't know that she is telling them about him only,
waiting for the moment when they both find out about each other,
continue soon,
thanks for the update
Edited by harini_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"Hello Sultan ,this Is Mohan kundra ,I need to talk to you about our Rishab ,hope you don't mind it as a matter ,I just want to talk about our RK,so I think you will hear to it without any problem please will you ?"asks Mohan with too much hesitation .Sultan controls his anger holding the table .He smiles dryily telling "Mr Kundra,I know who you are ,tell the matter straightly don't act like,just leave it and tell the matter ,I hate these fake concerns and cliches".
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update dear..
Update next soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"Poor fellow,dont know even to charm her ,he is her family friend,Look Raj she is looking like an angel ,how can someone miss such a beauty near him?" says RK about the family friend of madhu without knowing the truth .Raj asks suddenly"Think like this Rishu,if your uncle's daughter is like madhu ,very beautiful what willyou do?".RK burst into laughter telling"No way,hey wait is her name Madhu?",Shikky says "Yes bro some Madhurima ,i think.so"he gets convincedand says "she is a lady goon,she cant look like madhu,if she is beautiful that doesnt change things between us ".Shikky says to himself"OK surely he is going to kill me".
In the evening ,RK gets ready to go outside with his friends to enjoy the first day of college ,hestops outside on seeing Madhu waiting foe the car he goes to talk to her .
Edited by janani04 - 8 years ago

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