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janani04 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"Why Ma is calling Madhurima,may be she is mstaken ,oh god may be is telling like that,so it means she is not any Madhurima or somthing ,her name is Madhubala Malik,my rival.".Radha brings Madhu inside the house,Madhu walks past RK, they see each other with so much anger.He tries to confront his friends when Radha calls him in.Madhu fumes on seeing him getting inside the house.Shikky signs Raj to leave when RK calls him from window,"Shikandar Bhatia and Raj Purohit come in".Raj gets in while Shikky is still worried.Radha signs Mohan to talk ,she leaves to kitchen,Mohan asks Madhu and RK about their first day of college
"Uncle the college is very good and I like it so much ",she sees RK's stands opposite to her in the hall without telling anything.Mohan repeats his question once more to RK."Dad,if you want to talk to me,let us talk afterwards,I am planning to go out tonight with my friends,".Radha serves juice to all the five and sit near Madhu caressing her face.RK gets irritated and walks from there signing his friends to come with him outside to the portico.He shouts at Raj for standing ad enjoying the affection shown by Radha towards Madhu,"Mom dont know anything ,she is ahowing her true love towards that Madhubala ,I feel like killing her,do you guys see",Raj makes RK sit .Shikky tries to tell when RK says"I cant belive she is still the same,".Madhu talks along with Mohan when Radha takes her to the room."Get freshen up ma,i will come after a while ",she sits the sofa and goes through the room,she walks inside the room given to her,she opens the window and finds RK outside still talking with his friends.she sees him without any reaction when RK suddenly sees towards her direction.They sees each other without expressing anthing .
Edited by janani04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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He walks out along with his friends, she closes the window and takes out her phone to talk with her parents about reaching home safely.Sultan enters his house and sees his mother sitting in the kitchen without having food .he appraches towards her with a warming smile in his face .She hugs him tightly without talking and expresses her emotions with tears.she points towards the phone with folded hands.he wipes her tears with kerchief and dials the number.
RK feels very much sad and angry. He sees his friends enjoying and walks out of the disco hall .he stands out and sees the moon shining in the sky.he remembers his childhood days and thinks about the first time talking to Madhu.
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"is she eating anything or not.why is she not talking with me at all?"asks 3 year old RK on seeing Madhu very small wrapped in a towel.He tries to lift her ,she hold his hand and sees him without blinking and complains that "she is very heavy",Padmini makes madhu lie on his lap telling"You are very beautiful so my daughter is not willing to leave you and come.she likes you so that she is not willing to come to her mom"his mother tells him to wait and says"when she became big.then she will play games with you".
He comes out of his thoughts and murmurs"yaah mom,she is playing her part of games very well ".he gets angry thinking about being friendship with her for almost 8 hours. Someone hold his shoulder."Rishab ,come on bro.chill"says Raj hugging him .RK sees the moon telling"her face was like the moon when she was young,she used to laugh on seeing my face making me angry .today she did it once more making me a joker".Raj tries to tell when he leaves from there in his bike .
Sultan feeds his mother and talks with her about the happenings of the day with a smile.his mother cries without listening and points towards the phone again and again.he tells"Ma,I can't understand how could you still belive him this much,he is cheating you for the past 25 years by the name of love ,he will follow it even to the next 25 years,Mohan Kundra had made you like this to lose even your mental balance".His mother slaps him hard.
Madhu closes her eyes to sleep when she hears a huge sound outside and rushes to see RK in ground with wounds in hand.
Edited by janani04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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She rushes to help him when he shouts"No need Madhubala Malik.no need Rishab kundra will die rather than getting a help from you",he walks with oozing blood ,she sees him with irritation and walks back to her room and shut it angrily."I cant stay herewith this moron anymore,he is blaming for his mistakes ,I am sure this fellow cant change his personality ",she falls in the bed with tears. RK asks the servant to take all his luggages to the guest house as he is shifting there. Radha stands stunned on hearing this.
Shikky reaches his house and finds Kulsekar Bhatia sitting in the entrance with his files and walks without talkibg to him."Shikky,I need to talk to you now itself ".he stands without telling anything .his father ask him to listen "do you know the value of money or time,you are wasting money like anything then one day you will suffer"says him and walks in.Shikky looks on
Raj sees his father sleeping and sits in the floor seeing his hand with wound .he gets tears on seeing it and hugs his father .his father opens his eyes telling"when did you come have some food".
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Awesome updates
Loved them all
Rishbala and their enmity seems like never to end so soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Next morning,Madhu hears some sound outside and she gets her sleep disturbed and she gets up from bed.she sees the time and finds it just "4 am".she sees through the window, RK making noise outside the house with the bike. She stares at him and shouts "People should have some basic sense,they are always disturbing everyone who are sleeping"shouts at him with anger.he sees her shouting and shouts back,"People must have some basic sense while talking to others,it is my bike,my house if you people have any problem for sleeping ,close your ears and sleep".Both of them walks away
After few hours,RK comes out of the guest house with his college bag dressed in a black jean and grey shirt.he feels so much hungry and thinks to have food before Madhu comes out from her room.he stops near the entrance and finds her eating sandwitch in the dinning table and tries to go from there."Rishab have food"says Mohan on seeing him coming.Madhu decide to get up when RK says"No dad I am not hungry ".Madhu looks on.
Shikky gets up .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
nice
y rk and madhu hate each other
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Nice update.
Who is this sultan? An evil character.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Good one!
Feeling like there is more than just a simple fight in the back story!
Continue soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"Uncle,I need to go to college,if you tell me the bus number then I will go by ".Radha comes out of her room with some files,she sits next to Madhu telling"why are you thinking about going by bus,ypu are our family member,You should go with Rishab".RK sees Madhu and Radha without replying .he controls his anger murmuring "Yes i will take her my fate".Madhu sees him murmuring and says"I dont want to be a burden to him,I can go by myself ".Mohan insist them to go together.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update.
Loved it.
Rishbala and their tashan, when is it going to end.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.

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